4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
Ms. D'Orazio has added a colorful character in her Pride and Prejudice stories with so much charisma that he steals every scene in which he appears, including the ones with Darcy and/or Elizabeth. As anyone familiar with this author's previous books has already guessed, I'm speaking of the flamboyant, supremely confident Lord Saye, who is Darcy's annoying cousin as well as Colonel Fitzwilliam's older brother. I'm not complaining-- far from it. Just stating a fact.
The plot here starts with an amnesia trope: very early the morning after Elizabeth vehemently refused Darcy's marriage proposal, she takes a long walk in the countryside and is bitten by a venomous snake, an adder. Darcy finds her, but her life hangs in the balance for days. When her fever finally breaks and she regains consciousness, she has lost all memories of the previous year.
Colonel Fitwilliam had learned Darcy proposed marriage to her and assumes she must have accepted, which he mentions to Charlotte Collins. Mrs. Bennet comes to Hunsford to help nurse her daughter, and one can imagine her ecstasy over her least favorite daughter's betrothal despite the ongoing concern for her health. Elizabeth is certainly amazed to awaken and find she is engaged to a man she has no recollection of even meeting. Darcy, who makes daily visits to learn how she is faring, at first intends to correct the misconception. Her doctor, however, strongly suggests that everyone avoid sharing any shocking or upsetting news, which he believes will cause a severe setback in her recovery.
As Elizabeth gets stronger, she and Darcy spend more time together. To his delight, their interactions are everything he'd hoped for when he decided to propose despite his increasing guilt over the deception.
This can't go on forever, of course, and everything goes off the rails between them once she learns the truth. Meantime, Bingley is miserably engaged to a friend of Caroline's and bitterly regretting having left Hertfordshire without exploring whether Jane Bennet loved him or not. He'd love to break things off with his shrew of a betrothed, but he has no honorable way to back out.
Enter Lord Saye to fix things for both Darcy and Bingley (when he isn't making things worse). 'Nuff said.
Ms. D'Orazio's writing is always stellar, and it is again here. The chemistry between Darcy and Elizabeth is off the charts as they enjoy the wonderful courtship they might have had sans pride and prejudice. And Saye continues to evolve and delight. Please, Ms. D'Orazio, never stop including him in your variations!
While I appreciate that this story doesn't employ the (vastly overused) knock-on-the-head trope to cause Elizabeth's amnesia, I believe an adder's venom may result in loss of consciousness and/or confusion if the victim goes into anaphylactic shock, but I don't think it's known to directly cause apoplexy or amnesia. I admit my knowledge on the subject is limited. However, at the most, it's highly unlikely that Elizabeth's amnesia would be caused by a snake bite.
Also, I wasn't convinced that Elizabeth would be so unforgiving when Darcy had a perfectly reasonable explanation for not admitting sooner that she had refused him, especially when she still loves him AND the Mr. Darcy she knows is far different to the one at Netherfield she's been told about but has no personal memory of. While I concede that her heightened emotions as she continues to recover make her more easily agitated, it still bugged me.
Having said that, my reservations about these two plot details don't bother me enough to knock my rating down a full star. Especially when Lord Saye is allowed such a pivotal role here.
Content is clean but steamy.