Nyla I've been an omega slave since I presented. It's not a great life, but it's a life, as long as I do what I'm told and don't talk back. Until HE shows up. Kiel killed my master and now he's my new master. Except this alpha doesn't seem to know what he wants from me. He thinks I'm weak and useless, but he doesn't know the weapons I have hidden within. I'm just as deadly as he is and soon, he'll find out.
Kiel My friends and I have one purpose in this world, to take down Blacktorch Institute. So finding a pathetic little omega is merely a temporary distraction. She's weak. Helpless. And she's mine. I shouldn't think about her as much as I do, but that little omega has gotten under my skin and I have a gut feeling there's more to her than meets the eye.
Content This book contains scenes with sexual content, including sex work, violence, and morally gray men. Not suitable for readers under 18.
~ h was a slave ~ H is a Hitman ~ push/pull ~ slooow burn
🌶️/5
✅ no ow, cheating,
This had all the makings of a really great book, and I’d love to see it given more attention to detail and expansion. Unfortunately it fell to the “heat solves everything” black hole of OV with not enough grovel after the H mistreats the h twice. I loved the OM drama - I live for it and this had a good amount of jealousy and possessiveness. It didn’t have any breeding 😞, she goes on an IUD.
I appreciated the heroines attitude although it bothered me she still called her previous owner Master right up until the end. One that should have bothered the heck out of Kier and two he wasn’t her master anymore.
This is a slow burn so we get self care scenes with Kier and one scene at the end between him and Nyla. One intimate scene in the middle would have been nice. I also feel given Rivens and Lys backgrounds they would have stuck up for her more. I needed more time spent on her adjusting to non slave life and explaining why given her unique training she didn’t use it against her masters to escape.
Overall a really fun concept and I’ll be reading the next for Rivens story.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
So the story didn’t start off the best. I was mildly interested. All of the bad reviews for this book were just star ratings with no explanation, so I figured I’d give it a shot. I didn’t make it very far as it wasn’t for me right off the bat.
So the MMC says they are all alphas. Followed by 2 of said alphas being a couple. One of the couple Lysander is a vegan. And “typical Lysander” cooked for the omega. Making an alpha a gay vegan right off the bat told me what type of story I was reading. Alpha male and vegan don’t go together IMO. Making the gay vegan alpha Susie home maker is so overdone I just couldn’t go any further.
Furthermore I love me a real alpha male. When things being said by alphas sound like they’re coming from a woman it’s a turn off.
I do have to thank the author for putting it in the beginning of the book as the last book I read, I got to 70% before the new age agenda went off the deep end.
It was a good story. It comes together a little fast for me. I would have liked a little more character development with the main characters. If you are looking for a quick read story, this is perfect.