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Serpentine
Elijah finds forbidden love with Thomas, a slave on a South Carolina plantation….
Elijah finds himself in indentured servitude on a South Carolina plantation, as well as maddeningly attracted to Thomas. After Mrs. Finnegan, the head of the household, learns of Elijah’s trysts to the slaves’ quarters, she vows to put an end to their taboo relationship, but not before Elijah and Thomas find themselves alone and ready to move beyond experimentation for the first time.
Serpentine (A MM Interracial Historical Erotica) is so hot, that it just might set your e-reader on fire! Not for the weak of heart, and for adults 18+ only. This work of fiction is the product of the author’s wild and fun imagination. Any similarities to real life characters, places, and events are completely unintended and purely coincidental. Please further note that all characters depicted are of legal adult age. It contains extremely graphic descriptions of sex acts including interracial sex acts between two men. If you are offended by the nature of such stories, please do not purchase this book. Otherwise, enjoy!
Elijah finds himself in indentured servitude on a South Carolina plantation, as well as maddeningly attracted to Thomas. After Mrs. Finnegan, the head of the household, learns of Elijah’s trysts to the slaves’ quarters, she vows to put an end to their taboo relationship, but not before Elijah and Thomas find themselves alone and ready to move beyond experimentation for the first time.
Serpentine (A MM Interracial Historical Erotica) is so hot, that it just might set your e-reader on fire! Not for the weak of heart, and for adults 18+ only. This work of fiction is the product of the author’s wild and fun imagination. Any similarities to real life characters, places, and events are completely unintended and purely coincidental. Please further note that all characters depicted are of legal adult age. It contains extremely graphic descriptions of sex acts including interracial sex acts between two men. If you are offended by the nature of such stories, please do not purchase this book. Otherwise, enjoy!
23 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 27, 2014
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November 28, 2014
OhMyFuckingGawd!! I’ve been searching all over for an M/M interracial American slave romance and I finally found one! Now my hope for the possibility of a beautiful love story has been ruined. RUINED I tell you!
There were so many things that bothered me in this story, I can’t even go into it all.
Here is a summary: SPOILERS AHEAD
Elijah, a young white indentured servant of indeterminate age (but not yet 18 years), has been having an intimate relationship with Thomas, a black slave who is like his step-brother and ten years his elder. The lady of the house, Mrs. Finnegan, has discovered their “unnatural” affair and threatens Elijah with selling Thomas and his family to separate owners if she finds out they are still meeting each other. Upset, Elijah runs off to his favorite “personal hiding cove” to think and be alone. Then Thomas comes to check on him...
It’s clearly labeled as "erotica", so it's not like I can complain too much about that, but the sex wasn't sexy AT ALL!
For one thing, the descriptions were outrageous:
...and...
...okay, enough of that.
Then there was this:
What did the HELL??!! How did Elijah’s virgin asshole magically lubricate itself?? And then Thomas was able to stick his large, serpentine cock in it without causing any injury!
I can’t even…
Okay, so I’ve moved passed the sex. *shiver*
Then there is the ending!! And I’m totally about to spoil it because this is NO way to end an erotic short story!!
(Upset and afraid for Thomas’s safety after having sex with him, Elijah flees from the cove and runs into Charles...the cruel eldest Finnegan son.)
What. The. Fuck?!
There were so many things that bothered me in this story, I can’t even go into it all.
Here is a summary: SPOILERS AHEAD
Elijah, a young white indentured servant of indeterminate age (but not yet 18 years), has been having an intimate relationship with Thomas, a black slave who is like his step-brother and ten years his elder. The lady of the house, Mrs. Finnegan, has discovered their “unnatural” affair and threatens Elijah with selling Thomas and his family to separate owners if she finds out they are still meeting each other. Upset, Elijah runs off to his favorite “personal hiding cove” to think and be alone. Then Thomas comes to check on him...
It’s clearly labeled as "erotica", so it's not like I can complain too much about that, but the sex wasn't sexy AT ALL!
For one thing, the descriptions were outrageous:
It was the size of my forearm, the head bulbous and pulsating. It was...it was...serpentine.
...and...
“Elijah. It’s okay. We can stop now.” Thomas must have seen the terror in my eyes as I stared at his long black snake.
...okay, enough of that.
Then there was this:
Thomas reached under and his fingers touched my ass again. I was wet and lubricated. Was that normal? What was normal? I didn’t know anymore.
What did the HELL??!! How did Elijah’s virgin asshole magically lubricate itself?? And then Thomas was able to stick his large, serpentine cock in it without causing any injury!
I can’t even…
Okay, so I’ve moved passed the sex. *shiver*
Then there is the ending!! And I’m totally about to spoil it because this is NO way to end an erotic short story!!
(Upset and afraid for Thomas’s safety after having sex with him, Elijah flees from the cove and runs into Charles...the cruel eldest Finnegan son.)
”Hi, Elijah.”
I gasped, and looked up. In shock, I saw Charles staring at me next to the edge of the draping willow leaves, arms crossed and with a knowing smirk on his face.
“Don’t you have a stack of wood you need to be working on? I’ll make sure Thomas is taken care of. Don’t you worry.”
What. The. Fuck?!
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