2.75 - 3⭐
This was cute, it was, but absolutely excruciating to read.
It took me days and still I could hardly finish it.
I don't know this author, so I don't know if this is just her writing style (if that's the case, I'm finishing this series and then I'm out) or this was just a bad start to the series.
The setting is good, the main characters are good, but I absolutely didn't like the way their story was written.
🟢 Hockey player / football player
🟡 College
🔵 Double bi-awakening
🟣 They were roommates
🟢 Found family (not developed enough)
🟠 HFN
🔵 Slow paced, hard to read
🌶️ Sex is descriptive and good, but a lot of it is off-page; oral, penetrative; a lot of kissing; t/b
Dean and Brody are roommates, both athletes in college, one aiming to go pro, the other deciding not to; they're both very work-focused, good in school, calm, not really in favour of partying and hooking up, so when Ramsey, Brody's friend, swaps his place as Brody's roommate and offers it to Dean, it turns out they're really the perfect match.
"They were both lone wolves, fighting for what they wanted, for what they needed, in a world that didn’t always understand them."
Soon enough Brody and Dean started getting curious and their bi-awakening was pretty well done, I liked it, I wish more of it could be on-page looking at everything that followed between them sexually; we get told they do all these things and have crazy sex, but we just get the first few times on-page and even those are few and far in between.
"Dean knew people did that. Knew they enjoyed sex— otherwise, why do it? But he couldn’t imagine it. Of course, in the best of circumstances he wasn’t a fan of sharing. But if he actually met someone he really wanted and really loved? They’d own him for life."
What bothered me the most was how the story was written. You've got scarce dialogues and every short dialogue is followed by paragraphs upon paragraphs of explaining and back-stories. And even the back-stories didn't do justice to their past, especially with Dean.
To really get the gist of the story you then have to go back a couple of times and re-read the dialogues and get into that vibe to appreciate what's coming next.
Their journey to an official relationship was sweet, hot, but again, so many side characters and other developments are taking up that space that you don't really feel it's a romantic story for the most part. Their relationship is almost like a by-product of everything that's going on and the main part of it is developing off-page, you just get a few bits and pieces and looking at how great they were together, a lot more of the story could be focused on them alone, especially on their intimacy.
Brody and Dean didn't talk, they didn't say a lot of the things they should've said until the very end, but I guess that was also part of the charm, because they did get a sweet, sexy love story. They had amazing sexual chemistry, they really got along, so I have no idea why the author didn't make them the sole focus of this book, it should've been just about them and maybe the backstory of how they got to be roommates should've been included in the book, everything told beforehand, not pushed in between the dialogues or put as a bonus story.
In the end, Dean gets drafted and we don't know what happens after that. So Brody and Dean's story doesn't even have a happy ending, they're still in college and even though they know they're not breaking up, we don't know that. The epilogue could've happened a few years down the line, at least.
Ramsey was another part of this story that I just didn't get. First he's a teammate, then he's a guy they both kind of know, then suddenly he's Brody's best friend, then he's taking up too much page time and getting a far too important role in everything and I suspect he's going to be mentioned over and over in books to come and as most things in this book, he's also a confusing character, so I'm not particularly fond of him right now.
I definitely am interested in all the other side characters' stories, I'm just hoping they're going to be written better than this one.