— 1.5 stars ⚓️🚪
buckle up because i dive straight in to this angry rant review 😭😳
when i picked up the ministry of time, i had high hopes for an intriguing journey through time, filled with well-developed characters and an engaging plot. unfortunately, my experience with this book was anything but that. despite the potential for a fascinating story, this book fell short in numerous ways, leaving me frustrated and disappointed.
the premise of the ministry of time seemed promising: a tale of time travel with an interesting setup and the potential for intricate storytelling. however, the execution was lacking from the get-go. about 30% through the book, i found myself constantly distracted, bored, and tempted to check my phone every few minutes—a rarity for me, especially with a book i was supposed to be interested in. this book has so much potential, but it gave me nothing.
the primary issue with this book is its excruciatingly slow pace. reviews i read before starting this book warned of its sluggishness, and they were right. the overly elaborate prose didn’t help. while i appreciate lyrical writing in fantasy, i prefer authors who get to the point in pretty much every other genre. unfortunately, bradley’s writing is overly nuanced and drawn out, making it difficult to stay engaged. for me, almost everything i read went in one ear and out the other.
the writing style was incredibly confusing. i was unsure if we were in third-person omniscient or limited, and sometimes it felt like reading a diary with how the main character directly addressed the readers. the chapters were excessively long, with some reaching 50 pages, making it difficult to maintain focus. additionally, the prose was filled with clunky word choices that constantly pulled me out of the story. i found myself having to think about a word or phrase and question why it was there, which disrupted the reading experience.
the characters in this book lack depth and personality, making it impossible to connect with them. names are thrown around with no real entity to attach them to, and the characters’ actions and motivations are often unclear. the only character who showed a modicum of personality was graham, the supposed love interest, but even that was muddled by confusing writing. the main character is particularly frustrating, and i didn’t even know her first name.
“every time i told graham something about myself, about my family, about my experience of the world we shared—i was trying to occupy space in his head. i had ideas for the shape i should take in his imagination. i told him only what i wanted him to know and believe about me.”
the supposed romance was also poorly developed. i found myself questioning if certain interactions were romantic or just my interpretation as a romance reader. a reader shouldn’t have to ask that question. the romance was poorly executed, making it feel like readbait rather than a genuine element of the story.
the plot, as it stands, is almost non-existent. the synopsis covers everything that happens in the first 100 pages, leaving little to discover. the time travel mechanics are glossed over with a dismissive “don’t worry about it,” which is incredibly frustrating for a science fiction novel. if you’re going to write about time travel, at least give readers a glimpse of how it works in your world; commit to your fucking book.
the world-building is similarly lacking. important plot points are often interrupted by unnecessary tangents about the main character’s background or random musings, which adds to the disjointed feel of the narrative. one moment we’re talking about a significant plot point, and the next, we’re diving into the main character’s cambodian background with no clear goal in sight. it’s clear that this is based on the author’s personal experiences and i feel deep sympathy for her and her mother’s stories, but projecting these poignant tales into a horrible book like this just doesn’t work.
another significant issue with this book is its problematic content. the sexualization of historical figures and the odd fascination with the characters’ sexualities felt forced and uncomfortable. the use of real historical figures, like commander graham gore, in a fictional narrative is questionable, especially when they are sexualized in ways that don’t add to the story.
the author’s portrayal of homosexuality felt like it was used for diversity points rather than genuine character development. characters defined by their sexuality lacked depth and personality, which was incredibly frustrating. homosexuality shouldn’t be used as a character device, especially without substance behind it.
there were also some unsettling descriptions that didn’t sit right with me. for example, the main character’s overly detailed description of the lesbian character, margaret’s, breasts felt unnecessary and uncomfortable.
“there was a gap as large as a spread hand between her scarf and her lapels, which showed her décolletage. margaret had large breasts, which i mention because she had not yet grown used to dressing them without stays, and they tended to draw the gaze. they had a lively upward swell—they seemed to want to have a conversation—and buried deep in the cleavage were a couple of raised acne dots, resembling (charm-ingly) pink wafer crumbs. her skin was very fair and bright, like an expensive moisturizer. i note all this because i think male writers are often mocked for their lengthy descriptions of women’s breasts, but i do think some breasts provoke them, even from me.”
despite my hopes that the ministry of time would improve as i continued reading, it did not. the last 20 pages offered some mild improvement, but it was too little, too late. this book requires unwavering patience to get through, and even then, it’s not worth the effort. the disjointed narrative, lack of character depth, and problematic content make it a frustrating read.
₊⊹⁀➴ in conclusion, the ministry of time was a disappointment. while the concept had potential, the execution was severely lacking. unless you have the patience of a saint and a high tolerance for slow, overly nuanced writing, i would recommend skipping this one. there are far better time travel stories out there that respect the reader’s time and intelligence.