This story had an interesting premise about a new family moving in across the road, with the mother, Madisyn copying Shannon in terms of her house decor, garden arrangement, career and even a scar on her face. Why is she doing this and for what gain? The problem with this story is that it was very repetitive in Shannon’s questioning of what was going on and even in some phrasing that was repeated, sometimes on the next page. At one point, there was an error in Shannon telling her husband about a job opportunity and he was told about this in two different ways. It could definitely have been edited further to ensure this didn’t happen and to cut down on some of the repetitiveness. Also, what is KitHolmes and why was this mentioned so much, it was very distracting? I guessed the first twist but was just waiting for it to appear. I did enjoy the ending, which was much more satisfying than the rest of the story and came together well. It was just a shame about the other issues, as if these were ironed out, I think it could have been a much more suspenseful and thrilling read.
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