This collection suffers from the accretion and encrustation of so many words that the subject in so many of the poems is lost. A prime example is “The Equilibrists,” in which the would-be sexual expression of the bodiless lovers amounts to mere formalist ejaculations. Spectral lovers indeed! A couple of stanzas from “Her Eyes” demonstrate the metronomic meter and relentless rhyme schemes of Ransom’s style:
“To a woman that I knew
We’re eyes of an extravagant hue,
They were china blue.
Those I wear upon my head
Are sometimes green and sometimes red,
I said.”
While Ransom was engaged in these old-fashioned poetical histrionics, his contemporaries (Loy, Pound, H.D., Williams, Moore, Stevens) were engaged in linguistic experiments (Modernism, Imagism, etc.) that would redefine poetics and exemplify the new poetry of the Twentieth Century.