I stopped the book and chapter 24. As an avid reader of this series, and someone who has been waiting for this book to come out. I even reread the entire series to ensure I didn’t forget anything before this came out. But as it stands right now, I cannot finish this book.
In the first place, having this character go back in time, and not do anything to change things, are you serious? Do we not know Rachel? She can’t help her blundering, meddling ways. I feel like every other paragraph is restating the same things, she misses Trent, doesn’t want to disappoint Trent, Jenks would have looped the cameras, etc. We get it. You rely solely on your friends to get things done. This is the time to put your big girl pants on and get it done by yourself. And trying to use Elise in place of your friends is not going to work.
Unless someone tells me that in chapter 25 Rachel punches Elise in the face and leaves her to find her own way back; I’m done. There is no way this character can be so ungrateful, whiny, bratty, and selfish at this point. Not to mention, she is the one that got her self into this yet she takes no responsibility for anything happening. She’s only thinking about herself. Even though Rachel is needed to get her home Elise fights her at every turn. She’s doing everything she can to alienate Rachel and make sure she gets left behind. Take the hint, Rachel, leave her. Or better yet, gift her to Newt. The brat deserves it.
This may have ruined me from reading any more of the series. Especially if Rachel is on her own. This showed me that I’m not a huge fan of Rachel herself. I read these books for the supporting characters and suffer through Rachel’s stupidity. There’s so much going on in their lives right now, but the book is solely about Rachel. I’m annoyed to not know how Trent is going to get out of his conundrum or if Jenks and Getty are getting closer. All in all, this book makes me feel as though the author really didn’t know how to get her characters out of their current situation and instead gave the audience a filler book. Or maybe she just doesn’t wanna write the hollows anymore