Thank you to Berkley for a free copy of this book! All thoughts and opinions are my own.
If I had read this back in 2020-2022 I would have loved it. Unfortunately, I'm reading it in 2025 while in my mid-twenties, no longer depressed from quarantine. There's a great quote from Jane Austen's Emma, "If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more." And I have a lot to say.
Before I get going any further, I want to emphasize that I love reading fan fiction. I read millions of words worth of fanfic per year and love seeing an author go from writing for fun, to being "discovered" and traditionally published. But there are ways to do it that support the author, and ways that set readers (i.e. me) up for disappointment.
All I knew before starting this book was that it written by a debut author and published by Berkley. When I say I went in completely blind, I mean it. It took less than 10% of the story for me to suspect that it was a reylo fanfic, and less than 15% for me to be able to start attributing Star Wars characters to each of the characters within the story. When a story is a find/replace names, copy/paste version of an old fic it does a disservice to the author, in my opinion. A Latte Like Love is a perfect example. As someone who has only seen The Force Awakens, the fact that I was able to figure out who each character was in the original fanfic makes me feel like there wasn't enough separation from the original source material. If the author is looking to maintain their same audience from ao3 this works great. However, when the goal is to expand their audience, doing this feels like a missed opportunity.
A large reason this story worked so well as a fanfic is because the audience had a pre-established relationship with the characters. So even when the story is set in an alternate universe/modern setting, it's easy to dismiss all of the unrealistic moments within the story. A Latte Like Love throws you in to this cute coffee shop meet cute but without the previous attachments and storyline (aka Ben Solo ditching the Jedi order to join the dark side and Rey being an orphan) it feels so unrealistic. How many things can actually go wrong for these poor people? I could not suspend my disbelief about some (okay, most) of the events within the book.
The story structure was also extremely reminiscent of a fanfic. There were too many plot points that didn't serve the overall plot, aka Theo and Audrey's relationship. When reading a contemporary romance there are only so many detours I can take, and this story took me on too many. Numerous characters felt thrown into the story in a way that would have been exciting in the fic, but in this story they're just a random person doesn't add to the overall story. You don’t have the excitement from seeing a cameo, but those cameos were still included.
Audrey and Theo, our main characters, were incredibly unconvincing as a couple that would stay together for the long run. The story constantly told me that they were perfect together and so in love, but I rarely felt like I was shown that. It didn’t help that the FMC gave me the most visceral ick I have ever experienced in my life. She was so weirdly bossy and treated the MMC like more of a project than an actual human being. She was constantly condescending to him and acting like he was a child, not a 32 year old man who is 8 years her senior. If you didn’t know, the MMC is LARGE. His size was brought up a million and a half times. His head was large, his body was humongous, his hands were massive, he was HUGE. I feel like other authors (cough Ali Hazelwood cough) get a lot of flack for bringing up how big their MMC's are, but this was a whole new level. I read more synonyms for big in this book than are in all of Ali Hazelwood's novels COMBINED (love you Ali) . He also had such intense anger problems that were constantly excused because he has mommy issues, is insecure about his scars, and is "going to therapy" to better himself. PLEASE. Every single time he's rude he starts crying and asking Audrey if she hates him or thinks he's ugly. And when she mentions she wants to pay off her loans herself because she doesn't want to be financially dependent on anyone he calls her stupid and says if he pays them off then she'll be free to do whatever?? wtf???
The prose was trying so hard to be poetic and deep but came across as disingenuous and forced. After the fifth instance of staccato sentences it felt overdone, and that wasn't even a quarter of the way into the novel. But wouldn't you know it, it just kept happening. AND THE EPILOGUE. I hit 84% on my kindle and suddenly I was reading an epilogue from Theo's POV. This book is 512 pages long. 16% is over EIGHTY PAGES. At that point just write and release a novella. The 80 page epilogue is yet another moment that emphasizes that this was written as a fanfic and not edited to reflect a trad deal. A massive section from the MMC's POV in a fic is a blessing. In a trad book? Just add it throughout the story or have an additional bonus chapter at the end. Don't call it an epilogue??
As much as I wanted to like this book, it wasn’t for me. I was annoyed with the characters the entire time. The book could have gone from 500 to 350 pages in no time if just two of Theo's scenes where he's being needlessly insecure for the 1000th time was cut.
This story should have been a complete rewrite, not just a mild edit for the names. 1.5 stars.