A struggling alchemist. A small town with ancient secrets. And… a mysterious shadow ferret?
Botanical alchemist Rowan Mosswood didn't expect much when he finally graduated, so a remote research assignment in Frostfern Valley seemed fitting. With his reputation in tatters after a public alchemical mishap, and his discipline of magic considered antiquated, Rowan agrees to the university's fix up an old greenhouse, study the mysterious loss of magic, and send regular reports. If he can manage all that, his student debts will disappear.
The assignment sounded Mundane enough, a wrist slap to be endured—until Rowan discovers the greenhouse is falling apart, the crops refuse to grow, and a wily shadow creature has taken up residence in his new home. As if that weren't complicated enough, there's a too-handsome-for-his-own-good carpenter who seems determined to help… and fluster…Rowan.
With strange magic stirring in the forest, stubborn townsfolk to win over, and a year-long deadline ticking down, Rowan must decide whether to focus on the assignment or the life he's beginning to build in Frostfern.
Mosswood Apothecary is a cozy queer fantasy brimming with botanical magic, slow-burn romance, queer found family, cottagecore vibes and small-town charm.
This edition contains the map and three illustrations.
Hello! I am a writer of things Dark, Strange, and Queer. I currently live with his partner of eleven years in Illinois with a menagerie of animal children, including a Siberian husky, miniature dachshund, African grey parrot, Quaker parrot, and suspiciously immortal cat. I love creating art, nerding out over science, video games, tabletop RPGs, and spending hours in the kitchen crafting up delectable vegan grub.
I loved reading Mosswood Apothecary! The story was so cozy and full of heart, magic, and queer joy. The mix of botany and alchemy was really cool and made the story super interesting. I loved all the baking and herbal remedies that were added to the story, both of which I’m a huge fan of. All of the characters were so lovable and greatly written. Rowan and Jimson are just the best!! But the shadow ferret, Wisp, was my favorite! Now I want an animal familiar!!
This could’ve been a great book. It would need years of work but it could be great. But that’s not what self-pub wants you to do, is it? And at some point you have to choose: quality or quantity. Everyone makes their own choices, so I’m not trying to judge people. But I am judging a book that I read. I really wanted to finish it; I gave up at 60% but since I’ve given it hours of my life, I’m gonna write things. It is about 4 pages long and I’ll try to be as constructive as possible in the hopes that the author reads it and at least considers some of my points. Whatever they decide to do with it later is up to them. I’ll wait at least several years before reading anything else by them, though, and for a good reason.
Here’s the thing: if this was written by a teenager, I’d say they have potential to be a great author one day, they just have to keep working on their skills. But it’s not, it’s a book that tries to convince you it’s not self-pub, yet you know it is the moment you open it.
The biggest issue: it needs SO MUCH revision and editing, oh my gods. There are mistakes on every page, and I don’t even mean language, just logic. A character takes off their apron TWICE in the span of a few paragraphs. A character is first named in the narration (which is written from Rowan’s POV, so he can’t know their name) before she’s introduced in the NEXT SENTENCE. And so on, and so forth.
Unfortunately, the second biggest issue IS the language. I mean both dimensions: style (or technical / formal layer, or however you want to call it) and the meaning behind it. It sounds like a story you write for a school assignment as a kid – it’s very, very simple, and at times I even doubted if the author is a native speaker of English.
> The rich scent of fresh-cut wood mingled with a sharp oil while hand tools hung on the walls in careful arrangements.
I know what it’s supposed to say but this is the most unnatural way of saying it I can imagine. The scent of wood mingled with the scent (unless it literally mixed scent with oil as an accidental bit of perfume-making?) of sharp oil (is oil sharp? how? has it gone bad?), WHILE hand tools hung on the walls? That makes it sound like a temporary thing and they will soon fall down and the scent of wood will then mix with… something else? Huh?
You see what I mean?
Even dialogues here sound very awkward:
> "Thank you all for coming to this on such short notice.”
Who talks like that? They’re already standing in the hall and the mayor greets them, I’d say they all know what they’re coming to and there’s no need to precise it as “to this” (which is such a strange construction in itself). And that’s just one random example; they always talk in these weird, overly-rounded sentences that should be banter but aren’t.
Sometimes the language is just plain… bad:
> Jimson's hand found Rowan's, intertwining his fingers in Rowan's.
It’s not one slip-up, it’s constant. And I won’t believe you can’t spot it in a self-revision if you actually read it carefully a few times. That’s why it’s so annoying.
> The greenhouse door swung open, and Marley walked in, grease-stained overalls and her vibrant purple hair tied back in a messy bun.
You know this means her overalls were also tied in that messy bun, right? Must’ve been one messy bun indeed.
Okay, so there’s that part. And then there’s the fact WHAT is written here. There is just no depth. The characters and the events are just… mentioned. There’s no tension, no chemistry between anyone, no hesitation, no wanting or longing, or ANYTHING. Things just happen. Rowan appears. Jimson happens to be interested. They kiss. Then they kiss some more. Then a few weeks pass by somehow and they sleep together. That’s it. No comment. No feelings about it (other than explicitly stated but even that is rare). No emotional tumult. Nothing at all. Rowan leaves Neosilica and is supposed to miss his best friend but when she appears, she just… is there. Then she stumbles upon her ex and it turns out there was a huge miscommunication fallout between them and they just… shrug. And then get together. When and how do they even do that? We don’t know. One day they just kiss. Okay??? Things. Just. Appear. And the ‘romance’ part of the book is so naive and infantile in its depiction it just makes me think back to a fifteen year old writing a story for school and daydreaming about one day being a grownup and meeting a lumberjack bear guy. Fine, there’s nothing wrong with that, we all have our fantasies, but let’s not try to pretend they’re already fully formed, edited, revised books that can be published and read by others, shall we?
A few more things about the characters while we’re at it. This whole joke about Rowan being a “plant daddy” or a “sprout twink” made me grind my teeth in cringe so much I might need to schedule a dentist’s appointment. On its own, it’s not really a great joke and it is very obviously exposition so that we know that Rowan IS a twink (which will become relevant when you see the bear because people aren’t people, they’re just tropes). But: why. Why would we need that information specifically. It’s such an anachronistic thing to say here in this setup of a steampunk-meets-alchemy world where we don’t have phones or cars or planes but we are supposed to have the word twink? I beg of you, author: what. For. (Other than, obviously, operating on trope names and categories without any depth.)
That’s a general thing here. The characters are not real, they’re drafts. They have a certain set of features that will be mentioned ad nauseam and oh gods, after a fifth time I KNOW Jimson’s hands are calloused and Marley’s hair is purple. I REMEMBER. Please, can they have some other characteristics? Can they have any thoughts of their own, any drive, any personality, anything at all? Anything other than a few tropes duct-taped together as a placeholder for real people? And here’s why I say it’s a shame: because they could have worked. Really. I think the IDEAS for them are solid. They could be a very likeable, bubbly, feel-good ensemble cast. If they were changed from proof-of-concept to actual characters.
The next thing is composition. I understand why each chapter is supposed to read like a semi-separate story but if you decide to transform a serial into an actual book, it should be reworked into something smooth and continuous. There are time jumps that don’t exactly make sense: they skip some seemingly important parts of the story or omit things you’d logically expect to come up in the narration. We get a chapter where the deal with the Steelwrights is introduced, it’s a tense moment full of doubts and there’s a suggestion that something sinister might come out of it, even though it’s impossible to deny them… and then we skip forward a few weeks and it has just happened already. AGAIN. And with everything else the time jumps don’t feel intentional and like a conscious choice, they’re just another error. Sometimes it makes the narration suffer in a more obvious way – it skips some of the parts that would have to be described to work as a setup for things that just happen, like depicting the development of Rowan’s feelings (or Jimson’s for that matter), him missing Marley or setting up in the greenhouse, the growing tension between him and the Steelwrights, or even the merry moments of peace in the village. Or just… anything. It seems the author decided to skip all the parts… that actually make a book.
So I noticed most of that very early in the book but I kept reading up until 60% (where I gave up because of the language) because I mean it: this could have been a great book. I liked the world, it’s cute, feels cosy, gives us something fresh in the trope (automatons are a nice change without imposing too much on the cosiness). The way magic works in this world is also very interesting and I think the author was really passionate about it because these are the only proper descriptions we get in the book. It could’ve been explained better because it’s a complex system that got confusing sometimes but still, a solid thing. A very minor irk in comparison with everything else: using the word “metal” instead of naming it, as if metal was just one thing, not a name of various elements. Swords are metal; there’s a huge difference whether that metal will be aluminium or steel. No one actually working with metals will just call them “metal”. But that’s nothing compared to the rest of the issues I talk about.
Some things weren’t explained at all, even though they should, like why would Tamsin just “have” a forest? Other times the characters just weren’t affected where they should be, e.g. there’s a huge shadow bear destroying the forest that borders your town and farms, and it just… happens? Isn’t that a) dangerous to the town, b) dangerous to the farms, c) dangerous to your friends and family working said farms, d) dangerous to your position as a mayor, e) traumatic to experience (as the characters did)? Why do we just brush it off? (I’m not saying it’s impossible – maybe such things happen in this world, who knows? Certainly not us because it’s not described anywhere. Because, you guessed it, things just happen.)
It’s generally full of solid ideas; the plot itself is interesting and I wish it was written well enough to keep reading. It is a bit too trope-dependent at times and sometimes glaring in its divide between “village good, city bad” but it would be tolerable if everything else was smoothed out. It could give us a nice question of whether all technology is bad (and we’ve seen it isn’t, since there’s this whole arc with automatons helping the villagers) and how to find balance between development and keeping to your values (and cosiness).
It could be a cute cosy fantasy story, a cute romance with an interesting plot… If everything was rewritten, given depth, backstory, emotional layer, tension, interpersonal relationships, personalities and setup. So basically if you turned this from a rough draft into an actual book. I’m aware it would be a LOT of work that would (and should) probably take years. But I’d say the most difficult part is already done: coming up with a good story and characters. Fixing writing is something that takes more time but is generally a trainable skill. It requires patience, practice and feedback – and time (that’s the difficult part).
But I’m afraid it can’t happen in a world where self-pub demands writing several “books” every year on top of creating content to promote it. No one said writing is profitable for young authors in terms of earning your living in our current world, unless you somehow write a bestseller (and you probably won’t write a bestseller this way). So it comes back to my original question: quality or quantity. Art or what’s basically copywriting. I’m not saying all books should be high lit, Nobel prize contenders. But all books consume resources and even genre books can be good in their category. And for a lover of cosy fantasy who wishes there was more gay lit, it’s just a shame if the book turns out to be in such dire need of any time spent working on it. And I mean actually working on the manuscript, not promoting it on social media.
In the end, I have to mention: are the drawings AI? They have that too-blended, too-smooth feel and it gives me the ick, but I could be wrong. I REALLY hope I’m wrong. If they are: shame on anyone who creates one genre of art while using LLMs to generate another; no one who wants to call themselves an artist should use AI for generating art. If they aren’t: interesting, since there’s no one mentioned as the author of the illustrations or cover. Uh-oh.
I had high hopes for this book, and in some ways, it delivered. The characters were amazing and I liked the general plot of the book.
Unfortunately, I felt it got a little lost in the execution. The story couldn't decide if it was a cozy fantasy or one filled with action. This led to a story that led up to tense moments and then swept them away as characters took leisurely strolls through markets or explored a city. It felt a little like whiplash and made it hard to keep reading sometimes.
Another issue I had was that there were all these parts of the story that could have made it so epic, but were just glossed over. Students do public exams that could destroy a whole area to see if they can graduate. There is this strange sigil magic where everyone's power has a different color. There is an ongoing war that is leading to hunger and power struggles. There is a strange forest, animals, and voices. But it's hard to really appreciate how strange everything is when we aren't given the knowledge to know what is normal. Sure, everyone is telling us it isn't, but as far as I am concerned, there ar people who can do magic (and pick their field of study) but yet a magical forest is out of the question? How does the magic work? Does everyone have the ability? Why do some areas seem to block power? Where does this power come from?
I found myself getting heavily caught up in questions with no answers, and it ended up retracting from the story a lot.
Overall, I think this book has good bones, but it needs some work to be really good.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Mosswood Apothecary is a cozy fantasy novel that follows Rowan Mosswood, a gentle, anxious botanical alchemist who accidentally grows invasive fungi during exams and packs dirt in his suitcase because it helps him think. After barely securing his graduation, he’s sent north to Frostfern Valley to study the region’s dwindling magic. What he finds there isn’t just a research assignment. It’s a quiet mountain town with withering crops, a long-abandoned greenhouse, a warm carpenter named Jimson, and a community that slowly becomes his home. The book blends slice-of-life pacing, soft magic, queer romance, and small-town healing, ending with Rowan opening his own apothecary and saying yes to a wooden ring carved from the oldest tree in the forest. It’s all very tender and very intentional.
The writing is simple in the best way: unhurried, a little vulnerable, and often funny without trying too hard. The worldbuilding leans more cozy than epic, even though the setting includes universities, automatons, and intricate alchemical sigils. What grounded me most were the sensory details that weren’t flashy: dirt under Rowan’s nails, windows iced in delicate patterns, the smell of elderflower tea hanging from the rafters.
I also loved how the story lets Rowan be soft. In so much fantasy, magic is about power or destiny, but here it feels like craft, patience, and care. Rowan’s magic grows wilder and more unpredictable the farther north he goes, and instead of turning that into a high-stakes threat, the author uses it to show how Rowan is changing, too. The romance builds the same way. Jimson isn’t swoony in a scripted sense; he’s solid, warm, and fully part of the town’s rhythm. Their relationship grows like something planted, slow at first, then steady, then suddenly blooming so clearly that by the time the Winter Festival proposal arrives, it just feels right. Even the townsfolk, with their worn-down farms and quiet pride, become part of Rowan’s chosen family, which gives the whole book the emotional softness of queer cozy fantasy at its best.
Mosswood Apothecary feels like TJ Klune’s The House in the Cerulean Sea crossed with the gentle, craft-centered magic of Travis Baldree’s Legends & Lattes, delivering a story that’s just as warm, queer, and quietly transformative. If you enjoy cozy fantasy, queer romance, or stories where magic supports character growth rather than overshadowing it, this book will be completely your vibe. It’s especially lovely if you like narratives about chosen family, rural communities, and soft magic that feels more herbal than explosive.
This was a wonderful read that I sincerely hope is going to become a series as I need more of these characters and this world. The worldbuilding was phenomenal and more detailed than I was expecting for a cozy fantasy. When someone has taken the time to figure out different types of alchemy and the logistics of using them, you know you have met a fellow nerd, especially when they do it well like the author has here. There was a good balance of show vs tell with the worldbuilding, and I’d love to see it further expanded on in more books.
I also greatly enjoyed the characters. The banter gave found family vibes, which I love, and there were numerous parts where I burst out laughing (plant daddy vs plant twink was my favorite). I also enjoyed the small town side characters and cozy fantasy vibes.
My one complaint that kept this from being a 5 star for me was the pacing. The story would end the chapter with a mini cliffhanger, then the next chapter would start three weeks later, with a follow-up explanation for what happened after the cliffhanger. It threw me out of the story to be told what happened after the fact vs actually seeing it play out like I was expecting. Furthermore, it was hard to see why Jimson and Rowan got together because again, they kiss, and then time skip, and suddenly it’s gotten very serious between them. I wish we’d gotten to see more of these moments play out rather than only seeing part of the scene and then being given a summary of the rest.
Overall though, this was a well-written cozy fantasy with great worldbuilding, entertaining characters, and found family vibes. I will definitely keep my eyes out for a potential sequel and highly recommend giving this a try.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
🌿✨ “Herbs, Hearts & Shadow Ferrets” — Mosswood Apothecary by JP Rindfleisch IX ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
First and foremost: this book is absolutely stunning. A literal work of art. The kind of book you proudly display on your shelf because the cover alone whispers, “I am magical—worship me.” And honestly? I do. I’m so glad I supported it, because wow does it deliver.
This is my second read by JP Rindfleisch IX, and just like the first, it wrapped me up in warm, witchy vibes and refused to let go. Jimson and Rowan? Pure sweetness. Their dynamic was gentle, tender, and so achingly earnest that I kept smiling at the pages like a gremlin. And don’t even get me started on the little shadow ferret—I would die for that creature. Protect it at all costs.
The writing feels like wandering through an herb garden at dusk: soft, mysterious, quietly powerful. Cozy magic with emotional depth. Queer joy. Found family. Healing. It’s everything I wanted and didn’t realize I needed.
✨ Themes: • Cozy queer fantasy • Found family • Healing & gentle magic • Soft romance • Wholesome creature companions (shadow ferret supremacy)
The story was cute. I enjoyed Rowan as a character and Jimson was a fun love interest. I always love, as a chubby gay men, having a chubby male love interest.
The magic system with alchemy is fun, especially with how separate the different schools of alchemy are, but comes together. I am always a slut for forest spirits, so I did enjoy that.
The author mentioned the book being originally more episodic before being written together. There were some time skips that were disjointed, and it was difficult to track exactly how much time passed.
I did have some issue with the pacing and character development. Calder I think should've cooked longer on his redemption. Rowan was a bit generic protagonist. Jimson was fun backwood lumberjack boyfriend. Marley and Elara kinda overlapped a lot and didn't have super distinct personalities.
Overall, I did enjoy this book but it wasn't the best read ever, so hence the 3 stars for me. Middle of the road, good, had some good concepts, but some of the writing left something to be desired.
This is apparently Amazon’s answer to the serialized novel alá Dickens. It is a Vella, not quite a novel or a novella, and is structured to constantly produce little dribbles of income by having the reader pay to unlock “episodes” and apparently the episodes aren’t even written. That caveating done the tale is by necessity episodic but not unpleasant (it is advertised as a cozy LGBQT fantasy after all) cleverly imagined magical world, the characters broad strokes of stereotypes (hello bear, say hi to twink etc.). I am uncertain that I will want to finish this but dam it I paid my money and I will at least finish what I paid for! And I just noticed it counts as read as you finish each episode, very difficult within the kindle app to download and navigate.
I agree with many as to the warm, cozy feel of the story. A good read, despite using some fairly usual tropes (the nasty, greedy villain, the modern, sterile vs. folksy, down-to-earth, etc., small group of close friends vs. evil) and much cuteness that some readers might feel overoozed. Rindfleisch delivers a good story, with a well-developing plot.
I wish there was more exposition of Tasmin: where from? how did they become the skilled defender of the Forest? are there others like them? Ah, me thinks I sniff the whisps of a sequel... yes, please!
The plot of this story is great, with a balance of cozy fantasy and daring adventure and conflict. My biggest gripe that brought the rating down for me is my copy had a repeated few pages within a chapter as well as a few random typos throughout the book that would pause me in the immersive storytelling and take me away from the flow of the story. With some additional editing from the printing perspective, I would rate this a comfortable 4 ⭐️
Cute plot and likable enough characters to drive the story.
I came across Mosswood Apothecary and found it to be a charming and immersive cozy fantasy. J.P. Rindfleisch IX creates a magical small-town world filled with quirky characters, botanical wonders, and a touch of romance that makes the story feel warm and inviting. The slow-burn romance, enchanting setting, and delightful humor kept me engaged throughout. I genuinely enjoyed this book and would recommend it to anyone who loves whimsical, heartwarming fantasy.
I love the magic system in this book, and especially the way the different characters are good at using magic in different ways. The sweet romance and friendships made me root for the characters from the get go, and even though it starts a little slowly Mosswood Apothecary is worth sticking with until the end.
A sweet, feel-good story about a botanical alchemist who not only discovers an unexpected world of magic, but also himself along the way.
With a gorgeously imagined world, cozy vibes, and a cottagecore fantasy superimposed against a highly industrialized society, Mosswood Apothecary is one book you will not want to miss.
What a joyful reading experience! I loved the characters and the story. The sweetness of the developing romance between the two MMC was my favorite part. The story of the forest spirit and the growth in the relationship with the community was heartwarming. A great blend of alchemy and botany and science.
Mosswood Apothecary is pure cozy queer magic—a warm hug of a book filled with soft enchantment, botanical whimsy, and the kind of found family that quietly steals your heart.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This story is cozy and magical. A warm tale of love, learning, and filled with spirit and hope. It’s about doing what is right, not what will get you rich. Helping those in need and looking for nothing in return.
Overall, Mosswood Apothecary is a soothing and heartfelt read. It’s a great choice for readers who enjoy cozy fantasy, nature-based magic, and stories that focus more on emotions and character growth than intense plot twists.