Okay...where to begin...
First and foremost, I want to thank the author, Theo Greenshaw, for letting me read an advance copy of his book as an ARC reader. This debut novel caught my attention from BookTok, and I was immediately invested. This book reminded me of Eragon by Christopher Paolini (amazing read), and, especially in Ravensbridge, of Spirited Away (amazing movie).
I must say, it has been a long time since I've devoured a book in this manner- I tell you- I finished this within one sitting! I want to say it took me all of four hours to finish Witchcraft and Fury. That alone should tell you something about Greenshaw's writing. For that, praise is definitely needed. I have never read a book so fast. His writing is easy to read, captivating, and fast-paced.
That being said, it was a little too fast-paced. There are also some typos and grammatical errors.
Buckle in, this is going to be a long and honest review.
So firstly, I love a fast-paced book, that's what gets me hooked-but I fear this book just steam-rolled through everything. There wasn't enough time to learn and care for the characters because they were jumping from one thing to another, and we weren't learning much about any of them, about their past or their motivations, just briefly skimmed past it. I loved the first two chapters as they showed promise, and we learnt a lot about Solar and the kind of person she was. The narrative was focused on the inner workings of her mind. I especially enjoyed the Danger! scene. But this was lost slowly throughout the book, and it was more her thrust into predicament after predicament, with no real chance to connect more with her. I did love how she named her sword Fury.
There were way too many page breaks and short chapters. While I love short chapters (as it provides an exciting read), combined with many page breaks, this did not work well. Causing for most of the story to rely solely on dialogue.
Which leads me to my next problem. A lot of the story is dialogue revealing the world-building lore. While the world Greenshaw has created is relatively interesting, we don't know much about it, and when we do learn something about it, it's always from dialogue from characters lore-dropping on Solar. It's a lot for a reader to keep up with when there's new information every dialogue tag. I understand it was written this way because Solar is essentially new to the magic world and is actively learning, and consequently, Binns and Loveday teach it to her; it just lacked the depth. It was more of a book where Greenshaw unloaded all of his worldbuilding ideas upon the reader.
Because of this, the friendships she said to have formed in the early few chapters make no real sense. Bear and Pingot don't share that many conversations with each other, but after a few interactions and Bear saving her from Grubber, immediately those two are deemed to be her two firmest/bestest friends, but there's no plausibility in that and no natural, gradual formation for those friendships. I would merely call them classmates, based on their interactions. While of course, friendships can be made off the page during the time that passed, it's not convincing (given how Greenshaw introduces them) that she became easy, fast friends with them. Oswald and Wyman's friendships with her were more natural than those two.
Again with the pacing, while it was good, it just so happened that something was happening every chapter (which entails an exciting read, yes), but it just further develops the fact that most of the book is just introducing world-building. I think everything happened too conveniently and too predictably. For example, in one chapter, they learn about Azure Euphoria, and within the next chapter, it is used and applied to their problem in Ravensbridge. Another one is Dusk's Delight. Loveday mentions it, and immediately, Solar has conveniently seen one before and goes to grab it, while getting in a pickle with Grubber. Then, further along (because Gib warned her of Loveday), Solar was suspicious and wanted to spy on Loveday to see if he was sinister, and in the next chapter, conveniently enough, Bayen arrives wanting to talk with Loveday, where Solar, of course, goes to eavesdrop.
I think what bothered me the most is that throughout the book, until the end, there was no real threat or purpose to them. Even halfway through the book. Merely, they are the ones chasing the threats so they can advance from trainees to apprentices (or in Cal's case, forrester). With no real threat or stakes, even halfway through the book, it's easy to lose interest (though I didn't, for other readers potentially) and not develop a care for the characters. Even though Solar insistsently repeats she wants to look for her father after her training, nothing has changed since the start of the story. She wanted to find her father, regardless, if anything, training under Loveday just made the prospect easier. But that was her only driving force, which became tiring eventually.
Now comes the smaller other parts that came to me whilst reading.
First point: Wouldn't Gib have just killed Solar instantly? Why wait four or so hours for her to die slowly if she had crucial information with her? If he killed so many people before, the gravedigger wouldn't have questioned it since he says himself he keeps himself to himself and didn't give much thought to the murders anyway.
Second point: I couldn't wrap my head around the Twin Killer spirit. It was an interesting theory, but I didn't understand why it was limited to people who have killed their twin only. It just seemed kind of random. It would have been okay if it were something to do with family or siblings, but the fact that it was only restricted to twins struck me as weird. I don't know if that's just me.
Third point: Every time Solar and the encampment faced adversaries, their attacks were always quickly managed, and the attacks didn't last long. Also, Grubber and the goblins follow them for so long, but how did they keep sight of them for so long if they could never catch them behind them? Also, wouldn't Loveday put a charm or magic around them to keep them concealed? It seemed like a world where any kind of magic was possible, so why didn't he do this and make their life easier?
Fourth point: "Being a rover is all I ever wanted." Is it really Solar? We never knew of this until that moment. Up until then, all we knew was that all she ever wanted was to learn magic and find her father. Motivations again are unclear.
Fifth point: As a reader, we can't help but feel frustrated at Solar's unlikely dismissal of all the warnings she received about Loveday. Also, how did the Lady find them again so easily? If they can be found that easily, why didn't Loveday put up more protective wards instead of resorting to the mundane efforts of leaving his trainees to keep watch? Seems useless and a missed opportunity for a great wizard like himself. Anyway, it is out of character for her not to pursue the warnings and her own suspicions just because of a few compliments and charm. Before she went into the tent, she was adamant about finding the truth, but Loveday says a few nice things, and that's all gone out the window- it's frustrating as a reader; a lot of the book could've been chopped if she had just mind raiding him there and then, deeming the rest of the book unecessary.
Sixth point: Sometimes the dialogue sounded a lot like the narrative-Greenshaw himself. The characters felt bland and sounded the same. Especially when Cal turned nicer, Oswald, Wyman and he, though they are said to be different, don't really have distinct personalities. And to be honest, a lot of the time I forgot about Oswald and Wyman's existence as they weren't that memorable as characters. Baymen and Binns had more of a personality! (Though even there, I couldn't form any real connection with the characters because the pacing was quite fast.) If you removed the dialogue tags, you wouldn't know who was speaking.
Seventh point: Cal's personality makes no sense. He hates his father and how they rose to power, and how he ran away from him to be rid of his father's cruel ways. But why then does he have no problem flaunting his riches or his house title? This backstory seems more fitting to Bear or Pingot, who are the nicest of the bunch, and the backstory for them would've been more plausible. I feel like Greenshaw just set in his mind that he wanted Solar to end up with Cal and forced it to be that way, which I didn't enjoy in the slightest. Even though, later on, Cal explains his hatred for her was not because she was a lowborn or a witch, it doesn't make sense why he would hide behind his title to hate her and speak so lowly and rudely to her. Because there, he is no better than his father or his title, and given his backstory, it seems unlikely he would act in this way.
Also, for someone who, a few chapters ago, hated Solar, for him to unravel his whole life story just because she saved them once in Ravensbridge makes no sense. This is the first proper conversation we see between them, and usually, you don't go dropping all your lore on someone you've just started to get to know or speak with properly. Especially when Cal hated her so much until they got to their second adventure.
Eight point: Which brings me to this point. Inevitably, the kiss Solar and Cal share doesn't sit right with me either. Besides Solar's obvious attraction to Cal, there aren't any real reasons or a connection for them to immediately after form a tight relationship or kiss in the first place. A kiss between her and Bear- oh, justice for Bear! (possibly the only character I felt anything for)- would have made a lot more sense, and therefore made the love triangle unnecessary. All the more, this string of events was very much predictable. From the moment I met Cal in the book, it was very clear and obvious to me she would end up with him, and it robs you of letting her explore her connection with Bear, and also, she didn't even explore a friendship with Cal either before leaping into the kiss. Bear has a genuine car for Solar, while all we know about Cal is that his hatred was drawn from jealousy. Which just brings you to question why he was even kissing Solar? Why was Solar kissing him? Someone she also hated equally. Initially, I knew this would be an enemies-to-lovers trope, and early on, reading their interactions, I thought it was being written well. However, the immediate switch from enemies to lovers with no space for friendship, like with Bear or Pingot, makes the whole thing dull. Their relationship was not exciting to me; there was no tension.
Ninth point: "Cal was kind, compassionate and thoughtful, when he wanted to be, and he was just beginning to let her see it."- gREenSHAW NO. This line has missed an opportunity! This would've made perfect sense in the middle of the book. But all the way at the end? Theo, no darling. After they kissed many times and very nearly led to something else, honey, it just doesn't make sense. At this point, she should already know of his kindness if she's allowing herself to kiss him, like him, and slowly fall in love.
Standalone comment: Solar's flying carpet? Where did that come from? (I know from the Lady from their second adventure, but I mean why a flying one? Again- way too conveneint.) Very much giving Aladdin.
Tenth point: While the plot twist would've been better if we weren't told of Loveday not to be trusted early on, it would've landed SO much better. I had already gathered way before the end that Loveday was no good, and he compelled her to go and get the book from the Queen's port. Also, why is there a Queen's port- where's the Queen?
So, in conclusion, to summarise. I thought this was a good read, a good debut novel. I read it really fast, and it was enjoyable. However, clearly there were many things that just didn't make sense to me, I couldn't connect to Greenshaw's characters, and they fell dull, and most of all, it was just too predictable- I had a feeling Solar's father was alive, of course he would be. This is why I couldn't give it more than three stars, though, Theo, got to hand it to you mate, your writing was captivating enough for me to finish the entire thing (unlike fucking Fourth Wing *shudder*), so having said all of this, I actually really look forward to your next book! I do recommend others to pick up this book and have a read.
Thanks again for the advance copy, despite all my comments, I did enjoy the book!
Meli xx