A gruff protector alpha. A shattered sweetheart. One contract that turns into something dangerously real.
After a scandal ends his social life and shatters his trust, omega Rowan Leigh retreats to his Manhattan brownstone, trying to rebuild his life one panic attack at a time. He doesn't trust alphas—not with his body, not with his heart, and definitely not with his safety.
Camden Hayes is an ex-military alpha who doesn't do small talk, soft beds, or complicated emotions. When Manhattan Mates hires him to guard Rowan discreetly, it's just another job—until the fragile, wide-eyed omega slowly begins to burrow under his skin.
Rowan isn't what Camden expected. He's gentle, wounded, and impossibly brave. And Camden? He's the only one who makes Rowan feel safe enough to start living again.
But the closer they get, the more blurred the lines become. What starts as protection begins to feel like devotion. And when Rowan's past threatens to destroy his future, Camden will do whatever it takes to protect what's his.
Even if that means claiming the omega he was only supposed to guard.
Alpha for Comfort is a swoony, steamy full-length omegaverse romance featuring a scarred alpha, a tender omega in recovery, only one bed, protector-for-hire vibes, gentle heat care, grumpy-sunshine slow burn, and a guaranteed HEA.
Contains major themes of PTSD, panic attacks, and anxiety recovery.
Where to start, first with some positives because although I unfortunately gave this two stars there were things I liked such as the characters and the plot. This story had potential and started out really well. But then the inconsistencies began and towards the end they were constant. For instance, Camden's friend Alex had long hair in a pony tail when we meet her, the next time we see her she's running her hand through her short hair, this is just one example, most of them are absences of information that this author later drops in as though we know it along. We hear about Rowan who says he's an art curator and his hobbies are reading and photography yet a few pages later Camden is thinking about the callous on Rowens hand from drawing and we start to see him with a pencil and sketching. Then there's the time Rowan withdraws his things from the guest room when they are distancing themselves from each other, yet as far as I was concerned Camden had the guest room, clearly this author forgets what she's told the reader because I had no idea they had been sharing Rowans room during the progress of their relationship because the intimacy scenes were not in a bed. There were many more small and large instances like this but the biggest and most frustrating thing was the incident from Camdens past concerning his time in special forces. He felt he failed to save someone and it affected how he behaved. Normally we wait to see how this is revealed to the other character, in this case Rowan, but this conversation never happens because when they are talking, Rowan mentions it as though he already knows! I'm going back through the book to see if I missed this vital scene but apparently not, it's just not included. These inconsistencies get more frequent and the dialogue also becomes repetitive, it is as if the author failed to follow a blueprint of the story created and forgets what has been said or what's happening. All in all very disappointed and the only reason I managed to finish it was to see what happened with the nasty ex but even that was a footnote after Rowan stands up for himself. There's no real update on Dominics downfall other than one sentence in the epilogue. When that was the main conflict it seemed as though it was left floating in the wind. It was perhaps too long which I don't usually complain about, but with so much competitiveness and not enough focus on the details, it was just not working. I could not even get excited about them telling each other they loved them because even this was just added in as though they had already done it...like an afterthought. I don't like giving bad reviews but needed to be honest about this because it it's edited properly then it could be a really good story.
I actually liked the story but I struggled with having myself pulled out of the story by the issues with timeline and details that don't match up. Is the late lover Tariq or Fareed? How many times is Vale gonna announce his campaign? Why is moving himself to the guest room?? In fact when did Camden move in the main suite... if anyone needs to relocate rooms it needs to be Camden, back the guest room he started in. Also how that whole situation was handled when Vale came to the house with press... Not to mention the call to his mother Cam made in one chapter... then later in another chapter he called his sister... and she like "we thought you were dead!!" What?? Mom didn't tell you I called?? that is what I wanted him to ask... instead they just went with it like the call in the earlier chapter never happened.
Last note... it clicks... a lot... There are several conversations where "it clicks" and the person suddenly understands the behavior... only problem with that is it clicked several chapters ago... and last chapter... and in the conversation with Alex... not sure if the author was reading what she wrote... maybe she should read it again... you know... so it will click...
Honestly if more editing had been done with check the flow of the time line I could have ignored the other small details that kept cropping up, but it didn't so despite liking the story I am gonna give it 2 star.
Beyond disappointing. The writing was inferior and the editing worse. The MC's were beige. I dont know who wrote this story - AI?? It got details horribly wrong from the get-go. One minute Vale is making a harassing phone call, then next page they are talking about someone named Harrington doing the calling ... did I miss something? One page they are talking about more martial arts training and I wondered if I had missed previous pages..... this happened throughout the book. Even at the very end when Cam is making a coffee to take to Rowan in bed, but hands him a cup of tea.... seriously?? This is sloppy, lazy and careless. Please go back and re-read your work LB, this is enough to make to reconsider ever reading another LB book. As a reader I deserve better. Recommend: do no buy, do not read, do not bother
2⭐️ It would have been a 3⭐️ but the constant inconsistencies ruined the whole book for me.
Was the omega who died Tariq or Fareed? When exactly did Rowan learn about him anyway, cause on the previous chapters Camden is stressed that Rowan will learn what happened and then he suddenly knows? Totally doesn’t make sense.
The bedrooms thing? When did Camden move to the main one?
Lots of weird little inconsistencies (side characters names change back and forth, urgent issues are forgotten in the next chapter) and lots of “wait what?” with bizarre behavior from our MCs and others. Too frustrating to be fun, would’ve been better with another edit.
But the continuity errors were so bad I DNF at 51%. Also, the main characters just suddenly knew deeply intimate things about the other like a whole chapter explaining those things was missing
I read the whole thing but I would recommend more proofreading. It was a bit all over the place and the timelines weren't correct. And some characters just disappeared.