There are a few things it does right...and several more it really really doesn't.
The characters themselves are complex, multilayered, and interesting, often characters i don't feel like i've seen 8 times before. Points for that, and for allowing the characters to actually spare half a moment for "oh wait, maybe it's not ok that you would do ANYTHING to protect what's yours, there are limits, honey."
The cover synopsis read very much as erotica with a bdsm angle--i believe dane is specifically described as dominant--so for that concept, the sex is surprisingly vanilla and a trifle uninspired in places. Some of that could be explained away through the fact that ari, the heroine, generally doesn't like to be touched...except that that reticence to touch gets shrugged off in a matter of minutes as "oh no, she only likes to be touched *by him*, it's just that she has massive trust issues because of her mother being a self absorbed, emotionally abusive nightmare." Also those trust issues will themselves be shrugged off remarkably easily when they might have impeded the romance.
All in all, it just feels like the author gathered up about 4 times the usual number of roadblocks xe could us to create tension, then discarded each one as soon as it started to become inconvenient without really putting in the effort to address any of them properly; it's like going on a quest to fight a family of ogres only to find out that one suddenly died of the flu, one tripped and impaled himself on the way to the fight, and one had to reschedule the battle for a doctor's appointment.
--SPOILER--
The eventual explanation for the sabotage, dane and his former investors are part of an illuminati club of billionaires controlling the world to maintain the economy and a (to them) positive political atmosphere...well, i think i'd have found it hard to suspend my disbelief at any time. Reading it in the current atmosphere just makes it come off to me as "actually, he's not just your ordinary robber baron, but a member of a secret cabal of robber barons subverting political systems to maintain capitalism and good (as defined by billionaires)." And...yeah, not cool, especially not cool when you add the anger management issues (no, a man who punches holes in the wall and goes caveman at his girlfriend's friends is not sexy to me, i was getting "this man needs to get a grip" vibes long before the end when the heroine tried to convince herself that somehow his violent response was in any way her fault for being in danger).