Bought this book because of an AD only for it to disappoint. How many times was she going to use her hand ….the freaking entire book. The last 5% of the book was them getting together once not to mention the mistakes. I hope this was one of the first books this author wrote because it’s terrible and what kind of ending is this , the story is all over the place. This book is not even worth the $6 price tag
😳 Even porn is sometimes better than this work... Save your time!
In terms of content: Up to about chapter 120 there is simply little to none. Typical porn... Whether there is a werewolf alpha - or not - It doesn't really matter until this point.... A precocious 18-year-old fucks everything under the sun, while her best friend (female MC) goes down on her father (male MC). The sex scenes are not particularly varied or imaginative and the focus is more on dirty talk - there could be much more... For example (BD)SM is introduced and it ends up as a lap dance...?!?? Oh yes, well and sex with a pregnant woman.
It gets even worse when the narrative style changes from 3rd person to direct perspective from about chapter 150 onwards. For one thing, you have to listen to the stupid and nonsensically annoying thoughts of the crazy FMC and worse, they are repeated almost 50% of every chapter when the narrator changes... It doesn't help that a plot about betrayal and fratricide is introduced in the second half.... It would have been possible to start 150 chapters earlier.
Since I have the (sometimes exhausting) habit of finishing all the books I started... In the end, I just read across to finally finish it
Steamy? No. Sexy?. No. Intimate? Definitely not. Spice? sort of .... pain? definitely. Disturbed? shocking. A madness that makes you question your rabid heat filled body and lustful mind? absolutely. This is pure filth. A dribble of heat if you like unpredictable sloppy all over the place spice. Needs more structure and less filth. Even some spicy videos and movies are better than this trash. A waste of time. Would only recommend reading if you REALLY have no other spice to bide your time. Or if you are just plain horny and are maddened by Lust.
The story had some major issues with not constantly staying with facts stated in the above context. The hot and heavy was definitely there but because of that I won’t read the rest of the series: and im one who loves to finish whole sets before moving to the next book/series.
The smut is good. However, the grammatical errors, the wrong names, the wrong tense…. The confusing bouncing in the story. As long as you don’t expect good writing, the semi plot is decent.