TL;DR:
'Forward, As Always' is friggin' fantastic with a gritty and complex story line and a tough-as-nails setting which has incubated some intriguing characters who are fun to read about. My big beef is with the pacing. Not a good enough sense of progression for a disappointingly large chunk of the book. Too many of the juicy details feel lopsided toward the ending.
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Olan Rogers is and always will be one of my heroes. His humor and viewpoint of life has been unmatched since I started following his content. I watched his video where he promoted 'Forward, As Always' and told us that he just wants us to read it and made it available for all to read online for free. This man has a creative mind and a sturdy heart that I have looked up to since I was a little crouton, and I hope that he finds a jubilee of success in his career. I eagerly bought 'Forward, As Always' because I love his work and want to support both of the authors.
I know the struggles one may go through when putting their heart out in art form, and consequently, I have also learned the value of quality, constructive critiques. The purpose of this review, if by ANY stretch that Olan Rogers and Jake Sidwell come across my humble little review on Goodreads, is to provide that feedback for them and for anyone curious about this book.
In this hard-fought battle of survival that the world of Galilei provides, it can be difficult to have personalities vary much from a rough and tumble style, but the characters in this book have been written with an excellent sense of diversity and color, yet possessing a sense of realism considering the setting. Storms and militant groups threaten the lives of the main character, Gaius, and his home, and the responding actions of this eager and distractible teenage boy is believable, which I felt to be refreshing and interesting. Some characters are rash, while others are steely, quiet, or bull-headed; some are optimistic, hermit-like, or have a childlike innocence about them. They all weave a cast of characters that are fun and are a pleasure to read about.
The dialogue that some characters exchange while in combat feel stilted at times. Admittedly, it is hard to consider what is realistic in those scenes because have I ever been in a combat scenario with a knife? Psh, no, I haven't even gotten in a proper fist fight! So I dunno, take this with a grain of salt, I suppose, but the back-and-forth lines didn't always seem to match the characters personalities. Again, I have never had to fight for my life, so maybe I'm simply naive.
A similar issue I had with Lord of the Rings, as highly regarded as it generally is (by me included), was the long trekking sections. Much of the story was Gaius and friends running to the next destination. They'd pause to talk for a bit, and we'd read some of Gaius' thoughts and motivations on peripheral matters here and there, and then they'd make it to the next section where they'd fight something, plan and prepare, and start hiking again. This was a formula that persisted throughout a good portion of the story, primarily for the first two-thirds, I'd say. Not much character development or plot thickening occurred throughout these sections, and if it did, it was sparse. A stronger sense of progression would have done wonders in getting me through the traveling sections.
Those fight scenes were certainly exciting, I can't deny that. The way that the authors set up the world made it feel like you'd be a rabbit in a land dense with predators, and it was thrilling to read through the detailed fight scenes. It was a good way to mark the progression of the main character as well, because he doesn't know how to fight starting off, though he is eager to learn. He is taught the art of fighting along the way by key characters he meets on his adventure.
After that first two-thirds of the book, the group arrives at an important destination, and all the pieces start to weave together. Questions were still springing up even at this point, which rekindled my engagement.
Many questions still went unanswered up until the very last chapter, in which were rectified in the form of an info dump. That was my biggest disappointment of 'Forward, As Always'. It would have been so much more enjoyable and satisfying to pick up some of those pieces throughout the story, saving one or two big ones for the ending, and slowly piecing together the 'hows' and 'whys' as I read.
Once we were told the whole story, it was dripping with moral grays and hard choices that many people had to make in the past, a thick plot that I would have thoroughly savored. The setting and complex motivations of the antagonists were so good! Yes, the particulars of why information was hard to come by in the story does make sense once you get there, but I wish that I didn't have to wait so long to get it.
I was pleased by the book as a whole. Olan and Jake had some fantastic ideas that made for a phenomenal story. What would have made this story shine is a breadcrumb trail of progression and plot points to keep my hunger for more information just satiated enough to be happy but not enough to stop reading.
My family loves your work, Olan, and now that I'm familiar with yours, you as well Jake! I hope y'all keep working to bring about great art, like a hardened bunch of dwarves crafting fine steel on a fiery forge, or a mighty Tyranitar hyper beaming trails to press onward!