Bill and Jessie are celebrating their tenth anniversary when they run into Bill's college roommate. Chad is so handsome and charming that Jessie knows she needs to have him. Saying no should be easy for Bill, but he and Chad have a long and twisted past and this is not the first time Bill has had to deal with Chad's intoxicating effect on even the most sober-minded of women.
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Ben Boswell always manages to challenge my erotic reading tastes by veering just a little further into disturbing territory than I think I might enjoy -- but usually doing so such that I do actually then enjoy it very much. I find myself wondering as I go into one of his stories whether this experience is going to be too much for me, whether I'll cope. And I think this sense of trepidation goes very well with the whole field of wife-sharing and couples toying with their monogamous boundaries.
Well, this story is another gem, playing on a fairly simple but effective idea of the hero's wife simply deciding that she must sleep with his old college friend, considering all the things she's heard about him over the years. You get that biting sense of marital conventions being destroyed and the heart-stopping loss of control the husband feels, but then you also get to enjoy the soft, warm, gooey center: his pleasure at watching his naughty wife give in to her base instincts.
Anyway, with hot sex and a strong female, you can't go wrong here if you like this particular subgenre.
very fast moving...but silly short story..must be the fastest cucking of all time" young couple married happy 2 kids..go out for a meal. after meal ,bump into his old college buddy..10 mins later wife tells husband she wants to **** his buddy hubby says no way.!..she says yes way" tells him they are going back to their bed.. she tells him to sleep in the spare room making sure the kids don't go near the door if they wake up to use the bathroom!!!.then locks him out of their bedroom..they are both still in bed in the morning she gets up and tells him to take the kids out for the day so they can stay in bed all day !!!!...just couldn't believe the premise of the story at all!!..one of my favourite writers and I know its a short story.but its just so silly.could have been a good long dark novel.but like this I wasn't impressed
I’m usually not a short story fan, but between this story and The Ménage Diaries by Delores Swallows, I may be becoming one.
The reason I’ve shied away from short stories is I don’t read the character development and evolution, and the insights into the couple’s relationship, that I so enjoy. Many short stories are more porn than erotica.
Not so with this book. About half the book is in the here and now as Bill deals with wife Jessie’s tryst with Bill’s former college roommate Chad. The other half of the book are Bill’s insightful recollections of prior adventures with Chad.
One of these recollections is a threesome Bill and Chad participated in with his friend Richie’s girlfriend Stacy. That Stacy and Richie are happily married and living in Michigan supports wife Jessie’s assertion that she’s just engaged in a fun weekend of meaningless sex. I also liked Chad’s insightful analysis of Jessie’s state of mind after she’s evolved from a nerd into a totally hot MILF.
That the weekend with Chad opened Bill and Jessie up to frank discussions in their relationship was a plus, but the author didn’t explain what those discussions revealed except in one aspect through the Epilogue.
Of course, with a short story there are lots of unanswered questions such as: why did Jessie stop the fun with Chad, what was agreed based on their frank discussions, what are the thrills that Bill gets out of this. So many questions, so few answers.
Once again, Ben Boswell proves that he’s a master storyteller. I’ve read almost all of his novels. I’ll look for more of his short stories.
Deliciously written, and my first foray into cuckolding. I felt so much hate towards the protagonist's wife towards the end, but Boswell really turned it around and somehow managed to gave it a happy ending. My only gripe is that the wife's actions were a little hard to believe, and Chad basically reasoned it away like a pick-up artist, which made the protagonist seem like even more of a wimp. I think I would've enjoyed it more in third person.
Just go get this short book and start reading. If you like the genre, you must like this. The wife goes and does it with her husband’s college roommate.
The real enjoyable part of the story is that there’s a ton of tension, unfortunately some of which we don’t read how it’s settled.
Now critiquing the story. So leave now if you want to experience it first hand as I probably will have some spoilers.
Again it’s hard to love the wife. I don’t know why but I’ve been hitting a number of these lately.
Anyway he was correct that she didn’t give him an out when on their anniversary she told him that she wanted to go to bed with his college roommate. He could say yes and then she’s got him right where she wants him. He could say no way and she’d probably be angry forever.
He did pick the best idea, basically he said that it wasn’t right, but he never said no.
She tells him that she owes him big time, but unfortunately the author doesn’t really work that out as to what she did for him. Sure they had long discussions about their wants and fantasies, and sure she told the roommate/lover to leave as she wanted to make love with her husband. Was that the payment. If so it wasn’t much that she gave into. Especially once you read the epilogue.
As the husband states when she’s decided, unilaterally, that her new lover was staying over again, he’s the fall guy who has to make it right by their kids while she turns and goes to her lover.
And then in the epilogue she’s off with her lover in NYC while he takes care of the kids and she even throws out that even though she’s expected home tomorrow, her lover has given some suggestions that he may take her to Paris.
So much for this marriage, you might say. We don’t know how much she’s away, but the two of them don’t seem to be on the same page.
God, this would be a great second book. There’s just too much that we don’t know about what will happen with this family.