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Duskbound #2
Duskbound 2: A LitRPG Adventure
Velik's adventure continues in Duskbound 2!
A top rated novel on Royal Road with over 2 million views and 7k followers, now professionally edited and available on Amazon and Audible narrated by Gary Bennett. Buy a copy or read free with Kindle Unlimited!
A top rated novel on Royal Road with over 2 million views and 7k followers, now professionally edited and available on Amazon and Audible narrated by Gary Bennett. Buy a copy or read free with Kindle Unlimited!
- GenresFantasy
532 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 22, 2025
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February 17, 2026
DNF at 83 %
Unfortunately, I lost all interest as the plot dragged on as i didn't care about the people involved. The protagonist was too machine -like to be sympathetic and the world stayed sterile and depressing to become invested.
Unfortunately, I lost all interest as the plot dragged on as i didn't care about the people involved. The protagonist was too machine -like to be sympathetic and the world stayed sterile and depressing to become invested.
October 19, 2025
This episode lost a lot of made book one special. It has devolved into a standard progression fantasy with an over-powered protagonist. I do like the enemy they are battling, it had the potential to be a real threat to society. If only the gods hadn't given our heroes a get-out-of-jail card in the form of cleric detection powers.
October 19, 2025
Holy shit. What a change from book 1 to book 2. A sharp disappointment after the high I was riding from book 1.
First off, everyone introduced in this book absolutely fucking sucks. Aria, Giller, Pervil, Nelspir - every new character brings nothing but frustration and anger to the narrative. Even Jensen is more of an asshole this time, and I would say Torwin would have been fun if not for the fact he is gone for most of the book. Who are these characters!? Why would we want to read about any of them? They all suck!
The whole world sucks! I was excited to see him encounter the guild and the world and everything fucking sucks. Even the MC constantly complains about being dragged along with everything and wishing he would go off and do his own thing. Why would you write this? We all agree with the MC but we're going along with this fucking shit anyways?
Seriously, every character sucks whether they've been corrupted or not. They're not better even after they've been saved. Is the shittiness of the guild some sort of trope subversion? Ugh. Utterly ridiculous.
And don't get me started on his True Form. What is this, middle school? Why do writers in this genre think wolf forms are cool?
It's like this book was written to actively piss me off, I almost commend the author for it. My god.
First off, everyone introduced in this book absolutely fucking sucks. Aria, Giller, Pervil, Nelspir - every new character brings nothing but frustration and anger to the narrative. Even Jensen is more of an asshole this time, and I would say Torwin would have been fun if not for the fact he is gone for most of the book. Who are these characters!? Why would we want to read about any of them? They all suck!
The whole world sucks! I was excited to see him encounter the guild and the world and everything fucking sucks. Even the MC constantly complains about being dragged along with everything and wishing he would go off and do his own thing. Why would you write this? We all agree with the MC but we're going along with this fucking shit anyways?
Seriously, every character sucks whether they've been corrupted or not. They're not better even after they've been saved. Is the shittiness of the guild some sort of trope subversion? Ugh. Utterly ridiculous.
And don't get me started on his True Form. What is this, middle school? Why do writers in this genre think wolf forms are cool?
It's like this book was written to actively piss me off, I almost commend the author for it. My god.
January 14, 2026
good story, good book, unlikable MC
First of all, this is a pretty good story. There are laugh out loud moments in the book and the side characters are written well. My issue with the story is two things. The power progression seems a bit slow to me considering this is only a trilogy. The second issue is the MC is not very likable. Yes the MC comes from the woods where he has been living and does not know much about normal etiquette, the problem is he doesn’t want to learn he’s brutish, ignorant, stubborn, this to me, makes him totally unlikable because he’s not willing to learn and grow. Not sure if I will finish the trilogy or not give the story a shot, you may like this type of character, I did not. As far as the world is concerned, it is written very well. The side characters are vibrant and the story progresses nicely. It’s just that in my opinion the MC is unlikable.
First of all, this is a pretty good story. There are laugh out loud moments in the book and the side characters are written well. My issue with the story is two things. The power progression seems a bit slow to me considering this is only a trilogy. The second issue is the MC is not very likable. Yes the MC comes from the woods where he has been living and does not know much about normal etiquette, the problem is he doesn’t want to learn he’s brutish, ignorant, stubborn, this to me, makes him totally unlikable because he’s not willing to learn and grow. Not sure if I will finish the trilogy or not give the story a shot, you may like this type of character, I did not. As far as the world is concerned, it is written very well. The side characters are vibrant and the story progresses nicely. It’s just that in my opinion the MC is unlikable.
October 29, 2025
3.7/5 The first book was pretty great, and ended with Velik heading to society, which I was excited for, hoping he would meet people who liked him and vice versa and go on fun adventures with them. But everyone sucks, the only people in this book who seem to actually kind of like Velik are is the old archer from the first book and the druid girl. Everyone else acts like Velik is some huge asshole, when really he just keeps to himself, and doesn't have the best manners. It kinda wares on Velik and you the reader when he's just trying his best to stop a disaster and everyone still treats him like shit.
September 27, 2025
D.E. Sherman has a way with words that resonates deeply within your soul. The fact that his books focus on boys as heroes is rare in this politically correct society. As a mother to a teenage boy, I love his passion for creating worlds where boys can escape and feel accepted.
His dedication to his writing is astounding, and he deserves greater recognition for the exceptional quality of his work. I do hope his series will be turned into a reality, and I would love to see his work on the big screen. Continue writing with passion and using your incredible imagination to create a safe space for all teenage boys to reaffirm that it is okay to be who they are.
His dedication to his writing is astounding, and he deserves greater recognition for the exceptional quality of his work. I do hope his series will be turned into a reality, and I would love to see his work on the big screen. Continue writing with passion and using your incredible imagination to create a safe space for all teenage boys to reaffirm that it is okay to be who they are.
November 3, 2025
Well written.
The story line is engaging. However, it needs balance. Some good mixed with bad. 90% of this book is about fighting horrors. The extroverts would love this storyline. The introverts, not so much. I am the latter. I could not immerse myself in this book. But this book is well written, the story flows, the story well thought out . That is why I rated it five stars. But as I said, it needs balance.
The story line is engaging. However, it needs balance. Some good mixed with bad. 90% of this book is about fighting horrors. The extroverts would love this storyline. The introverts, not so much. I am the latter. I could not immerse myself in this book. But this book is well written, the story flows, the story well thought out . That is why I rated it five stars. But as I said, it needs balance.
January 17, 2026
Another good book in the series
Another good book in this series of monster hunting and mystery solving characters. This author does drop a few details that you’d prefer were handled but otherwise creates an interesting world. It is a slow crawl to power up the MC but he is still pretty powerful and is starting to impress key people in this world. I look forward to the next installment.
Another good book in this series of monster hunting and mystery solving characters. This author does drop a few details that you’d prefer were handled but otherwise creates an interesting world. It is a slow crawl to power up the MC but he is still pretty powerful and is starting to impress key people in this world. I look forward to the next installment.
September 23, 2025
bound for greatness
What a great book. The mc did not magically become sociable and the author did a great job and stayed true to his character. The worn out trope of an academy setting was skipped. Good action. Good adventure. A bit chaotic and on the short side for length, however my expectations were exceeded with this second offering. Good job.
What a great book. The mc did not magically become sociable and the author did a great job and stayed true to his character. The worn out trope of an academy setting was skipped. Good action. Good adventure. A bit chaotic and on the short side for length, however my expectations were exceeded with this second offering. Good job.
September 27, 2025
DNF
The first book in the series was much better. This book was much worse. The MC has become thoroughly unlikeable. He dislikes everyone, is incapable of normal conversation, but simultaneously allows himself to be manipulated and bullied over and over again. The book became less and less enjoyable.
The first book in the series was much better. This book was much worse. The MC has become thoroughly unlikeable. He dislikes everyone, is incapable of normal conversation, but simultaneously allows himself to be manipulated and bullied over and over again. The book became less and less enjoyable.
September 28, 2025
These are well-written, but does everyone have to be quite such an unrepentant knobhead? If anything Velik has become even less likeable since the first book, not that you can really blame him as all the other characters are total jerks. It kind of takes the fun out of things, though. Give him a romantic partner; a friend; a pet monkey; anything!
October 2, 2025
Great Addition To The Series!
This was a very enjoyable reading experience. The main character is unique in his consistent approach to interacting with the other characters in the story. The high level of action makes this series even more engaging. Looking forward to the next book in this series.
This was a very enjoyable reading experience. The main character is unique in his consistent approach to interacting with the other characters in the story. The high level of action makes this series even more engaging. Looking forward to the next book in this series.
October 15, 2025
What a great series.
I did enjoy the first book a lot, but from time to time I found the MC difficult to enjoy as a MC, but I guess that’s part of the trade off for his power. It was well written just something personal about protagonists. Anyways I was bringing it up because I find the MC growing on me more in Book 2. I think it’s well written. Looking forward to the next book
I did enjoy the first book a lot, but from time to time I found the MC difficult to enjoy as a MC, but I guess that’s part of the trade off for his power. It was well written just something personal about protagonists. Anyways I was bringing it up because I find the MC growing on me more in Book 2. I think it’s well written. Looking forward to the next book
December 11, 2025
Unlikeable MC in an engaging story
Growing up ostracized certai ly explains his anti social behavior but he's still an unpleasant person. Aside from that, his obvious linguistic skills and general competence around civilization makes his solitary upbringing less believable, which is my only ding against the story.
Otherwise, looking forward to the next.
Growing up ostracized certai ly explains his anti social behavior but he's still an unpleasant person. Aside from that, his obvious linguistic skills and general competence around civilization makes his solitary upbringing less believable, which is my only ding against the story.
Otherwise, looking forward to the next.
August 3, 2025
Well written with solid characters and a clear plot. The whole "most of the guild is filled with assholes" thing got a little tiring if only because who wants to read a book where the MC is just constantly unjustly harangued.
will continue, but will wait for book three on KU I think.
will continue, but will wait for book three on KU I think.
September 26, 2025
read this book
Read this book. I’m writing this review since the author said it’s beneficial in his book end notes. It’s definitely worth my time to do it, and for you to give it a try.
Read this book. I’m writing this review since the author said it’s beneficial in his book end notes. It’s definitely worth my time to do it, and for you to give it a try.
September 28, 2025
Love the non-linear storyline that keeps you guessing.
Devoured this book in just a few days. Addictive pacing, well developed characters and a story line that keeps you guessing and engaged. Can’t wait for the next one!
Devoured this book in just a few days. Addictive pacing, well developed characters and a story line that keeps you guessing and engaged. Can’t wait for the next one!
October 3, 2025
Easily worth the read
This was a great second book. The story developed in interesting ways with some good plot twists here and there. I wonder about the character development aspect though. There wasn't much in this book but I still really enjoyed it. Definitely recommend
This was a great second book. The story developed in interesting ways with some good plot twists here and there. I wonder about the character development aspect though. There wasn't much in this book but I still really enjoyed it. Definitely recommend
October 5, 2025
awesome book and series
This book has lots action and fight scenes. Great characters. I like that the main character is a dick. He tries not to be but just can’t help himself.
Looking forward to the next book!!
This book has lots action and fight scenes. Great characters. I like that the main character is a dick. He tries not to be but just can’t help himself.
Looking forward to the next book!!
October 11, 2025
Even better than the first one
The first book had a lot of detailed fights that went on and on. This one was more concise with them and at the same time much more interesting story wise.
The first book had a lot of detailed fights that went on and on. This one was more concise with them and at the same time much more interesting story wise.
October 24, 2025
Strong series with great characters
Second book is even better than the first. The characters are all strong but flawed and act consistently. The magic system makes sense. The action is top notch. Can’t wait for book 3!
Second book is even better than the first. The characters are all strong but flawed and act consistently. The magic system makes sense. The action is top notch. Can’t wait for book 3!
October 28, 2025
Loved this book
Loved this book . It's a very solid continuation , loved the progression of the M
main character and the development of the plot is on point. The characters overall are interesting . OVER ALL highly recommend
Loved this book . It's a very solid continuation , loved the progression of the M
main character and the development of the plot is on point. The characters overall are interesting . OVER ALL highly recommend
November 10, 2025
Great book
Really enjoyed the second book in the series and cannot wait for the third book. Really like how everything is not "fixed" with the guild. It just shows how this book is more "real" and not pure fantasy.
Really enjoyed the second book in the series and cannot wait for the third book. Really like how everything is not "fixed" with the guild. It just shows how this book is more "real" and not pure fantasy.
December 20, 2025
This series continues to be well-paced, with a taciturn but relatable MC. I like the style and the characters, and book 2 broadens Velik's horizons, but mostly to show him that the problems from the first book are bigger than everyone had thought. He also discovers a hate for bureaucracy and self-centered jerks, something I'm sure many of us can identify with. Evidently this is to be a trilogy, so now to see how this one wraps up.
December 18, 2025
awesome stuff
This story of a guy getting his class and race from a dungeon seed was a very interesting entertaining read. He’s hated and used to living by himself in the wilds. Great Read
This story of a guy getting his class and race from a dungeon seed was a very interesting entertaining read. He’s hated and used to living by himself in the wilds. Great Read
September 23, 2025
Well Crafted
Characters are well written and show their personalities and emotions really well. Very vivid. Lots of action with well written story, great 2nd book.
Characters are well written and show their personalities and emotions really well. Very vivid. Lots of action with well written story, great 2nd book.
September 28, 2025
Not as good as book 1 (Velik is getting a bit annoying) but still very good
October 4, 2025
Fanfreakingtastic!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
What an amazing book! I absolutely loved this book and such wonderful characters! I can not wait for the next book to come out!
October 22, 2025
Both books were good!
I thought that both of the books were good. I enjoyed the toons or characters. I am looking forward to the next book.
I thought that both of the books were good. I enjoyed the toons or characters. I am looking forward to the next book.
November 10, 2025
Good sequel
I almost did not read this one, the first was somewhat of a disappointment, but the author wrote this one well! A great sequel
I almost did not read this one, the first was somewhat of a disappointment, but the author wrote this one well! A great sequel
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