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The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister
Had not my own feelings decided against you, had they been indifferent, or had they even been favourable, do you think that any consideration would tempt me to accept the man, who has been the means of ruining, perhaps forever, the happiness of a most beloved sister?AFTER HER ELDER SISTER JANE is endangered by a youthful romantic disappointment, Elizabeth Bennet takes it upon herself to stand guard over Jane’s heart—as well as her own. Thus, when Mr Bingley enters the neighbourhood and Jane once again appears to be enamoured by a gentleman suitor, Elizabeth is deeply afraid that history will repeat itself. From a protective instinct, she speaks out of turn, possibly ruining Jane’s chance at happiness forever. When Mr Bingley proves to be as fickle in his attentions as Elizabeth feared, she must face the consequences of her well-meaning actions. But is her most beloved sister truly deserving?
FITZWILLIAM DARCY IS NOT AT ALL IMPRESSED by Jane Bennet and her pretensions, believing her to be a fortune hunter. Neither does her treatment of Elizabeth endear her to him. When Bingley abandons her, Darcy deems it for the best, easily discerning that her frigid heart remains untouched. He has no inclination to reunite them…until a desperately unhappy Elizabeth asks it of him. Darcy must then choose between his conscience and his heart and also decide wherein his loyalties must lie.
THE HAPPINESS OF A MOST BELOVED SISTER is a Pride & Prejudice variation. It is a low angst friends to lovers romance with a guaranteed happily ever after for Darcy and Lizzy.
FITZWILLIAM DARCY IS NOT AT ALL IMPRESSED by Jane Bennet and her pretensions, believing her to be a fortune hunter. Neither does her treatment of Elizabeth endear her to him. When Bingley abandons her, Darcy deems it for the best, easily discerning that her frigid heart remains untouched. He has no inclination to reunite them…until a desperately unhappy Elizabeth asks it of him. Darcy must then choose between his conscience and his heart and also decide wherein his loyalties must lie.
THE HAPPINESS OF A MOST BELOVED SISTER is a Pride & Prejudice variation. It is a low angst friends to lovers romance with a guaranteed happily ever after for Darcy and Lizzy.
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Published October 3, 2025
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Mary Smythe
19 books55 followersMary Smythe is a homemaker living in South Carolina with a rather useless BA in English collecting dust in a closet somewhere. She discovered the works of Jane Austen as a teenager, thanks to the 1995 BBC Pride and Prejudice miniseries featuring Colin Firth and Jennifer Ehle, and has since gone on to read everything written by Ms Austen at least once yearly, always wishing that there were more. She has been writing since 2001, but only discovered Jane Austen Fanfiction in the summer of 2018.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
Dare to Refuse Such a Man is the first full-length novel she has ever completed, though she can boast a few shorter works in her library, as well.
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September 12, 2025
The blind shall see…
“She trusted her aunt that Jane would be well, but she also vowed in that moment to do her utmost to stand between her sister and heartache from thenceforth.” (quote from the book)
Every now and then I enjoy a story where one of our ‘good’ characters from Pride & Prejudice is not. In this case, Jane Bennet. After being deceived in the ardent attentions of a young man when she was just five and ten, Jane Bennet makes herself extremely ill over it. Elizabeth loving her kind and gentle sister vows to protect her from such men in the future.
“In a voice of deadly calm, she said, ‘You have ruined perhaps forever, my chance at happiness. I shall never forgive you.’” (quote from the book)
However, this Jane is duplicitous, manipulative and calculating. She manipulates Elizabeth’s love for her in ways that Elizabeth is blind to. But when Jane falls ill at Netherfield Park, Mr. Darcy sees the cold calculation in Jane’s eyes. Others have tried to tell her that Jane is not the paragon she perceives her to be. Elizabeth refuses to believe it. But when Elizabeth nobly meddles in Jane’s pursuit of Mr. Bingley, and the Bingley’s and Mr. Darcy leave Netherfield, Jane refuses to even speak to her.
“It seemed she had never really known Jane – or herself, if she could be so completely duped for so long” (quote from the book)
Mr. Darcy is honourable and tender in this story. But he too has his own epiphany. He gives Elizabeth a talisman of sorts to comfort her when they are separated. I quite liked that. However, I will admit to some frustration that Elizabeth was blind to Jane’s character for so long. I can only put it down to her ‘cleverness’ abandoning her while trying to protect Jane’s heart.
Despite this frustration, I did enjoy this newest variation from Ms Smythe, and I do recommend it. I certainly loved her rendering of Mr. Darcy. There is also a brilliant use of words from canon. That and Mr. Darcy alone are worth it.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
October 19, 2025
I found this premise very interesting. Elizabeth promises herself to look after her sister, Jane, after a suitor's marriage to someone else not only takes them by surprise but also has Jane becoming so ill that her life is endangered. (This is as Elizabeth is only 13 years old.)
We read of how Jane then puts Elizabeth into the role of her personal servant. Darcy and Bingley do come into the picture and we again have interference with the relationship between Jane and Bingley. Elizabeth confronts Darcy early in this story and he does persuade Bingley to return to Netherfield. (We don't hear much from his two sisters.)
Darcy takes it upon himself to point out to Elizabeth just what Jane's treatment of her is really all about. And SO, we have the sisters' relationship changing.
Obviously this does not reflect canon, at all.
I have enjoyed reading most of this author's stories.
We read of how Jane then puts Elizabeth into the role of her personal servant. Darcy and Bingley do come into the picture and we again have interference with the relationship between Jane and Bingley. Elizabeth confronts Darcy early in this story and he does persuade Bingley to return to Netherfield. (We don't hear much from his two sisters.)
Darcy takes it upon himself to point out to Elizabeth just what Jane's treatment of her is really all about. And SO, we have the sisters' relationship changing.
Obviously this does not reflect canon, at all.
I have enjoyed reading most of this author's stories.
September 28, 2025
When Jane is the Proud One
A mean-Jane trope variation, The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister turns the focus on Jane Bennet and shows her in a very different light. Instead of the gentle, almost flawless sister we know from Austen, Jane is proud, self-assured, and manipulative.
Elizabeth is portrayed as so intent on shielding Jane from disappointment that she has grown almost wilfully blind to her sister’s faults. Time and again, she defends Jane, convinced of her goodness, even as Darcy and her Aunt Gardiner see her as proud and spoiled. It is not until nearly the end that Elizabeth finally admits what those around her have long seen.
Darcy, however, is never deceived. From the start he discerns Jane’s character and is forthright in saying so, even when Elizabeth does not wish to hear it. He detests the way Jane has treated her sister. His clear-sightedness is a sharp contrast to Elizabeth’s loyalty. I think readers will be gratified when the deserved set-down to Jane is finally delivered; it was one of the most satisfying moments of the book for me.
Mrs. Gardiner captured Jane perfectly: “Jane might have attended to sermons warning against the pitfalls of pride and vanity, but she has placed herself upon a pedestal and above reproach.” This sums up well the way this story challenges our usual expectations, showing that pride can wear many faces.
The writing is strong—smooth, easy to follow, and engaging throughout. The story keeps its focus primarily on the four central figures: Jane, Bingley, Elizabeth, and Darcy. The latter couple are given room to connect in ways that felt heartfelt and sincere. Jane has Elizabeth as her protector in this book, but Elizabeth has Darcy as hers.
It’s a very good read, and one I especially recommend to readers who enjoy this trope. Jane’s prideful turn is both surprising and memorable, and it forces Elizabeth into difficult choices she is slow to make—while simultaneously highlighting Darcy’s steady loyalty.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
A mean-Jane trope variation, The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister turns the focus on Jane Bennet and shows her in a very different light. Instead of the gentle, almost flawless sister we know from Austen, Jane is proud, self-assured, and manipulative.
Elizabeth is portrayed as so intent on shielding Jane from disappointment that she has grown almost wilfully blind to her sister’s faults. Time and again, she defends Jane, convinced of her goodness, even as Darcy and her Aunt Gardiner see her as proud and spoiled. It is not until nearly the end that Elizabeth finally admits what those around her have long seen.
Darcy, however, is never deceived. From the start he discerns Jane’s character and is forthright in saying so, even when Elizabeth does not wish to hear it. He detests the way Jane has treated her sister. His clear-sightedness is a sharp contrast to Elizabeth’s loyalty. I think readers will be gratified when the deserved set-down to Jane is finally delivered; it was one of the most satisfying moments of the book for me.
Mrs. Gardiner captured Jane perfectly: “Jane might have attended to sermons warning against the pitfalls of pride and vanity, but she has placed herself upon a pedestal and above reproach.” This sums up well the way this story challenges our usual expectations, showing that pride can wear many faces.
The writing is strong—smooth, easy to follow, and engaging throughout. The story keeps its focus primarily on the four central figures: Jane, Bingley, Elizabeth, and Darcy. The latter couple are given room to connect in ways that felt heartfelt and sincere. Jane has Elizabeth as her protector in this book, but Elizabeth has Darcy as hers.
It’s a very good read, and one I especially recommend to readers who enjoy this trope. Jane’s prideful turn is both surprising and memorable, and it forces Elizabeth into difficult choices she is slow to make—while simultaneously highlighting Darcy’s steady loyalty.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
August 17, 2025
Shallow Shrew with a Pretty Face.
The depiction of Jane as such a selfish self centered person on the hunt for a husband initially threw me. As a variation, this really shed a different light on Lizzy, Darcy, Jane and Bingley and all of their interactions /relationships. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth actually talk and have real heartfelt and personal conversations was particularly satisfying. With most focus on these four characters, growth and understanding of each of them was a focus that I enjoyed. As well, Darcy speaking out in support of Elizabeth was a yummy “white knight” moment -definitely swoon worthy! In the end, I was pleased with how all of the details were sorted out and a romantically obvious Darcy- & Lizzy HEA was achieved.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
The depiction of Jane as such a selfish self centered person on the hunt for a husband initially threw me. As a variation, this really shed a different light on Lizzy, Darcy, Jane and Bingley and all of their interactions /relationships. Watching Darcy and Elizabeth actually talk and have real heartfelt and personal conversations was particularly satisfying. With most focus on these four characters, growth and understanding of each of them was a focus that I enjoyed. As well, Darcy speaking out in support of Elizabeth was a yummy “white knight” moment -definitely swoon worthy! In the end, I was pleased with how all of the details were sorted out and a romantically obvious Darcy- & Lizzy HEA was achieved.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 19, 2025
This one was a surprise. An Elizabeth Bennet kowtowing to her older sister!
No matter how many times Jane shows her evil personality Lizzy doesn’t see it believing Jane the dearest innocent angel sister ever!!
You will chew your own lips in frustration at Lizzy’s constant self blame she flagellates herself with daily!
Thanks Goodness for the care and friendship Darcy offers her! He alone can see what is happening in the Bennet’s home!
Kudos to Mary Smythe for creating the most despicable Jane we have ever seen! Also for the best most deserved put down from Darcy’s lips to the witch’s ears!
Well done!
No matter how many times Jane shows her evil personality Lizzy doesn’t see it believing Jane the dearest innocent angel sister ever!!
You will chew your own lips in frustration at Lizzy’s constant self blame she flagellates herself with daily!
Thanks Goodness for the care and friendship Darcy offers her! He alone can see what is happening in the Bennet’s home!
Kudos to Mary Smythe for creating the most despicable Jane we have ever seen! Also for the best most deserved put down from Darcy’s lips to the witch’s ears!
Well done!
October 14, 2025
Engaging
Because Jane has a romantic disappointment at age fifteen, Elizabeth appoints herself Jane's protector when it comes to suitors. When Bingley comes to Netherfield Park and pays particular attention to Jane, Elizabeth is wary of his flightiness that she observes during Jane's illness at Netherfield. However, Elizabeth is about to learn some hard truths about her most beloved sister, as well as some things about Darcy, whose first impression wasn't very good.
I'm not a fan of "evil Jane" versions. However, this author is such a superb writer that I'm glad I stuck it out. We're given a swoon worthy Darcy who is forthright, and he delivers some wonderful set downs. The angst level is high. I deducted a couple of stars because of the "evil Jane," but also because I don't like to see an Elizabeth character who is so blind to everyone's faults, and so meek in the face of abuse. It's disappointing when Elizabeth is lacking her self esteem, her confidence, and her inner strength.
I recommend the book for a well written and interesting tale, but with the above reservations.
Because Jane has a romantic disappointment at age fifteen, Elizabeth appoints herself Jane's protector when it comes to suitors. When Bingley comes to Netherfield Park and pays particular attention to Jane, Elizabeth is wary of his flightiness that she observes during Jane's illness at Netherfield. However, Elizabeth is about to learn some hard truths about her most beloved sister, as well as some things about Darcy, whose first impression wasn't very good.
I'm not a fan of "evil Jane" versions. However, this author is such a superb writer that I'm glad I stuck it out. We're given a swoon worthy Darcy who is forthright, and he delivers some wonderful set downs. The angst level is high. I deducted a couple of stars because of the "evil Jane," but also because I don't like to see an Elizabeth character who is so blind to everyone's faults, and so meek in the face of abuse. It's disappointing when Elizabeth is lacking her self esteem, her confidence, and her inner strength.
I recommend the book for a well written and interesting tale, but with the above reservations.
October 11, 2025
Review also posted on my blog
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This variation starts when Elizabeth Bennet is only thirteen. She has always idolised her elder sister Jane, viewing her as the epitome of beauty, gentility and goodness.
When her first suitor proves to be false, Jane is so demonstrably heartbroken that she becomes ill.
This incident has a profound effect on Elizabeth. She doesn't think that she will be able to trust any man and takes it upon herself to protect Jane.
When Netherfield Park is let by the wealthy Charles Bingley, Elizabeth is on her guard.
Unfortunately, as Charles and Jane spend more time together, Elizabeth's interference is neither welcome nor successful.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is a guest at Netherfield and quickly becomes a friend to Elizabeth. He has a more clear eyed view of Jane and is not impressed. He views her as a fortune hunter and is appalled by her treatment of Elizabeth.
This story features a cold, calculating Jane Bennet. Elizabeth is loyal but naive, while Darcy is supportive, steadfast and swoon worthy. He also gets to deliver a glorious set down!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
This variation starts when Elizabeth Bennet is only thirteen. She has always idolised her elder sister Jane, viewing her as the epitome of beauty, gentility and goodness.
When her first suitor proves to be false, Jane is so demonstrably heartbroken that she becomes ill.
This incident has a profound effect on Elizabeth. She doesn't think that she will be able to trust any man and takes it upon herself to protect Jane.
When Netherfield Park is let by the wealthy Charles Bingley, Elizabeth is on her guard.
Unfortunately, as Charles and Jane spend more time together, Elizabeth's interference is neither welcome nor successful.
Fitzwilliam Darcy is a guest at Netherfield and quickly becomes a friend to Elizabeth. He has a more clear eyed view of Jane and is not impressed. He views her as a fortune hunter and is appalled by her treatment of Elizabeth.
This story features a cold, calculating Jane Bennet. Elizabeth is loyal but naive, while Darcy is supportive, steadfast and swoon worthy. He also gets to deliver a glorious set down!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 5, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I have no doubt that it will be in my top 5 for 2025.
I always enjoy a “bad/mean” Jane story, but the portrayals of Darcy and Elizabeth are what makes this such a special story.
This story was very well written and engaging.
I always enjoy a “bad/mean” Jane story, but the portrayals of Darcy and Elizabeth are what makes this such a special story.
This story was very well written and engaging.
January 14, 2026
Jane is the villain in this one: selfish, cruel, shallow, and mercenary; and the normally perceptive Elizabeth is blind to it. After her sister was jilted by a suitor at 15, Elizabeth is over-protective of her, unaware of Jane's hidden disdain of everyone in the Bennet family. It was as difficult to adjust to Jane's altered personality as it was to accept Elizabeth blindness about it. In coming to grips with that, it cost me some brain cells I couldn't afford to lose. Multiple people tried to awaken Elizabeth to the truth, but she obstinately held onto her feelings of guilt.
Darcy sees Jane for what she is and feels protective of Elizabeth when Jane treats her like a servant. He is especially wonderful in this one. His final set-down of Jane was one of the most satisfying things I've ever read. I had to read it twice. This variation was a winner.
Darcy sees Jane for what she is and feels protective of Elizabeth when Jane treats her like a servant. He is especially wonderful in this one. His final set-down of Jane was one of the most satisfying things I've ever read. I had to read it twice. This variation was a winner.
October 21, 2025
Premise: This is a "Bad Jane" story in which the damage done by the suitor who wrote Jane poems when she was fifteen had long reaching consequences for both of the eldest Bennet sisters. The man was clearly a cad, who paid suit to Jane in London for over a month before he up and marries someone else, with no word to Jane. She is understandably upset, but the real consequence is Elizabeth swearing to forever shield Jane's delicate heart from any other gentleman-shaped potential landmines.
What I liked: The slow boiled frog reveal of just how bad Jane is is delicious. And it really highlights the precarious position a woman is in when being potentially courted. You couldn't simply ask "Hey, do you like like me, or what?" Elizabeth tries to feel out Mr Bingley's true intentions, and ends up giving him the wrong impression about Jane's health. Her and Mr Darcy are friendlier and he has the self-awareness to recognize that while he sees Jane for what she is, Elizabeth does not, and she is not ready to have her eyes opened.
Characterization: Well, Bad Jane. She wholeheartedly believes her mother's words that beauty is all one needs to catch a rich man. She is shallow and treats Elizabeth like a paid companion. Mr Bingley also turns out to be more shallow.
Spice level: Nil. Suggestions of a kiss or two.
Any non-canon parings:
Other notes or issues: I do wish we could've had more post-weddings. I'm curious how much interaction the Darcys and Bingleys actually have.
What I liked: The slow boiled frog reveal of just how bad Jane is is delicious. And it really highlights the precarious position a woman is in when being potentially courted. You couldn't simply ask "Hey, do you like like me, or what?" Elizabeth tries to feel out Mr Bingley's true intentions, and ends up giving him the wrong impression about Jane's health. Her and Mr Darcy are friendlier and he has the self-awareness to recognize that while he sees Jane for what she is, Elizabeth does not, and she is not ready to have her eyes opened.
Characterization: Well, Bad Jane. She wholeheartedly believes her mother's words that beauty is all one needs to catch a rich man. She is shallow and treats Elizabeth like a paid companion. Mr Bingley also turns out to be more shallow.
Spice level: Nil. Suggestions of a kiss or two.
Any non-canon parings:
Other notes or issues: I do wish we could've had more post-weddings. I'm curious how much interaction the Darcys and Bingleys actually have.
October 10, 2025
this isn’t Elizabeth.
I do love a bad Jane, but not at the price of a willfully deluded Elizabeth. So many times, so many different sources (the apothecary, Mr Darcy, Charlotte, and Mrs Gardiner) tell Elizabeth how badly Jane treats Elizabeth, or how bad Jane is overall. Elizabeth refuses to consider it, let alone consider that she’s hearing it from multiple sources with little relation to each other. This isn’t naïveté; it’s stupidity.
I wasn’t able to suspend disbelief, which made for a sluggish read.
I do love a bad Jane, but not at the price of a willfully deluded Elizabeth. So many times, so many different sources (the apothecary, Mr Darcy, Charlotte, and Mrs Gardiner) tell Elizabeth how badly Jane treats Elizabeth, or how bad Jane is overall. Elizabeth refuses to consider it, let alone consider that she’s hearing it from multiple sources with little relation to each other. This isn’t naïveté; it’s stupidity.
I wasn’t able to suspend disbelief, which made for a sluggish read.
October 9, 2025
After watching her sister's despair over a romantic disappointment the thirteen year old Elizabeth vows to protect her sister from further heartbreak. Therefore when the Netherfield party arrives Elizabeth fears that Jane will again be disappointed. In an attempt to protect her sister's heart she speaks out of terms and, unwillingly, seems to ruin, perhaps forever, the happiness of her most beloved sister. While facing the consequences of her actions Elizabeth must also face the question if her sister is truly worthy of her devotion.
From their first encounter Darcy has no sympathy for Jane Bennet. He thinks her cool and unfeeling and he doesn't like how she treats her sister Elizabeth. When Bingley decides to leave Netherfield he is glad that his friend has not tied himself to a fortune hunter and he is determined to not encourage him to return - until he meets Elizabeth again in Kent and discovers how unhappy she is.
Will Darcy, for Elizabeth's sake, reunite his friend and her sister? Will this change the stained relationship between Elizabeth and her sister? And what about Darcy's own growing feelings for the enchanting Elizabeth?
The book was well written by the author Mary Smythe. I have read other books by her and I like her style of writing very much.
At the beginning of the book I very much struggled with my feelings for Elizabeth. I do not like this submissive Elizabeth who runs for every whim of her sister. She sometimes reminds me of Mr Collins's devotion to Lady Catherine. And with her crying while Jane scolds her she reminds me of an immature Lydia. A combination I really do not like. I also do not understand how she can be so blind to the true nature of her sister. Everyone tells her that Jane is not worthy of her adoration and that she only uses her when it suits her but Elizabeth ignores all these comments because only her image of Jane can be right. I sometimes was only annoyed by her.
Fortunately with the growing friendship/love between Darcy and Elizabeth her attitude changed for the better and I could enjoy the book. She is not cured from her failed impressions but she gets calmer and begins to see that others tell her the truth. I like that version of Elizabeth much more, she still can't fully credit her sister's true nature but she is a bit more the clever and observed girl she normally is.
I really like Darcy in this variation. He is solid as a rock and he gives Elizabeth the strength to finally see her sister for who she really is and free herself from her influence. I like that he is devoted to Elizabeth, that he cares deeply for her, that he is willing to do everything for her and that he protects her. I like how he wants to spend time with her, to be near her. And I adore the token he gifted to her. In this variation he really is a knight for Elizabeth *sigh*.
I also like the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They come to know each other very intimately and get to know the innermost feelings of one another. I like that they really miss each other when they are apart. And I really like the development of their relationship from friends to lovers. With this they can be more easy with one another because they already know each other so well.
As you may guess, the big villain in the book is Jane Bennet. She does not attempt to come between Darcy and Elizabeth but she does not treat Elizabeth kindly and as a loving sister would do. Fortunately Elizabeth is, in the end, able to end Jane's influence on her.
For the annoying version of Elizabeth in the first half of the book (this really dimmed my love for that part of the book) I give 4,5 stars rounded up to five because the second half of the book was really enjoyable and good and I adored the building relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth.
If you like to know how Elizabeth tries to protect her sister from disappointment and with doing so interferes in her sister's relationship to Bingley, you should read this variation.
I recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
From their first encounter Darcy has no sympathy for Jane Bennet. He thinks her cool and unfeeling and he doesn't like how she treats her sister Elizabeth. When Bingley decides to leave Netherfield he is glad that his friend has not tied himself to a fortune hunter and he is determined to not encourage him to return - until he meets Elizabeth again in Kent and discovers how unhappy she is.
Will Darcy, for Elizabeth's sake, reunite his friend and her sister? Will this change the stained relationship between Elizabeth and her sister? And what about Darcy's own growing feelings for the enchanting Elizabeth?
The book was well written by the author Mary Smythe. I have read other books by her and I like her style of writing very much.
At the beginning of the book I very much struggled with my feelings for Elizabeth. I do not like this submissive Elizabeth who runs for every whim of her sister. She sometimes reminds me of Mr Collins's devotion to Lady Catherine. And with her crying while Jane scolds her she reminds me of an immature Lydia. A combination I really do not like. I also do not understand how she can be so blind to the true nature of her sister. Everyone tells her that Jane is not worthy of her adoration and that she only uses her when it suits her but Elizabeth ignores all these comments because only her image of Jane can be right. I sometimes was only annoyed by her.
Fortunately with the growing friendship/love between Darcy and Elizabeth her attitude changed for the better and I could enjoy the book. She is not cured from her failed impressions but she gets calmer and begins to see that others tell her the truth. I like that version of Elizabeth much more, she still can't fully credit her sister's true nature but she is a bit more the clever and observed girl she normally is.
I really like Darcy in this variation. He is solid as a rock and he gives Elizabeth the strength to finally see her sister for who she really is and free herself from her influence. I like that he is devoted to Elizabeth, that he cares deeply for her, that he is willing to do everything for her and that he protects her. I like how he wants to spend time with her, to be near her. And I adore the token he gifted to her. In this variation he really is a knight for Elizabeth *sigh*.
I also like the development of the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. They come to know each other very intimately and get to know the innermost feelings of one another. I like that they really miss each other when they are apart. And I really like the development of their relationship from friends to lovers. With this they can be more easy with one another because they already know each other so well.
As you may guess, the big villain in the book is Jane Bennet. She does not attempt to come between Darcy and Elizabeth but she does not treat Elizabeth kindly and as a loving sister would do. Fortunately Elizabeth is, in the end, able to end Jane's influence on her.
For the annoying version of Elizabeth in the first half of the book (this really dimmed my love for that part of the book) I give 4,5 stars rounded up to five because the second half of the book was really enjoyable and good and I adored the building relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth.
If you like to know how Elizabeth tries to protect her sister from disappointment and with doing so interferes in her sister's relationship to Bingley, you should read this variation.
I recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
October 27, 2025
Mary Smythe is one my favorite Austen inspired authors, especially for the very unique takes and spins that she brings to my favorite romance between Mr. Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet.
Her most recent variation, The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister, is definitely a very different twist on the classic, with lots of angst and emotional turmoil but not from the place you'd think. In this latest novel, Darcy and Elizabeth start off much like they do in the original story. Smythe brings to life an Elizabeth who is very protective of her eldest sister Jane, after an initial attachment went wrong and Jane heartbroken and desolate of spirit. Elizabeth is determined that no unworthy man will ever hurt her sister again.
Therefore, when Mr. Bingley enters Meryton, Elizabeth, while happy for her sister's newly found affections, is cautious in her assessment of the man's intentions and feelings. Meanwhile, unbeknownst to her, the serious and aloof Mr. Darcy, is battling his own internal struggles as his feelings for Elizabeth threaten to overcome his rationality. However, in one thing, he and Elizabeth are aligned and that is in not seeing Bingley and Jane enter into an engagement where there is not true attachment.
Unfortunately for Elizabeth, her well intentioned talk with Mr. Bingley, combined with a little pressure from his sisters and Darcy's influence, sets off a chain of events that leads to Elizabeth being on the receiving end of Jane's ire. Jane refuses to forgive her sister for interfering in her life and cuts off all contact as she heads to London. Meanwhile, Darcy is only shocked to see how much in the dark Elizabeth is to her sister's true nature and how she is being emotionally manipulated by one that she holds so dear.
Darcy and Elizabeth meet again in Rosings and I loved the way that Smythe allows us to see more of Darcy's direct and protective nature as he and Elizabeth share quiet moments amidst the outdoors. Against the tension between the sisters, it was a welcome emotional counterpoint to see how Darcy and Elizabeth come to know one another better and to see Elizabeth's admiration for the man grow.
I have to say that it was painful to see this new take on a spiteful, mercenary and calculating Jane Bennet. I was so uncomfortable at times as Smythe revealed Jane's true feelings towards Elizabeth and as we the reader watch the way in which Elizabeth takes on more guilt than she ever should. Equally disturbing was the character study that Smythe gives us of a Bingley, who is equally focused on surface qualities and factors in his pursuit of Jane. Darcy painfully has to face these things himself as he works to correct his mistakes and step back from the guidance he has often given his younger friend.
It is also heartbreaking to watch as Elizabeth finally comes to realize the truth of who her sister is and what their relationship will be moving forward. However, Darcy, ever Elizabeth's advocate, is an incredible source of strength as she focuses on pursuing her own future happiness. This story if not for the faint of heart because it has many painful lessons for our favorite heroine but if you enjoy exploring how deep and powerful the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth can be then definitely give this one a read!
Her most recent variation, The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister, is definitely a very different twist on the classic, with lots of angst and emotional turmoil but not from the place you'd think. In this latest novel, Darcy and Elizabeth start off much like they do in the original story. Smythe brings to life an Elizabeth who is very protective of her eldest sister Jane, after an initial attachment went wrong and Jane heartbroken and desolate of spirit. Elizabeth is determined that no unworthy man will ever hurt her sister again.
Therefore, when Mr. Bingley enters Meryton, Elizabeth, while happy for her sister's newly found affections, is cautious in her assessment of the man's intentions and feelings. Meanwhile, unbeknownst to her, the serious and aloof Mr. Darcy, is battling his own internal struggles as his feelings for Elizabeth threaten to overcome his rationality. However, in one thing, he and Elizabeth are aligned and that is in not seeing Bingley and Jane enter into an engagement where there is not true attachment.
Unfortunately for Elizabeth, her well intentioned talk with Mr. Bingley, combined with a little pressure from his sisters and Darcy's influence, sets off a chain of events that leads to Elizabeth being on the receiving end of Jane's ire. Jane refuses to forgive her sister for interfering in her life and cuts off all contact as she heads to London. Meanwhile, Darcy is only shocked to see how much in the dark Elizabeth is to her sister's true nature and how she is being emotionally manipulated by one that she holds so dear.
Darcy and Elizabeth meet again in Rosings and I loved the way that Smythe allows us to see more of Darcy's direct and protective nature as he and Elizabeth share quiet moments amidst the outdoors. Against the tension between the sisters, it was a welcome emotional counterpoint to see how Darcy and Elizabeth come to know one another better and to see Elizabeth's admiration for the man grow.
I have to say that it was painful to see this new take on a spiteful, mercenary and calculating Jane Bennet. I was so uncomfortable at times as Smythe revealed Jane's true feelings towards Elizabeth and as we the reader watch the way in which Elizabeth takes on more guilt than she ever should. Equally disturbing was the character study that Smythe gives us of a Bingley, who is equally focused on surface qualities and factors in his pursuit of Jane. Darcy painfully has to face these things himself as he works to correct his mistakes and step back from the guidance he has often given his younger friend.
It is also heartbreaking to watch as Elizabeth finally comes to realize the truth of who her sister is and what their relationship will be moving forward. However, Darcy, ever Elizabeth's advocate, is an incredible source of strength as she focuses on pursuing her own future happiness. This story if not for the faint of heart because it has many painful lessons for our favorite heroine but if you enjoy exploring how deep and powerful the relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth can be then definitely give this one a read!
October 9, 2025
I loved it!
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the In Love With Mr Darcy series. This is a low angst friends to lovers romance with a guaranteed happily ever after for Darcy and Lizzy.
After her elder sister Jane is endangered by a youthful romantic disappointment, Elizabeth Bennet takes it upon herself to stand guard over Jane’s heart, as well as her own. Thus, when Mr Bingley enters the neighbourhood and Jane once again appears to be enamoured by a gentleman suitor, Elizabeth is deeply afraid that history will repeat itself. From a protective instinct, she speaks out of turn, possibly ruining Jane’s chance at happiness forever. When Mr Bingley proves to be as fickle in his attentions as Elizabeth feared, she must face the consequences of her well-meaning actions, but is her most beloved sister truly deserving?
Fitzwilliam Darcy is not at all impressed by Jane Bennet and her pretensions, believing her to be a fortune hunter, neither does her treatment of Elizabeth endear her to him. When Bingley abandons her, Darcy deems it for the best, easily discerning that her frigid heart remains untouched. He has no inclination to reunite them, until a desperately unhappy Elizabeth asks it of him. Darcy must then choose between his conscience and his heart and also decide wherein his loyalties must lie. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the In Love With Mr Darcy series. This is a low angst friends to lovers romance with a guaranteed happily ever after for Darcy and Lizzy.
After her elder sister Jane is endangered by a youthful romantic disappointment, Elizabeth Bennet takes it upon herself to stand guard over Jane’s heart, as well as her own. Thus, when Mr Bingley enters the neighbourhood and Jane once again appears to be enamoured by a gentleman suitor, Elizabeth is deeply afraid that history will repeat itself. From a protective instinct, she speaks out of turn, possibly ruining Jane’s chance at happiness forever. When Mr Bingley proves to be as fickle in his attentions as Elizabeth feared, she must face the consequences of her well-meaning actions, but is her most beloved sister truly deserving?
Fitzwilliam Darcy is not at all impressed by Jane Bennet and her pretensions, believing her to be a fortune hunter, neither does her treatment of Elizabeth endear her to him. When Bingley abandons her, Darcy deems it for the best, easily discerning that her frigid heart remains untouched. He has no inclination to reunite them, until a desperately unhappy Elizabeth asks it of him. Darcy must then choose between his conscience and his heart and also decide wherein his loyalties must lie. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
October 14, 2025
Wow! What a departure from canon…but I loved it! Jane is a vicious, jealous, shallow harpy. And those are some of her better qualities. You have to be able to suspend reality a bit to believe that Elizabeth has been duped by her for her entire life, but it’s worth going there.
In this variation Jane is out to bag a man…almost any man. When she was fifteen poetry guy did poorly by her, courting her avidly and then marrying another. Jane, in her devastation, quit eating and made herself very sick. Elizabeth made a vow to herself that she would always protect Jane’s fragile heart. When the Netherfield party comes Jane is not about to let another suitor slip through her grasping fingers. Darcy is quick to recognize Jane’s vicious nature and tries to protect both Elizabeth and Bingley from her. Elizabeth is not to be convinced of Jane’s bad character and makes the error at the Netherfield ball to beg Bingley not to hurt her. Bingley is convinced that Jane is too delicate for marriage and does his disappearing act with encouragement from his sisters and Darcy.
When Jane discovers that Elizabeth spoke to Bingley she turns on Elizabeth with a vengeance as does her mother and sisters. When Elizabeth meets Darcy in Kent she begs him to send Bingley back to Jane, which he does reluctantly after seeing Elizabeth’s misery. Even Bingley’s return is not enough to assuage Jane and she is even more malicious than before.
Elizabeth has convinced herself that she is to blame for Jane’s bad character and that no man is trustworthy. Can Darcy reveal the truth to her and win her good opinion and her hand? Well…swoon!
In this variation Jane is out to bag a man…almost any man. When she was fifteen poetry guy did poorly by her, courting her avidly and then marrying another. Jane, in her devastation, quit eating and made herself very sick. Elizabeth made a vow to herself that she would always protect Jane’s fragile heart. When the Netherfield party comes Jane is not about to let another suitor slip through her grasping fingers. Darcy is quick to recognize Jane’s vicious nature and tries to protect both Elizabeth and Bingley from her. Elizabeth is not to be convinced of Jane’s bad character and makes the error at the Netherfield ball to beg Bingley not to hurt her. Bingley is convinced that Jane is too delicate for marriage and does his disappearing act with encouragement from his sisters and Darcy.
When Jane discovers that Elizabeth spoke to Bingley she turns on Elizabeth with a vengeance as does her mother and sisters. When Elizabeth meets Darcy in Kent she begs him to send Bingley back to Jane, which he does reluctantly after seeing Elizabeth’s misery. Even Bingley’s return is not enough to assuage Jane and she is even more malicious than before.
Elizabeth has convinced herself that she is to blame for Jane’s bad character and that no man is trustworthy. Can Darcy reveal the truth to her and win her good opinion and her hand? Well…swoon!
January 4, 2026
Bad Jane, seriously codependent Lizzy
I like the occasional bad Jane. I find them humorous. This is Jane as a Queen Bee. She's mean, she's narcissistic, and she's mercenary. Her character makes a lot of sense as Mrs Bennet's favorite daughter.
But the story draaaaaaged for more than half the book because Lizzy wasn't just blind, she was completely codependent. "An unhealthy emotional reliance in another person, where you neglect your own needs to focus on theirs, often enabling their negative behaviors and losing your sense of self in the process." And that's what made the story drag until Elizabeth finally accepted what multiple characters had been telling her directly about her sister and their relationship. Elizabeth's character for the first 60% of the story only exists as a contrast to Bad Jane's. She's not especially interesting.
After she wakes up (starts the process in Hunsford, finishes it in London) she is a more interesting character.
I like this Darcy. I found the Darcy/Bingley storyline believable. I agree with the one reviewer who took exception to Darcy's making a scene to a limited extent. There would have been no pointing, at all. In modern European American culture, finger pointing in anger is considered an undesired but acceptable emphatic gesture--in that context. It is also considered acceptable when pointing out a person to another from a distance. There are many more modern cultures for whom any finger pointing is considered exceptionally rude. It just wouldn't have been done in 1812, not in mixed company.
But it was one of the more interesting scenes, so there's that.
I like the occasional bad Jane. I find them humorous. This is Jane as a Queen Bee. She's mean, she's narcissistic, and she's mercenary. Her character makes a lot of sense as Mrs Bennet's favorite daughter.
But the story draaaaaaged for more than half the book because Lizzy wasn't just blind, she was completely codependent. "An unhealthy emotional reliance in another person, where you neglect your own needs to focus on theirs, often enabling their negative behaviors and losing your sense of self in the process." And that's what made the story drag until Elizabeth finally accepted what multiple characters had been telling her directly about her sister and their relationship. Elizabeth's character for the first 60% of the story only exists as a contrast to Bad Jane's. She's not especially interesting.
After she wakes up (starts the process in Hunsford, finishes it in London) she is a more interesting character.
I like this Darcy. I found the Darcy/Bingley storyline believable. I agree with the one reviewer who took exception to Darcy's making a scene to a limited extent. There would have been no pointing, at all. In modern European American culture, finger pointing in anger is considered an undesired but acceptable emphatic gesture--in that context. It is also considered acceptable when pointing out a person to another from a distance. There are many more modern cultures for whom any finger pointing is considered exceptionally rude. It just wouldn't have been done in 1812, not in mixed company.
But it was one of the more interesting scenes, so there's that.
October 9, 2025
A sweet romance develops between a likable Darcy and Elizabeth. Some readers think this version of Elizabeth is too naïve, but considering her family background, it makes sense. She has never had any true champions aside from the Gardiners, who visited only sporadically and offered limited boosts to her self-worth while trying to keep peace in the family. In essence, Elizabeth spent her whole life emotionally neglected, abused, and conditioned to believe Jane was perfect.
Daily, her mother declared far and wide that Lizzy was nothing to Jane. Her marriage prospects were abysmally poor because her father had taught her too much.
Emotional support was lacking even from her father, who preferred to laugh at his wife and daughters instead of comforting them.
For those who love to hate on Jane and Bingley, you’ll love this. For the rest of the readers, you’ll still enjoy the story because their characters are not over the top. In fact, most of us probably know individuals like them.
This is a great Darcy and Elizabeth slow-developing romance. Darcy proved to be stalwart, supportive, and patient. He is a real knight in shining armor as Elizabeth moved from coming to terms with Jane’s true nature toward accepting that she is worthy of the love and support Darcy wants to give her. His steadfastness stood out throughout the story.
The reading pace was nice without hiccups. I only wish the epilogue were longer, but that’s not worth taking a star off for a scant epilogue.
Daily, her mother declared far and wide that Lizzy was nothing to Jane. Her marriage prospects were abysmally poor because her father had taught her too much.
Emotional support was lacking even from her father, who preferred to laugh at his wife and daughters instead of comforting them.
For those who love to hate on Jane and Bingley, you’ll love this. For the rest of the readers, you’ll still enjoy the story because their characters are not over the top. In fact, most of us probably know individuals like them.
This is a great Darcy and Elizabeth slow-developing romance. Darcy proved to be stalwart, supportive, and patient. He is a real knight in shining armor as Elizabeth moved from coming to terms with Jane’s true nature toward accepting that she is worthy of the love and support Darcy wants to give her. His steadfastness stood out throughout the story.
The reading pace was nice without hiccups. I only wish the epilogue were longer, but that’s not worth taking a star off for a scant epilogue.
November 23, 2025
This is more convincing than other bad Jane stories i read, because here Elizabeth being oblivious makes sense, as Jane isn't cruel to Elizabeth or harming, simply being self-centered whenever there is a suitor around and is mercenary. Elizabeth is reluctant to believe it when pointed out, but not for too long, as she actually thinks on that later, so it was not as frustrating to read.
My only complaint is, this was entirely about Jane's drama, the title should have clued in, and no focus is given to E&D romance. Almost all of the conversations we see on page between them are about Jane. The weeks they spend in Kent getting to know each other is simply paraphrased, and we are not shown how they fall in love. The only motivation for darcy's actions is his love for Elizabeth, and he puts up with much worse than canon for her sake, so i wish we had atleast seen why. Same way, darcy's flaws are all simply forgotten event though he did leave Hertfordshire first time because of it, but later they are not mentioned. This makes it honestly very unsatisfying, as in most of the E&D interactions she is crying and/or upset about something Jane said or did, and he is pointing out the reality. (and, for all Elizabeth says she loves Jane, she never seems to get angry with Darcy for speaking ill of her, even before Elizabeth herself realized Jane's true nature. That doesn't make sense at all)
Not a bad book, but not an enjoyable read for me because of it.
My only complaint is, this was entirely about Jane's drama, the title should have clued in, and no focus is given to E&D romance. Almost all of the conversations we see on page between them are about Jane. The weeks they spend in Kent getting to know each other is simply paraphrased, and we are not shown how they fall in love. The only motivation for darcy's actions is his love for Elizabeth, and he puts up with much worse than canon for her sake, so i wish we had atleast seen why. Same way, darcy's flaws are all simply forgotten event though he did leave Hertfordshire first time because of it, but later they are not mentioned. This makes it honestly very unsatisfying, as in most of the E&D interactions she is crying and/or upset about something Jane said or did, and he is pointing out the reality. (and, for all Elizabeth says she loves Jane, she never seems to get angry with Darcy for speaking ill of her, even before Elizabeth herself realized Jane's true nature. That doesn't make sense at all)
Not a bad book, but not an enjoyable read for me because of it.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 28, 2026
A Fun Read
I've been waiting for a story like this.
What I liked:
- Darcy remained a loyal supporter of Elizabeth.
- Bad Jane. A bad Jane is much more fun to read. The best part is that it feels believable. It's consistent with canon if someone chooses to explore that path. In the original, Jane is praised and coddled; such attention can easily go to her head.
- A weak Bingley. It's easy to imagine Bingley in this role and Darcy's reaction to it.
- There's nothing quite like a good setdown from Mr. Pemberley himself. Sadly, I don't see it often because Darcy tends to be too much of a gentleman or too loyal to Bingley. This one is one of my favorite setdowns.
- No Wickham or Lady Catherine, though they are mentioned. Collins makes a brief appearance, and the rest of the Bennets, besides Jane and Elizabeth, have minor roles.
My only complaint is how long it took for Elizabeth to wake up.
I've been waiting for a story like this.
What I liked:
- Darcy remained a loyal supporter of Elizabeth.
- Bad Jane. A bad Jane is much more fun to read. The best part is that it feels believable. It's consistent with canon if someone chooses to explore that path. In the original, Jane is praised and coddled; such attention can easily go to her head.
- A weak Bingley. It's easy to imagine Bingley in this role and Darcy's reaction to it.
- There's nothing quite like a good setdown from Mr. Pemberley himself. Sadly, I don't see it often because Darcy tends to be too much of a gentleman or too loyal to Bingley. This one is one of my favorite setdowns.
- No Wickham or Lady Catherine, though they are mentioned. Collins makes a brief appearance, and the rest of the Bennets, besides Jane and Elizabeth, have minor roles.
My only complaint is how long it took for Elizabeth to wake up.
October 7, 2025
I was very looking forward to reading Mary Smythe's The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister especially after finding out it has the bad Jane Bennet trope. In this book, Jane is a despicable person. She's selfish, nasty, despises her family and has a low opinion of them. She is ungrateful, duplicitous, and an exploiter of Elizabeth's love. I was hoping she would get what she deserved and remain a disgruntled spinster. I also wanted to shake Elizabeth in this book and make her see the truth. She loves Jane dearly and is very anxious for Jane to succeed with Bingley. But she is blind to Jane's machinations and tricks to catch him. She only sees Jane as a good person. Darcy is wonderful and protective in this variation. He sees right through Jane's true character and tries to help Elizabeth. I loved the developing relationship between Darcy and Elizabeth. It was sweet and heart-melting.
September 11, 2025
“One cannot tell the sincere from the sinister.”
It is unimaginable that Elizabeth had been all this time deceived by Jane. If they were truly as close as besties, then either Elizabeth was blind or unobservant which could not be true!!
Although the story is interesting and everyone got to sleep in the bed they made for themselves, uneasiness surfaced when Darcy and Elizabeth were somehow out of character. I was a bit disappointed to get pass the paragraphs where Darcy and Elizabeth shared their own blindness toward their sister and friend, which was not precisely bad-mouthing but more or less indiscreet.
HEA guaranteed, sort of.
It is unimaginable that Elizabeth had been all this time deceived by Jane. If they were truly as close as besties, then either Elizabeth was blind or unobservant which could not be true!!
Although the story is interesting and everyone got to sleep in the bed they made for themselves, uneasiness surfaced when Darcy and Elizabeth were somehow out of character. I was a bit disappointed to get pass the paragraphs where Darcy and Elizabeth shared their own blindness toward their sister and friend, which was not precisely bad-mouthing but more or less indiscreet.
HEA guaranteed, sort of.
October 13, 2025
4.5⭐️
This story revolves around four main characters:
- A Mean & Deceitful Jane
- A Faithful & Loyal Darcy
- An Uncertain & Trusting Elizabeth
- A Particularly shallow Bingley
I do love a good mean Jane story. But goodness, she has everyone fooled except for Darcy, Aunt Gardiner, and Charlotte. The toughest deception is how she really feels about Elizabeth, especially in the face of how much Elizabeth adores her most beloved older sister. Elizabeth reaches out well-meaning to Bingley and spends the rest of the story paying for that decision to try to protect Jane.
The sweetest spot is that the angst between Jane and Elizabeth sparks a protective Mr. Darcy. He wins over Elizabeth with humility and friendship, but her situation with Jane makes it hard for her to trust him to be what he is showing her with his actions. His steady and faithful advice and stalwart friendship make the slow burn between him and Elizabeth enjoyable. He fights for her, and I really love his character in this story.
Elizabeth is blind to Jane's true character in this variation like she is to Mr. Wickham in the original story. It's angsty, so hold on tight!
I received a copy to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own honest opinions.
This story revolves around four main characters:
- A Mean & Deceitful Jane
- A Faithful & Loyal Darcy
- An Uncertain & Trusting Elizabeth
- A Particularly shallow Bingley
I do love a good mean Jane story. But goodness, she has everyone fooled except for Darcy, Aunt Gardiner, and Charlotte. The toughest deception is how she really feels about Elizabeth, especially in the face of how much Elizabeth adores her most beloved older sister. Elizabeth reaches out well-meaning to Bingley and spends the rest of the story paying for that decision to try to protect Jane.
The sweetest spot is that the angst between Jane and Elizabeth sparks a protective Mr. Darcy. He wins over Elizabeth with humility and friendship, but her situation with Jane makes it hard for her to trust him to be what he is showing her with his actions. His steady and faithful advice and stalwart friendship make the slow burn between him and Elizabeth enjoyable. He fights for her, and I really love his character in this story.
Elizabeth is blind to Jane's true character in this variation like she is to Mr. Wickham in the original story. It's angsty, so hold on tight!
I received a copy to read and review. All thoughts contained here are my own honest opinions.
October 18, 2025
Exceptionally Written
The most beloved sister really didn't deserve the title, but such she was....until she wasn't. Why Elizabeth refused to believe Darcy, Charlotte, and even Aunt Gardiner is a conundrum. But she finally is convinced by Jane herself. The setdown Darcy finally gives Jane is one for the ages. The fact that Darcy even had to amend his view of Bingley shows how much all had to grow in their 'proud and prejudiced' behavior, especially toward those they knew. A growth arc for our beloved couple done well.
The most beloved sister really didn't deserve the title, but such she was....until she wasn't. Why Elizabeth refused to believe Darcy, Charlotte, and even Aunt Gardiner is a conundrum. But she finally is convinced by Jane herself. The setdown Darcy finally gives Jane is one for the ages. The fact that Darcy even had to amend his view of Bingley shows how much all had to grow in their 'proud and prejudiced' behavior, especially toward those they knew. A growth arc for our beloved couple done well.
October 5, 2025
A doormat wakes up to reality.
A lively Elizabeth seems blind to Jane's self-serving behaviors and spends a lot of time blaming herself for the departure of Bingley after the Netherfield ball. Meanwhile, Darcy has Jane's measure but falls in love with Lizzy, so arranges for Jane and Bingley to see each other again. Lizzy finally wakes up, Darcy defends her, and they live happily ever after. Cute!
A lively Elizabeth seems blind to Jane's self-serving behaviors and spends a lot of time blaming herself for the departure of Bingley after the Netherfield ball. Meanwhile, Darcy has Jane's measure but falls in love with Lizzy, so arranges for Jane and Bingley to see each other again. Lizzy finally wakes up, Darcy defends her, and they live happily ever after. Cute!
October 10, 2025
Such a Great Book
This is a terrific book especially if you like to read of a less virtuous, kind, and loving Jane, a bit of an evil Jane one might say. Elizabeth is wonderful even when she is being loyal to the wrong people. Darcy is loyal, loving, protective, and generally a delightful man you can’t help but fall in love with.
This book has been added to my favorites list for reading again in the future. I can’t wait to read the next story Mary conjures for our enjoyment!
This is a terrific book especially if you like to read of a less virtuous, kind, and loving Jane, a bit of an evil Jane one might say. Elizabeth is wonderful even when she is being loyal to the wrong people. Darcy is loyal, loving, protective, and generally a delightful man you can’t help but fall in love with.
This book has been added to my favorites list for reading again in the future. I can’t wait to read the next story Mary conjures for our enjoyment!
October 16, 2025
Seeing the Forest
4.5* rounded up
I very much enjoyed this story. The plot seemed to flow organically from the Canon perspective when viewed from a specific angle, like that of a shattered mirror. I really liked Darcy's character and his championship of Elizabeth. Elizabeth is a little weak at parts, but I can easily pardon that considering the family dynamic and history. I recommend this book to anyone who has considered that certain "angels" are too good to be true.
4.5* rounded up
I very much enjoyed this story. The plot seemed to flow organically from the Canon perspective when viewed from a specific angle, like that of a shattered mirror. I really liked Darcy's character and his championship of Elizabeth. Elizabeth is a little weak at parts, but I can easily pardon that considering the family dynamic and history. I recommend this book to anyone who has considered that certain "angels" are too good to be true.
February 1, 2026
A bad Jane (not evil, just manipulative and selfish), a milque toast Bingley, a stalwart Darcy, and a clueless Elizabeth (who wakes up after far too long).
A well written and plotted story although Elizabeth's cluelessness went on far too long. She also refused to listen to ANYONE (Darcy, Charlotte, Aunt Gardiner) about her blindness to faults in someone she saw as perfect.
ODC gets their HEA and several others their comupance. Thoroughly enjoyed this read.
A well written and plotted story although Elizabeth's cluelessness went on far too long. She also refused to listen to ANYONE (Darcy, Charlotte, Aunt Gardiner) about her blindness to faults in someone she saw as perfect.
ODC gets their HEA and several others their comupance. Thoroughly enjoyed this read.
October 12, 2025
I love a bad Jane story
I love a bad Jane story, as she is my second least favorite Bennet sister. Elizabeth being her normal stubborn self took a bit too long to understand things. The Gardiners were wonderful. I love Mary Smythe, her stories are wonderful. If you haven’t read it, I would recommend Dare to Refuse Such a Man and a Faithful Narrative. Both are so good.
I love a bad Jane story, as she is my second least favorite Bennet sister. Elizabeth being her normal stubborn self took a bit too long to understand things. The Gardiners were wonderful. I love Mary Smythe, her stories are wonderful. If you haven’t read it, I would recommend Dare to Refuse Such a Man and a Faithful Narrative. Both are so good.
November 11, 2025
The Happiness of a Most Beloved Sister
This is a very well written short story. Very fulfilling. I kinda, no seriously did not like Jane so this story did what it was supposed to do. Feel for Elizabeth as even her youngest sisters saw how Jane treated her. Took a time for E to see it, but that is quite natural. Well done.
This is a very well written short story. Very fulfilling. I kinda, no seriously did not like Jane so this story did what it was supposed to do. Feel for Elizabeth as even her youngest sisters saw how Jane treated her. Took a time for E to see it, but that is quite natural. Well done.
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