Werewolf’s Heartsong: A Fated Mates Paranormal Romance with Alpha Wolves and Dark Secrets

by Angie McMillon

The LCD screen in the arena showed pictures of the seven fighters in the Alpha Class. There I was, with my new name. I looked strong, and my wolf was absolutely gorgeous. I looked to where my sister was sitting and she and the rest of her posse had jealous fury on their faces. I then look up to where my parents are and they’re glaring at my picture, if looks alone could set shit on fire.

I smirk at them then I turn away to face my opponent, everything else falling away but what was here on this platform. I take my skirt and cardigan off. Standing in just my tank and capris, I move into a fighting position and wait for the signal to start — To fight, to prove, and not hide myself anymore. This was going to be fun. I thought, a grin on my face. *Mature Audience Contains mature language, s*x, abuse and violence*

239 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 3, 2025

Reviews

[Theabel · Rating 3 out of 5]

A good read

I enjoyed the story. I started reading on one of the many apps available, and was glad to be able to read on my preferred platform. Alora’s and Damien’ story is an exciting one and was good to read. However, I felt the story was not fully ready for the publication.

While the story and plot was good, there was a lot of guessing where the timeline was concerned. In one week Alora finished high school, found and got rejected by her mate. Became an alpha, got unbound, picked her beta and gamma and expanded her family, and mate the love of her life. By week two everyone is mated. Also by the end of the story a clan just dropped in with no real explanation of their existence.
Book 4 seems unfinished and stops at chapter 183 which makes me think book 5 will finish the story and then move on to Asher.

The rest of the characters in book 4 from chapter 184 onwards is basically rewritten and edited versions of the first chapters in book 1.
Good story but not finished .

[Sassy K. Yocum · Rating 3 out of 5]

I’m still finding the same errors, for example… the use of monsters or monster where it should be moonstar. Same problems with confusion in the dialogue between characters. A lot of repetition instead of the author being creative and rewriting it in a way that pulls it together without the repetition. The repetition makes you feel like you are just re-reading the same chapter twice. It’s annoying to be quite honest. This entire series needs to be thoroughly read and edited by the author. Despite loving the storyline and characters in the book, these errors are the reason for the 3 star rating. Again I’m willing to change it to 5 star if the author fixes these errors and decides to fix these issues.

[Katheryn Warren · Rating 3 out of 5]

The storyline is great, the editing is horrible

I read this book on a pay-to-read site and it was great! The author started rewriting it titled A song in the Alpha's heart, and that was even better. I couldn't wait for it to be finished. But this is horrible. Important to the story parts were edited out, paragraphs duplicated, grammer needs help. There, their, and they're really are different words. I hope that the author does read these reviews and goes back to fix these issues.

[Amber · Rating 2 out of 5]

⭐️⭐️

I enjoyed the first half of this book. The final boss battle at the end not only felt rushed but too easy to overcome. The even more rushed epilogues switched from 1st person to 3rd and it ruined the ending. Then to make things more weird, the book basically starts over with some changes and writing in 3rd person. I don't know why book 4 ending stated book one over. I am guessing the 5th book is a continuation of that. Why not just re-edit the series and release it that way? Really disappointed 😞

[Faith · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fortunately this is a good enough story to keep reading despite the lack of editing. The book actually ends around chapter 180 with the remaining chapters being a prequel. With editing, this would be a 5 star book.

[Sandra Bear · Rating 5 out of 5]

Werewolf’s Heartsong Fantastic Book

I’ve read this book a couple of times. And keep going back.
I am anxious to find the rewrite of this book. I like the information that was in the few chapters I read.

[Shannon Hunt · Rating 4 out of 5]

Greater yet!

The story is progressing well. It would be better if the love and admiration were toned down. Saying it every other paragraph is a bit excessive. I understand the mate aspect, but perhaps there’s another way to convey it?

Thanks for the escape. ❤️

[Christin A Bowden · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome Series.

I liked how all supernaturals intermingled. Alora's story held so much mean ing and heartbreak. How everyone came together in the end was touching.

[Clarissa · Rating 5 out of 5]

Amazing Book

This is one of the most attention grabbing books I have read. I love the storyline and can't wait for the next book.

[ANGEL-A- · Rating 2 out of 5]

It imperative that everyone they meet hears poor Alora's story, so Alora can lay her head on Damiens chest and blush red like a new born maiden

[Dawn Ruth · Rating 5 out of 5]

great read

Love the story and the characters. Thought this was already complete series Kinda bummed have to wait on the rest of the story.