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Discount Dan's Backroom Bargains #3
Kiosk Kingdom
Dan just wanted to run a shop. Now he’s knee-deep in holiday hellscapes, corporate hydras, and powers that definitely violate the Geneva Conventions.The Flayed Monarch is on the move, spreading his corrupt influence through the lower levels of the Backrooms. To stop him, Dan and his crew must take out one of the Monarch’s key allies—the Franchisor, a multi-headed marketing monstrosity who rules the 99th Floor.
But Dan, Croc, and the rest of his ragtag band of misfits might be in for more than they bargained for.
To secure the Kiosk Network and strike a crippling blow against the Monarch, they’ll have to grind through a cursed snow globe ruled by the Yule Lord himself, survive the twisted horrors of the 10,000 Acre Wood, and take on a twisted empire built on questionably legal intellectual property. Along the way, Dan will uncover long-buried secrets about his past, the System, and a war he never asked for.
The shop must grow.
The crew must fight.
And Dan? He’s done playing defense. He’s armed to the teeth, and he’s got a coupon for war crimes.
But Dan, Croc, and the rest of his ragtag band of misfits might be in for more than they bargained for.
To secure the Kiosk Network and strike a crippling blow against the Monarch, they’ll have to grind through a cursed snow globe ruled by the Yule Lord himself, survive the twisted horrors of the 10,000 Acre Wood, and take on a twisted empire built on questionably legal intellectual property. Along the way, Dan will uncover long-buried secrets about his past, the System, and a war he never asked for.
The shop must grow.
The crew must fight.
And Dan? He’s done playing defense. He’s armed to the teeth, and he’s got a coupon for war crimes.
680 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 31, 2026
About the author
James A. Hunter
97 books1,199 followersJames Hunter is a full-time ink slinger, a member of SFWA, and the bestselling author of Vigil Bound, Rogue Dungeon, Shadowcroft Academy, Bibliomancer (The Completionist Chronicles Expanded Universe), and the litRPG epic Viridian Gate Online! In addition to writing, James also runs Shadow Alley Press, an industry leader that specializes in publishing LitRPG, Fantasy, and selection Science Fiction.
James is a former Marine Corps Sergeant, combat veteran, and pirate hunter (seriously). He’s also a member of The Royal Order of the Shellback—’cause that’s totally a real thing. And a spaceship captain, can’t forget that. Okay … the last one probably isn’t true. When not writing or spending time with family, James occasionally finds time to eat and sleep.
Find out more about James Hunter at www.ShadowAlleyPress.com
James is a former Marine Corps Sergeant, combat veteran, and pirate hunter (seriously). He’s also a member of The Royal Order of the Shellback—’cause that’s totally a real thing. And a spaceship captain, can’t forget that. Okay … the last one probably isn’t true. When not writing or spending time with family, James occasionally finds time to eat and sleep.
Find out more about James Hunter at www.ShadowAlleyPress.com
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April 14, 2026
3.5 First things first, I hate that cover. Nothing says "this is for babies" like putting Mickey Mouse on the front. Has Discount Dan sold out? Is this a cash-in on the growing LitRPG trend, or is the author trying to do something creative and worthwhile? Well, yes and no. The satirical elements, which elevated the second book, go in a different direction here. It doesn't entirely work, but credit for trying something different.
The key thing is: loot. Remember those early Dungeon Crawler Carl days, where it seemed like 60% of the book was loot boxes and stat perks? That's where the third Discount Dan volume shines; this series triples down on combat mechanics and loot progression, and I'd argue this is one of the better LitRPG series in general. The core principle of loot lists, base-building, and turn-based combat remains this series' chief concern. There's something really comforting about listening to an audiobook like this, where a full hour can go into a fight and/or level up that's done in a consistently funny and interesting way.
The story, though, I'm not so sure. Whereas the first and second books had pretty simplistic narratives, this one goes for a more serialized approach. The basic team consists of Dan, Croc, and his two companions, one of whom I kept forgetting was even there for large portions of the book, and was surprised every time he spoke up. Croc remains a very fun character, and he really gets to level up in this one, as well as share his love of the cultural touchstone that is Stephanie Myers's Twilight series.
The big theme in this story is tied to the central villain that the team must fight in order for Dan to progress in his base-building and connect a larger portion of the world to his safe area/convenience store. The Franchiser is some sort of wizard/demon monster (the lore is very weird and complex, but in a good way), who controls the Kiosks, which are something like nodes of power, and Dan must cross several floors to find him.
The theme, though- Dan is an entrepreneur, always talking about business and expansion, and The Franchiser is the guy who controls what worlds get to exist within this fantasy/sci-fi sphere. It's about an IP (Dan and his stores) negotiation for space within a space of public access. And the world he visits is all satirical versions of public-domain IPs, Santa Claus, Winnie the Pooh, Disney, Popeye, etc. So it's a story about growth and expansion that uses business philosophy and video game action to negotiate its own market validity, whereby growing and expanding. Dan provides a service, a service that people need and want: LISTS. Lists, action, hot dogs, dog comedy, and business acumen. It's like if the general manager of a fast-food joint physically fought the city planner for the right to expand, but through the medium of teen-level comedy urban fantasy. I like that Dan is a businessman, and I think this book exemplifies the entrepreneurial spirit. Business action!
But is it good? I didn't really care for a lot of the story. But it did remind me of early Dungeon Crawler Carl quite a bit. Or maybe I just wanted more of the second book. Still, I enjoyed it. There's some interesting backstory with the world itself, where Dan finds The Resercher's area, which is one of the best parts. My old criticism that Dan keeps winning boss battles by cheating is mitigated, and the combat here is really good. It's a funny book overall. Some of it doesn't work, some does. This series had an inauspicious beginning, but now I'm curious where it will go.
The key thing is: loot. Remember those early Dungeon Crawler Carl days, where it seemed like 60% of the book was loot boxes and stat perks? That's where the third Discount Dan volume shines; this series triples down on combat mechanics and loot progression, and I'd argue this is one of the better LitRPG series in general. The core principle of loot lists, base-building, and turn-based combat remains this series' chief concern. There's something really comforting about listening to an audiobook like this, where a full hour can go into a fight and/or level up that's done in a consistently funny and interesting way.
The story, though, I'm not so sure. Whereas the first and second books had pretty simplistic narratives, this one goes for a more serialized approach. The basic team consists of Dan, Croc, and his two companions, one of whom I kept forgetting was even there for large portions of the book, and was surprised every time he spoke up. Croc remains a very fun character, and he really gets to level up in this one, as well as share his love of the cultural touchstone that is Stephanie Myers's Twilight series.
The big theme in this story is tied to the central villain that the team must fight in order for Dan to progress in his base-building and connect a larger portion of the world to his safe area/convenience store. The Franchiser is some sort of wizard/demon monster (the lore is very weird and complex, but in a good way), who controls the Kiosks, which are something like nodes of power, and Dan must cross several floors to find him.
The theme, though- Dan is an entrepreneur, always talking about business and expansion, and The Franchiser is the guy who controls what worlds get to exist within this fantasy/sci-fi sphere. It's about an IP (Dan and his stores) negotiation for space within a space of public access. And the world he visits is all satirical versions of public-domain IPs, Santa Claus, Winnie the Pooh, Disney, Popeye, etc. So it's a story about growth and expansion that uses business philosophy and video game action to negotiate its own market validity, whereby growing and expanding. Dan provides a service, a service that people need and want: LISTS. Lists, action, hot dogs, dog comedy, and business acumen. It's like if the general manager of a fast-food joint physically fought the city planner for the right to expand, but through the medium of teen-level comedy urban fantasy. I like that Dan is a businessman, and I think this book exemplifies the entrepreneurial spirit. Business action!
But is it good? I didn't really care for a lot of the story. But it did remind me of early Dungeon Crawler Carl quite a bit. Or maybe I just wanted more of the second book. Still, I enjoyed it. There's some interesting backstory with the world itself, where Dan finds The Resercher's area, which is one of the best parts. My old criticism that Dan keeps winning boss battles by cheating is mitigated, and the combat here is really good. It's a funny book overall. Some of it doesn't work, some does. This series had an inauspicious beginning, but now I'm curious where it will go.
April 20, 2026
REVIEW OF ADVANCED COPY RECEIVED BY AUTHOR
Book three of Discount Dan can be summarized in one word … Masterpiece *chefs kiss*
After reading the first two books I didn’t think it could get better. But, book three was indeed better, and not only was it better but it was deeper. One thing I always thought that the series lacked was some emotion depth but that went right out the window with this book. James Hunter went a lot deeper into the emotions of the characters and their whys and what happens when those why’s are put to the test. We got a lot of background information on characters. Things that we assumed but had not idea the gravity of. But, most importantly we got vital information about the researcher and what exactly is going on in the Backrooms as an entity. Things that will change the course of the series.
I think one the brightest spots of the book is the connection that the team has. It’s showed time and time again. Also, Dan might have a crush …
In any LitRPG book you need fights. Big, nasty, gross fights and DD has no short of those type of things. The leveling system has capped off nicely and it seemed like Dan and the team were actually being tested. The fights have more on the line. Dan feels responsible for his friends and that makes him dangerous but vulnerable. It’s going to take a lot more than brute strength and temp’s rage to kill the deeper they go.
Overall, I think the book was phenomenal and showed alot of depth. The only thing I would like to see is more high stakes or something earth shattering happen. I thought at times in this book we were going to see it but it never came to fruition. Everything just seems to be advancing so fast and easy. I would like the team to get knocked back a bit. Give them a big challenge. But, that’s just might be me!
Book three of Discount Dan can be summarized in one word … Masterpiece *chefs kiss*
After reading the first two books I didn’t think it could get better. But, book three was indeed better, and not only was it better but it was deeper. One thing I always thought that the series lacked was some emotion depth but that went right out the window with this book. James Hunter went a lot deeper into the emotions of the characters and their whys and what happens when those why’s are put to the test. We got a lot of background information on characters. Things that we assumed but had not idea the gravity of. But, most importantly we got vital information about the researcher and what exactly is going on in the Backrooms as an entity. Things that will change the course of the series.
I think one the brightest spots of the book is the connection that the team has. It’s showed time and time again. Also, Dan might have a crush …
In any LitRPG book you need fights. Big, nasty, gross fights and DD has no short of those type of things. The leveling system has capped off nicely and it seemed like Dan and the team were actually being tested. The fights have more on the line. Dan feels responsible for his friends and that makes him dangerous but vulnerable. It’s going to take a lot more than brute strength and temp’s rage to kill the deeper they go.
Overall, I think the book was phenomenal and showed alot of depth. The only thing I would like to see is more high stakes or something earth shattering happen. I thought at times in this book we were going to see it but it never came to fruition. Everything just seems to be advancing so fast and easy. I would like the team to get knocked back a bit. Give them a big challenge. But, that’s just might be me!
April 7, 2026
This book was like 2% story and 98% lists + deus ex machina. I've read a lot of Hunter's books - like, a LOT - but I'm not sure I can deal with any more after this.
May 3, 2026
I am so mad that I have to wait for the next book.
May 12, 2026
Another glorious day in the Back Rooms
I loved all the red flags we still managed to dodge, legitimately put the book down with a sigh just for you to get me again!
Well done, can't wait for more.
Though it will, DCC 8 came out today and I finished this just in time. More dungeons!
I loved all the red flags we still managed to dodge, legitimately put the book down with a sigh just for you to get me again!
Well done, can't wait for more.
Though it will, DCC 8 came out today and I finished this just in time. More dungeons!
June 19, 2026
not my favorite of the 3, everyone is kind of stagnant and I don’t want to see any romance in my RPG books…you’re in the BACKROOMS
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 2, 2026
Just finished it on royal road. So far. The best series I have read. Discount Dan for number one then DCC.
June 6, 2026
Dan and his crew are gearing up to storm a twisted, nightmarish version of Disneyland and take the fight directly to the Franchisor, but before they can even think about launching that assault, Dan needs to gather some powerful new gear and expand his store community to make him capable of surviving the horrors that lie ahead
As they make their way through the freezing hellscape of the Holiday Cheer level, they're confronted by some of the most dangerous enemies they've encountered so far, pushing the group to its limits and raising the stakes higher than ever. Along the journey, they forge alliances with some unexpected characters, uncover several surprising revelations, and slowly begin piecing together a strategy for reaching the next stairwell and continuing their descent to the Franchisor.
The demented theme park was easily my favorite setting in the series so far. It felt like Disneyland had been dragged straight through the depths of hell, grotesquely corrupted, and then unleashed back into the world as a warped parody of itself. Every attraction, landmark, and encounter featured its own bizarre, unsettling twist, making the entire setting feel unpredictable and endlessly entertaining to explore. The creativity on display was impressive, and I found myself constantly looking forward to seeing what horrifying or ridiculous version of a familiar theme park staple would appear next. I absolutely loved it.
The Franchisor was a hilariously devious villain whose presence loomed over the entire story, and the book felt like one chaotic roller coaster from beginning to end. The humor, mayhem, and ever-escalating magical war crimes continue to be some of the series' greatest strengths, delivering plenty of laugh-out-loud moments while still maintaining genuine tension. I was impressed by how effectively the story balanced absurd comedy with high-stakes action and character progression. Even when things became completely ridiculous, the narrative never lost its momentum.
Definitely looking forward to Book 4!
As they make their way through the freezing hellscape of the Holiday Cheer level, they're confronted by some of the most dangerous enemies they've encountered so far, pushing the group to its limits and raising the stakes higher than ever. Along the journey, they forge alliances with some unexpected characters, uncover several surprising revelations, and slowly begin piecing together a strategy for reaching the next stairwell and continuing their descent to the Franchisor.
The demented theme park was easily my favorite setting in the series so far. It felt like Disneyland had been dragged straight through the depths of hell, grotesquely corrupted, and then unleashed back into the world as a warped parody of itself. Every attraction, landmark, and encounter featured its own bizarre, unsettling twist, making the entire setting feel unpredictable and endlessly entertaining to explore. The creativity on display was impressive, and I found myself constantly looking forward to seeing what horrifying or ridiculous version of a familiar theme park staple would appear next. I absolutely loved it.
The Franchisor was a hilariously devious villain whose presence loomed over the entire story, and the book felt like one chaotic roller coaster from beginning to end. The humor, mayhem, and ever-escalating magical war crimes continue to be some of the series' greatest strengths, delivering plenty of laugh-out-loud moments while still maintaining genuine tension. I was impressed by how effectively the story balanced absurd comedy with high-stakes action and character progression. Even when things became completely ridiculous, the narrative never lost its momentum.
Definitely looking forward to Book 4!
April 27, 2026
The standout feature here is the premise. We’ve seen warriors, mages, and even "battlemage farmers," but seeing a protagonist navigate a world through the lens of a Kiosk/Shopkeeper system is incredibly clever. Hunter manages to turn the "real world" frustrations of customer service and inventory management into high-stakes survival mechanics. It’s a relatable struggle for anyone who has ever had to lead or manage in a high-pressure environment.
Why It Hits the 4-Star Mark
The Pacing: Hunter is a pro at keeping the story moving. There’s rarely a dull moment as the protagonist navigates the "rules" of the kingdom. It has that addictive quality where you just want to see what the next "upgrade" or "transaction" will be.
While it doesn't quite reach the level of "laugh-out-loud" absurdity you might find in Dungeon Crawler Carl, it has a dry, witty edge that keeps the tone light without sacrificing the stakes.
You can tell the author understands leadership. The way the protagonist handles the chaotic situations thrown his way feels practical and grounded, making him easy to root for.
While the Kiosk system is brilliant, I would have loved to see a bit more "deep dive" lore into the Kingdom itself. Sometimes the mechanics of the shop take center stage so much that the broader political or historical landscape of the world feels a bit thin.
After the deep dive into humanity vs. AI in Operation: Bounce House, the stakes here feel a bit more "game-like." While that’s fun, it lacks that gut-punch emotional resonance that makes you feel "bad" about the future, which is a pro or a con depending on what you’re in the mood for!
Kiosk Kingdom is a solid, inventive entry into the genre. It’s perfect for readers who want a clever "system" that feels different from the standard "kill monster, get XP" loop. It’s a 4-star adventure that leaves you curious to see how big this kingdom can actually grow.
Why It Hits the 4-Star Mark
The Pacing: Hunter is a pro at keeping the story moving. There’s rarely a dull moment as the protagonist navigates the "rules" of the kingdom. It has that addictive quality where you just want to see what the next "upgrade" or "transaction" will be.
While it doesn't quite reach the level of "laugh-out-loud" absurdity you might find in Dungeon Crawler Carl, it has a dry, witty edge that keeps the tone light without sacrificing the stakes.
You can tell the author understands leadership. The way the protagonist handles the chaotic situations thrown his way feels practical and grounded, making him easy to root for.
While the Kiosk system is brilliant, I would have loved to see a bit more "deep dive" lore into the Kingdom itself. Sometimes the mechanics of the shop take center stage so much that the broader political or historical landscape of the world feels a bit thin.
After the deep dive into humanity vs. AI in Operation: Bounce House, the stakes here feel a bit more "game-like." While that’s fun, it lacks that gut-punch emotional resonance that makes you feel "bad" about the future, which is a pro or a con depending on what you’re in the mood for!
Kiosk Kingdom is a solid, inventive entry into the genre. It’s perfect for readers who want a clever "system" that feels different from the standard "kill monster, get XP" loop. It’s a 4-star adventure that leaves you curious to see how big this kingdom can actually grow.
Review of advance copy received from Author
I Should Not Have Finished This This Late
It is an unreasonable hour and I have emotions about Discount Dan’s Backroom Bargains Kiosk Kingdom.
First of all: James Hunter remains one of my favorite authors. Second only to 2008 USA Today’s Author of the Year Stephenie Meyer. This is a stable and mature ranking system and I stand by it.
Book three.
BOOK THREE.
Which means I am no longer “trying out a series.”
I live here now.
The fights? Yes. Good. Crunchy.
The looming Flayed Monarch situation? Oh we are simmering. We are marinating.
But what really got me this time was just… watching Dan build.
Expand.
Reinforce.
That weird little safe-space/store keeps evolving and every time it does my brain goes yes yes yes this is correct continue.
The Brownies pop in (tiny laundry cult agents of chaos) and every time they do I feel like someone shook the book. They are not the main event. They are seasoning. Unstable seasoning.
The demolition derby thing?
Sure. Of course. Naturally. Why wouldn’t that happen.
And then the artifact memory scene.
You know the one.
Absolutely illegal. Emotional ambush. I did not give consent to feel that much in a series where I mostly expect strategic chaos and escalating nonsense. That childhood dog memory had no business being that effective.
And THEN.
After everything.
After the battle.
After all of it.
Froyo. Slides. Croc.
That’s it. That’s the review.
I am undone by froyo.
Princess Ponypuff continues to exist in a way that feels cosmically correct. The kingdom keeps growing. The tension keeps tightening. I keep getting more attached than is reasonable.
I started this book like a reader.
I finished it like a feral mall goblin emotionally invested in a barter-powered sanctuary.
Five stars.
I am going to bed.
I will wake up and still be thinking about it.
It is an unreasonable hour and I have emotions about Discount Dan’s Backroom Bargains Kiosk Kingdom.
First of all: James Hunter remains one of my favorite authors. Second only to 2008 USA Today’s Author of the Year Stephenie Meyer. This is a stable and mature ranking system and I stand by it.
Book three.
BOOK THREE.
Which means I am no longer “trying out a series.”
I live here now.
The fights? Yes. Good. Crunchy.
The looming Flayed Monarch situation? Oh we are simmering. We are marinating.
But what really got me this time was just… watching Dan build.
Expand.
Reinforce.
That weird little safe-space/store keeps evolving and every time it does my brain goes yes yes yes this is correct continue.
The Brownies pop in (tiny laundry cult agents of chaos) and every time they do I feel like someone shook the book. They are not the main event. They are seasoning. Unstable seasoning.
The demolition derby thing?
Sure. Of course. Naturally. Why wouldn’t that happen.
And then the artifact memory scene.
You know the one.
Absolutely illegal. Emotional ambush. I did not give consent to feel that much in a series where I mostly expect strategic chaos and escalating nonsense. That childhood dog memory had no business being that effective.
And THEN.
After everything.
After the battle.
After all of it.
Froyo. Slides. Croc.
That’s it. That’s the review.
I am undone by froyo.
Princess Ponypuff continues to exist in a way that feels cosmically correct. The kingdom keeps growing. The tension keeps tightening. I keep getting more attached than is reasonable.
I started this book like a reader.
I finished it like a feral mall goblin emotionally invested in a barter-powered sanctuary.
Five stars.
I am going to bed.
I will wake up and still be thinking about it.
May 30, 2026
Series keeps getting better!
I won’t go into too much detail in this review, you can read my more detailed reviews of books one and two for that.
I will say this series went from four stars to five for me because the author finally addressed the lack of a character arc for the MC. I won’t go into detail how, but I’m much more confident there’s a great story potential here, not just for the world guiding and overall plot, which have only got more interesting in this book, but now with the MC’s character as well.
Now, the author still isn’t spending enough time in his store doing base building, in my opinion. The fights are overly drawn out when that ending is always known ahead of time, good guys win. So fights feel repetitive. The author could do himself a big favor by investing in the base building aspect as a means to progress the story and deliver payoffs for the reader that aren’t as predictable and solely reliant on plot progression and combat.
If this author invested more time in the story to be in the store, running the store, making it a better place for his employees and guests, it would balance out the combat heavy rest of his story and give us some real payoffs. I’m so annoyed, for instance, MC’s never once thought he should go find some hotel rooms or apartments to absorb or even thought about copying his hotel suite when he got the ability to replicate things he’s absorbed. So annoying! Like MC’s got two girls working 12 hours on and 12 off on a hot dog stand sleeping on cots, and his whole thoughts on the matter boil down to “I’ll do something about it later.”
But his characters are great, the world building is really interesting, much more so than DCC if I say so myself, and even the overall plot isn’t as tropey as it first appeared. There’s a LOT of potential in this story at this point. You should read it!
I won’t go into too much detail in this review, you can read my more detailed reviews of books one and two for that.
I will say this series went from four stars to five for me because the author finally addressed the lack of a character arc for the MC. I won’t go into detail how, but I’m much more confident there’s a great story potential here, not just for the world guiding and overall plot, which have only got more interesting in this book, but now with the MC’s character as well.
Now, the author still isn’t spending enough time in his store doing base building, in my opinion. The fights are overly drawn out when that ending is always known ahead of time, good guys win. So fights feel repetitive. The author could do himself a big favor by investing in the base building aspect as a means to progress the story and deliver payoffs for the reader that aren’t as predictable and solely reliant on plot progression and combat.
If this author invested more time in the story to be in the store, running the store, making it a better place for his employees and guests, it would balance out the combat heavy rest of his story and give us some real payoffs. I’m so annoyed, for instance, MC’s never once thought he should go find some hotel rooms or apartments to absorb or even thought about copying his hotel suite when he got the ability to replicate things he’s absorbed. So annoying! Like MC’s got two girls working 12 hours on and 12 off on a hot dog stand sleeping on cots, and his whole thoughts on the matter boil down to “I’ll do something about it later.”
But his characters are great, the world building is really interesting, much more so than DCC if I say so myself, and even the overall plot isn’t as tropey as it first appeared. There’s a LOT of potential in this story at this point. You should read it!
Review of advance copy received from Author
Dan just wanted to run his kiosks the best he could, he loved upgrading his backroom bargains store, for the enjoyment of his ever growing clientele, however since day one of his noclipping Dan had sworn he would get even with the Flayed Monarch and his skinless court. In order to get to the Monarch Dan and his friends knew they had to first take out the Franchisor, the guy behind the network of kiosks, a mighty tyrant who'd started off with good intentions too, but had gone down the slippery slope of unfettered capitalism. The Franchisor was to be found on the 99th floor, however in order to get there Dan's team had to go through many other floors, and do battle with monsters like the snowmaw hag, uncle sam, krampus, the russian tyrant, the christmas themed village as well as the games arcade and the 10,000 acre wood. This book is chock full of adventures, with monsters who are getting ever bigger and more dangerous, and who are all out to kill Dan's team. I love that they got to meet Pooh, and that the poor little bear had finally found friends even though his heart was still intent on finding his boy Christopher Robin. I love the way Croc, Jakob, Temperance and Harper follow Dan's lead, and always watch each other's backs. Onward to the next adventure for which I am sure James will come up with more fantastical and imaginative backdrops and monsters for our reading pleasure.
March 31, 2026
Title: A Slightly More Serious Discount Dan
Content Ratings: Language – R; Violence – R; Other – R
It is assumed that if you're reading this review, you're already familiar with the series. If not, go look at book 1 and 2 reviews and decide whether or not you want to start there. I'll wait. Assuming you're back and reading this, you're wondering whether to continue reading book 3. The answer is definitely yes.
Overall, it's mostly the same ingredients, although for me, the "recipe" seems slightly different. I felt like there was slightly less silliness or lightheartedness than before. Given the nature of the backrooms and the consequences of collecting powerful enemies, that does make sense, but I missed it. The only other thing that could be taken as a negative is that it seemed like a good 40% through the book before I really got invested, which seems strange given I'm 2 books into being very invested. All that said, it's for good reason - things are getting more complicated, and the enemies are ramping up. Also, this book starts to reveal more of the backstory behind the main characters and the backrooms and system, and those things simply aren't funny. All in all, a good and satisfying read and not just a cookie cutter of the previous books - there are changes with a purpose.
Content Ratings: Language – R; Violence – R; Other – R
It is assumed that if you're reading this review, you're already familiar with the series. If not, go look at book 1 and 2 reviews and decide whether or not you want to start there. I'll wait. Assuming you're back and reading this, you're wondering whether to continue reading book 3. The answer is definitely yes.
Overall, it's mostly the same ingredients, although for me, the "recipe" seems slightly different. I felt like there was slightly less silliness or lightheartedness than before. Given the nature of the backrooms and the consequences of collecting powerful enemies, that does make sense, but I missed it. The only other thing that could be taken as a negative is that it seemed like a good 40% through the book before I really got invested, which seems strange given I'm 2 books into being very invested. All that said, it's for good reason - things are getting more complicated, and the enemies are ramping up. Also, this book starts to reveal more of the backstory behind the main characters and the backrooms and system, and those things simply aren't funny. All in all, a good and satisfying read and not just a cookie cutter of the previous books - there are changes with a purpose.
March 31, 2026
Chaos? Check. Humor? check. Emotional moments that will make your eyes leak? Check and check.
For the savvy reader or listener who has made it this far into the Discount Dan series, this is where the rubber meets the road and all of the investments from the prior two books really start paying out heavy.
For all of the people who said this series lacked the depth or complexity of character of DCC, I invite you to read Kiosk Kingdom and have your mind changed. It takes time to build those things, to become attached to characters as if they are your family, to develop a deep caring and compassion for the world and all contained therein. The halfway point of this book made that wildly apparent to me, and I am confident this book will hold my number one slot for 2026.
For audiobook listeners-
Steve Campbell once again proves that he is exactly the voice the Backrooms needs, delivering a beautiful and incredibly flexible performance rife with emotion and wit. And who knew the guy had such a beautiful singing voice? 😉
James Hunter and Steve Campbell are a world class team, and Kiosk Kingdom is a delightful showcase of their combined might and otherworldly talents. If you disagree, I’ll eat my knockoff Versace bathrobe.
No mimics were harmed in the making of this review.
For the savvy reader or listener who has made it this far into the Discount Dan series, this is where the rubber meets the road and all of the investments from the prior two books really start paying out heavy.
For all of the people who said this series lacked the depth or complexity of character of DCC, I invite you to read Kiosk Kingdom and have your mind changed. It takes time to build those things, to become attached to characters as if they are your family, to develop a deep caring and compassion for the world and all contained therein. The halfway point of this book made that wildly apparent to me, and I am confident this book will hold my number one slot for 2026.
For audiobook listeners-
Steve Campbell once again proves that he is exactly the voice the Backrooms needs, delivering a beautiful and incredibly flexible performance rife with emotion and wit. And who knew the guy had such a beautiful singing voice? 😉
James Hunter and Steve Campbell are a world class team, and Kiosk Kingdom is a delightful showcase of their combined might and otherworldly talents. If you disagree, I’ll eat my knockoff Versace bathrobe.
No mimics were harmed in the making of this review.
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
In the third instalment of the backroom bargains series the author has reminded us, in the typical backrooms horrifying, gore filled, chaos fashion that at its core, it’s a human story. And it’s filled with all that comes from that, the good the bad and the promise of slides.
This book as cemented itself and the series as a character driven story that is more than just about survival. Even in the backrooms there’s more to life than surviving.
This book had me cackling, gasping, and almost brought me to tears. That last one is a claim few books can claim and no one is as surprised as I that this weird and wild book accomplished that researchers achievement.
Dan is Broken, battered, defeated, had his hopes shattered, earth rocked, drank endless amounts of beer, finally convinced croc to not make him watch new moon (which is definitively the lowest ranked twilight movie), danced, learned more about his friends, and learned what he’s willing to lose to win. All in all a fantastic book and I can’t wait to see what happens next for Croc and his totally normal human best friend Dan
This book as cemented itself and the series as a character driven story that is more than just about survival. Even in the backrooms there’s more to life than surviving.
This book had me cackling, gasping, and almost brought me to tears. That last one is a claim few books can claim and no one is as surprised as I that this weird and wild book accomplished that researchers achievement.
Dan is Broken, battered, defeated, had his hopes shattered, earth rocked, drank endless amounts of beer, finally convinced croc to not make him watch new moon (which is definitively the lowest ranked twilight movie), danced, learned more about his friends, and learned what he’s willing to lose to win. All in all a fantastic book and I can’t wait to see what happens next for Croc and his totally normal human best friend Dan
June 11, 2026
Holy… WHAT? This is so incredibly chaotic and bizarre in a way that shouldn’t work, but I can’t get enough.
If you want to feel like you’ve stepped directly into a murder fueled fever dream, this series is for you.
Each level feels like stepping into a chaotic hallucination built from twisted nostalgia and a delightful lack of self restraint.
A snow globe prison ruled by a sinister Krampus, a grotesque reimagining of Winnie the Pooh lurking through a blood soaked 10,000 Acre Wood, and a nightmarish version of Hungry Hungry Hippos transformed into ravenous, flesh craving beasts. Then, as if that weren’t enough, we’re thrown headfirst into warped echoes of Steamboat Willie and a haunting, malevolent Starbucks siren.
If you’ve read this whole review and didn’t leave, then I 10/10 recommend this series to you.
If you want to feel like you’ve stepped directly into a murder fueled fever dream, this series is for you.
Each level feels like stepping into a chaotic hallucination built from twisted nostalgia and a delightful lack of self restraint.
A snow globe prison ruled by a sinister Krampus, a grotesque reimagining of Winnie the Pooh lurking through a blood soaked 10,000 Acre Wood, and a nightmarish version of Hungry Hungry Hippos transformed into ravenous, flesh craving beasts. Then, as if that weren’t enough, we’re thrown headfirst into warped echoes of Steamboat Willie and a haunting, malevolent Starbucks siren.
If you’ve read this whole review and didn’t leave, then I 10/10 recommend this series to you.
April 5, 2026
kiosk kingdom manages to stay true to what keeps discount dan, discount dan, without trying to hard to stand apart.
Some people will say that it's just a DCC clone but truly James hunter has out done himself with this installation.
The classic humor, poking fun and slapstick comedy abounds, but darker themes play a heavy role in this book.
The darker side of what dan has to give up for those he loves, the memories he gives away for croc, the mirror images of himself in krampus and the fanchiser.
We finally get a more definitive answer to what the progenitor ship is and why the backrooms are so violent and terrifying.
There are so many threads to pursue and stories to tell. I truly can't wait for the next installment in this series.
Some people will say that it's just a DCC clone but truly James hunter has out done himself with this installation.
The classic humor, poking fun and slapstick comedy abounds, but darker themes play a heavy role in this book.
The darker side of what dan has to give up for those he loves, the memories he gives away for croc, the mirror images of himself in krampus and the fanchiser.
We finally get a more definitive answer to what the progenitor ship is and why the backrooms are so violent and terrifying.
There are so many threads to pursue and stories to tell. I truly can't wait for the next installment in this series.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 9, 2026
Okay, so there were too many battles, but that's to be expected in this type of book. Still, by the finale, I was getting a bit worn out.
With that out of the way, I love this series! It's creative, it's dark, it has depth, it has action and consequences.
Dan is making progress in growing and protecting his community, and taking the fight to his enemies. We are also getting answers to a lot of the overarching questions that started in the first book. Loved the reveals!
The story was going along at a steady pace, and I was having a good time, then a new character was introduced in the last third of the book. That thread was so poignant, so touching, that it kicked the book up to five stars. Love!
Also, the laundry brownies are hilarious.
With that out of the way, I love this series! It's creative, it's dark, it has depth, it has action and consequences.
Dan is making progress in growing and protecting his community, and taking the fight to his enemies. We are also getting answers to a lot of the overarching questions that started in the first book. Loved the reveals!
The story was going along at a steady pace, and I was having a good time, then a new character was introduced in the last third of the book. That thread was so poignant, so touching, that it kicked the book up to five stars. Love!
Also, the laundry brownies are hilarious.
June 12, 2026
I'm not going to throw any spoilers out there, but I'm pretty disappointed. The author sets specific conditions, then apparently forgets. Dan seems to forget things as well. And it's very, very repetitive. These failings (and others present in the book) are fairly clear marks of AI prose, as I mentioned in my review of the first book in the series. I'm convinced that either AI is being used more heavily as the author tries to speed toward the conclusion of the series, or it's just really sloppy writing and even worse note taking on the part of the writer. The first book was enjoyable but flawed, this latest just relies on inertia and character investment to keep people reading. I'm pretty sure I've never read anything this poorly written.
Review of advance copy received from Author
This has been the most wild, fever dream installment of Discount Dan yet. It's longer than the others have been, but the entire time has you just gripped for more. I've had dreams about the events in the book after reading it and woke up not sure if parts were from my own dreams or what I read.
Dan continues to expand the shop, he continues to progress down, continues to get stronger, meets new friends. He continues to have to fight against the absolute chaos that is the backrooms, and I'm here for all of it.
Thanks James for the early copy. It's been absolutely amazing, and extremely fun. When the next one comes out, I'm going to be right there ready to see what happens next.
Dan continues to expand the shop, he continues to progress down, continues to get stronger, meets new friends. He continues to have to fight against the absolute chaos that is the backrooms, and I'm here for all of it.
Thanks James for the early copy. It's been absolutely amazing, and extremely fun. When the next one comes out, I'm going to be right there ready to see what happens next.
March 6, 2026
Kiosk Kingdom truley lived up to the hype! I think this is my favorite of the 3 so far for the following reasons 1. Still inarguably inappropriately hilarious🤣 2. Great banter amongst the characters 3. ghastly stomach-wrenching Gore! 4. Exciting new characters 5. Major, new character, development and growth with new insights into their background pre-no clip 6. severe emotional damage (literally bawling when croc used lethal injection😭😭). Kiosk Kingdom had me feeling all the feels! This series keeps getting funnier, deeper and more epic. You need to read Kiosk Kingdom the second it releases! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💯🍺🍺
May 2, 2026
4 stars
I still liked this but I feel like the story progressed too quickly between floors. Obviously they want to beat the flayed monarch but they definitely needed more prep time and I wish we’d gotten it , I wasn’t a fan of the 49th floor or harper/dans potential romance .
As always I loved the store and croc . I also find relics really interesting so those are always good to hear about and I like the expanding store , I would probably read a novella about the store if the author wrote it . Winnie the Pooh and Christopher robin broke my heart and I was sure Pooh would die .
I think this one had higher stakes and that’s maybe why it didn’t work as well for me
I still liked this but I feel like the story progressed too quickly between floors. Obviously they want to beat the flayed monarch but they definitely needed more prep time and I wish we’d gotten it , I wasn’t a fan of the 49th floor or harper/dans potential romance .
As always I loved the store and croc . I also find relics really interesting so those are always good to hear about and I like the expanding store , I would probably read a novella about the store if the author wrote it . Winnie the Pooh and Christopher robin broke my heart and I was sure Pooh would die .
I think this one had higher stakes and that’s maybe why it didn’t work as well for me
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 9, 2026
fun
Dan continues his campaign to get deeper into the Backrooms. Along the way he faces protests over his business practices. Business growth pains. Laundry religion dogma issues. Krampus and a laser firing Rudolph. He frees slaves, connects more floors. Learns secrets about the Backrooms that reveal they are in far more trouble than they thought. And finally faces the Franchiser. He wins and now all the Kiosks are part of Discount Dan’s emporium empire.
A super humorous and dark comedy romp. Great fast pacing. Wonderful character development. The narrator was a treat. Please enjoy
Dan continues his campaign to get deeper into the Backrooms. Along the way he faces protests over his business practices. Business growth pains. Laundry religion dogma issues. Krampus and a laser firing Rudolph. He frees slaves, connects more floors. Learns secrets about the Backrooms that reveal they are in far more trouble than they thought. And finally faces the Franchiser. He wins and now all the Kiosks are part of Discount Dan’s emporium empire.
A super humorous and dark comedy romp. Great fast pacing. Wonderful character development. The narrator was a treat. Please enjoy
June 24, 2026
I was not expected to get emotional damage from this book! That scene with Dan giving up his last memory of his dog for Croc’s artifact BROKE me. I had literal tears. Then it got me sad again when the Franchiser Aka Christopher Robin has his moment with Pooh. This is supposed to make me laugh not cry! I loved the themed floors & the funny & twisted take on them. As always Croc is the shining star but I’d love more Princess Pony Puff, she’s mentioned but not present. Interested to see where the storyline goes with the spaceship & the blight etc. not sure if it’s a direction I’ll enjoy it going.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 1, 2026
Dan is at it again, he must venture into the lower levels of the Backrooms with his trusty companions Croc, whose a good boy, Fritz, and Synthis. Together they face a messed up snow globe and the strangest 10,000 Acre Woods ever put to paper.
Another great entry into the Discount Dan's books. Lots of action against increasingly difficult foes, and more of the best and maybe snarkiest item and skill descriptions ever written. Love the series my only negative would be not getting to the Franchisor let alone the Monarch. Still a real page turner.
Another great entry into the Discount Dan's books. Lots of action against increasingly difficult foes, and more of the best and maybe snarkiest item and skill descriptions ever written. Love the series my only negative would be not getting to the Franchisor let alone the Monarch. Still a real page turner.
April 9, 2026
Sadly this is the best book so far in the series. That being said imagine being so dependent on borrowed interest that you have to keep introducing more and more borrowed element to keep people reading. Either that or the author is incapable of original ideas. This feels like someone read Dungeon Crawler Carl changed the cat to a dog and then used Reddit and AI to write a book. It’s actually wild how unoriginal it is. And how many times can you use the same insults. BoD is references like twenty thousand times in this series. It wasn’t even mildly original or funny the first time.
April 14, 2026
Kiosk Kingdom by James Hunter has officially taken over as one of my favorite series, not just this year, but honestly in the last couple of years. This book hit everything I love, fast-paced action, sharp humor, and characters that feel like a chaotic, ride-or-die family. The banter is quick, funny, and constant, and the dynamic between the characters is what really makes it shine. I was completely hooked the entire time. At this point, I’m fully invested and just need the next book immediately because I am not ready to leave this world yet. 📚🔥🖤
April 16, 2026
Review: Booky three! Get set to have fun in meaningless ways as Discount Dan takes role playing to another level. The world building keeps getting more expansive as he levels up. The creepy factor goes up as well. Not a big fan of the backstory reveal. Detracted from the LitRPG genre effects by grounding the World with a SciFi themed origin. Enough to lose a star. I am sure that most readers will probobly not be as affected.
This read will take awhile what with all the questing/battles, so sit back, relax and be entertained.
Netgalley can suck it.
4.2/5
This read will take awhile what with all the questing/battles, so sit back, relax and be entertained.
Netgalley can suck it.
4.2/5
April 20, 2026
This book introduces new characters, fills in backstory on existing ones, levels everyone up, explains a bit more about what is really going on and continues the overall narrative so I'd call this one a successful entry in the series. The one portion I haven't quite decided on is the 1,000 Acre Woods. At times, I thought it would have been nice if the series did more of that sooner. At other times, I didn't want anymore of it. I did end hoping that bear doesn't show up again but I have a bad feeling he may.
May 18, 2026
"So, you've had a hard day at the office and suffered a catastrophic crippling blow that has left you tiptoeing on the line between life and death? Just another average Tuesday in Newfoundland. Crack the fridge and pull out a refreshing, medical-grade Zima—The #1 Bone Healing Juice on the Market! Guaranteed to make your Insides feel like Glimflam! Reward: The delicious, refreshing, lightly carbonated taste of Zima is its own reward, amiright?"
Croc is such a good boy. I think this book just came into my heart at the right time.
Croc is such a good boy. I think this book just came into my heart at the right time.
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