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Moments Frozen in Time: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
He meant to push her away. Instead, fate drew them closer.
Before the insult that could have shattered everything, something—an echo from the past—halts Fitzwilliam Darcy’s tongue. In that moment, the course of his life changes.
In this Pride and Prejudice reimagining, delicately threaded with mystery, Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet form an unlikely friendship during his stay at Netherfield. What begins with wary conversations and unexpected smiles grows into something far more dangerous to their hearts. But just as they begin to trust each other completely, Elizabeth vanishes without a trace.
Determined to uncover who spirited her away and why, Darcy is drawn into a web of secrets, half-truths, and forces he can scarcely explain—guided only by the invisible bond that has always pulled them together.
Told in alternating first-person perspectives, Moments Frozen in Time is a tale of pride, perception, and the unseen ties that can bind two souls. It is a love story where past and present intertwine, where a single unsaid sentence changes everything, and where finding her may mean defying both society and the limits of the natural world.
📖 Perfect for fans of heartfelt romance, Austen variations with a twist and slow-burn tension edged with mystery.
Will Darcy’s unshakeable resolve—and the bond he cannot name—be enough to bring her back? Or will she be lost to him forever?
Before the insult that could have shattered everything, something—an echo from the past—halts Fitzwilliam Darcy’s tongue. In that moment, the course of his life changes.
In this Pride and Prejudice reimagining, delicately threaded with mystery, Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet form an unlikely friendship during his stay at Netherfield. What begins with wary conversations and unexpected smiles grows into something far more dangerous to their hearts. But just as they begin to trust each other completely, Elizabeth vanishes without a trace.
Determined to uncover who spirited her away and why, Darcy is drawn into a web of secrets, half-truths, and forces he can scarcely explain—guided only by the invisible bond that has always pulled them together.
Told in alternating first-person perspectives, Moments Frozen in Time is a tale of pride, perception, and the unseen ties that can bind two souls. It is a love story where past and present intertwine, where a single unsaid sentence changes everything, and where finding her may mean defying both society and the limits of the natural world.
📖 Perfect for fans of heartfelt romance, Austen variations with a twist and slow-burn tension edged with mystery.
Will Darcy’s unshakeable resolve—and the bond he cannot name—be enough to bring her back? Or will she be lost to him forever?
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Published September 9, 2025
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September 13, 2025
Messages from Above!
Eventually, this becomes another "keep Elizabeth Bennet away from Fitzwilliam Darcy" but with a lot of unique angles.
LOVED IT!
My favorite from this author.
Eventually, this becomes another "keep Elizabeth Bennet away from Fitzwilliam Darcy" but with a lot of unique angles.
LOVED IT!
My favorite from this author.
September 12, 2025
well written but kinda bleak tone
Love this author! Another emotionally charged & insightful piece of work which I enjoyed despite it being rather bleak most of the chapters. Betrayal based crime committed by the vile Bennet family as well as local citizens & even perceived friends. Frankly shocked as i read but the plot supported the shocking treachery. The Bennet Sisters are brought together early in story in familial love by their departed grandmother (no, it works) & Lady Anne (also departed) guides FD to find his way to open up to love. My take is the wuss behavior of Bingley’s friendship contributes to Darcy’s hardening of the heart—+ he is always on guard bc of Caroline’s potential ‘romantic’ overtures! So. There’s a clever twist in the betrayal i never saw coming which made me :-0
—i hated but enjoyed the diabolical cleverness of the scheme. There’s a wonderful belated HEA; confrontation w/the betrayer whereby Lady Helen is marvelous in defending ODC too. Prolly a five star ⭐️ valued read but honestly i, as a fan can only stand so much angst (sorry MA) definitely recommend —but idk if i will yet move title to my reread list.
Love this author! Another emotionally charged & insightful piece of work which I enjoyed despite it being rather bleak most of the chapters. Betrayal based crime committed by the vile Bennet family as well as local citizens & even perceived friends. Frankly shocked as i read but the plot supported the shocking treachery. The Bennet Sisters are brought together early in story in familial love by their departed grandmother (no, it works) & Lady Anne (also departed) guides FD to find his way to open up to love. My take is the wuss behavior of Bingley’s friendship contributes to Darcy’s hardening of the heart—+ he is always on guard bc of Caroline’s potential ‘romantic’ overtures! So. There’s a clever twist in the betrayal i never saw coming which made me :-0
—i hated but enjoyed the diabolical cleverness of the scheme. There’s a wonderful belated HEA; confrontation w/the betrayer whereby Lady Helen is marvelous in defending ODC too. Prolly a five star ⭐️ valued read but honestly i, as a fan can only stand so much angst (sorry MA) definitely recommend —but idk if i will yet move title to my reread list.
September 9, 2025
While attending the Meryton Assembly Darcy is about to insult an unknown lady when supernatural forces intervene. This changes the course of his whole acquaintance with Elizabeth Bennet, the unknown lady. During the following weeks they form a friendship and come to know each other better. Soon they are secretly in love.
Then Elizabeth unexpectedly vanishes without a trace and Darcy is left to uncover where she is and who is responsible for her disappearance.
Will Darcy be able to find Elizabeth? Who is responsible for this whole affair? And will their beginning love survive the separation and the evoking scandal?
This variation was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I always like her variations very much, this one is no exception, I enjoyed it very much. I always enjoy this author’s writing because there is not much drama between Darcy and Elizabeth. They normally don’t have many misunderstandings between them and come together early to fight common enemies who try to come between them and separate them. This is also the case here. After Darcy finds Elizabeth (*secret secret*) they need to fight the culprits and all others who are against their union.
The book is written in the first person narrative and tells the story from Darcy and Elizabeth’s point of view (with a few exceptions). We are therefore also able to know about their feelings and thinking. Due to the changing point of view we often know the feelings and thingings of both in one particle scene. I like that very much. But don’t worry, that does not mean that every situation is written twice from both points of view, the second description is mostly only briefly and then the story moves on.
Due to Elizabeth's disappearance and Darcy's search for her and later for the culprits the book was for most parts really thrilling and captivating. I was not able to put it down.
I really enjoyed that there is no insult at the Meryton Assembly. Due to the supernatural interference Darcy, from the very beginning, sees Elizabeth as the lovely lady she is and does not fight his attraction. Elizabeth, too, acts differently due to the lack of insult and is not wounded in her pride and therefore does not harbour prejudices against the gentleman. She can therefore also give in to her attraction. I like this smooth beginning between them very much because they can pursue what was always there - they are attracted to one another, they like one another and they want to know each other better.
I like that Darcy is, due to the supernatural interference, much more at ease while coming to know Elizabeth. He doesn’t fight his feelings and he doesn’t flee them. Therefore he and Elizabeth come to know each other. And because they mostly meet each other on Oakham Mount they are uninterrupted and speak a bit more candidly than in company. Darcy is able to show Elizabeth his real self without that haughty mask he often dons in society.
I never thought I would ever say this, but I loved Lydia in this variation. She is such a great and loyal sister. I love that Elizabeth's efforts in improving the manners of her sisters take fruit and that they are now such lovable girls. But they nevertheless don't lose their essentials. Lydia is still a lively fifteen year old girl but with her improved manners she is utterly charming.
There are many villains in the story, some are only thoughtless, others are schemers. Fortunately, in the end, the villains are not able to separate Darcy and Elizabeth.
If you like to know how a supernatural intervention can alter the course of Darcy and Elizabeth's union you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Then Elizabeth unexpectedly vanishes without a trace and Darcy is left to uncover where she is and who is responsible for her disappearance.
Will Darcy be able to find Elizabeth? Who is responsible for this whole affair? And will their beginning love survive the separation and the evoking scandal?
This variation was very well written by the author Melissa Anne. I always like her variations very much, this one is no exception, I enjoyed it very much. I always enjoy this author’s writing because there is not much drama between Darcy and Elizabeth. They normally don’t have many misunderstandings between them and come together early to fight common enemies who try to come between them and separate them. This is also the case here. After Darcy finds Elizabeth (*secret secret*) they need to fight the culprits and all others who are against their union.
The book is written in the first person narrative and tells the story from Darcy and Elizabeth’s point of view (with a few exceptions). We are therefore also able to know about their feelings and thinking. Due to the changing point of view we often know the feelings and thingings of both in one particle scene. I like that very much. But don’t worry, that does not mean that every situation is written twice from both points of view, the second description is mostly only briefly and then the story moves on.
Due to Elizabeth's disappearance and Darcy's search for her and later for the culprits the book was for most parts really thrilling and captivating. I was not able to put it down.
I really enjoyed that there is no insult at the Meryton Assembly. Due to the supernatural interference Darcy, from the very beginning, sees Elizabeth as the lovely lady she is and does not fight his attraction. Elizabeth, too, acts differently due to the lack of insult and is not wounded in her pride and therefore does not harbour prejudices against the gentleman. She can therefore also give in to her attraction. I like this smooth beginning between them very much because they can pursue what was always there - they are attracted to one another, they like one another and they want to know each other better.
I like that Darcy is, due to the supernatural interference, much more at ease while coming to know Elizabeth. He doesn’t fight his feelings and he doesn’t flee them. Therefore he and Elizabeth come to know each other. And because they mostly meet each other on Oakham Mount they are uninterrupted and speak a bit more candidly than in company. Darcy is able to show Elizabeth his real self without that haughty mask he often dons in society.
I never thought I would ever say this, but I loved Lydia in this variation. She is such a great and loyal sister. I love that Elizabeth's efforts in improving the manners of her sisters take fruit and that they are now such lovable girls. But they nevertheless don't lose their essentials. Lydia is still a lively fifteen year old girl but with her improved manners she is utterly charming.
There are many villains in the story, some are only thoughtless, others are schemers. Fortunately, in the end, the villains are not able to separate Darcy and Elizabeth.
If you like to know how a supernatural intervention can alter the course of Darcy and Elizabeth's union you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of the book from the author and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 17, 2025
Interesting
Both Elizabeth and Darcy are influenced at very strategic times by voices in their heads of beloved ancestors long dead, for Darcy his mother, for Elizabeth her grandmother Bennett. Due to this influence, Darcy and Elizabeth come to care for each other far sooner than usual, but Caroline Bingley won't give up Darcy without a fight.
Although the romance is lovely, the evil intentions of Caroline Bingley are cartoonishly bad, and her success with her malevolent plans is astonishing and ludicrous. It's amazing to me that she, in league with Mr and Mrs Bennett, would go to the extreme trouble, not to mention the exorbitant expense, of sabotaging Darcy's and Elizabeth's romance, all supposedly so that Jane can have Bingley. Just doesn't make sense. What also doesn't make sense is the lack of caution on Darcy's part after a scene in which Caroline poisons Elizabeth's tea. Nothing is done about it, and no one even tells Mr Bingley about what Caroline has done. It's crazy and too silly to fathom.
The book is written well enough, but I can only recommend it with big reservations.
Both Elizabeth and Darcy are influenced at very strategic times by voices in their heads of beloved ancestors long dead, for Darcy his mother, for Elizabeth her grandmother Bennett. Due to this influence, Darcy and Elizabeth come to care for each other far sooner than usual, but Caroline Bingley won't give up Darcy without a fight.
Although the romance is lovely, the evil intentions of Caroline Bingley are cartoonishly bad, and her success with her malevolent plans is astonishing and ludicrous. It's amazing to me that she, in league with Mr and Mrs Bennett, would go to the extreme trouble, not to mention the exorbitant expense, of sabotaging Darcy's and Elizabeth's romance, all supposedly so that Jane can have Bingley. Just doesn't make sense. What also doesn't make sense is the lack of caution on Darcy's part after a scene in which Caroline poisons Elizabeth's tea. Nothing is done about it, and no one even tells Mr Bingley about what Caroline has done. It's crazy and too silly to fathom.
The book is written well enough, but I can only recommend it with big reservations.
September 6, 2025
I immensely enjoyed Moments Frozen in Time. In the story, Darcy hears a voice from his past preventing him from making the insulting remark against Elizabeth and instead, he gets to know her better and falls in love with her sooner than in canon. This does not mean all will go smoothly for ODC, though. They will have to deal with villains who will try to prevent them from being together.
The story is an enjoyable roller-coaster ride for readers and ODC alike. The author takes Darcy and Elizabeth on a journey with many twists and turns that kept me in suspense. I was rooting for them to be together and cheering when the villains were punished. I loved Darcy and Elizabeth in this story. She is sweet, charming, brave, loving and caring toward the people she holds dear. Darcy is dashing and protective, charming and swoonworthy. I also liked Lydia, who plays an important role in the story. She is not the annoying careless teenager like in canon and even helps Darcy in saving Elizabeth. I found the story exciting, fun and romantic and I hope other readers will enjoy it as much as I did.
The story is an enjoyable roller-coaster ride for readers and ODC alike. The author takes Darcy and Elizabeth on a journey with many twists and turns that kept me in suspense. I was rooting for them to be together and cheering when the villains were punished. I loved Darcy and Elizabeth in this story. She is sweet, charming, brave, loving and caring toward the people she holds dear. Darcy is dashing and protective, charming and swoonworthy. I also liked Lydia, who plays an important role in the story. She is not the annoying careless teenager like in canon and even helps Darcy in saving Elizabeth. I found the story exciting, fun and romantic and I hope other readers will enjoy it as much as I did.
August 18, 2025
This story starts with Darcy about to make his usual insult at the Meryton assembly, but before he can, time seems to stop as he hears the voice of his long-dead mother speaking to him before he can put his hessian in his mouth. When the chapters switch POVs, we learn that Elizabeth has heard from her deceased Grandmother Bennet. Darcy is knocked off his high horse before his pride can overtake him, and Elizabeth is preached patience before prejudice, which leads to a much better beginning for our couple.
The characters are fantastic. I’m usually rather picky about my JAFF characters, but here they were well characterized and maintained their characterizations throughout the story. Our usual locations are well written and true to canon. I love that we got to see more growth in the Bennet sisters, and I was especially pleased with Lydia, which says something because I can often not stand to so much as read her dialogue, much less her name.
Despite having read an ARC copy, the writing was well done and edited, although I don’t think it had been to Melissa Anne’s editor just yet. I didn’t notice a lot of modern language that might have pulled me out of the story, there were no pacing issues, and nothing I can think of that might’ve been lacking. The villains were as expected, but the way the conflict began to rise was not what I had expected. I was not expecting the primary villain to be as villainish as they were.
The dialogue was wonderful and natural, emotions and opinions weren’t given too quickly or openly, and the interactions felt natural. The ending wrapped up a little quicker than I thought it might, but it everything was tied up well and realistically. If I could’ve chosen anything to add in, I would’ve wanted more tender moments between our couple, but then again, I could overdose on such moments and still desire more.
Melissa Anne always knocks it out of the park for me, and I can’t wait to purchase this for my shelves so I can read it again and again.
The characters are fantastic. I’m usually rather picky about my JAFF characters, but here they were well characterized and maintained their characterizations throughout the story. Our usual locations are well written and true to canon. I love that we got to see more growth in the Bennet sisters, and I was especially pleased with Lydia, which says something because I can often not stand to so much as read her dialogue, much less her name.
Despite having read an ARC copy, the writing was well done and edited, although I don’t think it had been to Melissa Anne’s editor just yet. I didn’t notice a lot of modern language that might have pulled me out of the story, there were no pacing issues, and nothing I can think of that might’ve been lacking. The villains were as expected, but the way the conflict began to rise was not what I had expected. I was not expecting the primary villain to be as villainish as they were.
The dialogue was wonderful and natural, emotions and opinions weren’t given too quickly or openly, and the interactions felt natural. The ending wrapped up a little quicker than I thought it might, but it everything was tied up well and realistically. If I could’ve chosen anything to add in, I would’ve wanted more tender moments between our couple, but then again, I could overdose on such moments and still desire more.
Melissa Anne always knocks it out of the park for me, and I can’t wait to purchase this for my shelves so I can read it again and again.
August 14, 2025
I'm amazed!!!! This is unlike any P&P variation I have ever read! The storyline is so wonderfully woven with Canon and new ideas that I literally didn't put it down!! It took me a little over 6 hours, but I absolutely loved this story!
Way to go, Melissa Anne!!! I know that this was a bit of a stretch for you with the alternating POVs, but you exceeded my expectations so well!!!
I won't give any spoilers (except one), but there's some unexpected characters, some unexpected villains, some edge-of-your-seat moments, some excellent comeuppance, and, (here's the spoiler), of course, a happily ever after for ODC!
I received this book as an ARC in return for an honest review.
Way to go, Melissa Anne!!! I know that this was a bit of a stretch for you with the alternating POVs, but you exceeded my expectations so well!!!
I won't give any spoilers (except one), but there's some unexpected characters, some unexpected villains, some edge-of-your-seat moments, some excellent comeuppance, and, (here's the spoiler), of course, a happily ever after for ODC!
I received this book as an ARC in return for an honest review.
September 12, 2025
Unique Perspective and Character Development
Melissa Anne’s novel, Moments Frozen in Time, offers a fresh approach to the classic tale by introducing long-deceased relatives who enter the subconscious of Darcy and Elizabeth. This narrative device gives both characters a unique opportunity to view situations from the other's perspective, fostering a deeper understanding between them. While this helps them become more familiar with each other, their relationship is not free from challenges.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s courtship is likened to having "one foot on the banana peel and another on the ledge," illustrating the precariousness of their romantic journey. Their path is complicated by the involvement of friends and family, some of whom might better be described as foes. Several individuals harbor hidden agendas, motivated by selfish interests that threaten to keep the couple apart. This dynamic adds tension and intrigue, maintaining reader engagement and building anticipation for confrontations.
Familiar antagonists, such as Caroline Bingley, play their expected roles, while other characters emerge as surprising adversaries. Their actions are intended to create distance between Darcy and Elizabeth, motivated by their own interests. Elizabeth is removed from Meryton under false pretenses and vanishes, while Darcy embarks on a nearly futile search for her. False narratives were told for various purposes. These actions are portrayed as especially egregious, pushing the boundaries of acceptable behavior. However, the story ultimately delivers satisfying justice, as the "baddies" receive their comeuppance in a dramatic fashion. Readers are likely to be both entertained and angered on behalf of the couple, contributing to the book’s emotional impact.
A Moment Frozen in Time is a compelling and emotional read worth recommending. The reviewer notes receiving an early copy but was compelled to purchase an additional copy, underscoring the book’s appeal and value.
Melissa Anne’s novel, Moments Frozen in Time, offers a fresh approach to the classic tale by introducing long-deceased relatives who enter the subconscious of Darcy and Elizabeth. This narrative device gives both characters a unique opportunity to view situations from the other's perspective, fostering a deeper understanding between them. While this helps them become more familiar with each other, their relationship is not free from challenges.
Darcy and Elizabeth’s courtship is likened to having "one foot on the banana peel and another on the ledge," illustrating the precariousness of their romantic journey. Their path is complicated by the involvement of friends and family, some of whom might better be described as foes. Several individuals harbor hidden agendas, motivated by selfish interests that threaten to keep the couple apart. This dynamic adds tension and intrigue, maintaining reader engagement and building anticipation for confrontations.
Familiar antagonists, such as Caroline Bingley, play their expected roles, while other characters emerge as surprising adversaries. Their actions are intended to create distance between Darcy and Elizabeth, motivated by their own interests. Elizabeth is removed from Meryton under false pretenses and vanishes, while Darcy embarks on a nearly futile search for her. False narratives were told for various purposes. These actions are portrayed as especially egregious, pushing the boundaries of acceptable behavior. However, the story ultimately delivers satisfying justice, as the "baddies" receive their comeuppance in a dramatic fashion. Readers are likely to be both entertained and angered on behalf of the couple, contributing to the book’s emotional impact.
A Moment Frozen in Time is a compelling and emotional read worth recommending. The reviewer notes receiving an early copy but was compelled to purchase an additional copy, underscoring the book’s appeal and value.
September 21, 2025
A Pride and Prejudice variation where at the Meryton Assembly just as Darcy was about to start his insult to Elizabeth he hears the voice of his mother. How will that change his future, and when Elizabeth hears her grandmother how will the future of the Bennet sisters change. Especially with the actions of the Bingleys.
An entertaining and well-written story
An entertaining and well-written story
September 13, 2025
I loved this book .
Read an advanced copy with joy.
Very happy to leave this review.
Read an advanced copy with joy.
Very happy to leave this review.
October 2, 2025
I liked the romance between Darcy and Elizabeth, but there were some significant plot holes that lowered my rating.
Caroline tries to poison Elizabeth, and Darcy does NOTHING about it? As the story progressed, the plausibility became increasingly tenuous. I’m not a fan of occultic plots like communication with the dead. I think this story would have worked better without this plot device, but at least it doesn’t overwhelm the story.
Caroline tries to poison Elizabeth, and Darcy does NOTHING about it? As the story progressed, the plausibility became increasingly tenuous. I’m not a fan of occultic plots like communication with the dead. I think this story would have worked better without this plot device, but at least it doesn’t overwhelm the story.
October 27, 2025
Intense
I love the concept and that it was masterfully executed. There are a lot of unique situations and unexpected moments, that maintain the attention and interest to go on turning pages. I really enjoyed the story and will read it again for sure!
I love the concept and that it was masterfully executed. There are a lot of unique situations and unexpected moments, that maintain the attention and interest to go on turning pages. I really enjoyed the story and will read it again for sure!
January 28, 2026
Keeps getting better and better
I had the privilege of being able to ARC this story, but then borrowed it on KU to read it again. I have added this to my list to buy in the future.
As you can see from several of the other reviews, there is a little paranormal/supernatural element of this story, but it is very subtle yet immensely impactful.
Have you ever wondered what would happen if you or someone could stop Darcy before he made his famous insult at the assembly? Well, in this variation, you get to explore that possibility. From the spiritual realm Darcy‘s mother along with Elizabeth’s grandmother both remind each of lessons learned in the past. These reminders spared our favorite couple months if not years of anger, distrust, anxiety, and more. Through this prodding, Darcy comes to realize the treasure before him and starts to see Elizabeth and her sisters in a different light.
Then, of course, the villains arrive; some were a complete and utter surprise, but totally fit with the story.
One thing I love about Melissa Anne’s stories are that there’s usually very little conflict between Darcy and Elizabeth and I love that they come together sooner than later.
As you can tell from my opening comment, this is the second time I’ve read this, and it will not be the last.
UPDATE: 1/27/26 the audiobook just came out & it is wonderful! Benjamin Fife & Elizabeth Grace both did a wonderful job.
I had the privilege of being able to ARC this story, but then borrowed it on KU to read it again. I have added this to my list to buy in the future.
As you can see from several of the other reviews, there is a little paranormal/supernatural element of this story, but it is very subtle yet immensely impactful.
Have you ever wondered what would happen if you or someone could stop Darcy before he made his famous insult at the assembly? Well, in this variation, you get to explore that possibility. From the spiritual realm Darcy‘s mother along with Elizabeth’s grandmother both remind each of lessons learned in the past. These reminders spared our favorite couple months if not years of anger, distrust, anxiety, and more. Through this prodding, Darcy comes to realize the treasure before him and starts to see Elizabeth and her sisters in a different light.
Then, of course, the villains arrive; some were a complete and utter surprise, but totally fit with the story.
One thing I love about Melissa Anne’s stories are that there’s usually very little conflict between Darcy and Elizabeth and I love that they come together sooner than later.
As you can tell from my opening comment, this is the second time I’ve read this, and it will not be the last.
UPDATE: 1/27/26 the audiobook just came out & it is wonderful! Benjamin Fife & Elizabeth Grace both did a wonderful job.
August 20, 2025
This story kicks off at the Meryton assembly, just as Darcy is about to deliver his classic insult - but time literally stops! He hears his late mother's voice, and suddenly, everything shifts. Meanwhile, Elizabeth gets a nudge from her own grandmother from beyond. These little supernatural moments steer both of them toward a better beginning - Darcy sets aside pride to actually let things progress, and Elizabeth learns patience. It is clever, heartfelt, and sets the tone for a really satisfying journey.
My test for a book is whether I have trouble putting it down - this one delivers! I have a couple of late nights to prove it. The mix of canon and new ideas is so well done! It feels fresh without losing that Austen charm. I thought the alternating POVs would be confusing and Melissa Anne had said that this was the first book in which she had attempted this approach. Well, it works very well, keeping things interesting. Great job! The romance between Darcy and Elizabeth builds naturally and sweetly. You get a HEA, of course, but the road there is full of surprises.
The Bennet sisters are given real depth, especially Lydia (yes, Lydia!). She is written in a way that makes her likable - something not many variations pull off. The usual villains show up, but not in the ways you expect. There are twists, unexpected characters, and some truly satisfying moments of justice. The only thing that surprised me were Mr. Bennet's actions. I am not sure I ever fully understood the why behind them.
Even as an ARC, the writing feels polished. The dialogue is natural, emotions are revealed slowly and realistically, and the pacing is great. If anything, the ending wraps up a little fast, but everything gets tied up nicely. Or it could be that I just wanted to book to last longer :-) Darcy and Elizabeth have some lovely tender moments.
Finally, this is one of those JAFF stories that sticks with you. I highly recommended it. I received this book as an ARC and this is my honest review.
My test for a book is whether I have trouble putting it down - this one delivers! I have a couple of late nights to prove it. The mix of canon and new ideas is so well done! It feels fresh without losing that Austen charm. I thought the alternating POVs would be confusing and Melissa Anne had said that this was the first book in which she had attempted this approach. Well, it works very well, keeping things interesting. Great job! The romance between Darcy and Elizabeth builds naturally and sweetly. You get a HEA, of course, but the road there is full of surprises.
The Bennet sisters are given real depth, especially Lydia (yes, Lydia!). She is written in a way that makes her likable - something not many variations pull off. The usual villains show up, but not in the ways you expect. There are twists, unexpected characters, and some truly satisfying moments of justice. The only thing that surprised me were Mr. Bennet's actions. I am not sure I ever fully understood the why behind them.
Even as an ARC, the writing feels polished. The dialogue is natural, emotions are revealed slowly and realistically, and the pacing is great. If anything, the ending wraps up a little fast, but everything gets tied up nicely. Or it could be that I just wanted to book to last longer :-) Darcy and Elizabeth have some lovely tender moments.
Finally, this is one of those JAFF stories that sticks with you. I highly recommended it. I received this book as an ARC and this is my honest review.
September 21, 2025
I loved it!
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. Perfect for fans of heartfelt romance, Austen variations with a twist and slow-burn tension edged with mystery. He meant to push her away, instead, fate drew them closer.
Before the insult that could have shattered everything, something, an echo from the past, halts Fitzwilliam Darcy’s tongue. In that moment, the course of his life changes.
In this Pride and Prejudice reimagining, delicately threaded with mystery, Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet form an unlikely friendship during his stay at Netherfield. What begins with wary conversations and unexpected smiles grows into something far more dangerous to their hearts, but just as they begin to trust each other completely, Elizabeth vanishes without a trace.
Determined to uncover who spirited her away and why, Darcy is drawn into a web of secrets, half-truths, and forces he can scarcely explain, guided only by the invisible bond that has always pulled them together.
Told in alternating first-person perspectives, this is a tale of pride, perception, and the unseen ties that can bind two souls. It is a love story where past and present intertwine, where a single unsaid sentence changes everything, and where finding her may mean defying both society and the limits of the natural world. Will Darcy’s unshakeable resolve, and the bond he cannot name, be enough to bring her back, or will she be lost to him forever? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. Perfect for fans of heartfelt romance, Austen variations with a twist and slow-burn tension edged with mystery. He meant to push her away, instead, fate drew them closer.
Before the insult that could have shattered everything, something, an echo from the past, halts Fitzwilliam Darcy’s tongue. In that moment, the course of his life changes.
In this Pride and Prejudice reimagining, delicately threaded with mystery, Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet form an unlikely friendship during his stay at Netherfield. What begins with wary conversations and unexpected smiles grows into something far more dangerous to their hearts, but just as they begin to trust each other completely, Elizabeth vanishes without a trace.
Determined to uncover who spirited her away and why, Darcy is drawn into a web of secrets, half-truths, and forces he can scarcely explain, guided only by the invisible bond that has always pulled them together.
Told in alternating first-person perspectives, this is a tale of pride, perception, and the unseen ties that can bind two souls. It is a love story where past and present intertwine, where a single unsaid sentence changes everything, and where finding her may mean defying both society and the limits of the natural world. Will Darcy’s unshakeable resolve, and the bond he cannot name, be enough to bring her back, or will she be lost to him forever? So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
September 17, 2025
Have you ever had words of your mother or father (or someone in your life) come back to you as you are in a perplexing situation? In this story both Elizabeth and Darcy have dead relations speak to them as they are about to make or decide on words or opinions which could affect their relationship. They are warned to both to wait and advised that things will turn out on more than one occasion (by his mother and her grandmother). I did like that part of the advice given had to do with Elizabeth becoming more involved with her younger sisters and giving them guidance. Later in the story Darcy also becomes involved with steering them...more to that but not going to spoil the story for you.
Both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet were failures in this variation. Caroline acts more vile than in canon and she has a history!!! (Again...not going to SPOIL).
Gossip plays a part BIG TIME and Lady Matlock steps in to help here.
ODC (without that insult) become friends early and take steps to get around Mr. Bennet not giving his approval for either courtship or a marriage.
Lydia is a surprise in this story and I did like her change. The story ends but then we are given an epilogue. I recommend this story. I have enjoyed all the stories I have read by this author.
Both Mr. and Mrs. Bennet were failures in this variation. Caroline acts more vile than in canon and she has a history!!! (Again...not going to SPOIL).
Gossip plays a part BIG TIME and Lady Matlock steps in to help here.
ODC (without that insult) become friends early and take steps to get around Mr. Bennet not giving his approval for either courtship or a marriage.
Lydia is a surprise in this story and I did like her change. The story ends but then we are given an epilogue. I recommend this story. I have enjoyed all the stories I have read by this author.
August 30, 2025
Darcy and Elizabeth have supernatural help from their ancestors. So at the assembly in Meryton Darcy’s mother saves Darcy from insulting Elizabeth and Elizabeth’s grandmother counsels Elizabeth and helps keeps her temper in check. Her grandmother also encourages Elizabeth to take better care of her younger sisters. It is heartwarming to experience that all of her younger sisters are happy to have a better relationship with their sisters. Thus Mrs Bennet bad influence is lessened. Lydia has a knack for eavesdropping and learns a lot of useful information.
An attachment between Darcy and Elizabeth is quickly formed, not everyone is happy with this development. As a result Elizabeth disappears on the way to London, just when they are about to be engaged. Darcy however isn’t discouraged and he searches tirelessly for her. Darcy is not only Elizabeth hero, but helps all of her sisters.
I recommend you join a swoon worthy Darcy in his quest to find Elizabeth.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review
An attachment between Darcy and Elizabeth is quickly formed, not everyone is happy with this development. As a result Elizabeth disappears on the way to London, just when they are about to be engaged. Darcy however isn’t discouraged and he searches tirelessly for her. Darcy is not only Elizabeth hero, but helps all of her sisters.
I recommend you join a swoon worthy Darcy in his quest to find Elizabeth.
I received a free copy in exchange for an honest review
September 12, 2025
otherworldly ancestors and a particularly creative termagant…
I received an advance copy, but I also wanted to comment on the published version:
If you’re a fan of this author’s books, you’ll find many of the author’s hallmarks in this one - Lizzy discovering what ‘home’ really is, a thoughtful Darcy, external forces driving the plot rather than ODC conflict, etc. This book comes with a little added fun, though!
The completed version starts out with a beloved quote about the willing suspension of disbelief, and the author makes it easy for us to do so. D&E get a little help from beloved relatives from the great beyond, but it doesn’t totally dominate the plot.
Caro gets more creative in this one, too. She’s appalling as usual, but with even more cunning - she manages to doom herself in a particularly unique way.
Definitely worth a read even if you’re not into supernatural themes - there’s a lot to enjoy beyond that aspect!
I received an advance copy, but I also wanted to comment on the published version:
If you’re a fan of this author’s books, you’ll find many of the author’s hallmarks in this one - Lizzy discovering what ‘home’ really is, a thoughtful Darcy, external forces driving the plot rather than ODC conflict, etc. This book comes with a little added fun, though!
The completed version starts out with a beloved quote about the willing suspension of disbelief, and the author makes it easy for us to do so. D&E get a little help from beloved relatives from the great beyond, but it doesn’t totally dominate the plot.
Caro gets more creative in this one, too. She’s appalling as usual, but with even more cunning - she manages to doom herself in a particularly unique way.
Definitely worth a read even if you’re not into supernatural themes - there’s a lot to enjoy beyond that aspect!
October 24, 2025
Review also posted on my blog
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This Pride and Prejudice reimagining shows us events from both Fitzwilliam Darcy's and Elizabeth Bennet's points of view.
At those pivotal moments where careless speech or rash judgement will keep them at odds, something causes them to pause and think again. The voices of their better angels or perhaps guardian angels intercede.
They develop a friendship, which blossoms into something deeper.
Obstacles along the road to happiness, include Mr Bennet's willingness to listen to his wife's gossip.
Miss Bingley is determined to be Mrs Darcy and views any malicious scheme to be justified.
This variation includes vexation, kidnapping and rescue. Most disturbingly, there are not one but two Caroline Bingley's.
Great story.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
This Pride and Prejudice reimagining shows us events from both Fitzwilliam Darcy's and Elizabeth Bennet's points of view.
At those pivotal moments where careless speech or rash judgement will keep them at odds, something causes them to pause and think again. The voices of their better angels or perhaps guardian angels intercede.
They develop a friendship, which blossoms into something deeper.
Obstacles along the road to happiness, include Mr Bennet's willingness to listen to his wife's gossip.
Miss Bingley is determined to be Mrs Darcy and views any malicious scheme to be justified.
This variation includes vexation, kidnapping and rescue. Most disturbingly, there are not one but two Caroline Bingley's.
Great story.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
August 16, 2025
Such a lovely spin on the classic! I'm sucker for a good P&P variation and this is a lovely one.
I think alternating the point of view was a great move, it kept it fresh throughout the story with a surprise perspective here and there.
The growing relationship was beautifully written and there was a wonderful sense of connection between L and D. It felt like a solid, natural progression.
I always enjoy any variation where the Bennet sister's relationship as a whole is more fleshed out, and Lydia in particular is well handled and a joy to read. Again, it makes the characters seem more grounded in reality, not potentially caricatures of themselves.
The adventurous aspects are unexpected, with a good twist here and there, and the villains are fun to hate and were pleasingly dealt with.
All told, would highly recommend reading with a cat on your lap and some chocolate nearby.
I think alternating the point of view was a great move, it kept it fresh throughout the story with a surprise perspective here and there.
The growing relationship was beautifully written and there was a wonderful sense of connection between L and D. It felt like a solid, natural progression.
I always enjoy any variation where the Bennet sister's relationship as a whole is more fleshed out, and Lydia in particular is well handled and a joy to read. Again, it makes the characters seem more grounded in reality, not potentially caricatures of themselves.
The adventurous aspects are unexpected, with a good twist here and there, and the villains are fun to hate and were pleasingly dealt with.
All told, would highly recommend reading with a cat on your lap and some chocolate nearby.
September 15, 2025
Moments Frozen in Time is another delightful story from Melissa Anne. The story breaks from cannon just before Darcy insults Elizabeth. A voice from the past chastises him for what he is about to say, and the shock causes him to reconsider his words. Elizabeth is expecting an offensive rejection but is surprised when he asks for the introduction. Her opinion of him isn’t very high at that point, but it’s better than it might have been had he uttered those fateful words.
While Darcy and Elizabeth begin to see each other in a different light, they face significant challenges. I enjoyed this story and how a slight change can have a large impact. The pacing is excellent and there is enough angst to keep things moving without being over the top. I heartily recommend this! I received an advanced reader copy of the story.
While Darcy and Elizabeth begin to see each other in a different light, they face significant challenges. I enjoyed this story and how a slight change can have a large impact. The pacing is excellent and there is enough angst to keep things moving without being over the top. I heartily recommend this! I received an advanced reader copy of the story.
August 20, 2025
I might have a new favorite. I was tickled by Mother and Grandmother showing up to keep their son and granddaughter in line. Caroline was a nasty piece of work, and Jane, who finally got angry, was better off by far doing what was best for herself. Loved the closeness that evolved among the Bennet sisters; Lydia was shown to best advantage. Lots of unexpectedness: A new villain supporting Caroline Bingley made Lady Catherine seemed almost subdued in comparison. Amusing epilogue, especially the last sentence!
September 13, 2025
3.5 Stars
What I Liked:
- I can always count on Melissa Anne to help Darcy and Elizabeth reach an early understanding.
- Elizabeth and Lydia's relationship. I hope to come across more stories that focus on Elizabeth and Lydia's similarities and how that connection can influence Lydia.
- The Bingleys are full of surprises.
My Least Favorite:
- Although the book is entertaining, I didn't feel a strong urge to pick it back up once I set it down. The first third of the book was slow.
What I Liked:
- I can always count on Melissa Anne to help Darcy and Elizabeth reach an early understanding.
- Elizabeth and Lydia's relationship. I hope to come across more stories that focus on Elizabeth and Lydia's similarities and how that connection can influence Lydia.
- The Bingleys are full of surprises.
My Least Favorite:
- Although the book is entertaining, I didn't feel a strong urge to pick it back up once I set it down. The first third of the book was slow.
October 11, 2025
Good one!!
This was a really fun story. Love when relatives who have passed try to assist Darcy and Elizabeth from making mistakes. Here Lady Anne and Grandma Bennet are there to help them along.
Lady C gets tamed. Bingley is a milksop (I like when he is paired with Charlotte and she is the boss!). Very evil Caroline gets what she deserves and Wickham is pretty neutralized.
The Bennet sisters all evolve thanks to Grandma Bennet whispering in Elizabeth's ear. Very fun read read and well written.
This was a really fun story. Love when relatives who have passed try to assist Darcy and Elizabeth from making mistakes. Here Lady Anne and Grandma Bennet are there to help them along.
Lady C gets tamed. Bingley is a milksop (I like when he is paired with Charlotte and she is the boss!). Very evil Caroline gets what she deserves and Wickham is pretty neutralized.
The Bennet sisters all evolve thanks to Grandma Bennet whispering in Elizabeth's ear. Very fun read read and well written.
January 8, 2026
Very Enjoyable
I very much enjoyed this variation. The "ghosts" of Lady Anne Darcy and Grandmother Bennet were a nice twist to alter the path of HEA. Their interference was actually negligible, it just recalled our Elizabeth and Darcy to their youth and what they had been taight and had forgotten. The story gives us five Bennet sisters who have found their strength together, without their parents' help. Surprisingly I didn't miss Wickham and the Colonel at all! Instead, there was an absolutely amazing Lydia. This was well written and very easy to read.
I very much enjoyed this variation. The "ghosts" of Lady Anne Darcy and Grandmother Bennet were a nice twist to alter the path of HEA. Their interference was actually negligible, it just recalled our Elizabeth and Darcy to their youth and what they had been taight and had forgotten. The story gives us five Bennet sisters who have found their strength together, without their parents' help. Surprisingly I didn't miss Wickham and the Colonel at all! Instead, there was an absolutely amazing Lydia. This was well written and very easy to read.
August 21, 2025
Very enjoyable. Love that before Darcy can insult Elizabeth, he hears his mom's voice...
It is wonderful. She chastises Darcy and he can actually see what she is saying. Boy that was close. Yes he listened and turned it around.
But even so, who could predict the evil that Caroline could evolk? Wow! And Elizabeth's mom's participation. Sad. Dang, and Mrs. Bingley - their mother, is alive and bad too. Charles's weakness, thank goodness, Jane sees it.
Great story.
It is wonderful. She chastises Darcy and he can actually see what she is saying. Boy that was close. Yes he listened and turned it around.
But even so, who could predict the evil that Caroline could evolk? Wow! And Elizabeth's mom's participation. Sad. Dang, and Mrs. Bingley - their mother, is alive and bad too. Charles's weakness, thank goodness, Jane sees it.
Great story.
August 24, 2025
Ugliness doesn’t need George Wickham
I love it when Elizabeth and Darcy come together easily and stay like this, no pride, no prejudice, no misinterpretations. But the reader likes disaster and the author has (wants?) to follow 😊 Well, disaster strikes in an absolutely surprising way. How??? Read this well written and easy to read and entertaining book!
I had the chance to get a copy in advance, thank you, Melissa Anne.
I love it when Elizabeth and Darcy come together easily and stay like this, no pride, no prejudice, no misinterpretations. But the reader likes disaster and the author has (wants?) to follow 😊 Well, disaster strikes in an absolutely surprising way. How??? Read this well written and easy to read and entertaining book!
I had the chance to get a copy in advance, thank you, Melissa Anne.
September 12, 2025
I received an ARC copy of this book and it's another winner from Melissa Anne.
Mr Darcy is about to utter his infamous insult at the assembly when he is stopped by an unexpected source. Thus he and Elizabeth fall in love with a lot less angst than usual. However the story then takes an unexpected turn thanks to one of the usual villains.
As usual, the book is well written, the characters are mainly believable and the story keeps you engrossed to the very end.
Mr Darcy is about to utter his infamous insult at the assembly when he is stopped by an unexpected source. Thus he and Elizabeth fall in love with a lot less angst than usual. However the story then takes an unexpected turn thanks to one of the usual villains.
As usual, the book is well written, the characters are mainly believable and the story keeps you engrossed to the very end.
October 10, 2025
Sometimes a little nudge is all you need to see a situation in a different light. Both Elizabeth Bennet and Fitzwilliam Darcy avoid some rather significant missteps by listening to the voice of a beloved relative. As such, the miss much of the pride and or prejudice that might have kept them apart.
Instead, the Bingley family and Mr. and Mrs. Bennet create the drama in this story.
Darcy and Elizabeth find their hard won happily ever after and bring their sisters along with them.
Instead, the Bingley family and Mr. and Mrs. Bennet create the drama in this story.
Darcy and Elizabeth find their hard won happily ever after and bring their sisters along with them.
August 17, 2025
Oh what an interesting story! It starts out at the Meryton assembly and grabs you right away. A bit of magic or blessing is thrown in and goes from there. We have the usual villains, but not necessarily in the expected way we normally see them and then there are the added characters that enhance the storyline. It even gets better as you read on! Great story! Enjoy.
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