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A cursed warrior. A reckless healer. A chance to save the world—or condemn it.


Like the rest of the winged eresh keyel, warrior Asaru has spent his life fighting the remnants of a long-dead enemy. When his brother’s squadron disappears from a border keep, Asaru travels into the human realm to investigate, only to become ensnared by a fatal—and unbreakable—curse that could wipe out his people.


When he inadvertently commits a terrible crime, Asaru is thrown into the path of Wren, an emotionally tortured former healer playing with dangerous magic. Bound to one another by a spell gone wrong, and on the run from freelance killers, they set out to find the Chronicler, keeper of the eresh keyel’s history who could bring them answers, redemption, and the cure to Asaru’s curse. But the truths they uncover about the past have the power to break the world into pieces, ending human civilization and settling its remnants into something entirely new.


From Nigerian Canadian author U. M. Agoawike, Black as Diamond is a fresh, dark, and thrilling debut that untangles questions of queer identity, history, and power, illuminating a society crushed by the lingering actions of a few.

476 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 3, 2026

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U.M. Agoawike

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U.M. Agoawike is a Canadian-Nigerian author of short stories with vibes for plot and SFFH featuring everything but the kitchen sink. Black as Diamond is their first novel.

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Profile Image for Billie's Not So Secret Diary.
825 reviews128 followers
March 25, 2026
Black as Diamond
by U.M. Agoawike
Fantasy
NetGalley eARC
Pub Date: Mar 3, 2026
Bindery Books
Ages: 16+

Going to search for his missing brother and his squadron, Asaru, a winged eresh keyel, goes into the human realm to find him, but finds an unbreakable and fatal curse. But Asaru also commits a crime and becomes bound to Wren when the former healer plays with a dangerous magic.

Believing their only hope in breaking both the curse and the spell, they start their search for the Chronicler, a man who keeps the eresh keyel's history, but Asaru's first priority is to find his brother.

But the spell Wren used and Asaru's crime are all that is needed for them to become wanted men, and freelance killers are after them. As they run, two others join them, one to save herself and the other, an old friend of Wren's.


OK.... The blurb has more details about the characters than the story does. What the story provided was jumbled. There are four MCs, and they each have their own POVs, but their descriptions are vague. The only thing I believe is that one wasn't human, and another maybe mixed, but the other two I don't know, and suddenly there's fangs and wings, different eye colors, red and gold blood, and the characters kissing their teeth, so I am repeatedly tossed out of an interesting plot.

But the confusion gets worse as the story progresses. Suddenly, a character gets a halo, but I think it is different from the other character's halo because one has gems, and I think it was around their neck, but they are disappearing. And there's something special about black diamonds, but I'm not sure what it is other than... spoiler(?)...

The plot had potential, but I lost interest as the character inconsistencies continued, and then there were the constant internal ramblings from three of the characters who moped about their guilt, history, and struggles. Then suddenly there's Weavers and one of the characters is one and weavers are ?bad?.

There is violence, but not overly gory, and there's no adult content, so it's suitable for readers sixteen and older. Also, this ended on a cliffhanger, but I won't be reading the next in this series.

If only the author had worked with the characters, the world, and the magic before publishing this story, they could have made it into something more.

1 Star
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1,063 reviews448 followers
Did Not Finish
January 13, 2026
DNF @ 30%

It reads very older YA and feels like an RPG or a DnD session. There's a party of four, each with their own strengths, weaknesses, and backstories. They go on a quest together, they have their various likes and dislikes, and their relationships to each other vary from estranged friends (Rishé and Wren) to a magical bond (Wren and Asaru).

Honestly, it's nothing I haven't read before. It didn't feel distinct enough for me to stay seated throughout the entire novel, unfortunately.

I think this would be great for beginner fantasy readers looking to dip their toes into something more intermediate that includes more worldbuilding and political intrigue without the grand scale of an epic fantasy.

Thank you Bindery Books and NetGalley for this arc.
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156 reviews14 followers
January 29, 2026
I received an ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Had I known this book was the start of a series and ended on a cliffhanger , I wouldn't have requested it.

The last third dragged on, getting lost in scene after scene of abstract, "dream-like" imagery that didn't add much to the story, only to culminate in a frustrating cliffhanger.

The characters are lovely and different enough to feel well-defined. The few moments of humor can be a bit much, but they're still charming overall.

The book's biggest flaw, for me, was how overwritten it felt: it kept pulling me out of the story. There were plenty of familiar clichés ("[releasing] a breath [they were] holding," "If [something], well, no one had to know"), far too many adjectives, and thesaurus-heavy prose. As well as a few moments that seemed like genuine editing mistakes, such as a sword "clattering to the ground, echoing loudly through the forest" (huh, is the floor made of marble in this forest?) or the peculiar word "moribund" repeated twice in the span of two pages, then disappearing, never to be seen again.

All of this really bogged down the narrative for me. In the end, the book never quite grabbed me. I can see its strengths (detailed worldbuilding, polished lore, cute characters) but reading it was more of a chore than a pleasure. The plot just felt hard to follow all the way through.

It would've been a 4-star read if not for that cliffhanger. Please, just tell readers when your books are part of a series! Urg!
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3,761 reviews2,498 followers
Did Not Finish
March 12, 2026
DNF @ 7%

This is super early to DNF, but I cannot read 496 pages of this writing. This book was not ready to publish. This author is not ready to publish. They need to write a lot more and find their voice. The worldbuilding, characters, and story were inaccessible to me because the writing was so overblown, nonsensical, and try-hard. This author just does not have a handle on craft, something that is especially important in high/epic fantasy. I'm out.
Profile Image for CJ Alberts.
205 reviews1,326 followers
July 3, 2025
Read for work, very wild epic dark fantasy!!
225 reviews40 followers
December 4, 2025
Thanks Netgalley & the Bindery for the ARC!

I was quite excited about this premise, and wanted to love it, but unfortunately I had some issues with it. I wasn't bored, and the story kept me engaged enough to keep reading to the end, and the characters had some interesting moments, but at the same time I constantly felt like I was missing information. I rarely had a good grasp of where characters were or what was happening, and that made it very difficult to follow along with the plot.

The book has 4 POV characters, with Asaru and Wren being the main characters, though the POVs are quite equally divided. The other two characters were Palenisa, a former nun of sorts, and Rishé, a childhood friend of Wren. Palenisa is a character who confused me for some time, it wasn't until the end I really figured out what her deal was, but overall all characters felt developed and had interesting moments.

The world building is vast, but at the same time underexplained. There's various species, religions, countries, but I never really got a good grasp of the world. There's perhaps a bit too much, and we don't linger much in the parts that are relevant and might need some further explaining.

The pacing was generally fast, and I think sometimes too fast to really get a graps of what's happening. Often characters are somewhere and I'm not sure how they got there, and that might be on me for missing things, but it was a constant for reading this book.

The plot and characters did keep me engaged, and I was curious about what was going to happen to keep reading, but overall I would have preferred less plot points with more development of what we had to make sure I could actually follow along with everything that was happening

The ending was interesting and made it clear this was first in a series, and I am curious what happens next, but not yet sure if I'll pick up the next installment.
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4,740 reviews48 followers
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 24, 2026
Fun, standalone fantasy with some great set-building and some impeccable vibes throughout, though some of the writing felt stilted at times, which definitely dings it a bit. 4 stars. tysm for the arc.

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924 reviews355 followers
March 11, 2026
dnf at 45%

While I love the Nigerian influences (a major reason I requested the arc), I've also spent the entire time I've read the book in a state of confusion that I honestly do not think was supposed to pass the 10% mark. I really like Wren and I wish I could be invested enough to see how his story progresses but unfortunately this is the type of fantasy book that reminds me why I predominantly read literary fiction
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874 reviews41 followers
November 5, 2025
I received a free copy from Bindery Books via Netgalley in exchange for a fair review. Release date March 3rd, 2026.

I saw this new release and I thought I'd give the high fantasy premise a shot. In Black as Diamond, failed healer Wren accidentally casts a spell that ties him to Asaru, who is suffering from a curse and desperately trying to find his brother. Joined by Wren's old friend and an exiled warrior, the four journey across the continent in search for the Archivist, who may hold the answers they seek.

I'll preface this review by saying that one of my favorite things is confusing books. I enjoy the art of puzzling out twisty plot and worldbuilding where many key details remain unspoken, like in Hexwood, Rakesfall, or Harrow the Ninth. Having said that. Black as Diamond is totally incomprehensible. It feels like jumping in at book 10 of a series, and not the kind that has helpful asides summarizing details from the last books, either. It doesn't feel the need to explain minor details, like why 65 years old is considered youthful or why Asaru has wings, which I actually prefer as a worldbuilding technique. But it also has great gaping chunks missing out of critical details explaining the characters' motivations and goals. It feels like a long fantasy novel was skeletonized by a swarm of bookworms down to half the size, leaving a book where it was difficult to engage with the story because the central stakes are barely explained.

On the character side, the book was split up into four POV characters, each of which get relatively equal narrative focus. The divided focus was perhaps a bit ambitious for a modest fantasy novel of only four hundred pages. Out of the four characters, Wren probably had the most character development, which was unfortunate because I didn't gel with his character. He's pathologically insecure and constantly takes the blame for everything, and the self-flagellation gets tiresome. All four of the main leads are paired off in the beginnings of two different romances, which felt a touch forced. But perhaps after the cliffhanger that ends the novel, the next novel will flesh the relationships out a bit more.

I think there were some interesting bones here, especially in Wren's magic tie to Asaru and complicated relationship with healing. But this book desperately cries out for the rest of the novel. What's on page just doesn't make sense.


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370 reviews
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 14, 2026

"Black as Diamond" is an epic fantasy that follows four characters as they try to find one's brother and a cure for a deadly curse. I am excited for this book to find its reader. It creates an interesting atmosphere. One of being on an epic journey and also eerie with the thoughts of what could happen in the search for a cure to the curse.

Asari, Wren, Palensia, and Rishé all come from different background and are all seeking something both internally and externally. They have complicated histories and I think part of the charm of the novel is that we learn some of those details over time. I really enjoyed the comadre and the slow burn of both friendships developing (as they learn to trust each other) and romance. While at times, I did get confused and have to re-read passages, I enjoyed their story and the ending cliffhanger sent me. Like I did not see that coming. Whats going to happen to all of them?

When a book takes me a bit longer to read I often reflect on why that is, I think here we get a lot of story and information and even though there were slower moments for me, I find myself wanted to pick up the next story to see what happens. I think if you are someone who enjoys different magic systems and worlds you will like this!

Thank you to the publisher for providing an ALC via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.


3.75 stars rounded up to 4
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164 reviews1 follower
December 1, 2025
Black as Diamond is a fantasy book following four main characters: a human alchemist, a half human failed healer, an eresh keyel warrior (winged humanoid creature with tail) and a priestess, working together to break a curse and save the realm. While I enjoyed the story, at times I had to stop and re-read parts because they wording didn't make sense. The world building was vast and intriguing, but missing some details leaving me a little confused at times. I felt that the relationships were a little rushed since most of the time the characters were snapping at each other and in stressful situations. I would have liked a little more building of the relationships.

Overall, good fantasy book. Interesting characters, world, and magic.

Thank you to NetGalley and Bindery Books for an ARC in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 35 books915 followers
July 22, 2025
At times dark and wrenching, at other moments full of blade-sharpened wit, or sometimes brimming with gritty hope that settles beneath your fingernails—above all, unforgettable.

I’m pleased to be the first to say it here: U. M. Agoawike is the freshest new voice in epic fantasy. Prepare to take note, and to be utterly transported.
1,010 reviews14 followers
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March 29, 2026
Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an advanced reader copy

Black as Diamond by U. M. Agoawike is a third person multi-POV fantasy. Asaru is one of the winged eresh keyel and is looking for his missing brother. Wren is a former healer who has been dabbling in magic far bigger than anything he can control. When the two are bound together by a spell, they end up finding secrets about their world they never could have foreseen.

This throws you at the deep end of high fantasy and it does expect you to keep up. Bits and pieces of worldbuilding are given over time and it doesn't really slow down to make sure you fully understand how something works. Some fantasy is not overly concerned with readers understanding everything about the world and is instead more interested in a journey in a world that feels lived-in and this is one of those fantasies.

Like a lot of the books from this imprint, this deals more with found family rather than romance. I'm actually really excited that Ezeekat press is focused less on romance and more on platonic relationships for its catalogue because, while romance is my favorite genre, there needs to be options for people who don't like romance or who want platonic relationships to be given space to shine.

I would recommend this to fans of high fantasy who want less explanation for the worldbuilding and readers who love a strong found family aspect
Profile Image for Ashley Straznickas.
60 reviews4 followers
April 14, 2026
This was a Goodreads Giveaway win.
This book was not for me.
I read the book and I have absolutely no idea what happened in it. Other people might like it. I'm a little sad because it sounded really good.
72 reviews3 followers
Did Not Finish
July 8, 2026
This book had too much unknown vocabulary and other worldliness too soon. I did not have any investment in the characters to overcome the giant hurdle of learning the mythology and history that is obviously part of the novel.
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91 reviews1 follower
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 7, 2026
Black as Diamond is a gem! This is a debut standalone fantasy novel that explores questions around identity, politics, and how the past and power can impact different experiences for a long time.

Bullet points for those short on time:
- debut standalone fantasy
- queer identity & relationships
- quest and "found family" group
- epic world-building
- two magic systems
- indie publisher Bindery
- queer Nigerian-Canadian author
- check trigger warnings

The story begins when Asaru, winged warrior of the eresh keyel, discovers his brother’s squadron disappeared after a curse was unleashed. When investigating in the human world, a bit of the curse infects Asaru. On his path to find his brother, Asaru survives possession, becomes a wanted killer, and is inadvertently bonded through a spell gone wrong to healer-in-training, Wren. Now, they must set out on a quest to find a cure for the curse, find Asaru’s brother, and not get caught by the hunters sent after them…all while unravelling secrets and feelings.

I am loving the unique works of craft and art that Bindery is introducing to the world. This one is no different! It’s fresh, novel, and exciting.

I enjoyed getting to know the characters most in this book. Each character that comes along as part of the protagonist’s group is unique in terms of motivations, lived experiences, past trauma, and perspectives.

The way some scenes are written was a bit confusing at times, as the writing style made it a little hard to follow what was happening without re-reading back over it. I think Publisher’s Weekly said it well with “Readers will have to put in work to keep up, but those who do will be rewarded with tantalising bits of lore on every page and a dynamic and devoted central duo.”

I’m not a fan of romance, so I didn’t care too much for these parts, but that’s a personal preference, and I can’t fault the book for it. I would highly recommend this to anyone looking for their next fantasy read!

Thank you to Bindery for the eARC via NetGalley for review consideration. All opinions are my own.

Content Warnings:

From the author’s website…explicit gore, murder/death, violence, mutilation, corpses, blood, atypical depression, suicidal ideation, depictions of religion and practices, implied sexual content, sex work (mentioned), non-consensual kiss, non-consensual drug use, ethnic discrimination, near drowning, indentured servitude (mentioned), body horror, emesis, excessive alcohol consumption, poison, physical scars, possession.
Profile Image for Kira.
337 reviews
April 10, 2026
Thank you to NetGalley, Ezeekat Press and the author for this e-ARC.

Black as Diamond by U. M. Agoawike is a third person 4-POV fantasy and beginning of a series.

Asaru is one of the winged eresh keyel and is looking for his missing brother. Wren is a former healer who has been dabbling in magic far bigger than anything he can control. When the two are bound together by a spell, they end up finding secrets about their world they never could have foreseen.

This throws you at the deep end of high fantasy and it does expect you to keep up. Bits and pieces of worldbuilding are given over time, but doesn't really slow down to make sure you fully understand how something works. This fantasy is not overly concerned with readers understanding everything about the world and is instead more interested in a journey in a world that feels lived-in.

While the pace of the story is fast-paced, I had a really hard time getting into the story. You really have to be invested in reading in this. As stated above, it doesn't give you all the details and you have to pay attention. That being said, I really enjoyed the characters and the glimpses of the world that you got. The focus of the story is on the relationships and building a found family. There is a lot of time spent in the minds of characters who have low self-esteem and struggle with their perceived failings.

The ending is somewhat of a cliffhanger. It does resolve the main story plot, however it is very open that there will be additional story to be told.

Overall, I have mixed feelings about this book. I really enjoyed the characters and the family that they built, but I struggled to be invested in where the story was going. I am interested in knowing what happens next, so most likely I will pick up the next installment in the series when it becomes available.

I would recommend this book to most people. I would definitely check content warnings as there is a significant amount of violence and blood but nothing gratuitous. If you are someone who struggles with self-esteem or struggles with reading characters who have low self-esteem, this might not be the book for you
Profile Image for Andrew Hickey.
38 reviews2 followers
November 27, 2025
Black as Diamond
U.M. Agoawike

The first book (I assume based off the cliffhanger ending) of a new high fantasy series. Eresh keyel warrior Asaru is on the run after killing a king under possession while tracking down his brother and the Chronicler. His paths magically cross with Wren and a slew of other characters as they work together to find The Chronicler.

Each chapter is told through the POV of one of four main characters. Each character has their strengths and flaws in narration as well as overall arc. It’s possible focusing on four characters might be a bit much for the short length (compared to other high fantasy novels) of the book. While it is interesting seeing the events from other characters besides Wren and Asaru by the end the other two didn’t have much to add to the story.

The plot is dense and the world building is admirable, however there were some aspects of the world rules that never made sense, nor were they explained or seemed to have any effect on the story. At times you could see that the author knows the rules intimately but either forgot to include details or just wanted to leave readers in the dark, and it is possible that in future installments they will be explained.

The story takes its time setting up the world while also focusing on action with a pinch of queer romance. There are also some descriptions used multiple times that don’t read well or translate through writing but are ubiquitous to the genre.

As a first novel I was left intrigued where it will go but I do worry if it takes time for the next book I’ll either forget the details or not have interest to follow up.

Thanks to NetGalley and Bindery Books for the eARC in return for a review
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102 reviews1 follower
June 9, 2026
Black as Diamond
U. M. Agoawike
⭐½☆☆☆☆ (1.5/5 stars)

I have absolutely no idea what this book was about.

Honestly, I spent the entire book in a constant state of confusion. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t fully grasp what was happening, where the story was going, or what the author was trying to convey.

The plot felt disjointed, the narrative was difficult to follow, and I never felt grounded enough in the story to become invested in it. Instead of being intrigued, I was mostly just confused from beginning to end.

Unfortunately, this was not an enjoyable reading experience for me, and by the time I finished, I was left with more questions than answers.
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904 reviews
March 8, 2026
3.75 stars, rounded up.

This is a difficult book for me to rate and review. I think the story is a great fantasy story. The plot is compelling and rich and delivers a different take on fantasy quests and found family. I also really enjoyed U.M. Agoawike's prose. It absolutely fits the story and paints a vivid picture.

The challenge for me was that as fascinating as the world Agoawike created was, I often felt like an outsider who didn't quite speak the language and wasn't entirely familiar with the history. When the book begins, you're dropped right into the world with little background or introduction. There's a glossary/pronunciation guide at the back of the book, but I thought it could have given more information about the beings, the religions, and the historical events. As another reviewer mentioned, it's very clear that Agoawike is very knowledgeable and familiar with the world they've created, but it didn't always translate for me. So I did sometimes get lost about what was happening and it ended up being a slower read for me. I also likely missed some of the more intriguing parts of the story.

Let me make this clear: this is not a knock against Agoawike or their writing. This is very much my personal opinion and experience with the book as someone who doesn't read a lot of speculative fiction/speculative fantasy (but would like to explore more).

All that being said, I liked this book, which is another solid entry in Bindery's catalog, and I will likely pick up any future books from this author.

I received an eARC from Bindery through NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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169 reviews
October 23, 2025
4.5 stars

This one is Bold but memorable... The narrative follows Asaru, a winged soldier bound by duty and curse, and Wren, a healer whose defiance blurs the line between salvation and destruction. Together, they navigate a world where history, identity, and power collide in unexpected ways. Agoawike builds a setting rich in tension and consequence, where every choice matters.

The author’s approach to fantasy is refreshingly grounded. There are themes of guilt, power, and belonging. These fore the characters to confront uncomfortable truths about themselves and the world they’re trying to save. The result is a story that feels epic but deeply personal in tone.
The relationship between Asaru and Wren unfolds with complexity but also restrain. It felt more than just a simple romance or partnership. I think the relationship was more of a layered bond formed under pressure, filled with doubt, anger, and fragile hope.

Black as Diamond is dark, imaginative, and strikingly original. This fantasy also questions what are the costs that come with survival and what it means to be truly free.

For readers looking for something that challenges the familiar characteristics of the genre, but also something that offers power and emotion... this one might be for you.

Thank you NetGally, Bindery Books, and Ezeekat Press for the ARC. Can't wait to get my hard copy!
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600 reviews28 followers
April 20, 2026
Thank you to Bindery and the Author for this copy in exchange for an honest review.

Character 3.5| Setting 3.5| Plot 3.5| Writing 3.5| Enjoyability 4

Rating: 3.6

Some of my problems may have come from the format of e-ARC so don't take this too seriously. The first chapter was formatted so strangely? It would just cut off the paragraphs so weirdly where thoughts weren't finished. I almost dropped it from that, but I really wanted to read this.

I am glad I didn't I had a good time with this!

It is pretty slow build and at the beginning you are so confused with what the heck is going on.

We have four POVs: Asaru: A warrior of an animal like people, Wren a lulaik and a healer, Palensia a disgraced priestess, and Rishe a human who wants to find out about a pendant her mother left her.

Most of this book takes place in their journey and they are all connected through Wren: who ignorantly uses a spell that upends their world.

i loved these character and wanted to wonder with them for a long time! I loved all of them, but I wish we had more scenes of Rishe and Palensia it did feel like they weren't as developed as Asaru and Wren.

Also a warning: I don't know why I thought this fantasy novel was a standaone, but it is not a standalone. The ending leaves things unresolved.

I will be following this author for their future works!
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1,591 reviews8 followers
Did Not Finish
July 23, 2026
Tried reading this 3 times and just can’t get into it, I’ve even tried audio so I’m giving up
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Author 2 books374 followers
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 13, 2026
*Received an arc from Netgalley, doesn't affect my opinions, etc*

Most of the prose is fine, but at least once a page there is a line that is either really unclear or outright nonsensical – there are a lot of oxymoron images, for example. The worldbuilding seems pretty respectable (although if you’re the kind of reader, like me, who twitches whenever someone says ‘dumbass’ or ‘dipshit’ in a fantasy setting, well, that’s a thing here) but I was incredibly frustrated by not knowing what anything looked like, especially the different species of people – one have wings, a tail, and a ‘halo’, but I don’t know how any of that looks; another species has tails, and I don’t know what kind of tails those are, either. Worse, I dislike all of our protagonists: Asaru has an interesting plotline but no personality, Wren is the sort of person who is constantly berating himself and putting himself down, Palensia is exhaustingly arrogant while also being woe-is-me, and Rishe is another one who has very little personality.

The ‘terrible crime’ of the blurb makes no sense: Wren casts a spell without checking what it is (which is enough to make me want to DNF, because I have no interest in protagonists that dumb). It turns out to be a summoning instead of the luck spell he thinks it is. But I have no idea why this is such a big, terrible thing that reality itself would punish him for it. The laws of khetry don’t have a ‘don’t cast summonings’ rule, or even a ‘don’t cast without knowing what you’re casting’, so what’s the issue?

But the writing is my main reason for DNFing, and I have a bunch of quotes to illustrate what I mean about the prose being wonky. These were all taken from my advanced reading copy, so it’s possible they’ll all be fixed before publication.

His pointed ears flickered


They what?

he noted the threads of khetry connecting him to every living thing on the earth and in the sky.


Even assuming ‘every living thing’ is only animals and birds and insects – surely if there’s a thread from you to every animal and bird and insect around, you’d be surrounded by threads? As in, they’d completely block you from seeing anything at all?

every inch of the structure spilled with the lush blooms of its namesake.


I think you meant ‘overflowed’ or something like it? In this context ‘overflowed’ and ‘spilled’ are really not interchangeable. ‘Spilled’ makes no sense. ‘Spilled over’ would be fine, I think?

He threw his arms forward, palms flat, to cast a simple but powerful air spell at the sentinels. Unable to react fact enough, the four were blown back by a barrage of sound,


…So is it an air spell, or sound?

A golden circlet rested above his brow


It’s floating above his head?

Not an accident, just an unfortunate consequence of his first year at the guild.


I’m confused, if an accident isn’t an unfortunate consequence, then what is it?

ideas expanded by the invisible hand of collaboration.


I kind of get what this means, I think, but the phrasing is terrible.

It chirped like a pair of shears


The ‘it’ is a bird. But how does ANYTHING chirp like a pair of shears??? Shears don’t chirp???

the red web that pulsated between blinks like breath.


Breath doesn’t pulsate?

Someone once told him to make good choices. He couldn’t remember when–or who. Maybe he was, maybe he wasn’t. But he needed this luck spell to work. It had to work.


‘Someone once told him to make good choices. Maybe he was, maybe he wasn’t.’ That’s not a full – point? ‘Maybe this was one, maybe it wasn’t’ would say what you mean, I think.

tiny painful shocks that all together formed a chimera of hurt


This would make sense if we had multiple kinds of pain all at once, but we don’t, so?

A heat as cold as ice


…a what.

Tiny white stars popped like catching fire


I have no idea what this means or what I’m supposed to picture.

Overhead, the sun shone directly into her face with the personal vendetta of hired knives.


…but hired knives don’t have a personal vendetta against the person they’re hired to hurt? By definition? That’s why they’re HIRED? If they had a personal vendetta they would not need to be hired? What???

those wings feathered like a moth’s


…what? I’ll allow that if you look under a microscope, a butterfly’s wings (so probably a moth’s too?) have scales. But feathers???

Ruby and every other color that did not exist behind one’s closed eyes.


Terribly awkward phrasing.

her distorted voice melding into a toneless ooze.


What is it melding with, and what is a ‘toneless ooze’?

The chanting rose, climbing atop itself in frenetic crescendo.


How does something climb atop itself?

her headache, which throbbed like dancing bones.


What?

the edges of his form fading as he drew on the power of the night, making himself invisible. “Have to say,” he said mildly, “I look forward to seeing how fast a sister of the coterie can die.” The freelancer twirled his spear and drew into a defensive stance, open hand splayed out with a ball of starlight floating above his palm.


…So he turns invisible, but then gives away where he is with a ball of light? Also, how do we know what stance he’s in if he’s invisible???

The tongues roared, a lion rising to lick the canopy and the sky between him and their pursuers.


This is about a fire. If it was ‘tongues of flame/fire roared’, I might allow it – but tongues roaring? And then mixing in the licking imagery?

I don’t have the spoons to read a whole book of this. No thank you!
66 reviews
May 22, 2026
3.75 stars rounded up.

This was not a terrible book, but I cannnot in good conscience call it solid. While I enjoyed reading it, and personally thought the prose was a strength, the world building left something to be desired. Clearly the author has formulated a very precise world but the audience was not given easy access to it, and even after finishing I still do not understand what a Wraith is (one of our main characters races). Additionally, the part of the world building that gave a direct impact onto the story was introduced so abruptly it was obvious one of these myths would surprise our characters. A lot of these issues felt like they should’ve been caught by the editor, such as an excess of characters “kissing their teeth”, or the biggest affront - BEING MARKETED AS A STANDALONE WHEN ITS ACTUALLY THE START OF A SERIES

I did enjoy the Nigerian influences and a lot of aspects of this new world
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2,688 reviews155 followers
June 9, 2026
✨Three fantasy reads, three completely different adventures, and I had a great time getting lost in all of them!✨

The Trident and the Pearl by Sarah K.L. Wilson swept me away with its unique gods-and-mortals romance, emotional stakes, and a queen determined to fight fate itself. Black as Diamond by U.M. Agoawike delivered rich world-building, intriguing magic, and a compelling journey filled with curses, redemption, and unexpected bonds. Wayward Souls by Susan J. Morris was the perfect blend of gothic fantasy, mystery, and supernatural suspense, with Sam and Hel continuing to be a duo I couldn't stop rooting for.

Together, these books offered everything I love in fantasy immersive worlds, high stakes, memorable characters, and plenty of twists. While each story had its own strengths, all three kept me turning pages and eager to see what happened next.

✨️Thank you, Orbit Books, Bindery Books, and the authors, for sharing these books with me!
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26 reviews1 follower
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
February 7, 2026
An epic adventure fantasy taking place in a dark world with reluctant allies that are forced to grapple with uncomfortable truths, history, and power to try to cure a curse and save the world. Guilt and belonging are strong themes in this book and there are elements of found family and queer romance.

I was deeply moved by the personal aspects of this story and impressed by the lush world building and the unique take on the genre. If you are a fan of epic dark fantasy this is a story for you!

Thank you to NetGalley, Bindery Publishing, and Ezeekat press for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.
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170 reviews
March 8, 2026
oh my gosh where do I even begin??? I am OBSESSED with the prose. U.M. Agoawike has such a way with words and descriptions. Black as Diamond is a book that demands to be savored so you can fully experience the sensations, the smells, the pain, the emotion, the views, EVERYTHING along the way, good and bad. I adore the messy found family fantasy road trip vibes with sweeping world building, epic battles, and stakes that rose from personal to world-ending levels with heart pounding efficiency. Absolutely go get yourself a copy of this!

Thank you to Netgalley for the ARC
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400 reviews9 followers
Review of advance copy received from Netgalley
March 1, 2026
Black as Diamond had really good characters that felt distinct and I thought the world was really well as well as the overall story. The writing was at times a bit much, but honestly not anything so bad that I couldn’t forgive it for all the good stuff it did. Worst thing for me was the end, either this is a first book of series or we’re just going to leave it there. Either way I wish I’d known that going in.

Note: ARC provided by the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
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