DNF at 55%
The story's premise drew me in immediately: a fugitive assassin, deep secrets revolving around forbidden magic, and a king who simply refuses to stay dead. The setup carried immense promise, blending strong Slavic folklore influences with a world that seemed to be brimming with intrigue.
The opening chapters were undoubtedly the highlight. Roksana, with her shadowy powers and venomous capabilities, made for a captivating protagonist, and the pacing suggested a dark, gripping tale ahead. Unfortunately, as the narrative progressed, the momentum faltered, revealing weaknesses. The worldbuilding, particularly surrounding “chaos magic” lacked clarity and left much to be desired.
For me, the weakest aspects of this story were two things: Reynard, the male lead, and the writing itself. Instead of portraying a complex and compelling figure, Reynard came across as suffocatingly possessive and overly jealous rather than a commanding war king. His relationship with Roksana felt rooted in clichéd insta-lust and shallow interactions rather than meaningful growth, making it hard to invest in their dynamic. I can understand that, at first, given the circumstances of how the two characters met, Reynard’s behavior might seem complicated. But once that initial “problem” is resolved, his attitude remains the same: there’s no sense of a shift from before to after, nor any deeper reflection on his part toward her. I know the explanation given for his behavior is tied to the concept of “family wild magic,” but that alone wasn’t enough to change my impression of him as a character. It all feels stagnant. In this case, the enemies-to-lovers arc is carried much more effectively through Roksana’s POV.
The second weak point for me was the writing. Initially, it seemed promising, but as I continued reading, it fell short. It lacked that spark that keeps me turning the pages, even when interesting elements were introduced. At times, scenes felt forced, as if the characters had to act a certain way just to push the plot forward, rather than behaving naturally. On top of that, there was an overreliance on explanations—too much telling instead of allowing the story to unfold organically through the events.
Poisoned Kingdom starts with a fantastic concept but struggles to sustain its initial promise. It may still appeal to readers who enjoy an overprotective male lead and don’t mind a more heavy-handed writing style, but for me it ultimately fell flat.
Thanks to @TheNerdFam for providing me with an eARC in exchange for an honest review.