A chronically ill teen trades her hospital bed for a world of adventure, intrigue, and magic in the first installment of this imaginative LitRPG series.
For as long as she can remember, Phoenix Fraser has been stuck. Stuck in the wrong body, losing both friends and family, and no future to plan for. So when a mysterious entity known as the Night Witch appears in her room, offering her a new start in a strange land, she can’t believe the opportunity to fulfill her ever-elusive potential.
At first, Phoenix is enraptured by the second chance at life into which she’s been transported. Equipped with a new body that matches her spirit and, with it, discovering exciting new abilities—like respawning—she’s suddenly on the sort of quest she’d only ever read about. But surviving the world of Makera isn’t all fun and MMO-style games . . .
True danger lurks in every namely, uncanny monsters, jealous nobles, and other cruel creatures who would destroy everything Phoenix cares about, including her very soul. Now, she’ll have to rely on her wit and intuition alone to determine who to trust and befriend—before she finds herself at the mercy of mages, mercenaries, rivals, and even gods.
The first volume of the hit LitRPG fantasy series—with more than a million views on Royal Road—now available in paperback, ebook, and audiobook!
It is disconcerting to read what you believe is a unique story and then recognize several details that seem to be taken from a wildly popular series that you’ve read before. I feel like the author could use the notes at the beginning to let us know that this is basically HWFWM rewritten with a female MC. I’m not sure I can continue with the series since all of the world building elements of the story keep making me believe I’m on Pallimustus where everything is just a little off.
So one note most reviewers have is that this series shares a similar magic system to 'He who Fights with Monsters' and some other similarities. Personally that doesn't bother me as most genres share such things. Lots of LITRPGs use a System with 'classes' and 'stat points' yet no one complains of those. Then there is cultivation books that all have Body refinement, Chi condensing. Core formation. Nascent soul, and other levels of progression or some variations. All it means is that the magic system variation from the original series is becoming popular enough to inspire variations.
The story itself is rather fun and unique enough to engage. To be clear this is a story of a 'girl' born in the body of a boy and feels they are a girl being sent to a magical world where they are re-made into a female form. Honestly besides backstory and perhaps some emotional trauma of how people treated them before it doesn't really affect the story.
There might be a gay couple? No sure as they wobble back and forth if they are or aren't and the MC's sexuality also isn't really touch on in this book.
That aside, it's one of those basic weak to growing stronger progression novels with trials and tribulations abound. Growing into confidence and risk and danger. Unique powers enough and growing to use them.
All good for reading and a fun adventure.
Personally the only thing I disliked was the MC's personality at times but it was more intentional part of growth and backstory than being unlikable. She is just overly simpleton trusting. Even when she knows she should keep things secret, she just blabs the moment someone asks. This is more a intentional self confidence issues that lead her to want to please people it seems and not have conflict than what seems like a natural true trait. More something it seems like the author might have her grow out of, hopefully.
The second issues is the Gods. In this world she is 18 which isn't an adult. An adult is 30. So these gods want her to do all this dangerous and mental trauma inducing hardships but she's still a child. She basically just doesn't question them and bows to their wills unlike other series where it's all about defying petty deities. I couldn't stand it because as said in another series 'Mark of the Fool' Any god who would send children to war is not a god worth respect. That all this pantheon are using a child to get their way out of all the people in the world, grown adults, it just pathetic. I couldn't stand how she just bowed to their wills and didn't stand up for herself. Honestly hoped she'd tell them all to screw off and she'd do it her own way. Sadly didn't happen.
Beyond the disappointment of her becoming a puppet for gods and having crushing self confidence issues that make her a bit of a rug to be walked over. I'll still read the next book as it was good start and hope she'll grow into a self confident and powerful adventurer who will learn protecting those around her also means some times removing the trash people from the world who pose a risk to the rest.
This book was so fun! I really enjoyed it. Ive been reading it while laying in bed, sick, and it really helped brighten my mood.
I haven’t read many books with this magic system - im usually a fantasy romance gal and a lot of those magic systems aren’t well fleshed out. I really enjoyed how different this one was, it’s very DnD like. Such a fun world, such wonderful characters, and it left me wanting more. I am sad i have to wait for the second one but it comes out in about 2 weeks so at least it’s not a long wait.
If you want a good mix of cozy, adventure, creative monsters, and heartwarming characters that make up a truly delightful read, i recommend giving this book a chance. I really loved it.
I have not made it 10 pages in and I am getting a lecture in social justice and misgendering.
At this point in a story the reader have not had time to get to know or like the character yet. Not saying we dislike them. We just don’t know them, and as a result we don’t care if they live or die at this point in the book.
I stopped reading at this point I will not be reading anything else written by this author, since apparently they're more interested in conveying their social views than telling an interesting story.
Very fun. I dislike cultivator books but it's not much of a focus that it's a non-issue, and it's not "wuxia-styled". Phoenix is an interesting character with enough depth to feel like a person. The world is neat too. The author baked in a ton of runway at the outset so I expect this series will carry on for a hot minute and I'm looking forward to it.
Omg the rambling and word vomit 🤢 from the mc are ridiculous and I could of cared less for his mental health issues. I came here for the litrpg adventure what i got was a very confused child guess I should of read what the book was about first DNF