“Brendan Kelso plays a devious game with this twisty debut mystery, THE NIGHT SHE SAID HATCHET. It’s an emotional gut punch chockfull of unexpected moments and relatable characters.” - Jonathan Maberry, NY Times bestselling author of NecroTek: COLD WAR and RED EMPIRE ---------- The Night She Said Hatchet
A Thriller Inspired by True Events
A cryptic word. A forgotten memory. A forty-year-old murder mystery buried by time—and Alzheimer’s.
When Patrick’s mother, diagnosed with Alzheimer’s, suddenly utters the word “Hatchet,” it sets off a chain of events he never saw coming. What he dismissed as a nonsensical outburst becomes the key to unlocking a chilling secret from her past—and possibly his.
As Patrick digs deeper, aided by an unconventional psychologist and haunted by childhood memories, he uncovers a trail of clues that point to a decades-old series of murders, a pulse pounding chase through long-buried secrets, and a family he never truly knew. With time running out and his mother’s mind fading, Patrick must piece together the truth—before the secrets of the past consume what's left of his family.
Witty, heartbreaking, and full of twists, The Night She Said Hatchet is a genre-bending psychological, mystery-thriller that blends humor with raw emotion. Inspired by the author's personal experience caregiving for his mom with Alzheimer’s, this novel explores the fragility of memory, the bonds of family, and the terrifying idea that sometimes the truth is the most dangerous thing of all.
Perfect for fans of Lisa Jewell, Riley Sager, and Shari Lapena
My name is Brendan—though in the world of twisty thrillers and buried secrets, I go by B. P. Kelso. Under that pen name, I write mysteries and thrillers with humor, heart, and the occasional hammer. My debut novel, The Night She Said Hatchet, was inspired by my experience caregiving for my mother with Alzheimer’s—when one strange word from her triggered a 40-year-old murder mystery. (the mom with Alzheimer's is fact - the 40-year-old murder master, well that parts fiction) In my other life as Brendan P. Kelso, I write hilarious, melodramatic one-act plays for kids, adapting Shakespeare, Greek myths, and classic lit in ways that make 7th graders snort-laugh while secretly learning. I’ve written 40+ plays and sold over 140,000 copies, performed everywhere from classrooms to castles. Whether I’m cracking open a mystery or cracking up an audience, I love blending drama and heart with a touch of chaos. You can find more at BPKelso.com for my thrillers or PlayingWithPlays.com for Shakespeare for kid's scripts.
B.P. Kelso's latest work is a captivating page-turner that creatively blends elements of true crime with a personal narrative. The story immediately grabs your attention and doesn't let go, weaving a suspenseful mystery around a central theme inspired by Alzheimer's disease. Kelso's creative approach elevates this beyond a simple whodunnit; the pacing is expertly managed, building tension and releasing it at just the right moments. I highly recommend it to anyone seeking a compelling and unique page turner!
I received an Advance Review Copy and I am grateful to have read this book! It's been a long time since I actually finished a book, but this one I couldn't put down!
"The Night She Said Hatchet" is a whodunit packed with witty tidbits, emotional depth, and suspenseful twists that will keep you guessing and hooked. It's a fast, fun journey with relatable characters and lots of surprises. This book needs to be your next must-read!
Side Note: If you normally skip the Author's Note, please read it this time. You'll gain some valuable insights into the inspiration for the story. Also, make sure to check out the section called "Real or Not Real".
I received an advance review copy of The Night She Said Hatchet and it is such a compelling mystery, exploring family history, memory, and murder. But what I liked most was the way it dealt with the mother's Alzheimer's. It shows the frustration and heartbreak, but it's all told with such humor and humanity and heart that it makes the unbearable bearable. Another thing I loved was the voice of the narrator, Patrick, which is so funny and distinctive. It kept me laughing throughout and trying to guess where the story would turn next, but also feeling a great deal of empathy and affection for the characters. It's both deeply felt and highly entertaining, but fair warning: it kept me up way past my bedtime because I kept needing to read one more chapter. It also had me craving blackberry pie.
I was given and Advance Review Copy, for which I'm grateful. Thanks! This was such a good read. This is not my usual genre, but it fully won me over. The writing style is wry and flows effortlessly along. The characters felt like real people. And the plot was like nothing I've ever read, a blending of a son's care for his Alzheimer's afflicted mother, and his quest to solve a mystery provoked by one of her triggered memories. It's part heartbreaking, part hilarious and snarky, and part scary as hell. I absolutely did NOT see the end coming. It's hugely engaging and entertaining and informative. Read it and don't miss the Author's Note.
I received an advance copy of Kelso’s novel, “The Night She Said Hatchet”. The book cover alone is full of symbolism and meaning. Color, illustrations, and title font are an invitation to dive into the book and discover who, what, where, when, why, and how everything connects. Hatchet is a heartfelt novel of the author’s journey coping and staying strong. I can only imagine how hard it may be to deal with caring for a loved one with Alzheimer’s and the emotional toll it takes on their lives. Yet, Hatchet was like reading a TRUE CRIME documentary. It painted a movie in my mind that at times I found myself Googling names and key words throughout the novel to find out news articles forgetting that I was reading a novel. Yes, I even Google for a blackberry pie recipe. That’s how convincing Hatchet was for me. AARP, here is another recommendation for your readers. 😉
Brendan Kelso’s writings kept me on the edge of my seat. I couldn’t put the book down! Excellent in every way. Looking forward to more reads from this amazing author.
I received an advanced copy of The Night She Said Hatchet, and have just finished reading. Knowing this was a mystery inspired by Alzheimer’s, I wasn’t sure what to expect, how the two would fit together. I thoroughly enjoyed the book. It’s a fun, fast read.
Without giving away too much, the connection between his mom and the mystery, was like an “ah-ah” moment. I could really see how this could happen. I found myself not wanting to put the book down, wondering how it was going to unfold. And then just when I thought I had learned the mystery, there were more twists and turns. My only dissatisfaction, I loved the characters. They were relatable people we all know and love, so much so, I wanted to know them better.
I’m looking forward to see what comes next from B. P. Kelso.
This book drew me in from the get go. BP wastes no time setting the scene for this book! Having dealt with a loved one with Alzheimer’s, I could relate to many of the things being described about Patrick’s mother!
If you love a good twist, this definitely has one! I was not expecting that twist at all! And like Patrick says in the book, my eyes did pop open on shock! I even gasped out loud a little!
I will definitely recommend this book to all my book loving friends!
I was honored to receive an advance copy of Kelso’s debut novel. I’ve been a huge fan of his since the days he would come to my sixth grade classroom and have my students demonstrate their best death scenes! Having staged several of his Shakespeare adaptations with the kids, I was not surprised to find his novel full of suspense, humor, and heart. Kelso grabs the reader’s attention with high-energy dialogue and lively descriptions that make it seem you are standing alongside the protagonist and everyone he encounters.
I received an Advanced Copy of Kelso's debut thriller, The Night She Said Hatchet.
Kelso has woven together a tale of family drama, loyalty, and mystery with healthy dose of horror. His casual, conversational writing style invites the reader in to get swept up in the story, which keeps building in tension until the very end. Kelso's own personal experience with his mother's Alzheimer's adds depth and accuracy to the character's journey in the book, and anchors the more fantastical aspects of the thriller to a reality many people will resonate with. This is definitely a fun read for any fan of the genre, or for anyone looking for an adventurous novel to dive into.
Y’all, let me tell you—The Night She Said Hatchet isn’t just a thriller, it’s a full-body experience. You feel this book. The sharp sting of a memory half-forgotten, the chill of a shadow that’s lingered too long, the ache in your chest when love and loss collide. And then—just when you’re teetering on the edge—B.P. Kelso slips in wit so perfectly timed it’s like comic relief at a funeral (the kind you’re secretly grateful for).
Patrick’s story had me leaning in close, like I was eavesdropping on a family secret I wasn’t supposed to hear. His mom blurting out “hatchet”? My heart skipped. From there it’s a tumble of cryptic breadcrumbs, dangerous discoveries, and emotions that come at you sideways. The Alzheimer’s thread is handled with such tenderness it’ll squeeze your heart in all the best/worst ways, and the suspense? Chef’s kiss—taut, relentless, and somehow still laced with warmth.
This isn’t just a whodunit—it’s a who-are-we-really. It’s about memory, family, and those terrifying truths we bury until they come swinging back with a blade. Thrilling, heartbreaking, unexpectedly funny, and so human it gave me goosebumps—this book left me a little wrecked, a little hopeful, and a lot impressed.
Bottom line? Read it. Just maybe leave the lights on…and don’t flinch if someone whispers hatchet in the dark.
What a fun, twisty, delightful read this was! B.P. Kelso has accomplished quite a feat in his debut novel which deftly explores some of the dynamics of walking through Alzheimers with a family member, while crafting rich, memorable characters and a plot that kept me guessing the whole way through. The characters' dialogue and interactions were very believable and compelling, and each time I came back to the book I felt as if I were peering into the lives of actual people. Perhaps one of my biggest surprises in reading this is that I am now a fan of mystery thrillers! If you're looking for your next page-turner and want something unique, I highly recommend this book.
OH! MY! GOSH!! If I could give this book more than 5 stars I absolutely would!! What a dang journey my emotions went on with this book! From understanding the perspective Patrick was feeling taking care of his mother with Alzheimer’s, to being so invested in Patrick and Mike’s investigation, to just absolutely FLOORED by the ending!! 🤯
This was my absolute favorite book I’ve probably EVER read and wish I could re-read it for the first time again 😍 I will absolutely recommend this book to everyone that will listen ❤️
B.P Kelso’s debut thriller mystery novel was a total hit with me! I thoroughly enjoyed reading through all the twists and turns it took me through! What a wild ride! It had moments of realism and then it had its funny parts as well and that’s what I really liked about it! Seeing what Alzheimer can do to someone you love is really hard and them having lucid moments so that you can have a conversation is sometimes hard! And this book really shows that!
This book was definitely not what I expected. I grabbed a copy based on the striking cover and the author's posts on Threads. It was definitely a great surprise. The author is well equipped to talk about one of the main themes of the story which is, of course, Alzheimer's and the effect it has on the people around the person who is suffering. There are some really poignant parts surrounding this and it ultimately catapults us, quite innocently, into an intriguing mystery.
I would call this somewhat of a cozy mystery that revolves around some 'dead and buried' secrets (if you'll excuse the pun) brought forth indirectly through the interactions of someone living with someone with Alzheimer's.
I particularly enjoyed the scenes that revolved around hypnosis and the unlocking of buried memories.
I often found myself wondering how much of the story was real and how much was fiction. Thankfully, this was addressed by the author in the back matter.
I would rate this book a 4.5 if I could, as the only reason it's not a five star for me is I felt the pacing drop off a little around two thirds of the way through the book.
Other than that, this was a very enjoyable read with a satisfying pay off and lots of great little mysteries along the way.
I received an Advance Review Copy. This book was AMAZING! It was the perfect blend of mystery, suspense, and humor. I also really enjoyed the character development. My favorite character by far was the grumpy retired policeman. There was not a dull moment in the book. It was impossible to put down! I can't wait to read more books by this author!
I’ve learned long ago that if a book doesn’t capture my attention early, I move on to the next one. Kelso captured my attention early and kept me engaged all the way through to the end. You can definitely feel the connection the author has with the characters. This made them multi faceted and not merely two dimensional paper tigers. I’m looking forward to this author’s next book.
My husband had dementia so I was drawn in by the realistic but touching interactions of the main character and his family with his mom who has Alzheimer’s. The mystery was well plotted but surprised me at the end. What more do you want? Further, I lived in the area of the “scene of the crimes” so I appreciated how the author described it realistically. A good read.
I received an Advanced Reader Copy. The Night She Said Hatchet is a great read. The characters are relatable and the story has the right amount of suspense, intrigue, and levity. There are clear personal notes from Mr. Kelso, which make the story real. I enjoyed the amateur sleuthing!
I received an Advance Review Copy. I’m not a typical book reviewer, meaning I never leave reviews, but when my old high school friend told me he was writing his debut novel and looking for reviewers, I jumped at the opportunity to see what came out of the mind of Brendan and to help an old 'Rebel' out. I am happy to announce that his novel, “The Night She Said Hatchet”, did not disappoint. The book was inspired by his personal experience of taking care of his mother with dementia and combined his passion for a good ol’ murder mystery, giving literary birth to Hector the Hatchet and his gruesome murders. Placing our shared hometown of San Lorenzo in the story was a pleasant surprise and I can actually picture myself in parts of his story. Brendan’s book is full of emotions, humor, and suspense. It combines the struggles of caregiving with a thrilling search for justice and shows how Alzheimer's affects families and the struggle to keep memories. In the end, its an easy read and I hope you find it as enjoyable as I did.
I only gave 4 stars because I never read 5 star reviews but it deserves 5 stars!
“The Night She Said Hatchet” by B.P. Kelso is a gripping, emotionally rich novel that masterfully blends true crime suspense with the raw reality of caring for a loved one with Alzheimer’s. From its symbol-laden cover to its haunting final pages, Kelso’s storytelling is immersive, heartfelt, and unexpectedly witty. It’s a thriller that makes you feel deeply, think critically, and even Google blackberry pie recipes—because it’s just that convincing. A must-read that lingers long after the last page.
Thank you for sending me an advanced copy for an honest review.
Ok. I started reading this advance review copy and didn’t want to stop!! What a riveting, twisty adventure to journey on with an author I had only known for his delightful children’s plays. This endeavor was a complete shift from the lighter works meant for the stage. I enjoyed the ride, especially for the personal insights into a life impacted by Alzheimers, along with his creative puzzles and plot twists. The book has heart, drama and full-speed-ahead action. Don’t start reading if you have any obligations to attend to.
I don’t usually write reviews, but The Night She Said Hatchet left me so shaken in the most beautiful and haunting way that I had to put my feelings into words.
This book is not just a thriller; it’s an emotional journey that pierces straight into the heart. When Patrick’s mother, lost in the fog of Alzheimer’s, suddenly utters that one word “Hatchet” I felt an ache deep inside me. It reminded me of my own grandmother, who battled dementia. There were moments when she’d say things that made no sense to us… until later, when we realized those fragments were memories fighting to surface before they disappeared forever. Reading Kelso’s story brought those moments rushing back with startling clarity.
Kelso doesn’t just write about memory loss he invites you into it. You feel the confusion, the desperation, the flashes of light and darkness as Patrick tries to piece together the puzzle of his mother’s past. Every chapter peels back another layer, not just of the mystery but of human fragility itself. And yet, amidst the pain and fear, there’s humor unexpected and perfectly timed that feels like the nervous laughter we cling to when life gets too heavy.
What struck me most was the balance between the psychological tension and the emotional tenderness. The mystery unfolds like a slow burn, pulling you deeper with every clue, every revelation. I found myself gasping aloud at certain scenes especially when the truth began to blur between what Patrick remembers and what actually happened. Kelso captures that delicate line between perception and reality so well that you start questioning your own memories too.
But what truly makes this novel unforgettable is its humanity. Beneath the suspense and the clever plotting lies a story about love messy, imperfect, enduring love. The love between a son and a mother who is fading away piece by piece, and the desperate attempt to hold on to what’s left before it’s gone forever. It’s rare for a thriller to make me tear up, but there I was, closing the final page with tears streaming down my face, whispering, “Wow.”
The Night She Said Hatchet isn’t just read it’s experienced. It’s a mirror for anyone who has watched someone they love slowly disappear while still standing right in front of them. It’s a reminder that sometimes the scariest mysteries aren’t in crime or conspiracy, but in the fragile workings of the human heart and mind.
If you’re looking for a story that will keep you up at night not just turning pages, but thinking, feeling, and remembering this is it. B.P. Kelso has created something rare: a thriller with soul, a mystery that lingers long after the final chapter. I finished it days ago, yet it still echoes in me like a whisper I can’t quite shake.
As someone who has spent the last few years caring for a parent with Alzheimer’s, I thought I was prepared for any book that touched on memory loss. I was wrong. The Night She Said Hatchet didn’t just touch me it broke me open in the most unexpected, cathartic way.
Kelso’s portrayal of Patrick’s mother is heartbreakingly accurate. The confusion, the flickering moments of lucidity, the sudden bursts of clarity followed by painful silence it all felt so real. There’s a particular scene where Patrick watches his mother try to hold on to a memory that’s slipping away, and it hit me like a tidal wave. I had to stop reading, take a breath, and sit in the stillness because I’ve lived that exact moment.
But what makes this book extraordinary is how it doesn’t drown in sadness. It acknowledges the exhaustion and grief of caregiving, yes but it also finds the humor, the small moments of light that make the darkness bearable. I actually laughed at some of the dialogue between Patrick and his psychologist, not because it was comedic, but because it was human. That’s the genius of Kelso’s writing: he understands that laughter is often our last defense when the pain gets too heavy.
Then there’s the mystery itself a brilliantly woven, slow-revealing knot of secrets, guilt, and generational silence. The suspense never feels forced; instead, it mirrors the emotional chaos of memory itself unreliable, fractured, and full of haunting echoes. When the truth finally came out, I sat there stunned, heart racing, realizing how effortlessly Kelso had led me to that moment.
For anyone who has ever watched a loved one fade, this book will speak to you in ways few stories ever do. It’s not just a thriller it’s a reflection of our deepest fears and fiercest love. The Night She Said Hatchet reminded me that even when memory fades, love remains. And that’s something I won’t ever forget.
I picked up The Night She Said Hatchet expecting a dark, twisty thriller. I love crime stories, mind-bending mysteries, and unreliable narrators. What I didn’t expect was to be emotionally wrecked in the best possible way.
From the very first chapter, I was hooked. The pacing is immaculate Kelso knows exactly when to tighten the tension and when to let you breathe. But what sets this book apart from every other thriller I’ve read is the emotional intelligence behind the suspense. Every twist feels earned, every clue feels connected to something deeper than just the crime it’s all tied to love, guilt, and the terrifying fragility of memory.
Patrick is one of the most human protagonists I’ve ever encountered. You can feel his frustration, his helplessness, his confusion as he tries to make sense of his mother’s fragmented words. It’s not just about solving a mystery it’s about reconnecting with a parent who’s slowly disappearing before his eyes. That kind of pain, that longing it’s universal. And Kelso captures it with such grace that it leaves you breathless.
There’s a moment near the end (no spoilers) that genuinely stopped me cold. It wasn’t a violent twist or a shocking reveal it was an emotional truth, one that made me rethink the entire story. That’s when I realized Kelso wasn’t just telling a thriller. He was telling the story of all of us how we cope with loss, memory, and the ghosts of our own pasts.
When I finished the last page, I didn’t just want to talk about the plot I wanted to call my mother. That’s the kind of impact this book has. It sneaks into your heart while you’re looking the other way, and before you know it, you’re crying for characters who feel as real as people you know.
If you think you’re picking up a mystery, be warned: you’re also picking up a mirror. And what you see inside might just stay with you long after you’ve closed the book.
I was fortunate to receive an advance copy of The Night She Said Hatchet, B.P. Kelso’s debut thriller—and as someone who usually sticks to audiobooks, I was surprised by how quickly this story pulled me in. I tore through the pages like you’d binge a must-watch TV series.
Reading it felt like catching a second wind during a run—over and over again, chapter after chapter. Each page left me hungry for the next, constantly wondering, “What’s going to happen? Who’s behind it all?” By the end, I felt exhilarated, satisfied, and honestly a bit sad that it was over.
Kelso’s writing style is immersive and cinematic. The vivid settings and layered character development made it easy to forget I was reading—it felt more like watching a movie with subtitles. The pacing is tight, the twists subtle but effective, and the characters believable and engaging. Even though a few story elements stretched realism a bit, they didn’t detract from the sheer enjoyment of the ride.
This is the kind of thriller that’s perfect for a rainy day or a quiet weekend—fast-paced, exciting, and impossible to put down.
It’s a standout debut, and I’ll be recommending it to all my book-loving friends. I also had the honor of speaking with B.P. Kelso about both this book and his personal connection to Alzheimer's—a cause close to his heart. As we head into November, Alzheimer’s Awareness Month, I encourage you to check out The Night She Said Hatchet—not just for the story, but for the heart behind it.
The Night She Said Hatchet is more than a mystery—it’s a beautifully layered exploration of grief, memory, and the need to make sense of the senseless. Blending amateur detective work with emotional memoir (well…some of it is true), Brendan invites us into a story that’s both cleverly plotted and deeply human.
At the heart of the novel is a narrator trying to untangle clues—not just in a case, but in life itself. As the story unfolds, the investigation becomes a vessel for processing the slow and painful loss of his mother to Alzheimer’s disease. The result is a narrative that pulses with emotional honesty, humor, and moments of raw vulnerability.
What struck me most was Brendan’s ability to balance sharp, compelling storytelling with a deeper undercurrent of catharsis. The mystery drives the narrative forward, but it’s the emotional truths—the ones not so easily solved—that stay with you.
The Night She Said Hatchet is a tribute to the messy, imperfect process of holding on, letting go, and making meaning through the act of writing itself. For anyone who has faced loss—or just loves a smart, quirky mystery—this book will linger long after the final page.
The Night She Said Hatchet was a thrilling, captivating story. The way this story is written, it's almost like having a sit down with a friend and listening to them tell you their story. What started off as an intense Alzheimers episode turned into searching for the body of a couple decades old serial killer and bringing closure to so many families. Patrick's mother has a bad episode one night after dinner and started screaming about a hatchet. Patrick isn't sure if it's just some random thing she's talking about, so he tries to bring it up again, several times and every time he does, it gets a reaction out of her. So he starts investigating. And what he ends up discovering is buried family secrets that run deep!!! What I also really enjoyed about this story was the rawness and realness it had to it. It brought to light a lot of the difficulties that come along with caretaking for someone with Alzheimer's and how utterly heartbreaking it can be. Patrick's character portrayed the frustration well, all while trying to keep humor. I honestly, really enjoyed this story. It's not my typical read, but it was fun and enjoyable. I recommend giving this book a read!
The Night She Said Hatchet is a gripping, genre-bending debut that combines the raw emotion of caregiving, the fragility of memory, and the intrigue of a decades-old murder mystery. What begins as a seemingly random word spoken by Patrick’s mother, who is battling Alzheimer’s, quickly spirals into a dark and riveting investigation of long-buried secrets. Kelso weaves together wit, heartbreak, and suspense in a way that keeps the reader hooked, delivering both an emotional gut punch and a pulse-pounding mystery.
What makes this novel stand out is the authenticity beneath the twists it’s inspired by the author’s own caregiving experience, which adds depth and poignancy to the narrative. The mix of humor, tenderness, and chilling suspense feels fresh and deeply human. Fans of Lisa Jewell, Riley Sager, and Shari Lapena will find themselves fully immersed, but the heart at the core of this story makes it unforgettable. The Night She Said Hatchet is not only a page-turning thriller it’s a moving exploration of family, memory, and the dangerous truths hidden in the past.