First Love

by Viola Black

I looked into his bright blue eyes and I couldn’t be mad at him for a second longer. His large, calloused yet soft hand enveloped mine and I intertwined my fingers with his. I never quite got over how our hands looked when we held hands; it was like the Yin and Yang circle, although our hands are not perfectly black and white but there is a contrast.

Genres: Interracial Romance, Romance

47 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 8, 2014

Reviews

[Mya · Rating 3 out of 5]

There was really not a good plot development here. I like to see a good introduction, but it was blah, blah, blah, blah, but the sex scenes were good.

[Stefanie · Rating 2 out of 5]

Ok short stories are either a hit or a miss and this book was a miss. Should've known by the lack of a real description, but I wanted to give it a chance anyway. There was no real plot, didn't feel any connection with the characters and the story just didn't flow. I mean one scene they are graduating high school, next thing I know they are going off to college. They then go out to dinner and somehow 5yrs has passed and they've graduated. Then it just ends. There are 3 books in this series, and unfortunately the author is selling them for $2.99 a piece. Now I don't know about you but I refuse to pay $5 for 130pages.

[Donnay A. Williams · Rating 4 out of 5]

So far so good

I like the story and the characters. The summary was very interesting and that is what got my interest. Thanks

[Denice Morgan · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is going to be interesting and exciting

Good book short but good. So waiting anxiously for the next one out. Keep up the good work! Yea # I love to read

[Judy Cheatham · Rating 1 out of 5]

WTH kind of ending was that??? The book ended very abruptly. I’m so grateful this book was free. Lots of grammatical errors.plain horrible

[Liane · Rating 1 out of 5]

Don't even bother

The structure of sentences, the flow of the story was horrible. The ending the way it ended I mean what what that? The author just left the reader dangling. I caught myself staring at the last sentence like did the author really end it like this.

[Patricia Bennett · Rating 4 out of 5]

First Love

We all have to learn what love is by the pain and hurt, it'll always feel like someone hand is in your chest, but love is one of greatest experience any of us are fortunate to feel. First Love is a wonderful story and I would recommend all young people r read it.

[Robin Harris · Rating 1 out of 5]

Short

We're is the rest of the story really this is how it's going to end I hate writers like this

[Lorraine Anton · Rating 3 out of 5]

Good

Nina met Ryan they went to school together and then the same college. They loved each other. See where it goes from there.

[Zimaya Theoneandonly · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good read

I like the book just wished it was longer and the story had more detail in it. Also a better ending

[Maria Jackson · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good book

A lot of details throughout the story. Have u one the edge of ur seat waiting to read the next chapter.