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Alchemy of Souls
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Expected 4 Aug 26From New York Times-bestselling author Adriana Mather, comes the next big YA dark academia Alchemy of Souls, following two magically bound teens as they race to solve the mystery of an ancient magical key before it’s too late.
Grayson Stone is no stranger to deception. Under the watchful eye of his uncle, the High Chancellor, he has been well-trained in all four types of magic, all while secretly working against his uncle’s corrupt rule. Years of plans depend on him being marked Gifted during his University entrance exam, proving that he is the perfect heir and gaining his uncle’s trust. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned, and he has only one person to Eloise Belrose.
Raised by a family of Laborers, Eloise is the most unlikely student to become a Mage, but through her hard work and long hours spent practicing she is finally admitted to the prestigious Mage University, guaranteeing safety and security for her whole family. Until things go very wrong, and she somehow becomes magically linked to Grayson Stone, the school’s arrogant, annoyingly attractive, golden boy, putting not only her University acceptance, but also her and her family’s lives at risk.
Eloise and Grayson are given less than two weeks to solve an impossible mystery–one that will give the High Chancellor even more power and control—or face the consequences. Forced to room together, with all the same classes, while pretending to date to hide their secret quest, sparks definitely fly. As their feelings grow more real it becomes harder to live the lies they’ve had to tell to survive. With time running out, will they be able to trust the bond between them or will their lies tear them apart forever?
Grayson Stone is no stranger to deception. Under the watchful eye of his uncle, the High Chancellor, he has been well-trained in all four types of magic, all while secretly working against his uncle’s corrupt rule. Years of plans depend on him being marked Gifted during his University entrance exam, proving that he is the perfect heir and gaining his uncle’s trust. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned, and he has only one person to Eloise Belrose.
Raised by a family of Laborers, Eloise is the most unlikely student to become a Mage, but through her hard work and long hours spent practicing she is finally admitted to the prestigious Mage University, guaranteeing safety and security for her whole family. Until things go very wrong, and she somehow becomes magically linked to Grayson Stone, the school’s arrogant, annoyingly attractive, golden boy, putting not only her University acceptance, but also her and her family’s lives at risk.
Eloise and Grayson are given less than two weeks to solve an impossible mystery–one that will give the High Chancellor even more power and control—or face the consequences. Forced to room together, with all the same classes, while pretending to date to hide their secret quest, sparks definitely fly. As their feelings grow more real it becomes harder to live the lies they’ve had to tell to survive. With time running out, will they be able to trust the bond between them or will their lies tear them apart forever?
368 pages, Hardcover
Expected publication August 4, 2026
About the author
Adriana Mather
8 books2,584 followersAdriana Mather is the New York Times bestselling author of How to Hang a Witch, with family roots that go back to Sleepy Hollow, the Salem Witch Trials, and the Titanic. She's also an actor and producer best known for her role in the award-winning Honeyglue. She co-owns Zombot Pictures, a production company that makes feature films. Her first acting scene in a film ever was with Danny Glover, and she was terrified she would mess it up. In addition, her favorite food is pizza, she has too many cats, and a deep abiding love for all things autumnal.
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Review of advance copy received from Author
Alchemy of Souls is a thrilling adventure that has romance, suspense, and magic which makes every turn of the page more impossible to put down. The characters are fantastically matched with Eloise always rising to the occasion to do what is right while Grayson is the perfect blend of omission and challenge. He will do whatever is necessary to protect the people important to him and end his uncles corruption.
I was captivated by Eloise and Grayson, their romance blossoms through magic, understanding, and eventually trust in each other. They have quickly become one of my favorite book couples.
As an advance copy reader, I have read several of Adriana’s books and each one delights more than the last. I might even say that this is the best book yet by Adriana Mather.
I was captivated by Eloise and Grayson, their romance blossoms through magic, understanding, and eventually trust in each other. They have quickly become one of my favorite book couples.
As an advance copy reader, I have read several of Adriana’s books and each one delights more than the last. I might even say that this is the best book yet by Adriana Mather.
Review of advance copy received from Edelweiss+
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February 2, 2026just so we're clear, I would read anything Adriana Mather writes. I would read her grocery list if she published it.
February 28, 2026
Alchemy of Souls follows the characters of Eloise and Grayson as they attempt to understand the link they have to a mysterious key that only seems to appear in their presence. If you go into this book understanding that it is written for a young adult audience, it is an enjoyable read.
The magic system is interesting with students having specific talents that they attend university to master while a select few are deemed "gifted" due to being attuned to multiple types of magic. The characters are interesting if not a little less developed than I normally like; however, like I said, this is typical of a young adult novel so that is to be expected. I wish some of the characters (like Maggie, Adrien, and Akari) would have been present more in the book to allow for a deeper connection with them. They show up often enough to move the plot forward, but not enough to be truly meaningful outside of that. The developing romance between the main characters was sweet and fun to read at times, but doesn't go much beyond that in terms of depth which makes it a suitable romance for younger readers, but not enough for someone looking for something more.
The ending was predictable, but still had enough action that it was interesting to read. The first part of the book drug a bit, but picked up once the final conflict was set in motion. The resolution to the book was rushed and simplified, but (since I haven't said this enough) that's what makes it more suitable for a younger audience. The topics are complex enough for some teens, but still oversimplified at times.
Overall, I would recommend this to young adult readers with the caution that there is some more mature language at times that can take you by surprise. It does, however, have an interesting enemies to lovers trope with enough action to be engaging and interesting.
Thank you NetGalley and the publishers for an advanced digital copy of this book to review!
The magic system is interesting with students having specific talents that they attend university to master while a select few are deemed "gifted" due to being attuned to multiple types of magic. The characters are interesting if not a little less developed than I normally like; however, like I said, this is typical of a young adult novel so that is to be expected. I wish some of the characters (like Maggie, Adrien, and Akari) would have been present more in the book to allow for a deeper connection with them. They show up often enough to move the plot forward, but not enough to be truly meaningful outside of that. The developing romance between the main characters was sweet and fun to read at times, but doesn't go much beyond that in terms of depth which makes it a suitable romance for younger readers, but not enough for someone looking for something more.
The ending was predictable, but still had enough action that it was interesting to read. The first part of the book drug a bit, but picked up once the final conflict was set in motion. The resolution to the book was rushed and simplified, but (since I haven't said this enough) that's what makes it more suitable for a younger audience. The topics are complex enough for some teens, but still oversimplified at times.
Overall, I would recommend this to young adult readers with the caution that there is some more mature language at times that can take you by surprise. It does, however, have an interesting enemies to lovers trope with enough action to be engaging and interesting.
Thank you NetGalley and the publishers for an advanced digital copy of this book to review!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 17, 2026
Review of ARC received by the author
I am currently in a reading slump right now because I feel like a lot of the newer books being published are severely lacking in that feeling I used to get when I was younger which is why I’ve been reading a lot of my old favorites trying to bring back that spark I once had. I certainly didn’t have to worry about that with Alchemy of Souls. (I never do with Adriana Mather’s books, though.)
The only “complaint” I have is that I want more! It has the classic foundation of a young adult novel with a unique storyline. So it healed a bit of that nostalgic void I can’t seem to fill lately while also providing a fresh new story that left me hoping for more to come.
I am currently in a reading slump right now because I feel like a lot of the newer books being published are severely lacking in that feeling I used to get when I was younger which is why I’ve been reading a lot of my old favorites trying to bring back that spark I once had. I certainly didn’t have to worry about that with Alchemy of Souls. (I never do with Adriana Mather’s books, though.)
The only “complaint” I have is that I want more! It has the classic foundation of a young adult novel with a unique storyline. So it healed a bit of that nostalgic void I can’t seem to fill lately while also providing a fresh new story that left me hoping for more to come.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
I absolutely loved this book! I was immediately hooked from the start. The magic system is very unique, and I loved that Grayson and Eloise couldn't disclose their actions to anybody. It kept me on my toes, wondering if anyone was going to find out. I loved all the characters in this book, especially Grayson. He was the perfect MMC. This book is dual POV and has the fake dating trope in it. I highly recommend this read!
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June 5, 2026ARC Review - Goodreads Giveaway
Though this follows a pretty standard YA fantasy romance format/flow, the vibes were most certainly vibing, and the dark academia setting will always be my favorite. I thoroughly enjoyed this read, devouring it over 3 afternoons. Although typically I am not one for modern settings in my fantasy tales, however light or high fantasy, there were no distractions with modern references pulling me out of the settings and ‘world’ elements so beautifully crafted in this book— which is a an admirable feat magnificently achieved by the author. There is magic, mystery, class-divide, adventure, betrayal, banter, friendship, and above all else character growth and inner & conjoined strength. “Nothing less!” — I am so excited to share this book with my niece when it publishes!
Though this follows a pretty standard YA fantasy romance format/flow, the vibes were most certainly vibing, and the dark academia setting will always be my favorite. I thoroughly enjoyed this read, devouring it over 3 afternoons. Although typically I am not one for modern settings in my fantasy tales, however light or high fantasy, there were no distractions with modern references pulling me out of the settings and ‘world’ elements so beautifully crafted in this book— which is a an admirable feat magnificently achieved by the author. There is magic, mystery, class-divide, adventure, betrayal, banter, friendship, and above all else character growth and inner & conjoined strength. “Nothing less!” — I am so excited to share this book with my niece when it publishes!
Review of advance copy received from Author
Loved the magic of this world. Very simple but well written. And the book not the most perfect chemistry of the 2 but I still liked their character arcs one being grumpy other more sunshine and nice and wanting more of these characters since way it’s written seems it’s a stand alone but I’m hoping for a series.
So Adriana has made for a very fast paced urban fantasy I couldn’t put down.
So Adriana has made for a very fast paced urban fantasy I couldn’t put down.
February 5, 2026
I am grateful to have received an arc of Alchemy of Souls from NetGalley.
Alchemy of Souls begins with our FMC, Eloise, wanting to be the first from her family of laborers to get into the “elusive” Mage university. She ultimately gets into the university, along with what seems to be every other student from her school. However, during her entrance exam events happen that lead to her having to work alongside Grayson, the MMC from an elite Mage family, to retrieve a special key for the Chancellor that only their connection can access.
Character wise, I was not a huge fan of Eloise. I felt like she had unnecessary animosity towards Grayson, in the beginning, and was more focused on trying to enjoy college with her best friend than focus on the task at hand. She was almost one dimensional to me. Whereas, Grayson was a more likable character. He was witty and charismatic and I found myself enjoying his POV more because he had more character depth and a stronger personal storyline.
I do have to say that there was a huge part of the book where I felt nothing really happened. It wasn’t until about 70% in when things started to come to light, truths were revealed, and the plot started to pick up. And by that point, the book was basically over. If this is meant to be a standalone, I don’t feel like the author did a strong job of giving us enough insight into the “Lawless” people and what the ultimate goal was for them.
Alchemy of Souls begins with our FMC, Eloise, wanting to be the first from her family of laborers to get into the “elusive” Mage university. She ultimately gets into the university, along with what seems to be every other student from her school. However, during her entrance exam events happen that lead to her having to work alongside Grayson, the MMC from an elite Mage family, to retrieve a special key for the Chancellor that only their connection can access.
Character wise, I was not a huge fan of Eloise. I felt like she had unnecessary animosity towards Grayson, in the beginning, and was more focused on trying to enjoy college with her best friend than focus on the task at hand. She was almost one dimensional to me. Whereas, Grayson was a more likable character. He was witty and charismatic and I found myself enjoying his POV more because he had more character depth and a stronger personal storyline.
I do have to say that there was a huge part of the book where I felt nothing really happened. It wasn’t until about 70% in when things started to come to light, truths were revealed, and the plot started to pick up. And by that point, the book was basically over. If this is meant to be a standalone, I don’t feel like the author did a strong job of giving us enough insight into the “Lawless” people and what the ultimate goal was for them.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
An action-packed standalone (I think) YA romantasy... interesting themes about class and privilege with strong dark academia vibes! Full review to come closer to publication!
Thanks to MacMillan Children's Publishing Group for the ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Thanks to MacMillan Children's Publishing Group for the ARC in exchange for my honest review.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I was given the opportunity to read an ARC copy of Achemy Of Souls and it did not disappoint.
Alchemy Of Souls takes you on thrilling adventure of magic, secrets, action and a blooming relationship between the two main characters Eloise and Grayson, that originally started off as fake dating.
The story starts off with Eloise coming from a less fortunate family of Laborers who wants to go to University to make things better for them. Grayson comes from a long line of well-to-do Mages including his uncle who just so happens to be the Chancellor of the Mage University
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During Eloise and Grayson's entrance exams, somethings goes wrong and both suspect the other "tampered with" the others spell. The Chancellor pairs the two together to call "The Key". Together they must learn to trust each other, and in doing so, a blooming relationship is formed.
Adriana has not written a book I did not like, however, as much as I love all her books, this has become a new favorite of mine!!. I can't wait to receive my own copy of this book just so I can revisit the story again. It was well written and I loved the banter between the characters. I hope we get more adventures with Eloise and Grayson. I mean, someone has to protect the University.... 😉 ❤️
Alchemy Of Souls takes you on thrilling adventure of magic, secrets, action and a blooming relationship between the two main characters Eloise and Grayson, that originally started off as fake dating.
The story starts off with Eloise coming from a less fortunate family of Laborers who wants to go to University to make things better for them. Grayson comes from a long line of well-to-do Mages including his uncle who just so happens to be the Chancellor of the Mage University
.
During Eloise and Grayson's entrance exams, somethings goes wrong and both suspect the other "tampered with" the others spell. The Chancellor pairs the two together to call "The Key". Together they must learn to trust each other, and in doing so, a blooming relationship is formed.
Adriana has not written a book I did not like, however, as much as I love all her books, this has become a new favorite of mine!!. I can't wait to receive my own copy of this book just so I can revisit the story again. It was well written and I loved the banter between the characters. I hope we get more adventures with Eloise and Grayson. I mean, someone has to protect the University.... 😉 ❤️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
I absolutely devoured this. Every single second of it. The writing was so immersive, the pacing never let up, and I was hooked from the very first chapter.
Eloise and Grayson were such compelling characters. Eloise’s determination to secure a future for her family made her a character I was deeply invested in, and I loved how much heart she brought to the story. Grayson, meanwhile, had that perfect mix of arrogance, charm, and hidden vulnerability that made every scene with him interesting. Together, their chemistry was fantastic. Their banter was sharp, the tension was delicious, and I loved watching them get pulled deeper into the magical mess they were trying to solve.
Beyond the romance, I really enjoyed the mystery and the exploration of power, privilege, and corruption within the magical system. The stakes felt real, and the emotional weight of the story hit hard, especially the grief surrounding the loss of family members. That part felt incredibly real and tugged at my heart in a way that was especially personal for me, since I’ve recently gone through something similar.
Thank the Lord I was invited to read this ARC because this was everything I wanted from a YA fantasy. I already miss these characters.
Eloise and Grayson were such compelling characters. Eloise’s determination to secure a future for her family made her a character I was deeply invested in, and I loved how much heart she brought to the story. Grayson, meanwhile, had that perfect mix of arrogance, charm, and hidden vulnerability that made every scene with him interesting. Together, their chemistry was fantastic. Their banter was sharp, the tension was delicious, and I loved watching them get pulled deeper into the magical mess they were trying to solve.
Beyond the romance, I really enjoyed the mystery and the exploration of power, privilege, and corruption within the magical system. The stakes felt real, and the emotional weight of the story hit hard, especially the grief surrounding the loss of family members. That part felt incredibly real and tugged at my heart in a way that was especially personal for me, since I’ve recently gone through something similar.
Thank the Lord I was invited to read this ARC because this was everything I wanted from a YA fantasy. I already miss these characters.
July 7, 2026
3.5-3.75
While the first part of this had me hooked, the second half dragged on for quite a bit. I found myself setting it down and being unable to find the motivation to pick it back up again, despite my interest in the world and the characters.
I will say that this story feels like an elevated version of that one magic school book that will not be named, and I feel like people who are looking for an alternative to that will love this. Unfortunately for me, I began to slip into a reading slump while working through this book, and I think that just contributed to my lack of interest throughout the whole thing. Nothing against the story- just a me problem! Maybe if I had read this during a different point in time I would have enjoyed it more, but as is, I felt a bit bored with a lack of satisfaction.
Thank you to Netgalley and Feiwel & Friends for the e-arc! Alchemy of Souls releases on Aug 4!
While the first part of this had me hooked, the second half dragged on for quite a bit. I found myself setting it down and being unable to find the motivation to pick it back up again, despite my interest in the world and the characters.
I will say that this story feels like an elevated version of that one magic school book that will not be named, and I feel like people who are looking for an alternative to that will love this. Unfortunately for me, I began to slip into a reading slump while working through this book, and I think that just contributed to my lack of interest throughout the whole thing. Nothing against the story- just a me problem! Maybe if I had read this during a different point in time I would have enjoyed it more, but as is, I felt a bit bored with a lack of satisfaction.
Thank you to Netgalley and Feiwel & Friends for the e-arc! Alchemy of Souls releases on Aug 4!
June 19, 2026
3.5 stars, rounded down
I wasn’t expecting this to be an urban fantasy (with cars, cell phones and such) but it worked for this story. I really liked seeing Grayson and Eloise have to team up and work together. They come from very different backgrounds and each had to act a certain way in order to survive. I also really liked that this was a standalone fantasy, but that also meant that the book felt rushed at times. I especially found this to be the case with the Lawless. They were referenced numerous times but nothing about them was really explained until well over halfway through the book. The magic system was interesting and I also liked that this was an easy to read fantasy. Overall I enjoyed it.
Thank you to the publisher, Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group, for providing this book for review consideration via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.
I wasn’t expecting this to be an urban fantasy (with cars, cell phones and such) but it worked for this story. I really liked seeing Grayson and Eloise have to team up and work together. They come from very different backgrounds and each had to act a certain way in order to survive. I also really liked that this was a standalone fantasy, but that also meant that the book felt rushed at times. I especially found this to be the case with the Lawless. They were referenced numerous times but nothing about them was really explained until well over halfway through the book. The magic system was interesting and I also liked that this was an easy to read fantasy. Overall I enjoyed it.
Thank you to the publisher, Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group, for providing this book for review consideration via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.
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June 10, 2026This is was absolutely fantastic! I could not put it down and had it read in 2 days. It had everything I love in a book: magic, love and a badass leading lady. Adriana's books NEVER disappoint but this one may have been her best yet. I know every time I open something she has written, I am in for a treat. Do yourself a favor and read this.
March 27, 2026
Alchemy of Souls was such a fun and unique world to dive into, blending our world with a magical one in beautiful detail! The characters were lovable and the tropes were to die for (I’m a sucker for the fake dating trope.) the side characters were lovable and meaningful, as well as the main two! Super fun book and I already want to reread it, especially in the autumn months!
April 30, 2026
A refreshing take on magical romance that perfectly blends adventure & heartfelt moments.
May 31, 2026
This was amazing! The romance developed very naturally, the magic was interesting, and the villain was terrible and karma does in fact take him down. I loved this!
May 1, 2026
Review on Advance Copy Received from Netgalley
This book made me feel so much. It’s such a beautiful story about two teens trying to solve the mystery of a key that formed the wards and divided society into levels.
Eloise is fierce, determined, hardworking, passionate, and intelligent. Grayson is funny, talented, and mysterious, carrying secrets of his own.
Forced to work together, they must uncover the truth behind the key while learning to trust each other in order to survive the Chancellor. But with trust comes unexpected emotions, and their partnership becomes something more than simple allies.
There are no large battles or excessive violence here. Instead, the story focuses on long-term strategy, hidden truths, and plans constantly changing with every new discovery.
The book feels light and fast-paced, with more emphasis on the emotional journey of the two main characters than action itself.
Overall, it’s a touching story that left me feeling warm and cozy.
Great book!
This book made me feel so much. It’s such a beautiful story about two teens trying to solve the mystery of a key that formed the wards and divided society into levels.
Eloise is fierce, determined, hardworking, passionate, and intelligent. Grayson is funny, talented, and mysterious, carrying secrets of his own.
Forced to work together, they must uncover the truth behind the key while learning to trust each other in order to survive the Chancellor. But with trust comes unexpected emotions, and their partnership becomes something more than simple allies.
There are no large battles or excessive violence here. Instead, the story focuses on long-term strategy, hidden truths, and plans constantly changing with every new discovery.
The book feels light and fast-paced, with more emphasis on the emotional journey of the two main characters than action itself.
Overall, it’s a touching story that left me feeling warm and cozy.
Great book!
May 27, 2026
I loved this! I didn’t realize it was a YA book when I requested it, but it was very well written. The character development and world building were very good and I really enjoyed the banter and the ending. Time to check out the author’s book list…
May 25, 2026
Alchemy of Souls was such a wonderful world to be in! The characters were so lovable and the tropes were to die for (enemies to lovers AND fake dating are you kidding me). I love how I was always in suspense to what was coming next, I couldn’t put the book down!! The world building didn’t overpower the book to where I was confused the whole time, she did an excellent job blending our world and this magical world. It was such a fun read, I look forward to reading more of her books!!
February 14, 2026
“Grabs me by the wrist, and drags me out of the shop. And I kind of enjoy her dragging me, which is exactly the problem”
Forced proximity and enemies to love(YA no spice just some kissing). Grayson and Eloise are the sweetest pair together. Grayson’s family has no love for him. All they care about is power. Eloise’s family is lower class and she’s determined to better her families lives by going to the magical academy. This unlikely pair will come together for hopefully the betterment of their world.
The magic system is wonderfully told. This was such a fun read and Adriana Mather is such an amazing author you can’t help but get lost in the world she creates. Thank you Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group and NetGalley for the arc!
Forced proximity and enemies to love(YA no spice just some kissing). Grayson and Eloise are the sweetest pair together. Grayson’s family has no love for him. All they care about is power. Eloise’s family is lower class and she’s determined to better her families lives by going to the magical academy. This unlikely pair will come together for hopefully the betterment of their world.
The magic system is wonderfully told. This was such a fun read and Adriana Mather is such an amazing author you can’t help but get lost in the world she creates. Thank you Macmillan Children’s Publishing Group and NetGalley for the arc!
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
I thoroughly enjoyed this read; it’s a high-stakes ride packed with sharp banter, explosive action, and several plot twists that genuinely caught me off guard. The dark academic setting provided the perfect backdrop for the story. Watching the leads transition from genuine animosity to a deep, heartwarming connection was easily the highlight, specifically Grayson, whose character growth and hidden depth made him a standout.
However, the female lead, Eloise, felt a bit underdeveloped by comparison. Despite a ticking clock and a dangerous mission, her priorities often leaned toward partying with friends, which made her feel slightly selfish and two dimensional. Even with that disconnect, the pacing and Grayson's arc make this a definite recommendation.
However, the female lead, Eloise, felt a bit underdeveloped by comparison. Despite a ticking clock and a dangerous mission, her priorities often leaned toward partying with friends, which made her feel slightly selfish and two dimensional. Even with that disconnect, the pacing and Grayson's arc make this a definite recommendation.
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June 14, 2026
❤️ I enjoyed the story, which had a good balance of plot and action. The characters were believable.
💔 There was very little world building, and although the class divide was a major plot point, it wasn’t explored.
💔 There was very little world building, and although the class divide was a major plot point, it wasn’t explored.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
And they were roommates...
Alchemy of Souls is a YA fantasy standalone featuring a dozen popular tropes like fake dating, forced proximity, and academic rivals. It can be a bit simplistic at times, so it leans on the younger side of YA, and it also caught me off guard in that it's not high fantasy but actually set in our world (with cellphones and Porsches). Still, I found it entertaining, and I think a younger me would've devoured it in a day.
Eloise Belrose comes from a family of Laborers, so her acceptance into University to become a Mage is quite unexpected. Grayson Stone, on the other hand, is the Chancellor's nephew, and despite his skill with magic, his entrance exam goes wrong...all thanks to Eloise. Eloise and Grayon's fates are intertwined when they're given two weeks to summon the Key to the Archives or face the consequences. They'll need to rely on each other and their magic if they want to uncover the Key before it's too late. The plot is fairly simple; Eloise and Grayson alternate between classes, secret mystery-solving sessions, and typical young adult activities like parties and hangouts with friends. The plot wasn't necessarily slow, but the extra scenes with parties and typical "teen" stuff bogged down the pacing at times. The twists were fairly predictable, but probably would've caught a younger me by surprise. Similarly, I think the ending was a bit convenient, and it's probably the reason I didn't rate this higher. The ending is still satisfying, though I wouldn't be surprised if this gets expanded into a series. It's definitely a fun read, but I don't know that I'm currently invested enough to continue if it gets more books.
I think the characters are going to be either loved or hated by most readers, and I don't think there'll be much in between. Eloise is one of those soft but stubborn YA FMCs; she cares about her family and justice, but she's also devoted to hating on Grayson every chance she can get. I found her a bit bland at times, just because she's very similar to a lot of other FMCs, but she wasn't intolerable, and I liked that she actually seemed to enjoy the schoolwork. Similarly, Grayson is your trademark MMC who speaks fluent sarcasm but has Dark Secrets and wants to protect everyone around him. I thought his motivations were a bit more complex and interesting than Eloise's, but he gave me the ick on a few occasions (was there a reason he had to drive a Porsche?). I didn't have any huge issues with the side characters, other than I wanted them to be more relevant and complex. Maggie - Eloise's best friend - deserved much better than being ignored for the sake of the plot, though I guess Grayson's friend, Bas, also got ignored a lot. Adrien and Naomi only exist to complicate the relationship between Eloise and Grayson, so they annoyed me a bit. Overall, I didn't mind any of the characters, but they could've used a bit more depth.
Alchemy of Souls is a YA fantasy taking place in a magical school, with similar vibes to Ava Reid's A Study in Drowning and Mara Rutherford's The Demonic Inventions of Aurelie Blake.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the free e-ARC!
3.75/5
Alchemy of Souls is a YA fantasy standalone featuring a dozen popular tropes like fake dating, forced proximity, and academic rivals. It can be a bit simplistic at times, so it leans on the younger side of YA, and it also caught me off guard in that it's not high fantasy but actually set in our world (with cellphones and Porsches). Still, I found it entertaining, and I think a younger me would've devoured it in a day.
Eloise Belrose comes from a family of Laborers, so her acceptance into University to become a Mage is quite unexpected. Grayson Stone, on the other hand, is the Chancellor's nephew, and despite his skill with magic, his entrance exam goes wrong...all thanks to Eloise. Eloise and Grayon's fates are intertwined when they're given two weeks to summon the Key to the Archives or face the consequences. They'll need to rely on each other and their magic if they want to uncover the Key before it's too late. The plot is fairly simple; Eloise and Grayson alternate between classes, secret mystery-solving sessions, and typical young adult activities like parties and hangouts with friends. The plot wasn't necessarily slow, but the extra scenes with parties and typical "teen" stuff bogged down the pacing at times. The twists were fairly predictable, but probably would've caught a younger me by surprise. Similarly, I think the ending was a bit convenient, and it's probably the reason I didn't rate this higher. The ending is still satisfying, though I wouldn't be surprised if this gets expanded into a series. It's definitely a fun read, but I don't know that I'm currently invested enough to continue if it gets more books.
I think the characters are going to be either loved or hated by most readers, and I don't think there'll be much in between. Eloise is one of those soft but stubborn YA FMCs; she cares about her family and justice, but she's also devoted to hating on Grayson every chance she can get. I found her a bit bland at times, just because she's very similar to a lot of other FMCs, but she wasn't intolerable, and I liked that she actually seemed to enjoy the schoolwork. Similarly, Grayson is your trademark MMC who speaks fluent sarcasm but has Dark Secrets and wants to protect everyone around him. I thought his motivations were a bit more complex and interesting than Eloise's, but he gave me the ick on a few occasions (was there a reason he had to drive a Porsche?). I didn't have any huge issues with the side characters, other than I wanted them to be more relevant and complex. Maggie - Eloise's best friend - deserved much better than being ignored for the sake of the plot, though I guess Grayson's friend, Bas, also got ignored a lot. Adrien and Naomi only exist to complicate the relationship between Eloise and Grayson, so they annoyed me a bit. Overall, I didn't mind any of the characters, but they could've used a bit more depth.
Alchemy of Souls is a YA fantasy taking place in a magical school, with similar vibes to Ava Reid's A Study in Drowning and Mara Rutherford's The Demonic Inventions of Aurelie Blake.
Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the free e-ARC!
3.75/5
Review of advance copy received from Author
Recently, I was able to read an ARC of Alchemy Of Souls early as part of a book tour. Thank you to the author for this opportunity! When I say I couldn't put this book down once I started it, I mean it. Although, I've been fortunate to read all of Adriana's work to date, I was so excited when I heard this book is labeled as dark academia, fantasy, mystery, and romance involving elements of magic and drama.
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Alchemy Of Souls by Adriana Mather, coming August 4th, 2026, revolves around two teens named Eloise, from a poor, laborer family, and Grayson, the rich, popular, "golden boy" everyone assumes is going to be "Gifted" like his uncle who is the respected and feared chancellor (by most, except the lawless). When the entrance exams for university go wrong, Eloise and Grayson become magically intertwined and are told they must call a magical key to a secret room, and FAST...or else!
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Eloise and Grayson have known each other at school for years, but it's like they're from two separate worlds until their worlds literally collide and there's nothing they can do except to get through it...together. They are forced by the manipulative chancellor to not only work together, live together, and produce "the key" for the secret Archive Room on a deadline and with no time for mistakes.
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Eloise and Grayson are complete opposites, always fighting, but throughout searching for answers about the archive key and fake dating to ward off problems from their friends, the two learn a lot about each others secrets and lives, too.
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As Eloise and Grayson begin to trust each other, they learn that they have both experienced loss and grief and fears and they are both playing the game to protect themselves and their families. They also begin to realize that maybe they even care about and like each other, too. As the plot thickens, Eloise and Grayson work together to call the key before time runs out. They also realize that winners or survivors are not the strongest or the ones who have the most magic, the most money, or the most power, but rather those with survival instincts and the natural abilities to analyze and adapt quickly.
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Alchemy Of Souls has everything from magic and spells, secrets and truths, action and thrill, enemies to lovers, witty humor and sarcasm, and genuine emotional depth and character growth. This is one of those books that once you pick it up and get sucked into it, you won't be able to stop reading! If you want to know the full drama between Eloise, Grayson, and their friends and family, and whether they find the key, survive, and save their families and friends, pre-order or pick up Adriana's book when it releases this summer!
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Alchemy Of Souls by Adriana Mather, coming August 4th, 2026, revolves around two teens named Eloise, from a poor, laborer family, and Grayson, the rich, popular, "golden boy" everyone assumes is going to be "Gifted" like his uncle who is the respected and feared chancellor (by most, except the lawless). When the entrance exams for university go wrong, Eloise and Grayson become magically intertwined and are told they must call a magical key to a secret room, and FAST...or else!
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Eloise and Grayson have known each other at school for years, but it's like they're from two separate worlds until their worlds literally collide and there's nothing they can do except to get through it...together. They are forced by the manipulative chancellor to not only work together, live together, and produce "the key" for the secret Archive Room on a deadline and with no time for mistakes.
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Eloise and Grayson are complete opposites, always fighting, but throughout searching for answers about the archive key and fake dating to ward off problems from their friends, the two learn a lot about each others secrets and lives, too.
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As Eloise and Grayson begin to trust each other, they learn that they have both experienced loss and grief and fears and they are both playing the game to protect themselves and their families. They also begin to realize that maybe they even care about and like each other, too. As the plot thickens, Eloise and Grayson work together to call the key before time runs out. They also realize that winners or survivors are not the strongest or the ones who have the most magic, the most money, or the most power, but rather those with survival instincts and the natural abilities to analyze and adapt quickly.
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Alchemy Of Souls has everything from magic and spells, secrets and truths, action and thrill, enemies to lovers, witty humor and sarcasm, and genuine emotional depth and character growth. This is one of those books that once you pick it up and get sucked into it, you won't be able to stop reading! If you want to know the full drama between Eloise, Grayson, and their friends and family, and whether they find the key, survive, and save their families and friends, pre-order or pick up Adriana's book when it releases this summer!
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Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
Alchemy of Souls by Adriana Mather
3.8⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (rounded up to a 4)
Spice: 0.8/5
Cursing: min- (except God's Name in vain)
Format/Source: ebook from NetGalley and Macmillan Publishing and Feiwel and Friends Books
Genres/Tropes: fantasy, dark academia, magic, forced proximity
Audience: YA
Setting: UK
Characters: Eloise, Grayson, Damian, Bastien, Naomi, Adrien, Maggie, Akari, Bas, Sage, Ivy, Naomi, Chancellor
👍 short chapters, multi POV, character growth, friendships, magic, quick read
👎 God's Name in vain, somewhat predictable
Description:
Grayson Stone is no stranger to deception. Under the watchful eye of his uncle, the High Chancellor, he has been well-trained in all four types of magic, all while secretly working against his uncle’s corrupt rule. Years of plans depend on him being marked Gifted during his University entrance exam, proving that he is the perfect heir and gaining his uncle’s trust. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned, and he has only one person to blame: Eloise Belrose.
Raised by a family of Laborers, Eloise is the most unlikely student to become a Mage, but through her hard work and long hours spent practicing she is finally admitted to the prestigious University of Magical Arts, guaranteeing safety and security for her whole family. Until things go very wrong, and she somehow becomes magically linked to Grayson Stone, the school’s arrogant, annoyingly attractive, golden boy, putting not only her University acceptance, but also her and her family’s lives at risk.
Eloise and Grayson are given less than two weeks to solve an impossible mystery—one that will give the High Chancellor even more power and control—or face the consequences. Forced to room together, with all the same classes, while pretending to date to hide their secret quest, sparks definitely fly. As their feelings grow more real it becomes harder to live the lies they’ve had to tell to survive. With time running out, will they be able to trust the bond between them or will their lies tear them apart forever?
My opinion:
I enjoyed this novel, especially the magical aspects and the growth of the characters. I recommend this book to those who like dark academia books.
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3.8⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (rounded up to a 4)
Spice: 0.8/5
Cursing: min- (except God's Name in vain)
Format/Source: ebook from NetGalley and Macmillan Publishing and Feiwel and Friends Books
Genres/Tropes: fantasy, dark academia, magic, forced proximity
Audience: YA
Setting: UK
Characters: Eloise, Grayson, Damian, Bastien, Naomi, Adrien, Maggie, Akari, Bas, Sage, Ivy, Naomi, Chancellor
👍 short chapters, multi POV, character growth, friendships, magic, quick read
👎 God's Name in vain, somewhat predictable
Description:
Grayson Stone is no stranger to deception. Under the watchful eye of his uncle, the High Chancellor, he has been well-trained in all four types of magic, all while secretly working against his uncle’s corrupt rule. Years of plans depend on him being marked Gifted during his University entrance exam, proving that he is the perfect heir and gaining his uncle’s trust. Unfortunately, things don’t go as planned, and he has only one person to blame: Eloise Belrose.
Raised by a family of Laborers, Eloise is the most unlikely student to become a Mage, but through her hard work and long hours spent practicing she is finally admitted to the prestigious University of Magical Arts, guaranteeing safety and security for her whole family. Until things go very wrong, and she somehow becomes magically linked to Grayson Stone, the school’s arrogant, annoyingly attractive, golden boy, putting not only her University acceptance, but also her and her family’s lives at risk.
Eloise and Grayson are given less than two weeks to solve an impossible mystery—one that will give the High Chancellor even more power and control—or face the consequences. Forced to room together, with all the same classes, while pretending to date to hide their secret quest, sparks definitely fly. As their feelings grow more real it becomes harder to live the lies they’ve had to tell to survive. With time running out, will they be able to trust the bond between them or will their lies tear them apart forever?
My opinion:
I enjoyed this novel, especially the magical aspects and the growth of the characters. I recommend this book to those who like dark academia books.
#bookstagram #booklovers #magic #darkacademiabooks #magicbooks
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
I procrastinated writing this review because I despise writing negative reviews. And I suppose technically this review isn't all negative, but...well... let's just get into it.
I also want to take a moment to appreciate the absolutely GORGEOUS cover!!! I want to frame it and hang it on my wall.
Okay, into the review. The one positive thing I have to say about this was that the plot and magic system were well executed. The whole tension between the upper and lower classes, as well as with the Lawless felt tangible and realistic. Even though it was a bit predictable, I did love the plot (which I won't say too much about, to avoid spoilers). It was unique and entertaining, especially compared to other romantasy plots that feel so similar to each other. I also enjoyed the idea of the setting---modern day but also magic and cobblers and boarding school---except I found that it wasn't fleshed out or described enough. I feel like modern-day setting with a fantasy plot is a genius idea, I just needed it to be explained more.
The major drawback for me in this novel was the characters. Grayson and Eloise, along with the group of side characters felt so... meh. They felt completely two-dimensional to me, and had zero chemistry with each other. The way they spoke and acted felt so artificial to me---almost like they were pretending to play a part that they didn't really fit in. Grayson himself was probably my least favorite, because he honestly kinda gave me the creeps. The number of times he described Eloise's "naturally large eyes" was making me think that he had some sort of eyeball kink.
Based on the plot and the characters, I would want to recommend this to early YA readers (grades 7-10), but the characters used a lot of vulgar language that frankly, seemed out of place, so I would likely give this to grades 9 or older.
I want to make it clear that this was in no way a terrible book! The plot is FANTASTIC, and if you can handle the characters, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
I also want to take a moment to appreciate the absolutely GORGEOUS cover!!! I want to frame it and hang it on my wall.
Okay, into the review. The one positive thing I have to say about this was that the plot and magic system were well executed. The whole tension between the upper and lower classes, as well as with the Lawless felt tangible and realistic. Even though it was a bit predictable, I did love the plot (which I won't say too much about, to avoid spoilers). It was unique and entertaining, especially compared to other romantasy plots that feel so similar to each other. I also enjoyed the idea of the setting---modern day but also magic and cobblers and boarding school---except I found that it wasn't fleshed out or described enough. I feel like modern-day setting with a fantasy plot is a genius idea, I just needed it to be explained more.
The major drawback for me in this novel was the characters. Grayson and Eloise, along with the group of side characters felt so... meh. They felt completely two-dimensional to me, and had zero chemistry with each other. The way they spoke and acted felt so artificial to me---almost like they were pretending to play a part that they didn't really fit in. Grayson himself was probably my least favorite, because he honestly kinda gave me the creeps. The number of times he described Eloise's "naturally large eyes" was making me think that he had some sort of eyeball kink.
Based on the plot and the characters, I would want to recommend this to early YA readers (grades 7-10), but the characters used a lot of vulgar language that frankly, seemed out of place, so I would likely give this to grades 9 or older.
I want to make it clear that this was in no way a terrible book! The plot is FANTASTIC, and if you can handle the characters, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
The plot itself is simple enough, and the magic system felt fairly straightforward though not thoroughly explained, but I wish the worldbuilding was explored a tad more in the beginning of the story because it left me with questions for too long, and not in a suspense type of way, but a "where is the information that feels important for the reader to comprehend the world?" type of way. But because I was mostly engrossed, I wasn't too worried about it, though at around 50% I did begin to question if I missed some explanations, especially when it came to the lawless, because they are referenced a lot like we should already know.
Now I know everyone loves dual POV, but I actually think this would have worked better as a single POV. I feel like Grayson's POV is added in to help us get to know him better, because without it, frankly, he's kind of one dimensional and lacking depth, and his pov does help with some character development, but it also felt like it took away some tension. I really liked Eloise, she was determined and I love to see a young FMC hold her own.
There's a lot of smells going on ... Grayson smelling emotions was a little odd, but why can he? You know what, I don't really even care why he and his uncle can smell emotions better than anyone else, it's just weird and reading about what he's smelling off people every page becomes tiresome. It also felt like a cop out having Grayson be able to smell Eloise's emotions, instead of building actual chemistry we can see, we're told about it through his scenting ability.
We get a lot of time when the plot feels stalled, but I get it, it does help build up the relationship for our characters during that time, so I didn't mind much. And it was fun seeing their interactions and bantering with each other. I'm not sure if this is meant to be more on the cozy side, but it feels like it because the stakes never really feel too high.
The read overall is a fun time, the writing was easy to read, and I think Alchemy Of Souls would be perfect for a lot of readers.
Now I know everyone loves dual POV, but I actually think this would have worked better as a single POV. I feel like Grayson's POV is added in to help us get to know him better, because without it, frankly, he's kind of one dimensional and lacking depth, and his pov does help with some character development, but it also felt like it took away some tension. I really liked Eloise, she was determined and I love to see a young FMC hold her own.
There's a lot of smells going on ... Grayson smelling emotions was a little odd, but why can he? You know what, I don't really even care why he and his uncle can smell emotions better than anyone else, it's just weird and reading about what he's smelling off people every page becomes tiresome. It also felt like a cop out having Grayson be able to smell Eloise's emotions, instead of building actual chemistry we can see, we're told about it through his scenting ability.
We get a lot of time when the plot feels stalled, but I get it, it does help build up the relationship for our characters during that time, so I didn't mind much. And it was fun seeing their interactions and bantering with each other. I'm not sure if this is meant to be more on the cozy side, but it feels like it because the stakes never really feel too high.
The read overall is a fun time, the writing was easy to read, and I think Alchemy Of Souls would be perfect for a lot of readers.
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
Alchemy of Souls is an absolutely fabulous action-packed, dark academia romantasy. Grayson is an extremely talented aspiring Mage who has spent years perfecting his magic. Eloise is determined to be granted acceptance to the University of Magical Arts where she can further develop her magical skills in order to help her family. During the entrance exams, Eloise's performance doesn't go according to plan, and she inadvertently connects her magic to Grayson's. Unfortunately for Grayson, being linked to Eloise means not only not being granted admittance to the Gifted program but also not being allowed his reign of the school. Grayson and Eloise are given two weeks to solve an impossible mystery. If they are unable to achieve the desired results, they will both be expelled - an outcome neither can live with, especially because Grayson has a much larger goal - one that could impact all of society.
I absolutely loved Alchemy of Souls! The story is unique and intriguing, which is a breath of fresh air when so many romantasy plots are so similar. Both Adriana Mather's world building and character development are fantastic. I really appreciated the focus on friendships; I especially enjoyed the friendship between Eloise and Maggie. Maggie is such an entertaining character. With that said, Grayson is easily my favorite character. His POV chapters were the best! The dialogue between all of the characters is excellent. The banter is so well written. In summary, Alchemy of Souls is an easy five stars and a definite recommended read!
I absolutely loved Alchemy of Souls! The story is unique and intriguing, which is a breath of fresh air when so many romantasy plots are so similar. Both Adriana Mather's world building and character development are fantastic. I really appreciated the focus on friendships; I especially enjoyed the friendship between Eloise and Maggie. Maggie is such an entertaining character. With that said, Grayson is easily my favorite character. His POV chapters were the best! The dialogue between all of the characters is excellent. The banter is so well written. In summary, Alchemy of Souls is an easy five stars and a definite recommended read!
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