This simply didn't work for me. I'm a firm proponent of editing and research. This story lacked both.
There seemed to be a great deal wish-fulfilment going on in the plot and in the construction of the character. The lot of it was all wrapped in a poor grasp of Spelling, Punctuation and Grammar. Having a poor SPaG skill-set is not uncommon in authors, and it has little bearing on an author's talent. That's why editing is a career.
I think this author might have quite a bit of talent that's been underutilised.
The MC was sympathetic enough that I kept reading because I wanted to know how her story ended. I think it takes a lot of talent to create a likeable character with such poor writing. My compliments to the author for that.