Well, this wasn't a promising start, but I had the same problem with the actual Werewolves of Montana series and it did improve further in. I'll try a few more and cross my fingers. This intersects the Montana series, as we do see the Mitchell Pack pretty briefly. Alexa Grant spent a month escaping her awful alpha by cooking at the Mitchell Ranch. There she met J.J. and they kinda fell in love...he certainly fell in lust. Well, Alexa's alpha is demanding payback of money or he's going to starve her and her family, so she offers up for sale the only thing she owns - her virginity. J.J. being the opportunist that he is, takes her up on that (but also so no one else will...he doesn't want to share her). But he uses his billionaire business identity, Jeremiah Taylor, so Alexa has no idea that the guy she's crushing on has just purchased her. When J.J. escorts her around his ranch, she thinks he's just a foreman and that she's going to have to offer up her virginity to the stranger who purchased it. And J.J. isn't about to tell her just yet. He doesn't know if he can trust her...so he'll keep her in suspense until he can.
God but both of these characters irritated me. Mostly it was J.J. that needed a swift kick in the balls, but Alexa was a bit irritating too. I think the worst of it was that these two talk to each other, but I swear neither of them are listening or clarifying. Alexa keeps trying to explain that she's feeling awful that she's about to become a prostitute (by definition she is) and she's really upset that she saved herself for love and now is going to give it up to a stranger. J.J. keeps responding that "Jeremiah" is a great guy and she'll be fine. Which doesn't even begin to address what she's upset about. And Alexa seems to accept that answer as though it DID answer her complaint. Or if she's confused, she doesn't bother pointing it out.
And I'm sorry, but J.J. was a slime-bag of epic proportions. He seemed nice, but his underlying actions spell it all out. Everytime Alexa maligns Jeremiah for BUYING her virginity like she's a stock on the market, J.J. points out that she's the one who sold herself. But that's completely ignoring the fact that she had no other options. Alexa makes a good point that he could have payed off her loan or given her a job or something, but he quickly brushes that aside. She fails to point out that he could have just been honest (even without putting his heart on the line). He could have been straightforward about what he was doing and why and put the ball in her court with whether she wanted to give him her virginity. Or he could have opted not to take her virginity. Instead, he puts her through actual trauma because he's not sure if he can trust her...and it's not like there's enough reason for him to think he can't. She cries, she has nightmares and to make matters worse she's falling in love with "J.J." and expresses how upset she is that HE can't be her first...and how much it hurts her. Meanwhile, he's waxing poetic about how he'd never hurt her and his deception is actually hurting her. Most especially when, after he's let her believe that his beta is actually Jeremiah, he brings her into a dark room so she can't see him, seduces her and elicits a pretty powerful response then walks away like she doesn't mean anything to him. He treats her like the whore she believes she is. And of course there's the epic guilt since she just found a great deal of pleasure with a man who isn't' J.J. (who, remember, she's falling in love with). So that's a pretty shitty move.
The hero dug himself into a nice big hole. And when the big reveal came, the heroine's anger was nice at first, but was not quite grand enough considering his actions and the sheer size of his deception. And of course everyone else on the ranch blames HER and her pride for their maybe not having an HEA. It's not HIS fault of course. I'll admit that J.J. ends up proving his love pretty well, but he didn't apologize enough and he didn't grovel enough and she forgave him for all of that agony after 12 hours. Then the villain comes along and all is revealed and I wonder, if Mr. Villain was really a changeling and Rafe could know it by his scent, then how did this changeling inhabit this person's body for over 12 years without anyone ever knowing it? Hmmm.
So plenty to irritate in this one and one pretty big loophole there at the end. On the bright side, I did really appreciate the inclusion of a hero with a stutter, as that's a rarity out here in HPlandia...especially in the paranormal realm of things. Also kinda curious about Rafe's story, despite the fact that he was a bit of an ass in this story. Also, I wish this author would please stop using the word "jettison" as though it means "ejaculate." It doesn't.