First half is terrible and not very well written, second half is better, but not by much.
What happened to this author? I’m sorry but this was terrible in places. I don’t even know where to start with it. Loki met Brae who is Betty’s daughter in the previous book and it was obvious to everyone they liked each other but nothing happened, as Loki has a deep dark secret (THAT IS STUPID AND REALLY NOT A BIG ISSUE!) that stops him from pursuing Brae. Nearly all the way through the book this secret is mentioned and only Bull and Outlaw know it. I can’t even express how disappointed I was when I found out what it was.
So Brae who is a prosecutor for the DA decides to play a game with Chaos, one of the Mc members from Wrath’s Mc, to make Loki jealous and they bet on it. Oh good grief. 🙄🙈 How old is she??? This is like kids stuff! Loki eventually straps his b*lls on and pursues Brae but only after he finds out that Brae is in serious danger from a man she put away who belongs to an evil Mc. This is where it started to go really wrong. Loki rides to Brae’s apartment WEARING his cut, and Rage and Wrath are already there with Chaos ALL WEARING THEIR CUTS. Brae says that she has felt someone watching her, so it’s decided Loki will guard her, and not wear his cut. So the evil Mc don’t connect her to any Mc. They know where she lives, they’ve been watching her, and there’s a hit on her, isn’t it a bit like shutting the stable door after the horse has escaped?
After a lot of talking and talking, and yet more talking, Brae and Loki have sex, and I couldn’t read it as they went from being strangers and avoiding each other to having sex and it felt weird and cringy. The sex scenes were just bizarre as Brae makes Loki show her his recent test results on his sexual health and she shows him proof of her tests and her contraception. It felt like a meeting with a lawyer not hot and sexy!
It gets slightly better in the middle but the evil Mc don’t seem capable of doing anything to Brae, and a subplot with her boss who is determined to get her in a ‘real ’relationship never comes to anything. It drags on and on, they have a huge falling out because of Loki’s dark secret. Oh good grief.
Aside from being boring, there’s a lot of mistakes and it’s not very well written sadly. I didn’t like Loki or Brae to be honest. If he told her ‘club business’ one more time I would have screamed. He doesn’t tell her anything and acts like she’s a delicate flower who he can’t tell anything to, when it’s Brae as a prosecutor who gets most of their information! 😡😡😡 Also one more point and then I’ll shut up, there’s a really graphic torture scene that’s way over the top and unnecessary.
Sorry it’s not good.