I love horror short stories, but these really missed the mark for me. Rarely do I DNF a book, but these were just so bad I couldn’t continue.
I noticed various spelling and grammatical errors, which I tend to be more lenient on with indie authors, but the writing and dialogue just felt clunky and didn’t flow well.
I want to be unnerved and invested when I read a horror short story, but none of these gave me that feeling. I know the author’s very young, so I believe with time his craft could improve. I would recommend studying the works of some of today’s great horror writers such as Stephen Graham Jones, Grady Hendrix, and Paul Tremblay and see how they utilize dialogue and setting the scene in their horror stories.