Not a bad read. Despite mostly sticking to tactical considerations with a focus on the men on the ground, I found this book to be oddly impersonal.
I think this is likely to do with how he describes certain things. Take a death for instance. The death of a soldier is usually covered in this book as follows: we are given a description of who he was (hitherto usually quite absent so we rarely get to know him well) as well as quotes from a handful of the soldiers there, describing how long they knew him, how popular he was, and that the blokes took it really hard.
As a result, one rarely feels each death. It feels more as though Patrick Bishop is just listing an event with a staid formula, rather than describing the death of a very real human being, with all the emotions, reactions and implications that entail for all involved.
The fighting is told well enough, told in a matter of fact, occasionally repetitive way - I lost count of the amount of times this author described the beginning of an attack on a platoon house with "they [the Taliban] opened up with small arms, machine guns and RPGs" - take a few and add mortars and/or rockets depending on the situation.
Alas, it's more the events themselves rather than the author's telling of them that provide the majority of the colour and emotion that this book provides.
Despite it's faults however, it's good to have read a somewhat general history of the British in Helmand in 2006. This is some seriously interesting material; with their being so small a British footprint in Helmand at the time, one gets an almost Wild West feel to it.
I think an author would do well to collate all the sources and memoirs currently available of this time and make a detailed, testimony-heavy book on it.
Till that time however, it shall just be a plaything of my imagination - a wonderful book, just waiting to be made.