He promised to protect her. But fate had crueler plans.
At the Institute, Elora trained in alchemy and trusted the man who raised her to keep her safe. Until the day he could no longer stand between her and Headmaster Thorn.
Now, survival means submission.
Her body, her mind, her will—nothing is off-limits in Thorn’s vision of what she should become. To survive, Elora must resist more than pain. She must resist erasure.
But Thorn will learn—she was never taught to kneel.
Dark magic. Forced obedience. Raw survival. Thorns of Fate is a gut-punch of a dark fantasy debut. Perfect for readers who crave brutal magic systems, morally gray choices, and a protagonist that falls before they rise.
This novel contains graphic content, including abuse, trauma, and institutional violence. Content warning can be found on the author's website.
Wow! There were several times throughout this novel that I had a visceral response. I could feel my stomach become knotted and weak as well as tension in my shoulders. Miranda Homan has remarkable talent at writing about dark topics without being descriptive. She is capable of implying physical, emotional and mental abuse, torture and rape that creates tension and fear in the reader.
Thorns of Fate is a novel that is character driven. Each character is fully defined with his/her own thoughts and feelings. I came to know Elora, Tehvan and Thorn so well that I began to closely predict the way each would respond to a situation, but that in no way took away from my enjoyment of reading it.
Tehvan is the kind, compassionate guardian, who does everything in his power to protect Elora. Elora is equally compassionate with the mind of a curious scholar. Thorn is the epitome of evil trying to create his own empire. He is a monster creating monsters.
Just when Elora thinks Thorn has irrevocably broken her mind, body and spirit she uses her own iron will to survive. She is also assisted by Tehvan, a sympathetic professor and a beautiful foreigner to escape the clutches of Thorn. Oh, and just as a little bit of a teaser, Tehvan and Thorn are brothers.
I will soon be reading Scars of the Unbound, the second novel of the series! I received a free copy of Thorns of Fate, and I am voluntarily leaving my opinions of this novel. Thank you to Miranda Homan, the publisher and Goodreads for this opportunity.
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My deep dive into Miranda's Thornforged Chronicles started with The Gilded Children, a short story prequel. But oh, this was so much more. This was absolute perfection condensed into forty-one pages.
Forty-one pages of pain, hurt, and betrayal of the deepest kind. Forty-one pages of hopelessness etched into every pore of this society. Forty-one pages of tragedy that can hardly be described, yet whose echoes roar from every word. Any yet, there was a ray of light: Rellius, a desperate fourteen-year-old, searching for his sister, who has vanished into the clutches of the Snatchers, a brutal trafficking caravan that deals in flesh under the Empire’s blind (or willfully blind) eye.
There were no happy endings in The Gilded Children. Will there be one in The Thorns of Fate, Book 1 of the series?
There are no happy endings, at least not yet. There is darkness. There is oppression in its most brutal form. Oppression against those who choose to disobey, who dare to be more than the Empire's pawns. More than "things" to be used and abused by those in power. Those who dare to look the darkness in the eyes, whether it be the Institute's Headmaster Thorn or one of his guards. For Elora, this darkness is her life. Even with the protection she has, and that protection may have an expiry date, danger looms over her.
And when that danger finds her...
Miranda told a story of a girl caught in the clutches of monsters, hanging by a thread of mercy and love. But even that love carries its burdens. She has woven a tale of true darkness, steeped in violence, pain, and cruelty. She focused on the effects and aftereffects, and what emerges is a raw exploration of trauma and healing, told with care and without ever diminishing the reality of one’s pain or responses..
There are no happy endings for now... Will there be one in its sequel, The Scars of the Unbound? I'm not certain, but I truly believe Miranda will continue to gift us a masterfully written and intricately woven tale of despair and hope, hate and love, hurt and healing, in all their forms.
Thank you, Miranda, for accepting me as one of your ARC readers; I'm honored beyond words.
The Institute is only the Beginning of Elora's Fate
Warning: This story takes the nomenclature of DARK fantasy seriously. There is violence. There is pain. There is cruelty. This book takes the right headspace to read, because although it is fiction, its descriptions and tone are vivid.
The story is a slow build as Elora's fate is sealed and trauma upon trauma is inflicted upon her. She starts to lose even herself when it all accumulates into confrontation. Action ensuing to then set up for book 2.
I'll be honest, there were parts of this story that were hard to read. What happened to Elora, at times it is horrifying that it was even allowed. However the writing was very tactful. Giving enough to not go into huge detail on the abuses, and then focusing on how it affects Elora. How she reacts, I sometimes wondered if the author had such horrible things happen to her because Elora's feelings are raw and understandable. Her side thoughts, unspiraling, made perfect sense.
As I said, dark is a completely appropriate descriptor of this story. It is only the beginning. Character driven, full of magic, secrets, and reason for revenge.
✨🩶Alright book babes, let’s get one thing straight, Thorns of Fate is not your typical fantasy filled with swoony glances and love triangles. This one is all about fate, and survival!
☠️That said, this book delivered a solid girlboss fantasy with zero romance drama and honestly? That was kind of refreshing. Sometimes you just want a story where the heroine is fighting fate, not falling for it. ⚔️🩶
If you’re into: ✨Political intrigue ✨ Ancient prophecies ✨Strong, solitary female leads …this one’s for you.
Read it for the secrets. Stayed for the storm. Can’t wait to see how everything plays out in book 2🌩️📖
3.5 Thornforged Chronicles left me somewhere between furiously turning pages and staring at the ceiling asking, “But WHY?”
Let me start by saying, I will be picking up the next instalment. Not because this one tied everything up nicely (it didn’t), but because I have roughly 372 unanswered questions and a personal need to see whether certain characters ever reappear, or just live forever off page.
Now, on to the grit: this is a dark book. The trigger warnings are not just a formality. Bullying, sexual assault, emotional manipulation, and systemic neglect are central themes. These are not handled lightly, nor should they be, but be warned: this story will crawl under your skin and stay there. Some scenes are devastating to read, especially knowing the characters are teenagers navigating horrific circumstances while surrounded by adults with the equivalent of PhDs in Willful Blindness.
Case in point: Thorn. An apex predator of cruelty, somehow untouchable in an institution full of alchemists smart enough to transmute elements but apparently not bright enough to take down a violent sociopath? Make it make sense.
And then there’s Thevan. Sweet, stoic Thevan who adopts Elora like a stray kitten and then… proceeds to let her get emotionally and physically trampled under the watchful eye of his own brother. Sir, please hand in your parental card at the door.
A special mention to the writing, because yes, it’s often stunning. The atmosphere drips from the page. You feel the chill of the institute, the despair, the weight. But occasionally, the prose doubles down and just keeps doubling. We get it, she’s exposed and ashamed. You don’t need to show us again with the exact same words three paragraphs later. Still, Miranda Howman clearly has a voice, and a strong one at that.
And lastly: Symond. What happened to that deliciously angry enigma? He gets a whole storm of build-up and then sails off into the void. I assume he’ll return in book two with secrets, but right now, it feels like we lost a complex thread.
So yes, I’m torn. I’m frustrated. But I’m also deeply curious. If Thornforged Chronicles wanted to spark intense reactions, mission accomplished. It’s not a light read, and definitely not a perfect one, but it’s one I won’t forget.
3.5 stars, docked some for the mysterious disappearance of half the cast and the adults failing at literally everything. Bring on Book Two. I have questions.
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The first installment in this fantasy series, TOF introduces us to a world of alchemy and shapeshifting, and the societies based on these powers. Told through the story of Elora, an orphan rescued as a child by Tehvan, she is raised at the Institute, training to become a powerful alchemist. Yet, success at the Institute is anything but guaranteed, especially when powerful forces have their own agenda…
This is a dark story. The plot is well grounded in its universe, a society that prizes its alchemists to fight a war against the shapeshifter society in the north. Centered on its protagonist, Elora, the story follows her failure to live up to the Institute’s rules, thrusting her instead into the clutches of its evil headmaster, and the degradation she is subjected to.
As a reader, I found that beyond the fantasy elements, there was also aspects of horror- mostly in the all too-human reaction to degradation and rape. So, while there is almost a Harry Potter kind of feel to the Institute and some of its denizens, and has a YA feel to it, readers should be aware that very dark themes are explored here, and should judge its appropriateness.
I personally struggled with the overwhelming darkness of the story, but that speaks more to my own personal choices and preferences. That said, this very noir setting is obviously meant to keep the reader rooting for the protagonist, and does that successfully. My main criticism is that I felt it dwelt a little too long here, and I wanted the story to move on.
Otherwise,I found it well written. The characters are well-developed and believable, conforming to their tropes, the protagonist is easily identified with, making for a compelling read. For all this, I found it interesting enough to be intrigued and would definitely like to see how this series continues.
I RECOMMEND this for an age appropriate audience- older YA to Adult. Trigger themes: rape, bullying, captivity.
This was the first book in the Thornforged Chronicles and wow I’m so drawn in! This first book was such an enticing and engaging display of what this world has to offer us.
This book is a dark fantasy with an antagonist with more dimension than expected. It’s almost like you feel for him, crazy I know! But the protagonist Elora has you rooting for her every step of the way.
I can’t wait to see what the next book has in store in terms of world building and plot development! I also want to know so much more about the magic systems and all the alchemical processes!
This book has everything a fantasy lover could want!
3.5⭐ | Fate, secrets, and a heroine caught in the thorns
Shadowy magic, slow-burn tension, and a world that whispers of deeper lore. Miranda spins an atmospheric tale that’s rich in mood but a bit tangled in pacing. If you love morally gray choices and destiny-driven drama, secrets unravel and a new path is taken—just expect a few narrative pricks along the way.
4.5 ⭐️ What an incredible debut novel! I applaud Howman’s ability to build such an immersive world. This book was truly refreshing. It was darker than I first thought it would be but it was written/ handled in such a tactful way. The atmosphere, the complex characters, the pacing… chefs kiss! So glad we read this for our book club and I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!
**PLEASE CHECK TRIGGER WARNINGS BEFORE READING THIS BOOK**
this book gave a great look into dar academia. It had excellent pacing. a rich and vibrant world with 3d characters. Can't wait to read the second book!!!
This book is soo good!! It is definitely dark and emotional, you really feel for these characters. The FMC goes through so much in such a short time. The things we learn along the way are placed perfectly throughout the story. I know there is so much more for this world to open up to and I cannot wait to see where this series goes!!
A story about the overwhelming terror and suffering that come from realizing that no help will find you.
Thorns of Fate is the story of a girl blind to her own privilege who is made to feel pain, fear and terror as she discovers what it means to lose this privilege.
As a child, Elora was adopted and raised by Tehvan and brought to the renowned Miros institute. There she studied alchemy under the watchful eyes of Master Thorn, protected from the institute's violent rules of obedience by Tehvan - but when she fails her graduation, she finds she is no longer safe. Hunted, hurt and assaulted, she lives as a ward at the very bottom of the food chain and learns the true meaning of terror as she is turned into a lab rat and plaything: broken and reshaped into a weapon for a decade-long grudge. What will she do when she realizes that no one will come to save her?
The story is, primarily, one of pain - it's not a happy book, that's for sure. The themes it explores cover (un)fairness, loyalty and debt, influence over others, and the questions: "How do you survive the unspeakable?" and "Who am I if not the product of my trauma?" It is strongly advised to consider the trigger warnings listed at the beginning of the book before reading it. There is an overwhelming darkness to this story that threatens to swallow the reader whole.
The setting of the world wasn't explored in depth in this first installment, but the institute of alchemy posed as an intriguing groundwork. While it would have been interesting to learn more about the workings of the institute and the alchemy practiced in this world that the beginning promises, alchemy ends up playing a very different, more sinister role for Elora.
There were many side characters at the beginning, most of which dropped off rather abruptly and did not appear again in the book. Others appeared from time to time with little relevance. Especially the exploration of Symond as a character would have been a great contrast to Elora's story as the plot progressed. As for Elora, her progression as a character - while mostly negative - was thrilling to read. It would have been nice if she wasn't saved by men in most relevant situations while her and other female characters stood by mostly passively. There is much to hope for for the continuation of the Thornforged Chronicles - that's a certainty!
Though this is not my typical choice for a novel, it was definitely exciting to read. This is novel for teens to young adults. At first, I was thinking of Harry Potter, as I read about Elora and the magician stuff. Her blood signifies her fate rather than a hat. But as tragedy after tragedy was handed to her and no one coming to her aide, not even Tehran, I realized it was not at all another Harry Potter novel. I started getting mad that she was so innocent and being used; Symonds, Thorn, and Gerard. Who was in her corner? Who was going to help her? Would she escape? How much more could such a young girl take? I guess I will have to continue the saga to find out.
This is definitely one of the darker fantasy books I've read lately. Elora goes through so much in a short period and I can't help but be immersed in her story. And the villain is truly despicable. And while the world and the magic system is really interesting, my only critique is that I wish we had MORE of it.
Of course, with this being the first in the series, I'm sure we will come to understand more of this world and Elora's history. I just still wish this had been longer, but I am definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes. And I really want to know more about a certain character we are introduced to near the end. Just proceed with caution because there are some very deep and dark themes here.
I was given an e-ARC of this book in return for an honest review. When the author stated this is a dark fantasy, I definitely underestimated how dark it was. She writes "The story explores heavy emotional themes like trauma, captivity, survival, psychological manipulation, and grief."
All of that and more for sure. It's presented in a way that doesn't make it unreadable, or in a manner that would make you think the author is "icky", or problematic.
The basic premise of the world is that the mc Elora and her classmates are studying to become alchemist apprentices for The Empire, and have to undergo a trial to pass the judment to become an apprentice. Elora's close friend fails, and she tries to save her life, ultimately failing. In her own test she chooses to honor her friend, for living and being a tool of the Empire.
BIG SPOILERS UPCOMING, DO NOT CONTINUE IF YOU DO NOT WANT ANYTHING SPOILED! IM WARNING YALL!!
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If you're a fan of darker fantasy, I definitely recommend this book. I found it gripping and worth reading, I even got through it in one sitting!
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Welcome to the Institute....where a Hogwarts run by Delores Umbridge is like a walk in the park. Headmaster Thorn is the perfect villian. I hated him from the moment he appeared on page. Under his tutelage, students undergo so many unbelievable trials that shape them from a very young age into who the Empire wants them to be. They strive from the beginning to pass their trials and become Empire Alchemists. Little do they know, they would just be trading one prison for another.
Elora's start in life is far from ideal....as are many of the histories of the Institute's students. Elora's bright spot is her guardian, Tehvan. However, secrets and lies could theaten everything. While Elora's goal was to beome an Empire Alchemist....fate had other plans for her. From one moment to the next, she finds herself in the worst scenario she never even considered. She is thrust into a life that literally has her fighting to survive.
This checks every box for dark fantasy, and it is soooooo good. Miranda does such as good job of gutting you through her writing. Some topics this dark fantasy touches on are: 1. survival vs identity/humanity, 2. power, control, and oppression 3. traume and its effects, and 4. transformation. I can't wait to see where Elora's journey takes her in book 2.
In a world where people sell their children to pay their debts, a girl who has no name is taken in by a scholar and brought to the Miros Institute, to learn the ways of alchemy.
She’s protected from the cruelty of the Institution, only she doesn’t realize it. Not until she’s about to take the exams, to take her place working for the Empire.
Her world is brought to a crushing halt when her best friend fails her exam, and though she shouldn’t intervene - she does. And that’s her undoing.
This was a slow build for me. And it does have a few potentially triggering moments. Overall, a well written debut novel. Thank you Miranda for allowing me to have this ARC experience!
The Thorns of Fate grabbed my attention and held it. I found it to be a story that I just couldn’t put down. The story is an emotional rollercoaster that provided high highs and very low lows. As soon as I finished the story, I immediately wanted more. The story explores how a person could do unbelievably evil acts and still be tender to the people they love. I’m looking forward to more from Miranda Howman.
Book review: Thorns of Fate: The Thornforged Chronicles by Miranda Howman. Thank you to Miranda Howman for my gifted ARC of this hauntingly unforgettable dark fantasy debut.
From the moment I opened Thorns of Fate, I knew I wasn’t stepping into the kind of fantasy that offers soft magic and safety nets. The Miros Institute might appear at first glance like a place of learning and prestige, but beneath its stone halls lurks something far more sinister—a machine designed to strip away identity, autonomy, and hope. Elora begins her journey as a gifted alchemy student under the protection of her guardian, Thevan, shielded from the worst the Institute has to offer. She believes her life is on track to become one of the Empire’s elite alchemists. But the moment she fails her final trial, that illusion is shattered. What follows is not a fall from grace—it’s an obliteration of everything she thought she was.
Miranda Howman’s writing is immersive and unflinching. She doesn’t turn away from the brutality of Elora’s new reality as a Ward—someone deemed unworthy of apprenticeship and relegated to servitude and subjugation. Every moment of Elora’s struggle feels personal, raw, and painfully real. The violence and cruelty here aren’t gratuitous; they’re deliberate, meant to show the cost of survival in a system built to erase those who resist. As one line early on puts it, “He promised to protect her. But fate had crueler plans.” That promise, and its inevitable breaking, reverberates through every decision Elora makes.
The cast around Elora is equally compelling. Thevan, the father figure who saved her as a child, is equal parts protector and enigma—his love for her unquestionable, but his limits painfully clear. Headmaster Thorn is one of the most chilling antagonists I’ve encountered in recent fantasy: intelligent, controlled, and utterly convinced of his right to reshape those under his power. Then there’s Symond, whose bitterness and cruelty mask his own deep trauma. He is perhaps the most morally gray character of the bunch, walking the knife’s edge between victim and perpetrator in a way that left me unsettled long after closing the book.
One of the novel’s standout elements is its alchemy-based magic system. It’s meticulously constructed, blending scientific precision with fantastical possibilities. From healing elixirs to dangerous transmutations, every magical act has rules, risks, and consequences. Yet Howman doesn’t let the magic overshadow the human cost of wielding it—in fact, some of the most disturbing moments in the book come from alchemy’s misuse.
The pacing is deliberate, sometimes even suffocating, which works in its favor. You’re not meant to breeze through this book without feeling its weight. The oppressive atmosphere mirrors Elora’s entrapment, and when moments of defiance or hope emerge, they feel like hard-won breaths of air. I will admit there are stretches where the darkness is relentless, and some readers might wish for more balance between despair and forward momentum. But for me, the heaviness is part of what makes Thorns of Fate so memorable—it’s not trying to comfort you, it’s trying to leave a mark.
If I had one critique, it’s that certain side characters and hinted plot threads—particularly involving Symond—disappear for long stretches, leaving me desperate for answers that will likely only come in the sequel. The world beyond the Miros Institute is glimpsed but not fully explored, which makes me think book two will open things up in a big way. And honestly? I can’t wait.
This is not a book for everyone. The content warnings—abuse, trauma, institutional violence—are not ornamental. They’re integral to the story. But for readers prepared to engage with those themes, Thorns of Fate is an astonishingly well-crafted piece of dark fantasy. It’s about the brutality of control, the resilience it takes to survive, and the thin, dangerous line between breaking and bending. It asks difficult questions and doesn’t always offer answers, but it makes sure you feel every moment.
By the time I turned the last page, I was both wrung out and eager for more. Elora’s story is far from over, and I have no doubt that what comes next will be as ruthless and riveting as what’s come before.
★★★★★ An Enthralling Dark Fantasy That Will Stay With You
Thorns of Fate is a masterfully crafted dark fantasy that completely captivated me from the first page. Miranda Howman has created a richly detailed world with the Miros Institute, a place where alchemy and magic blend in fascinating ways against the backdrop of oppression and struggle.
The protagonist Elora's journey from privileged student to someone fighting for her very identity is brilliantly portrayed. Her character development feels authentic as she navigates the harsh realities of her world after being thrust into danger. The relationship between Elora and her mentor Tehvan adds emotional depth, making their eventual separation all the more impactful.
What truly sets this book apart is Howman's ability to explore complex themes of survival, identity, and the cost of power without sacrificing the pace of the story. The antagonist, Headmaster Thorn, is genuinely menacing - not just a generic villain but someone with understandable (if twisted) motivations for his cruelty.
The magic system based in alchemy feels fresh and well-thought-out, with clear rules and limitations that create genuine tension during critical moments. The writing itself is atmospheric and immersive, painting vivid scenes that range from the beauty of alchemical transformations to the horror of the Institute's darkest corners.
For fans of dark fantasy who enjoy morally complex characters and stories that don't shy away from difficult themes, Thorns of Fate is an absolute must-read. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment in The Thornforged Chronicles!
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The first book in any fantasy series faces the heavy lift of worldbuilding: it must create a world that feels real and lived-in, but avoid being so generic that the reader forgets it after turning the last page. I was therefore thrilled to discover Miranda Howman’s Thorns of Fate, a novel that sidesteps common pitfalls with a captivating and immersive world. The premise of a school for the magically/alchemy gifted might seem trite, but Howman introduces a dark, unique twist: the attendees, including our protagonist Elora, are effectively government slaves, and they know it.
This chilling reality creates an oppressive atmosphere that puts the “dark” in “dark fantasy.” The novel’s strength lies in its ability to ground its gritty plot in complex, human characters. Without spoilers, the cast is intriguing from the outset, but soon reveals layers of moral ambiguity that are fitting for the gritty world they inhabit. We see characters grapple with disturbing situations, and I was impressed with how respectfully and tactfully Howman handles this trauma. There is no sensationalizing of their suffering; instead, the focus remains on the authentic weight of their experiences.
My only real disappointment with the novel: the story ended! I don’t always feel the urge to know what happens next when I finish a book, but although the plot pauses at a good stopping point, feeling upset at having to wait for the next installment is a testament to how deeply invested I became in the characters and their fates. I am eagerly looking forward to returning to Elora’s story in the future.
4.5 Stars for a totally different kind of fantasy book.
This is not fluffy, this is not romantic, this is not spicy. This is real and raw and sets up these characters for one heck of a ride.
I felt so frustrated and angry for Elora throughout the book, and wanted so badly for her to get some redemption!! Her journey is heartbreaking and every time I thought the tides were going to turn, they didn’t. Honestly it did make me feel anxious at times because I was like “come on, give this girl a break!”
Thorn is an awful human, and that really sums him up. Tehvan seems like he’s trying to be good, but his decision making isn’t always the best. I find myself yelling at him several times throughout this book. At least Thorn is bad and just stays bad, so you know what you’re getting. Tehvan makes you believe things will get better and then lets you down.
I’m very interested to read the next book just to see how these characters grow and how their stories unfold. I pray that Tehvan gets a little bolder, that Elora finally gets some happiness, and that Thorn gets his ass kicked.
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With this book, Miranda Howman presents a dark fantasy novel unlike anything I've read before. Set in the Miros Institute-a school that teaches magic, we are presented with the main character Elora, who is rather carefree and childish at first. As the story develops and she's stripped from her mentor Tehvan's protection, Elora begins to see the world for what it is.
I noticed that the author focused a lot on Elora's sheltered upbringing, and this eventually lead to her growth when she begins fighting for her identity. I liked how the author took a privileged character, stripped them of that privilege, and used that as a means to develop them and spur growth. It made the story so much more enjoyable reading about Elora's personal journey, seeing what her peers had been suffering through first hand. I am excited to see more from Elora and read more of Howman's work.
Wow. Dark, devastating, and a little bit disturbing, but in the best way. The Empire is not a nice or easy place to live and the Institute just might be the most dangerous of all, especially for FMC Elora. While she might have been protected while studying alchemy at the Institute, there was always a target on her back waiting for just the right time to strike. When this happens, Elora must fight for every shred of humanity left in her if she’s going to escape Headmaster Thorn’s wrath with her life and her mind intact.
With a truly dark academy, plenty of morally grey characters, shifters, and a brutal magic system 𝑻𝒉𝒐𝒓𝒏𝒔 𝒐𝒇 𝑭𝒂𝒕𝒆 is an incredible dark fantasy that will keep you rapidly turning the pages until you reach the end! Cannot wait to read the next one and find out how this potential cat and mouse game ends…
Having received an early copy and reading nonstop, I can say for certain that Thorns of Fate is a standout in dark fantasy. From a longterm fan of the genre, this book is atmospheric,attention-grabbing, and beautifully written. From the first page, it pulls you into a tragic story with twists I could’ve never seen coming that genuinely shocked me as I kept reading.
With beautiful storytelling and unforgettable moments, this book constantly leaves you wanting more (can’t wait for the sequel!!)
The characters reflect incredibly well just how much a labor of love this book was, and it certainly has a special place on my shelf to be read again soon.
Highly recommended for anyone who is a fan of dark fantasy, tragic stories, or gorgeously detailed/written worlds.
WOW!! This book gripped me from the beginning! Miranda Howman brings you into the life of Elora in such a way that you can feel her trauma and pain. There were so many times in this book that I was on the edge of my seat wanting to jump in and protect and nurture the characters. My heart truly was breaking for her knowing that there were things going on that was out of my control. You know from the start that there is a deep darkness in the Institute that shakes you to your core. Miranda Howman brings to life the alchemy and magic system along with mystical creatures amidst trauma in a way that pulls you in the story. It brought anger to my soul for Elora and others that were mistreated at the Institute. I can't wait to continue this journey with Elora when the story continues.
This book completely consumed me. From the very first chapter, I was lost in its darkness and intensity. It’s not an easy story. It’s raw, painful, and filled with bullying, manipulation, violence, and abuse. Yet it’s written with such emotional depth that you simply can’t look away.
The author’s writing is phenomenal. Every scene is painted so vividly that you don’t just read it, you feel it. The atmosphere is heavy and haunting, wrapping around you until you forget the world outside the pages. The characters are deeply layered and painfully real. You experience every emotion right alongside them.
I honestly can’t wait to read the second book. I need more of this story.
Explicit. This was engaging and I spent most of the books really empathising with the main character. What a horrible situation to be in. It was interesting to get the glimpses of the other characters' perspectives too, it helped nuance the story. But I didn't feel that WOW experience. I still really liked it, I felt like the alchemy and shifting processes were really interesting, and I think the world has lots of potential for growth in later books. The characters felt a little flat, but it was a quick read and I will be looking forward to book two!
This was a dark and powerful beginning to Elora’s story. The treatment she suffers at the institute is deeply disturbing, but it lays the groundwork for understanding her strength and resilience. What makes this book stand out is the lack of a love interest and zero spice, which allows the focus to remain on Elora’s origins and the world around her. It’s an effective introduction that builds the characters and their motivations, setting a strong foundation for the next book, which I can't wait to start.