Let me say first, that this wasn't a bad book by any means, it just wasn't for me due to some issues which I have listed below. I think it's mismarketed and the only good parts of the story(Zinnia and the dragons) were ignored in favor of a ridiculous amount of the main character Teddy talking about his relationships. I think this could have been an excellent adventure story with a bit of editing, but as it is now it was quite lackluster.
I could tell from the first 2 pages that this was not going to be a "cozy fantasy" as it's marketed, and I also was pretty sure that I wasn't going to love this book - however, often I am surprised once I get into a book and end up unexpectently enjoying it. Seeing as I so graciously received an ARC, I felt I needed to give it a chance and read the whole thing.
Unfortunately, my initial impression was not wrong. There was nothing cozy about this fantasy. The main character is quite self centered and he never grew on me, even as he grew into himself throughout the story. Both the main character(Teddy) and his mom were prostitutes(not cozy at all). The most constant theme in this book is infidelity and unfaithfulness. The main character is in a marriage of convenience to produce an heir, and continues to be married to a quite lovely woman through to the end of the book, despite being gay. Everyone in the kingdom is quite aware of his preferences and several comments are made to jab at it throughout the book. I would be more ok with this if it was resolved by the end of the book (that is, everyone being accepted for who they are) but that never happens. Teddy openly cheats on his wife, the guy he is cheating with is a "family man" who is a closeted gay (and never ends up accepting this). Teddy's wife even gets one singular chapter in her point of view in which she contemplates cheating. Jeez. None of this gets resolved. I would have liked for these characters to have fully been able to accept themselves and been able to pursue the relationships they would prefer. This is also the plot content of like 80% of the book. There are many chapters the allude to intimate scenes between Teddy and the Admiral (all closed door, no spice), but Teddy HATES this guy, which made the cheating way worse. And it's just basically accepted by everyone.
Next thing I couldn't stand was the author’s use of the word "Summer". It drove me nuts! I understand the point the author was trying to make. The kingdom is called summer, the dragon is called Summer, and Teddy is Lord Summer, and they are all interconnected, so they don't need to reference what or who is being talked about. They just say "Summer" and it can mean all 3 things, and you have to figure out which one it is(there's even a joke at how the townsfolk just know which Summer is being talked about because it's so engrained in their everyday lives). But gosh was it annoying to have to figure out what was being discussed and quite frankly very confusing at the beginning of the story before it was explained. On a single page, you might see the word Summer 10+ times. In a single sentence, you might see the reference to all 3 "Summers" and have to figure out what was meant by each. This did not seem like a good choice made by the author, due to it being unnecessarily confusing for the reader.
This story is also told in first person, and when I say "told" I literally mean the main character is telling "this happened, then this happened" for the entire 320 pages instead of letting you experience it with him. It makes sense when you get to the last paragraph of the book but other than that it was basically a large info dump of a story.
What I did like was Teddy's 2 kids and the dragons, but for a story that supposedly revolves around rescuing the daughter and the dragon egg, it really didn't feature either very much. I felt like nothing happened for the first 20% of the book, everything up until 80% through was Teddy talking about his past and present relationships. There was a solid 10% of the book near the end where I was like, "finally some action" and then it started to drag again near 90%. Don't get me wrong, the writing was easy to read, so I still was able to finish the book quickly (6 hours total), but not much happened.
This apparently will be a series, and I will not be reading book 2. I think it wrapped up nicely enough and could be read as a standalone.
Thank you so much to Kensington Publishing and the author for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review.