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‘Explosive finale’? ‘Explosive finale’?! I made it to 43%, and I was bored out of my MIND.
WHAT EXPLOSIVENESS???
The whole first 40% is a gods-damn side-quest, wherein Hellevir gets involved in the lives of a couple of people in the little village she’s visiting. It has nothing to do with anything. Also: it’s been three years since the previous book, and she hasn’t a) found the next treasure for Death and b) resurrected anyone. I’m sorry??? This is the woman who literally resurrected a bird and a cat because she could…and you’re telling me in THREE YEARS she hasn’t brought anyone, or anything, else back to life?
Frankly, I don’t believe you. Hellevir is addicted, or something like addicted – maybe compelled is a kinder word – to reversing death. Are you seriously saying that in three years she didn’t come across a single dead bunny?
Also – and this really pissed me off – very quickly, we learn that the Onaistism church has now banned abortion. And, look. You never actually established that this church is bad. You know why? Because you never told us what they fucking believe! You didn’t tell us their moral code, you didn’t tell us their beliefs; all we know is that they encourage self-control and compassion (neither of which are bad things, even if you had Hellevir be all ‘why does anyone need to be told to be good?’ which seems very sneering) and once upon a time, members of this church burned people who could talk to spirits and things. We know that a couple of the modern priests don’t like Hellevir and tried to have her whipped in the previous book, but that does not actually mean the religion is fundamentally harmful, just that these few priests are terrible.
So suddenly announcing that the church has banned abortion feels like a quick, lazy way to make us hate them. And that’s why it annoyed me. Especially since the whole side-quest just establishes that Hellevir is prejudiced against the church unreasonably; she assumes the worst of a priest, but turns out to be wrong about that. So I wish Gordon could decide what she wants us to feel towards this church – are you saying they’re terrible, or not? And if you’re saying ‘it’s complicated’, then I would appreciate it if you would TELL ME WHAT THEY ACTUALLY BELIEVE. Jerking my emotions around about it – wasting 40% of a book on ‘surprise, the priest isn’t evil actually!’ – just makes me want to throw the book away. Quit telling me what to feel: show me what they believe and I’ll make up my own mind!
GAH.
And of course Hellevir is then called back to the capital because the princess needs her and I just didn’t care. Gordon wasted so much of my time with almost the full first half of the book, that it had used up all the goodwill Gilded Crown earned. I wasn’t willing to extend any more credit.
Bonus: Gordon continues to not let other animals be characters. Hellevir’s raven companion? He gets to be a character in his own right. All the other animals she can talk to – even the horse who has been with her for years at this point – don’t even get dialogue; we’re just told what they said. To the point that in Gilded Crown I genuinely thought Hellevir could only talk to birds at first, but no, she can talk to anything. It just seems so lazy – if Hellevir had a human companion for three years we’d all think it was deeply weird if they never got to talk, and functionally the horse is the same thing, for her.
Sigh. I really loved Gilded Crown, but I’m sorry, this just didn’t work for me at all.