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Two rival authors are forced to confront a decade of love and heartbreak on the campus where it all started in this captivating debut romance by Kara McDowell.

It’s been thirteen years since Mars Darling first met West Emerson on a bench outside their writing class. What started out as a friendly rivalry turned into a best friendship and then, for a brief time, a romance. Now over a decade later, as Mars stands at their college campus as a once-esteemed YA fantasy author, ready to take on a book festival, she comes face to face with West—the muse behind her infamous trilogy’s heartthrob hero, the man who betrayed her in the worst way.

Mars is determined not to let her comeback tour be ruined by the fact that West is also at the festival as an author. But the longer they are on the campus that holds so many shared memories, the more time they have to untangle their past, and Mars starts to question if maybe it’s not only her writing career that deserves a second chance.

Told in two unfolding timelines—Mars and West’s frenzied college days where they grapple with their undeniable connection, and their tension-filled present of heartache and familiar yearning—this charming romance shows that while you can’t rewrite the past, it’s never too late to chase your happily ever after and get back the one that got away.

400 pages, Paperback

First published April 7, 2026

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Kara McDowell

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Kara McDowell is the author of romcoms for teenagers and adults, including her upcoming adult debut THE WRITE OFF. Coming from Berkley in Spring 2026.

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717 reviews55 followers
April 26, 2026
4.5/5

so do we think emily henry gets a residual check every time the line “why do you think” is used in reference to a break up…

books about authors can be pretty hit or miss for me. i sometimes find myself getting burnt out with the sheer amount of books that are written with bookish people as main characters, i love them dearly but sometimes a need something now. because of this, i was so scared about going into this one. i wanted to love to so badly because of the second chance element and thankfully this was a major win!!

mars and west meet in a creative writing class in college and their journey from these follows them through book deals, arguments, evil new york times articles, movie premieres, book festivals, and snow in arizona! i loved following these two as we unpacked their history, mars is such a likable main character (to me at least) and i was rooting for her to see her worth for the entire novel. the way she put so much stake into her career to prove to everyone that she could make it, girl i get you religiously. west was really sweet, and clearly very in love with her, but his insecurities are definitely what makes this book not five stars. i know that by the final page these two have worked through any problems he had with there success but i legitimately wanted to kill him at times for being so rude and undermining her/an entire genre of literature. thankfully the red vines pulled everything together so i can happily root for their perfect future!!

maybe it's just a case of this being the week the album came out, but this story really exemplified the great divide album by noah kahan to me. i was listening to staying still while finishing this book and it was perfect! plus wests' relationship with is family and how that seeps into his decision making... i see you. if you are looking for a romance book with two characters who cannot stay away from each other, but more importantly, can't stop writing about each other, pick this up!!

*thank you berkley and netgalley for the copy!*
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November 30, 2025
Dear Reader,

As a girl who’s been vicariously falling in love since I read Anne of Green Gables at 10 years old, I’ve had my fair share of “book boyfriends.” (A term I’ve always known in my soul, even if I didn’t have the words for it until recently.) I’ve fallen in love with Gilbert Blythe while studying at Queen’s Academy, Mr. Darcy while touring Pemberly, and Gus Everett while spending the summer at the beach. I’ve fallen in love with immortals, royals, and winged Fae. I know what it’s like to walk into a bookstore and feel butterflies in my stomach at the possibilities.

In short, I come by my fandom honestly, and I’m fascinated by the way fan spaces have evolved since I was a teenager spending my weekends in homemade merch at a midnight release party. Now, fan interactions happen online, and an artist’s lore is almost as important as the art itself. Entire careers are built on a foundation of self-mythology. 2020s pop culture thrives on it, and after one too many late-night internet deep dives, I got the idea for The Write Off.

We know what it looks like when a pop star breaks up with her boyfriend. Instead of love songs, she writes breakup songs. But what would happen if it was a best-selling fantasy series instead of pop music? Enter Mars Darling. When she accidentally makes the hero of her fantasy series a carbon copy of her first love, she turns him into the internet’s favorite book boyfriend. It’s mortifying and romantic and inspiring—right up until the moment Mars and West’s relationship implodes and she’s left broken hearted, alone, and with two more books to write.

In some ways, The Write Off is a fictional story about a fictional story. (I can’t say it doesn’t get a bit meta.) More importantly, I set out to write characters who feel real, even if that makes them a little messy. Mars and West’s story is one that embraces the angst and thrill of first love and second chances. It takes them more than a decade of art and love and loss to work through the mess, but when they do, every day of yearning was worth the wait.

For the devoted fangirl in me who duct taped a picture of one of my first “book boyfriends” to a plain white t-shirt because I couldn’t afford the real thing—putting this book into the world is a dream that was also worth the wait. Thank you for taking a look. I hope you find a little something that feels like falling in love.

Love,
Kara McDowell

P.S. Find me on IG or TikTok at @karajmcdowellbooks to find out what's next
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1,678 reviews342 followers
Did Not Finish
April 19, 2026
My bad, honestly. I saw this on some spring release list and went for it. Never mind that list rarely works for me, and I read a YA from this author that was a sub-3. (It feels like I'm going to get strung along inorganically to what went wrong in overly telling dual timelines, if you must know)
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March 25, 2026
Thank you Berkley Romance for my copy! All thoughts are my own.

Something I love as a reader is following an author’s career from than debut. I have loved Kara McDowell since her YA Christmas romance, One Way Or Another, brought me joy in 2020 to now! I was so excited for her adult romance debut and it did not disappoint.

It’s a second chance romance between two writers that starts in college, so there is mess and passion and heartbreak and yearning. All things I love to find in that trope!

Synopsis:

“It’s been thirteen years since Mars Darling first met West Emerson on a bench outside their writing class. What started out as a friendly rivalry turned into a best friendship and then, for a brief time, a romance. Now over a decade later, as Mars stands at their college campus as a once-esteemed YA fantasy author, ready to take on a book festival, she comes face to face with West—the muse behind her infamous trilogy’s heartthrob hero, the man who betrayed her in the worst way.Mars is determined not to let her comeback tour be ruined by the fact that West is also at the festival as an author. But the longer they are on the campus that holds so many shared memories, the more time they have to untangle their past, and Mars starts to question if maybe it’s not only her writing career that deserves a second chance.Told in two unfolding timelines—Mars and West’s frenzied college days where they grapple with their undeniable connection, and their tension-filled present of heartache and familiar yearning—this charming romance shows that while you can’t rewrite the past, it’s never too late to chase your happily ever after and get back the one that got away.” —NetGalley

What I Liked:

The Writing—I love Kara’s YA books so I couldn’t wait for her adult romance debut! I love how to strings together words.

The Characters—I loved both of them and the side characters! Daphne is such a great friend.

The Dual Timeline—I think it was executed extremely well and left me constantly wanting to turn the page.

What Didn’t Work for Me:

The Reason for the Break Up—From a writing perspective, it was great. From a reader perspective, I wasn’t sure if I should root for this couple. I was genuinely shocked by how hurtful the reasoning was. But! I do think one of the biggest mistakes reviewers can make is truly judging characters instead of going along for the ride with them and learning something.

Character Authenticity: 4/5 Spice Rating: 2/5 Overall Rating: 4/5
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555 reviews12 followers
January 20, 2026
4 stars 🌟 what a sweet second chance 🥹 this really took me through the ringer but i have no regrets and i absolutely loved westmargot 📖🍊🌸 they were meant for each other, even if it took them 10+ years to figure it out 😊

one of my favorite things about this was the way that margot healed her relationship with her writing ❤️‍🩹 i think the author did a great job about portraying her emotions from beginning to end and by the epilogue, it truly felt like she made a drastic shift in her mentality towards her work 🥲

sometimes the amount of times they saw each other over the years and something happened got a bit annoying but it all came together in the end (AND THE RED VINES AT THE MOVIE PREMIERE GODDDDD west is my dream man im sorry)

a special thank you to netgalley and berkley for the arc in exchange for an honest review!
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200 reviews29 followers
April 19, 2026
warning: spoilers run amok all over this review, proceed at your own peril

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1.25 stars

it started out cute and angsty and i saw the vision, but as the story went on, i can’t shake the feeling that the two leads - mars and west - are just so unhealthy for each other? is no one going to mention the fact that there’s a sense of codependency going on between them, mars more so? she’s west-centered and west-obsessed, and her clear incapacity to function normally when things are rocky with west is something she should’ve taken up with a therapist. it makes me sick to my stomach that she can’t even feel a tincture of joy signing her books at the conference just because she had a nothingburger love spat with her decade-long ex.

this is not to excuse west, who was such a huge loser the entire decade they’ve known each other. dating your high school ex in college within nine days of mars asking to be friends because she’s overwhelmed? sure, let’s be generous and chalk it up to youthful idiocy. publicly humiliating the supposed love of your life on a new york times interview during the premiere season of the movie adaptation of her bestselling book because you don’t want to be associated with her? dude, shut the fuck up. the level of stupidity you possess to torpedo your career and hers with shitty answers within minutes of almost sleeping with her when there are a million other ways you could’ve phrased your sentiment? ASTRONOMICAL.

am i supposed to believe that the “book as the apology” shtick was enough penance? this ‘tall, multicolor-eyed’ idiot let the love of his life believe that he thinks she’s pathetic for years. it’s not the first time his sense of timing fucked things up. there’s no sense of urgency in his actions, especially in the moments where it would’ve mattered the most. let’s go back to when they broke up: oh shit, i received a scathing rejection letter on the day of my girlfriend’s college graduation. what do i do? that’s right; upend the plans we made about moving to new york together, dump her ass, and walk away. but wait, actually no, scratch that. let me walk back to the house and talk to her. oh, she’s gone? she’s probably at the party we were supposed to attend together. no problem, i’ll just SLEEP IN HER BED TO WAIT FOR HER WITHOUT CALLING HER FIRST THING ABOUT CHANGING MY MIND ON ENDING OUR RELATIONSHIP.

the only consistent thing about west is his inconsistency. one minute he’s telling mars he’ll go anywhere she goes, and the next he’s done and hopes she’ll find happiness elsewhere. their relationship is so great that they tortured not only themselves but also me, the reader.

this feels like a first draft. like i said at the start of my review, i saw the vision - until the execution shattered my proverbial reading glasses and now i can’t see what i’m supposed to be looking at.

this would be better as a movie (inside joke intended).

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uh, not sure i like how it only took west 9 days to get back together with the nearest available girl after mars freaked out and asked to be friends. not cool, man.

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reading this for the books on books challenge, and am pleasantly surprised that this isn’t my first mcdowell. author characters, second chance romance (college to adulthood) - my catnip duo!
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393 reviews5 followers
December 10, 2025
Big thanks to Berkley Romance for the ARC of this one! This was my first by this author and will definitely not be my last! The story follows two writers who met in college as English majors. Mars is the author of a wildly successful YA romantasy series and West writes Literary Fiction. As a former English teacher and English major myself, so many of the details surrounding their college years were so fun for me, including descriptions of classics that I absolutely did not enjoy either! The book follows Mars and West over the course of their college career and post college as they fall in and out of love. This book was the perfect second chance romance with a slow burn. The tension between the two characters was incredible and despite all of the miscommunication between them. I could see that they were perfect for each other! The timeline goes back and forth between college, in between, and present day when they are seeing each other after many years apart at a book convention at the alma mater. This book was so great and I really loved every detail. It is perfect for all romance lovers, but especially people who love second chance and enjoy some fun literary details. Five stars all around! LOVED IT!
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609 reviews260 followers
May 3, 2026
The Write Off by Kara McDowell 💌

Such an easy five stars to give this book! A second chance romance told in dual timelines. That's enough to be a book I am going to love but also throwing in the fact that they are both authors that tend to be better with written words than spoken ones with each other. Yeah I ate it up and had the best time reading this.

Mars and West first met their freshman year of college on a bench outside their writing class. The chemistry is immediately there, but there's many phases to their relationship through college... rivalry, friendship, and romance. But in the present day Mars and West haven't spoken in years. Mars has been focused on redeeming her author career after facing backlash with how she wrapped up her best selling YA trilogy. There's more to the story there though as one of the main characters in her book is heavily inspired by West. So when West betrays her mid-way through writing the series, she makes a decision to end the series in a way that upsets fans. As part of her comeback with a new book, she attends a festival on her old college campus and comes face to face with West who is also an attending author. Surrounded by memories, it's finally time for them to face their past and maybe get a second chance.

This was a book that I didn't want to put down. I needed to know what had happened in their past that caused them to not speak to each other for so long. There's so much tension between them in the present as things are slowly revealed in the past timeline. I loved seeing all the pining from them both in both timelines. It felt very much like a situation of the right person but repeated wrong times. Both Mars and West play a role in wrong doings in their past too. They are flawed characters that needed additional time to grow apart and then continue to grow together. I can definitely see this being a book that I come back and reread and I am very much looking forward to reading more from the author in the future.

🫶🏼 second chance
⏰ dual timeline
📖 book about books (both authors)
❤️‍🔥 slow burn
🥺 so much yearning and pining

single POV
5/5 stars ⭐️
1/5 spice level 🌶️
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145 reviews52 followers
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
March 18, 2026
The Write Off 📝📚📖🎓🏫
DNF @ 15%

Thank you to Berkley Romance for the gifted arc! #berkley #berkleypartner

I really tried to love this one, but it just wasn’t working for me. The synopsis was giving me the same energy as Beach Read but with a more academic setting, so I was immediately intrigued. I love a good second chance romance, especially when there’s a dual timeline in play, but it felt really disconnected in this book.

The first chapter immediately drew me in, and I’m sorry to say that it was all downhill from there. I have read McDowell in the past and didn’t enjoy her YA work, but I didn’t realize that this adult romance was hers when I downloaded it. That’s not to say that I don’t think that I could enjoy an author’s work that I previously haven’t, but I did unfortunately have the same issues with this book as her previous.

The writing in this book (as far as I got) was extremely spoon-fed and all telling, no showing. I felt like the FMC wasn’t very likeable, and there wasn’t anything about her that I felt like I could relate to. The MMC felt like he should’ve been giving off hot bad boy energy but instead made me cringe. I also felt like the FMC’s gripes towards her readers and the publishing process felt a little too realistic to have been fiction, and it makes me feel as though that’s how McDowell feels. That’s 100% an assumption on my part, and I’m not making any claims or accusations, but it just didn’t feel good to read.

I do think that this book will find an audience who will love and enjoy it. While that wasn’t me, unfortunately, I wish it and McDowell the best of luck!
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94 reviews6 followers
April 19, 2026
This book means everything to me. Genuinely. I cannot even put into words just how much I love this story. When I started crying, I knew it had easily became a favorite. Holding this one so close to my heart and recommending it to everyone.

Everything about it was perfect. The microtropes, Mars & West and their individual arcs, the ROMANCE (I'm such a bffs to lovers LOVER), the quotes, the setting, the message about forgiveness, happiness, and success–all of it made such an impact on me. This is one of those magical stories that just completely takes me by surprise and ruins me forever with how good it is. I will be rereading this one so many times throughout my lifetime.

It was extra special as a University of Arizona alumni and Tucson native!! I've never read a book that takes place in my slow-paced little hometown, so this meant so much to me. All of the local spots that were mentioned made me feel so deeply nostalgic. Kara NAILED it. I mean CASA VIDEO (ahem and the forbidden section) and GENTLE BENS and EEGEES?? C'mon!!

And West? Oh my gosh that man made the husband list–like HIGH on the list too. Oh my gosh, I am in love with him. He had me swooning every 5 pages.

Ughhhh I wish I could properly convey just how special this book is, but like West–my words fail me!! I'm obsessed with this story and I'm so happy I'm early to the party. Kara, you ate and left no crumbs and I cannot wait to read more of your work!!
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163 reviews16 followers
April 5, 2026
The Write Off is a dual timeline, second chance, right person wrong time, romance filled with tension and yearning.

I love books that talk about books and the literary space and this one gave perspective of struggling authors and authors who have made it, which was intriguing!

Margot and West meet as college students and part as enemies. When we meet them in the present timeline, they have severed all connections and Margot absolutely hates West. However, she’s back at their old college grounds for a book event and somehow gets roped into doing a panel with him.

The underlying reasoning behind them becoming enemies was what had me hooked with this book. You see these two who are absolutely perfect for one another when they first meet to not really knowing why there’s such animosity with each other and it was really fun to uncover.

The reasoning behind their first break up… fine… they’re college kids I can see it. The second one… woof. All to have a semi third act break up at the end was a little rough for me but I still enjoyed the book nonetheless.
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3,085 reviews755 followers
April 11, 2026
3.5 stars

I'm a sucker for a dual timeline and this one sounded so good.

I liked Mars and West. They're both anxious and unsure. There is instant chemistry, banter, and a sweetness only captured with first love. All of this had me rooting for them right from the start...even when I struggled to get invested.

Plot wise, it's a slow start. I did enjoy the past/present chapters; however, it still felt like we were being told everything and the hints of The Thing started to annoy me as it took forever to find out what happened. The loads of inner monologue (when all I wanted was open conversations) finally paid off as the adults were able to finally say what they meant.

Overall, the characters kept me interested and last few chapters were exactly what I wanted, but I also could have just skipped to the last bit to find out and been happy.

**Huge thanks to the publisher for providing the arc free of charge**
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1,930 reviews129 followers
April 16, 2026
I really thought I was going to be in love with this book and there were a lot of elements I did love, but the conflict really set me back. Mars and West meet the first semester of college and keep meeting. They end up dating and she bases her MMC on him. Her books become super popular and then when their relationship tanks, so does the last book. There is a lot that happens in the 13 years that they know one another, but ultimately he wants her back and knows he was an idiot.
I felt awful for Margo, but I also was annoyed by her at times. She easily forgave him for something I would have needed a lot more groveling for. It was honestly wild to me after what happened to her career because of him. It is safe to say, these two do belong together.
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114 reviews39 followers
April 8, 2026
This was such a fun book! Admittedly wasn’t a fan of the MMC at his introduction, but quickly turned around; he perfectly complements the quirky FMC. I’m a big fan of alternating timelines and thought the second chance romance was well done. There’s also always something fun and nostalgic reading a story about characters who write and love to read; it felt very relatable, and the descriptions were great. The storyline is interesting and I enjoyed the romance.

Thank you Berkley Romance for the eARC.
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109 reviews12 followers
April 22, 2026
CRIED I CRIED *que where’s my husband* because West was UGHHHHH

I absolutely adored this one! It was sweet, swoon worthy, and a beautiful second chance love story!

I adore a good book about writing/ books and this delivered! Told in dual timeline with banter for miles and miles I loved it!!! I love how real Mars and West were, I truly fell in love with them.

“I just want to know you Mars, sue me”

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56 reviews
April 26, 2026
If you live or are from Tuscon, I highly recommend this book. There’s so many cute Tuscon nods (gentle bens, U of A, bison witches, and more). Really enjoyed it
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February 24, 2026
full rtc

Thank you, NetGalley, and Berkley for the eARC in exchange for an honest review.
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Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
March 5, 2026
Rating: 4.5 Stars

They were 19 when their lives intersected. They went from rivals to friends to more. But it seemed it was not their time. They parted ways but always seemed to find their way back to each other. Through years of separation, they continued to carry a spark for each other. When both Mars and West were invited to a book festival at their alma mater, it seemed like fate was giving them another chance as some people are meant to be part of your life.

I have read and enjoyed several young adult books by McDowell. I was excited to see what she had in store for me with her adult debut, and I am here to tell you that I was not disappointed. Nobody adores a second chance romance the way I do, and this was one I was wholeheartedly behind. I wouldn't say I am into the woo-woo, but there was a reason life and circumstances and geography could not keep West and Mars apart. When something is meant to be, it is meant to be.

But timing was never on their side. As the story unfolded in dual timelines, I got to learn about the past that shaped these two. I got to watch them fall in love, make mistakes, and try to repair the damage. I got to watch them hurt and heal. Parts were wonderful, others were heartbreaking, but it was all important with respect to the future they could have together.

I have to admit that I struggled with Mars until later in the book. She was ambitious and driven but also very complicated. I know she had to deal with a level of success she could have only dreamed of and all the pressure that comes with that, but there were times I simply could not understand the choices she made. I still hoped she would figure it out because she and West belonged to each other. There were so many points in their history where you could see how they were the missing pieces in each others puzzles.

I was definitely team West from the beginning. He had a lot going on in his personal life with respect to his family, and he had to shelve a lot of his plans. He also grappled with a lot insecurities, and in his youth, he may not have always handled it all with grace, but gosh darn it, West in the present timeline was perfection. He always said he couldn't find the words, but believe me, he found them over and over again. He strummed my heartstrings like a virtuoso, and I swear to you! There was this one part near the end where his words moved me tears (happy ones).

Perhaps the universe knew they weren't ready for their BIG love with THE ONE back in college, but a strong case was emerging for them in the present timeline. Mars and West had grown a lot over the years, and I was hoping upon hope that they were both all in this time.

Overall, this was a story of second chances - a second chance for West and Mars to prove themselves, a second chance to shape their futures, and a second chance at love. I had a wonderful time visiting the past with these two and tagging along on their way to their HEA.

*ARC provided by publisher

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23 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
March 22, 2026
This was my first book from this author, and I really liked it. I wasn't sure how I'd like the dual timeline, but honestly, I really think it was the only thing that would work for this particular plot given that this story is basically one large miscommunication trope. Also, I love a good enemies-to-lovers book, although I'd more accurately characterize this one as a "lovers-to-angry-to-lovers" book. This is also a second-chance romance, and I'm not usually the biggest fan of those - not really sure why - but I found myself rooting for this one, even if I don't think this couple would've gotten an HEA were they real-life people. That is why some of us read books afterall, right? To get the outcomes we don't usually see in the real world.

I like some of the references in this book - it brought me back to my own college days. I don't know that the blurb was entirely accurate; it indicated that the characters started their story as "friendly rivals," but that was never really true. Does it count as a rivalry if one of the parties doesn't even know they're in competition with the other and the unknowing party forgives the other party's win in the competition pretty much immediately?

I also liked some of the commentary in the book regarding the internet, and the public in general. Really, the only two people who get a say and/or know what's happening in a relationship are the two people in the relationship. Other people might have opinions but they don't really matter, even if the internet commenting folks are fast with publishing their thoughts about other people's lives for all the world to see and judge.

If I have one major complaint about this work, it's that a lot of what happened (or was "revealed") later in the book was obviously telegraphed early on in the plot. The terrible thing that the MMC does? The nominal plot twist? Yeah, everyone knows what that's going to be before the book is even half over. I think the book would've been an even better read with a little more depth if the author took care to allow the story to develop and unfold without basically giving away all the secrets at the beginning. Feels a little like reading a summary of a movie instead of just watching it.

TLDR - A recommended read of an overall good book. Pick up this book if you like slightly nerdy characters / settings, an MMC who's obviously down bad for the FMC, a chance to fall in love with the characters in their youth and present-day, and a slightly different take on the miscommunication trope. An interesting dual-timeline chance to fall in love twice!


Thanks to NetGalley and Berkley Publishing Group for the ARC! The opinion above is all my own.
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128 reviews7 followers
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 6, 2026
The Write Off is a slow burn, friend to lovers to enemies to lovers romance that spans a decade. Mars and West meet in college and both are wildly talented, though in different ways and genres.

I’d like to start with the positives here, first. I genuinely enjoyed the story overall and the time switching between the past and the present. The beginning keeps you hooked because everything starts out in enemy territory between our two MCs, and I just HAD to know how we got there. As a writer myself, having both leads writers with different specialties and success levels was a fresh mechanism for a romance.

That being said, there were some things that were off-putting for me personally. I really just did not like Mars as a FMC, her reactions just felt so over the top and dramatic in some ways, though I’m sure many readers will see themselves in her. I also felt like it took way too long to understand the fallout between the characters, it made the first part of the story hard for me to get through because Mars just came off so petty, vengeful, and antagonizing. Even after hearing the whole story, I still think she was way too much. I also really dislike how she never took accountability for “destroying” her own career and just kept blaming West when SHE is the one who had an impulsive, emotional reaction that she let run wild and ruin the final book in her first series. Girl, be a grown up and own your own stuff.

All that being said, I do think this is a really well-written, well-thought-out romance that many people in the genre would enjoy. I’d absolutely recommend it!

Thank you NetGalley, Berkley Publishing Group, and Kara McDowell for allowing me to read an early copy of this book!
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261 reviews7 followers
Review of advance copy received from Edelweiss+
February 12, 2026
This was a wonderful, angsty, romantic second-chance debut from Kara McDowell.

Mars Darling first met West Emerson thirteen years ago on a bench outside their writing class. What began as friendly rivalry quickly turned into friendship—and then bloomed into romance. Now Mars is back on that same college campus for a book festival, forced to face West—her former muse for her successful YA fantasy romance series—years after he betrayed her. Mars is determined to make her comeback to the publishing world a success and refuses to let a weekend surrounded by West and their shared past derail her. But being back on campus stirs up old memories, and Mars starts to wonder if she and West might deserve a second chance too.

I loved this story so much. Seriously—I finished it in less than two days because I could not put it down. Second-chance romances are some of my favorites, especially ones like this that move between past and present. The dual timelines beautifully highlighted the yearning and angst between Mars and West over the years.

I also really loved Mars. I respect a woman who can hold a grudge and be a little petty about it—but she also demanded honesty, sought real explanations, and was willing to forgive. Mars and West struggle with miscommunication, but it felt realistic: they needed time apart to grow up, find themselves, and ultimately learn how to love each other the right way.

If you love second-chance, slow-burn, hate-to-love romances, you’re definitely going to want to add The Write Off to your list.

Star Rating: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️.5 / ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Spice Rating: 🌶.5 / 🌶🌶🌶🌶🌶

The Write Off releases on 04/07/2026.

Thank you to Berkley and PRH for this advanced reading copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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76 reviews7 followers
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
March 5, 2026
Thank you so much to Berkeley Romance for the ARC✨

Rating: 4.5/5 ⭐️
Warning: Spoilers ahead
(This is mostly me talking about my favorite parts)

I devoured this book in one sitting.
I am a slut for a second chance romance and this book did not disappoint. West and Mars had instant chemistry the moment they met and it just got better from there.

This book made me laugh, sigh, yell, cry, and swoon. Mars and West have a second chance but before they get there it’s nothing but longing and rivalry. I adored the dual timeline because how else would you know that they are epically in love with each other regardless of the current situation.

I have to say that my favorite part of the whole book is when Mars realizes that she wrote Fox Caldwell after West. It was so wholesome and innocent. It was the clear picture that her love for West was so subconscious that it was a part of her.

I absolutely love a “I would do it all over because it got us here” moment. Everytime 10/10 stars. No notes.

“You were the best fucking thing about this town”

Even after all those years, a whole decade, West is still thoughtful and cares about Mars. Going to the store at 7am to buy her oatmeal and then pretending he didn’t go through that is absolutely adorable. This book is absolutely adorable.

I kept wanting to know what happened next. I needed to see how the story would unfold. I needed to know what happened in the past to get to where they are. I was so captivated by the writing. It was beautifully done.

Honestly, I don’t want to ruin the ending so I will say that this book is 100% worth the read and I recommend it x100.

Just two people meant to be and time has proven it time and time again. Heartsick
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132 reviews16 followers
Review of advance copy received from NetGalley
April 2, 2026
4 ⭐️

I don’t usually like a contemporary romance, but I do LOVE a 10-year situationship, so I had to request this from Berkley when I saw it pop up.

The Write Off follows Mars and West, two novelists who reunite at a writer’s festival after a tumultuous decade of on-and-off romance. The narrative switches between present-day at the writer’s festival and flashbacks to the complicated history between Mars and West as we watch them meet in college, become friends, and reconnect over the years.

I enjoyed this one – it felt like Emily Henry meets The Tortured Poets Department, in the best way. The characters were relatable and sympathetic, and the POV voice was a bit quirky without being annoying. Mars and West had an addictive dynamic, writing each other into all of their works across the decade, and I got totally sucked into their story (I actually had to stop myself from reading it all in one sitting last night).

My only real critique is that after all that drama, the ultimate ending was a bit simplistic. The plot dragged on towards the end and it felt like there was no good way to resolve everything.

Other than that, I had a good time with The Write Off – at this point in my life I’m not super interested in reading about 18 year-olds, but even the college flashbacks were actually really well done, informed the present-day actions of the characters, and didn’t feel juvenile. I got soooo nostalgic for my own on-campus years (I even miss the cafeteria food).

Highly recommend if you are looking for an easy-to-read and well-written romance!

*DISCLAIMER: Thank you to Berkley Publishing and NetGalley for providing an eARC of this book for the purposes of providing an unbiased review.*

PUB DATE: April 7th, 2026
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184 reviews2 followers
Review of advance copy received from Publisher
April 3, 2026
Thank you PRH Audio for the advanced listening copy of this audiobook (all opinions are mine)!

This was such a cute and sweet read! I was attracted to the cover because it perfectly encapsulates a college romance getting a second chance so.. You know I had to go for it!

I absolutely loved how this story revolved around the main character’s art (in writing form) and it set their relationship up for a lot of tension, competition, adoration, mess, and PASSION! Their inspiration revolved around each other and while it wasn’t always perfect, I did enjoy the ways this story and their work reflected what was going on in their own lives. The way these two communicated through their art was veryyyyyy romantic.

The dual timelines worked really well here and I loved that we got glimpses of their college selves as well as present day. It helped build the plot and their character development up. It was like I kept ping ponging back and forth between how I couldn’t wait for the present timeline and then couldn’t wait for the past timeline!

I think my only reservations about this book were that it was a little too long and I found myself disappointed by how their first go around at the relationship ended. I had a hard time getting back on board with the two of them after that, especially with West.

Still, this was cute and fun and I enjoyed it! I’d recommend it for anyone looking for something sweet, revolves around a love of literature and writing, getting inspiration for art from real life, and loves a second chance!

I love everything Brittany Pressley narrates so of course I enjoyed this as an audiobook. Honestly, that was another reason I picked it up. She can do no wrong.

Thanks again to PRH Audio, this releases April 7th!
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41 reviews
April 8, 2026
This is one of the most frustrating on and off again relationship dynamics I’ve read but I absolutely ate it up. West might have been an insecure loser in his early years but boy did that man GROVEL over it. I’m not always a fan of dual timelines but I think the author actually did it very well and it flowed seamlessly in this book, despite an entire decade of back and forth between the characters.

This was a slow burn friends to lovers to enemies to lovers romance and I loved their dynamic, despite how flawed and faulty it was for a long time. While West was frustrating for a large portion of their on and off again romance, that man can GROVEL and pine and I love that for Mars. I couldn’t stop reading no matter how frustrated I’d get because I just had to know how it turned out between them. While some of their moments were pretty annoying (in a WHYYYY would you do that sort of way for both main characters), I was never actually annoyed at the story and I do think that’s a difficult thing to balance for writers but this one did a very good job. While both characters could be annoying, immature, and unlikable at times, the writing made it feel realistic and at no point was I completely over either character, which kept me immersed in the story. This was my first book by this author and I’ll definitely be reading more - this book had a ton of characteristics I don’t usually enjoy in romances but the writing held it together and instead it was a great story of two flawed people who are so deeply in love that they’re willing to overcome their flaws to be together, even if it takes over a decade to work things out.

Thank you so much to Netgalley and Berkley Publishing for the ARC of this book.
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182 reviews5 followers
February 9, 2026
Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC.

This story follows two writers who met in college as English majors and reconnect 13 years later at an author festival held at their old campus. Mars (FMC) is now the author of a successful YA romantasy series, while West (MMC) writes literary fiction and works as an English professor. The book is told through dual timelines, bouncing between their past and present as they navigate unfinished business and the possibility of a second chance.

I really enjoyed the concept of this one. Watching their relationship unfold—both romantically and creatively—was fascinating. Their shared love for writing, books, and words was my favorite part. Literature truly felt like their love language, and that aspect was beautifully done.

What didn’t fully work for me was the dialogue. At times it felt a bit awkward and uneven. Some conversations were really deep and meaningful, while others felt oddly shallow or flat, which made the emotional flow feel inconsistent.

West was a solid and likable character, but Mars wasn’t my favorite. She came across a little too full of herself at times and occasionally felt rude or ill-mannered, which made it harder for me to connect with her.

That said, I was pleasantly surprised by the ending, and overall I enjoyed reading this book.

If you like:
• Second-chance romance
• Friends to lovers
• Enemies to lovers
• Only one bed
• Forced proximity

And if you enjoyed Swear on This Life by Renee Carlino, this one is definitely worth checking out.
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37 reviews
April 8, 2026
It's like this book was made specifically for me. A story about two writers where, in dual timelines, you get to see their careers and relationship kindle, blossom, grow, burn, survive, and come back. I was immediately hooked from the first chapter and wanted to know everything about their stories. A beautiful story about a messy relationship and career fueled by yearning, pride, insecurities, and redemption.

In the present time, Mars and West are basically academic/professional rivals, but they were much more than that 13 years ago. There are secrets, betrayals, yearning, denial, drama. I can see people not liking either of the characters, but I adored them. They were realistic to me. They have flaws and don't make the right choices all the time. They're petty and prideful and stubborn. It's messy and beautiful. And it was a pleasure to see them grow in both timelines. As a writer myself, I do admit that I'm biased towards books about writers (I did say it felt like it was written just for me!), but this book made me want to write and chase after my dreams and for that alone it's going on my "reread every year" shelf.

This book also, rightfully, calls out fandom culture and how much damage it can do. It really puts into perspective the toxicity of parasocial and chronically online people on the internet who will make demands and judgments without knowing the full story. It may be hard to read at times but, if you start to get offended, maybe it's time to look inwards.


Review copy received from Netgalley
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7 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 7, 2026
Review of ARC received from Netgalley

Mild spoilers

The romance in this book is really sweet. Second-chance romances are a hit or miss for me, but that aspect of this book was definetly a hit. The reasons for Mars and West splitting felt understandable and forgivable, which is something that a lot of second-chance romances miss, so that was really refreshing.

The dialogue in this book felt weird at times, a bit too much, awkward, and odd. Mars and West felt so real sometimes, but then other times the dialogue made them feel almost wooden. Mars' inner and verbal dialogue feels so disjointed from one another at times, and not in a way where it feels like she's confused, but more like it's confusing to read.

I enjoyed West, but didn't like Mars most of the time. However, I did enjoy their romance and how heavily books, reading, and writing were woven into their relationship. I loved the fact that literature was like a love language between the two of them, it was so sweet.

Overall, the book delivered a sweet romance with a good ending. And there was even a little mystery that really kept me engaged and reading because I couldn't wait to figure out what it was. The conclusion to said mystery (if you know, you know) was actually shocking to me, I didn't guess that at all, and was pleasantly surprised.
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April 6, 2026
Margot and West were college sweethearts, until Margot became a bestselling author and a betrayal tore them apart, sending her into a tailspin both personally and professionally. As she begins to regain her footing, she agrees to headline a panel at a book festival, only to discover she’s been paired with—of all people—West.

The Write Off is a dual-timeline, second-chance romance that leans into the “right person, wrong time” trope and is filled with yearning and unresolved feelings. I really enjoyed how the story explores the publishing world and the realities authors face. I also really loved the fact that we don’t know the reason for them becoming enemies and that these flashbacks unravel this plot point slowly, while they get reacquainted in the present timeline. The writing is strong, and both Margot and West feel relatable in their struggles and mistakes. I also loved how deeply their love for each other is woven into their work, writing each other into their stories over the years.

That said, the pacing did slow down at times, particularly during some of the flashbacks, which occasionally felt less relevant in the moment. The ending also dragged a bit after the big reveal, especially once it became clear they would find their way back to each other, but continued to resist.

Overall, this is a beautiful second-chance romance, but also a nuanced story about heartbreak as a consequence of success and the mistakes of youth. If you enjoy well-written second-chance romances with dual timelines, or stories centered around the world of books (think Emily Henry vibes), this could be a great fit for you.

Thank you to Berkley and NetGalley for the ARC. All opinions are my own.

This book releases on April 7, 2026.
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