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Brides of Seattle #1
Steadfast Heart
Despite her spoiled upbringing, twenty-year-old Lenore Fulcher isn't pretentious. She simply believes a marriage should be built on true love. Her father, however, thinks she's wasted enough time searching for the perfect husband. He wants to marry her off to one of his business partners--who is seventeen years her senior--an idea that is out of the question for Lenore.Kolbein Booth, a young lawyer from Chicago, arrives in Seattle looking for his headstrong sister, who he believes may have answered an advertisement for mail-order brides. Sick with worry, he storms into the Madison Bridal School, demanding to see his sister, only to learn she isn't there. But Lenore Fulcher is, and something about her captures his attention.Is this the man Lenore has been searching for? She may not have long to find out...
337 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 17, 2014
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Tracie Peterson
249 books3,116 followersTracie Peterson is a bestselling author who writes in both historical and contemporary genres. Her novels reveal her love for research as well as her strong desire to develop emotionally meaningful characters and stories for her readers. Tracie and her family live in Montana.
pen name: Janelle Jamison
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February 16, 2015
First disappointment of the year. Really couldn't get into this at all. It felt shallow and underdone. It's the sort of stereotypical "Christian fiction" genre style that I've complained about often in the past, and if I hadn't read a Tracie Peterson book in the past, I probably wouldn't pick up another.
I read the first third and then skimmed. The heroine falls in love instantly, the hero surprisingly does too, they talk a little and get engaged. She nearly swoons multiple times in mere excitement of being near him.
However, it's never really mentioned what she admires about him other than his faith and his ability to make her feel like fainting.
The POV changes were disconcerting. One minute it would be telling us what someone would be thinking; the next, going only by actions.
Since when is astronomy a "dark science"? Umm...not since the Middle Ages. Did she mean astrology?
And the continual limbs/legs thing was like nails on a chalkboard. No, polite society did not speak of limbs. I have many, many period fiction books of the time period that prove this! The whole "so polite they speak only of limbs" thing was an exaggeration to prove a point, not a historical fact.
I won't go on. This was a big let down for me, after yesterday's fabulous story that I want to leave the perfect review for. It was half baked and there was no atmosphere. When I read historical fiction, I want to find atmosphere and history and historically-accurate details and descriptions. If you like escapist fluff, then fine. But when characters say things without explanation, that's not history. I don't feel like Googling what a Mugwump was tonight. It should be explained if it is to be included.
I read the first third and then skimmed. The heroine falls in love instantly, the hero surprisingly does too, they talk a little and get engaged. She nearly swoons multiple times in mere excitement of being near him.
However, it's never really mentioned what she admires about him other than his faith and his ability to make her feel like fainting.
The POV changes were disconcerting. One minute it would be telling us what someone would be thinking; the next, going only by actions.
Since when is astronomy a "dark science"? Umm...not since the Middle Ages. Did she mean astrology?
And the continual limbs/legs thing was like nails on a chalkboard. No, polite society did not speak of limbs. I have many, many period fiction books of the time period that prove this! The whole "so polite they speak only of limbs" thing was an exaggeration to prove a point, not a historical fact.
I won't go on. This was a big let down for me, after yesterday's fabulous story that I want to leave the perfect review for. It was half baked and there was no atmosphere. When I read historical fiction, I want to find atmosphere and history and historically-accurate details and descriptions. If you like escapist fluff, then fine. But when characters say things without explanation, that's not history. I don't feel like Googling what a Mugwump was tonight. It should be explained if it is to be included.
February 1, 2015
I have loved Tracie Peterson for years, but I did not love this book. I have rarely been so disappointed in an author. I actually kind of hope this book was ghostwritten, that's how much of a mess it was. The storyline was all over the place. The characters were mostly insufferable. And by the end I was left scratching my head wondering what the heck I just read.
The story starts with Lenore (who is supposed to be the main character I suppose) going to meet her father at his office, where he wants to get her to agree to let a man 17 years older than she is court her. When she goes to complain about it to her best friend, she apparently instantly falls in love with Kolbein Booth. They spend maybe three hours in one another's presence before Lenore is whisked off by her family to San Francisco for about 100 pages (roughly a third of the book) and the majority of their courtship is carried about with her best friend Abrianna as a go-between, who Kolbein spends an awful lot of time trying to convince she is actually pretty for someone who is supposed to be in love with Lenore.
So basically everyone completely forgets about Lenore, who does absolutely nothing but whine about wanting to go home for the next third of the book. Booth is looking for his sister who apparently ran away to Seattle. But he spends way more time hanging out with Abrianna than looking for his sister. Abrianna is this selfless do-gooder with major self worth issues and little sense of self preservation who constantly puts herself in danger to help homeless urchins and old men a she wanders unaccompanied through the dangerous parts of Seattle. This very much frustrates her friend Wade, who if we were told once, we were told 7,000 times was like her brother, because like Kolbein he spends way too much time trying to convince Abrianna that she's actually pretty and firmly believes that if she wanders the streets alone she be accosted by some man with less than honorable intentions. He's only so concerned because he "loves her like a brother," but if she isn't the main character of the next book (although let's be honest she was definitely actually the main character of this one) and she isn't involved in some sort of love triangle with Wade and some other selfless do-gooder because that is the only kind of man Abrianna could ever see herself with, I will lick the bottom of my own shoe.
There's a string of murders that never gets any resolution whatsoever. Lenore finally returns from exile. She and Kolbein declare their love after still only having spent about 3 hours in each other's presence. They get engaged almost immediately and plan to marry in a month. But wait, Lenore is only 20 and clearly much too young to get married! Never mind the fact that Kolbein didn't even know how old she was when he proposed. Kolbein decides that he guesses her age really doesn't matter so much and they can still get married. Crisis averted. I was so concerned.
At this point Kolbein has pretty much completely forgotten about his sister, the entire reason he came to Seattle in the first place. Until one day he randomly spots a flier with her photograph showing that she's an... *gasp* actress! How terrible! They go to see her play and bring Abrianna along so Wade can see her in a nice dress and have a big moment of *OMG I've been telling this girl for over 200 pages that she's grown up to be a beautiful woman, but I guess I didn't actually believe it until now*, and Abrianna's little street urchin friends can sneak them back stage after the show. All is forgiven between the siblings, and at this point I don't care at all. Because by now I care way more about Abrianna and Wade than I ever did about Lenore and Kolbein.
So much more ridiculousness happens. I didn't even mention Abrianna's aunts' bride school, or her own much older suitor who wants the aunts to sell him the building their school is in. Basicslly this book is a hot mess. But I will probably at least skin the next book in a bookstore. Because while I hated almost everything about this book, I did like Wade. And I want him to be happy, even if I could care less about everyone else
The story starts with Lenore (who is supposed to be the main character I suppose) going to meet her father at his office, where he wants to get her to agree to let a man 17 years older than she is court her. When she goes to complain about it to her best friend, she apparently instantly falls in love with Kolbein Booth. They spend maybe three hours in one another's presence before Lenore is whisked off by her family to San Francisco for about 100 pages (roughly a third of the book) and the majority of their courtship is carried about with her best friend Abrianna as a go-between, who Kolbein spends an awful lot of time trying to convince she is actually pretty for someone who is supposed to be in love with Lenore.
So basically everyone completely forgets about Lenore, who does absolutely nothing but whine about wanting to go home for the next third of the book. Booth is looking for his sister who apparently ran away to Seattle. But he spends way more time hanging out with Abrianna than looking for his sister. Abrianna is this selfless do-gooder with major self worth issues and little sense of self preservation who constantly puts herself in danger to help homeless urchins and old men a she wanders unaccompanied through the dangerous parts of Seattle. This very much frustrates her friend Wade, who if we were told once, we were told 7,000 times was like her brother, because like Kolbein he spends way too much time trying to convince Abrianna that she's actually pretty and firmly believes that if she wanders the streets alone she be accosted by some man with less than honorable intentions. He's only so concerned because he "loves her like a brother," but if she isn't the main character of the next book (although let's be honest she was definitely actually the main character of this one) and she isn't involved in some sort of love triangle with Wade and some other selfless do-gooder because that is the only kind of man Abrianna could ever see herself with, I will lick the bottom of my own shoe.
There's a string of murders that never gets any resolution whatsoever. Lenore finally returns from exile. She and Kolbein declare their love after still only having spent about 3 hours in each other's presence. They get engaged almost immediately and plan to marry in a month. But wait, Lenore is only 20 and clearly much too young to get married! Never mind the fact that Kolbein didn't even know how old she was when he proposed. Kolbein decides that he guesses her age really doesn't matter so much and they can still get married. Crisis averted. I was so concerned.
At this point Kolbein has pretty much completely forgotten about his sister, the entire reason he came to Seattle in the first place. Until one day he randomly spots a flier with her photograph showing that she's an... *gasp* actress! How terrible! They go to see her play and bring Abrianna along so Wade can see her in a nice dress and have a big moment of *OMG I've been telling this girl for over 200 pages that she's grown up to be a beautiful woman, but I guess I didn't actually believe it until now*, and Abrianna's little street urchin friends can sneak them back stage after the show. All is forgiven between the siblings, and at this point I don't care at all. Because by now I care way more about Abrianna and Wade than I ever did about Lenore and Kolbein.
So much more ridiculousness happens. I didn't even mention Abrianna's aunts' bride school, or her own much older suitor who wants the aunts to sell him the building their school is in. Basicslly this book is a hot mess. But I will probably at least skin the next book in a bookstore. Because while I hated almost everything about this book, I did like Wade. And I want him to be happy, even if I could care less about everyone else
August 12, 2015
What a nice 2015 new release to start off the year! Really enjoyed this one and I'm really excited to read book #2!
The main girl's best friend, Abrianna, reminded me a lot of Anne Shirley from Anne of Green Gables. I'd be interested to know if anyone else thought the same thing.
The main girl's best friend, Abrianna, reminded me a lot of Anne Shirley from Anne of Green Gables. I'd be interested to know if anyone else thought the same thing.
February 20, 2015
About this book:
“Lenore Fulcher isn't pretentious despite her spoiled upbringing. Her deepest desire at the age of twenty is to find true love. However, her father believes she's wasted enough time searching for a suitable husband, and he wants to marry her off to one of his business partners--thirty-seven-year-old James Rybus. But the idea of marriage to a man so much older is out of the question for Lenore.
Kolbein Booth, a lawyer from Chicago, arrives in Seattle looking for his headstrong sister who he believes may have answered an advertisement for mail-order brides. Sick with worry, he storms the Madison Bridal School, demanding to see his sister, only to learn she isn't there. But Lenore Fulcher is, and something about her captures his attention.
Is this the man Lenore has been searching for? She may not have long to find out...”
Series: Book #1 in the “Brides of Seattle” series. {Book #2 & #3 will both be released by end of this year.}
Spiritual Content- Prayers; Many talks about God, praying and sins; ‘H’s are capital when talking about God; Mentions of Scriptures and a couple Scriptures are quoted; Mentions of bread & those in the Bible; Many times “God rest his soul” is said and then followed by an “Amen” when talking about those who have pasted; There is a bit of judging.
*Note: a “devilish”; mentions of “that Darwin man”.
Negative Content- Minor cussing including: a form of ‘biddy’, a ‘shoddy’, a form of ‘shut up’ and a ‘stupid’; Mentions of drinking, drunks & smoking; Opium & Morphine is sold & mentioned; Mentions of Democrats & Republicans.
Sexual Content- two ‘hoyden’s; a not-detailed kiss, a barely-above-not-detailed kiss, four semi-detailed kisses; Staring & Noticing; Kolbein thought at first that the Bridal School is a brothel; Mentions of soiled doves (prostitutes); Priam is an evil man and plans to sell Oriental virgins to men (who would pay an outrageous sum) then sell them to a brothel (many talks and hints); Mentions of men who would take liberties; Love, love at first sight, & the emotions.
-Lenore Fulcher
-Abrianna Cunningham
-Kolbein Booth
P.O.V. switches between them, Wade, Priam & Aunt Miriam (once)
Set in 1888
329 pages
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Pre Teens- One Star
New Teens- One Star
Early High School Teens- Two Stars
Older High School Teens- Two Stars (and a half)
My personal Rating- Two Stars
{Really depends on the girl}
I have to be honest, while I really liked Abrianna, I felt a little jipped that there wasn’t many chapters in the back cover’s main characters (Lenore & Kolbein) P.O.V. I really liked Abrianna though, it was just a bit challenging to keep tract of the P.O.V.s. I obviously haven’t fallen in love, so I’m not quite sure what to think about Love at first glance. I can’t really comment on that. But here’s something I can comment on: Y’all know my heart is in China and I know that I’m probably overly sensitive to historical matters featuring Oriental people and opium (which is always, somehow, connected to China). I was very sad to read about Priam’s plan to sell virgins from China to the highest bidder—and that nothing was done to put a stop about it—none of the main characters even knew anything about it! Therefore, unless it affects the books later in this series, it could have been left out; which would have made my rating a lot higher.
Link to review:
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*BFCG may (Read the review to see) recommend this book by this author. It does not mean I recommend all the books by this author.
*I received this book for free from the Publisher (Bethany House Publishers) for this review.
“Lenore Fulcher isn't pretentious despite her spoiled upbringing. Her deepest desire at the age of twenty is to find true love. However, her father believes she's wasted enough time searching for a suitable husband, and he wants to marry her off to one of his business partners--thirty-seven-year-old James Rybus. But the idea of marriage to a man so much older is out of the question for Lenore.
Kolbein Booth, a lawyer from Chicago, arrives in Seattle looking for his headstrong sister who he believes may have answered an advertisement for mail-order brides. Sick with worry, he storms the Madison Bridal School, demanding to see his sister, only to learn she isn't there. But Lenore Fulcher is, and something about her captures his attention.
Is this the man Lenore has been searching for? She may not have long to find out...”
Series: Book #1 in the “Brides of Seattle” series. {Book #2 & #3 will both be released by end of this year.}
Spiritual Content- Prayers; Many talks about God, praying and sins; ‘H’s are capital when talking about God; Mentions of Scriptures and a couple Scriptures are quoted; Mentions of bread & those in the Bible; Many times “God rest his soul” is said and then followed by an “Amen” when talking about those who have pasted; There is a bit of judging.
*Note: a “devilish”; mentions of “that Darwin man”.
Negative Content- Minor cussing including: a form of ‘biddy’, a ‘shoddy’, a form of ‘shut up’ and a ‘stupid’; Mentions of drinking, drunks & smoking; Opium & Morphine is sold & mentioned; Mentions of Democrats & Republicans.
Sexual Content- two ‘hoyden’s; a not-detailed kiss, a barely-above-not-detailed kiss, four semi-detailed kisses; Staring & Noticing; Kolbein thought at first that the Bridal School is a brothel; Mentions of soiled doves (prostitutes); Priam is an evil man and plans to sell Oriental virgins to men (who would pay an outrageous sum) then sell them to a brothel (many talks and hints); Mentions of men who would take liberties; Love, love at first sight, & the emotions.
-Lenore Fulcher
-Abrianna Cunningham
-Kolbein Booth
P.O.V. switches between them, Wade, Priam & Aunt Miriam (once)
Set in 1888
329 pages
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Pre Teens- One Star
New Teens- One Star
Early High School Teens- Two Stars
Older High School Teens- Two Stars (and a half)
My personal Rating- Two Stars
{Really depends on the girl}
I have to be honest, while I really liked Abrianna, I felt a little jipped that there wasn’t many chapters in the back cover’s main characters (Lenore & Kolbein) P.O.V. I really liked Abrianna though, it was just a bit challenging to keep tract of the P.O.V.s. I obviously haven’t fallen in love, so I’m not quite sure what to think about Love at first glance. I can’t really comment on that. But here’s something I can comment on: Y’all know my heart is in China and I know that I’m probably overly sensitive to historical matters featuring Oriental people and opium (which is always, somehow, connected to China). I was very sad to read about Priam’s plan to sell virgins from China to the highest bidder—and that nothing was done to put a stop about it—none of the main characters even knew anything about it! Therefore, unless it affects the books later in this series, it could have been left out; which would have made my rating a lot higher.
Link to review:
http://booksforchristiangirls.blogspo...
*BFCG may (Read the review to see) recommend this book by this author. It does not mean I recommend all the books by this author.
*I received this book for free from the Publisher (Bethany House Publishers) for this review.
December 31, 2014
Tedious. That's the best word to describe this reading experience for me. With six POV characters introduced in the first 3 chapters, this story had a massive case of ADHD for me -- it simply had no clue what it was about. No focus, central goal or theme. It just rambled on about nothing and went nowhere, with shallow, extremely "telling" prose, forced dialogue, and no depth of character. I know this publisher's excellent reputation and this author's long-standing tenure with them, so I kept trudging through, hoping it would improve. But it just never did for me: by the 15% mark, I was skimming. By the 25% mark I skipped to the end and -- yep -- nothing happened. Very disappointing all around.
December 12, 2020
Welp. I blazed through this one like my coattails were consumed by flames.
This was, without a doubt, another winner by Mrs. Tracie Peterson. The plot was different and unique in that the leading lady went on a trip and a secondary leading lady stepped in to bridge the gap while the first one was gone. I can see how this approach wouldn’t work for everyone. Yet, for me, it seemed so realistic. As I was washing dishes while listening to the audio, I couldn’t help but think it’s a great reflection of life. We go on trips sometimes, for business, pleasure, or a mix of the two, and life does continue on back home without us in the days we’re off having an adventure or business meeting or what have you. This aspect is not always presented in fiction, so it was quite refreshing for me to see it in this novel.
The characters were pretty great. A couple of them were rightfully annoying, the leading lady was charming but not a standout, but the one who really stole the show was the secondary leading lady, Abrianna. Perhaps it was the unity I sensed in the similarities she and I share. We both have red hair and freckles and can be quite the chatterboxes. It might also be that she had a servant’s heart and wanted to do what was good and right and would make a positive impact on the lives of the people around her. She challenged people to try their best to do the right thing, and she lived that same principle out in her own life. These were admirable traits, which made Abrianna a character to not only enjoy but to also admire.
I was surprised that a serial killer popped up, but I always love a dose of mystery, so it was a good plot twist. Following the mystery was fun and engaging, and it was well written into the plot so that it felt like a natural addition rather than one that stood out as not belonging.
Two things struck me about Kolbein Booth. One, his name was unique and one I had never before heard… and I liked it. Two, his search for his sister, to save her from harm or soiled reputation, was admirable and exactly what I would hope for in a brother if I had one. This guy was a hero that I could root for, one that was strong and capable and chivalrous and manly, yet sensitive to the women around him (most of the time). He had his faults, sure. Which of us don’t? But I found throughout the story that these fallacies were merely opportunities for him to grow, not reasons to condemn him.
Steadfast Heart was an enjoyable story that I recommend to anyone who loves a smart leading lady, a story-stealing supporting lady, a heroic hero, and a plot that will suck you in and not let go until you discover all the answers.
One extra bonus: This story is one of the very few that actually stands on the biblical edict that gossip is a sin. I was very happy to see this. It’s rare to find a book that states that gossip is, in fact, a sin. Usually that sin is overlooked or even lauded, to make people feel better about gossiping, but not this one. It calls us to action to think twice about the words that come out of our mouths and challenges us to dig deep into the Word of God to discover the truth about the nature of gossip.
Content: tobacco, drugs, alcohol, tattoos, soiled doves
This was, without a doubt, another winner by Mrs. Tracie Peterson. The plot was different and unique in that the leading lady went on a trip and a secondary leading lady stepped in to bridge the gap while the first one was gone. I can see how this approach wouldn’t work for everyone. Yet, for me, it seemed so realistic. As I was washing dishes while listening to the audio, I couldn’t help but think it’s a great reflection of life. We go on trips sometimes, for business, pleasure, or a mix of the two, and life does continue on back home without us in the days we’re off having an adventure or business meeting or what have you. This aspect is not always presented in fiction, so it was quite refreshing for me to see it in this novel.
The characters were pretty great. A couple of them were rightfully annoying, the leading lady was charming but not a standout, but the one who really stole the show was the secondary leading lady, Abrianna. Perhaps it was the unity I sensed in the similarities she and I share. We both have red hair and freckles and can be quite the chatterboxes. It might also be that she had a servant’s heart and wanted to do what was good and right and would make a positive impact on the lives of the people around her. She challenged people to try their best to do the right thing, and she lived that same principle out in her own life. These were admirable traits, which made Abrianna a character to not only enjoy but to also admire.
I was surprised that a serial killer popped up, but I always love a dose of mystery, so it was a good plot twist. Following the mystery was fun and engaging, and it was well written into the plot so that it felt like a natural addition rather than one that stood out as not belonging.
Two things struck me about Kolbein Booth. One, his name was unique and one I had never before heard… and I liked it. Two, his search for his sister, to save her from harm or soiled reputation, was admirable and exactly what I would hope for in a brother if I had one. This guy was a hero that I could root for, one that was strong and capable and chivalrous and manly, yet sensitive to the women around him (most of the time). He had his faults, sure. Which of us don’t? But I found throughout the story that these fallacies were merely opportunities for him to grow, not reasons to condemn him.
Steadfast Heart was an enjoyable story that I recommend to anyone who loves a smart leading lady, a story-stealing supporting lady, a heroic hero, and a plot that will suck you in and not let go until you discover all the answers.
One extra bonus: This story is one of the very few that actually stands on the biblical edict that gossip is a sin. I was very happy to see this. It’s rare to find a book that states that gossip is, in fact, a sin. Usually that sin is overlooked or even lauded, to make people feel better about gossiping, but not this one. It calls us to action to think twice about the words that come out of our mouths and challenges us to dig deep into the Word of God to discover the truth about the nature of gossip.
Content: tobacco, drugs, alcohol, tattoos, soiled doves
March 2, 2015
Steadfast Heart
Brides of Seattle 1
By Tracie Peterson
Steadfast Heart was and is Lenore Fulcher and Kolbein Booth's story. Lenore is the only child of her parents. They've raised her in a life of ease and luxury. She's also expected to marry a man of means. But the man who seemingly captured her heart with a look is a young lawyer - Kolbein Booth.
But Kolbein isn't looking for love, rather he is looking for his sister whom he believes may be at The Madison Bridal School. But to his dismay he not only doesn't find Greta, he finds that no one has even heard of her.
But Abrianna Cunningham offers to help Kolbein in the search for his sister. Much to the dismay of her guardian Mrs. Madison, owner of the school, and her friends Abrianna is well acquainted with many of the poor and homeless who call the streets of Seattle home. But her knowledge is just what Kolbein needs.
Meanwhile a business man has come to the attention of those at the bridal school - Priam Welby. Mr. Welby has determined that the building housing the bridal school is just what he needs for his import business. And he is determined that no won't be the final answer.
I think the heart of this story is Abrianna Cunningham. Abrianna is the ward of Mrs. Madison the owner of The Madison Bridal School. Abrianna is a brillant and caring young woman who has a habit of talking unceasingly. Abrianna also has a heart for the homeless and poor of Seattle much to the concern of those who know and love her. And her friendship with Wade is one of her dearest, he is like a brother to her and he exasperates her to no end when he thwarts some of her endeavors.
I for one hope that when the second book in this series comes out that there will be more from Abrianna. Abrianna is the friend most people wish they could have. She is both serious and hilarious with a single conversation. And her heart's capacity for caring is an inspiration. Truly a lovely young woman I'd like to visit with again.
I was provided a copy of this book by the publisher Bethany House through their blogger program in exchange for my honest review.
Brides of Seattle 1
By Tracie Peterson
Steadfast Heart was and is Lenore Fulcher and Kolbein Booth's story. Lenore is the only child of her parents. They've raised her in a life of ease and luxury. She's also expected to marry a man of means. But the man who seemingly captured her heart with a look is a young lawyer - Kolbein Booth.
But Kolbein isn't looking for love, rather he is looking for his sister whom he believes may be at The Madison Bridal School. But to his dismay he not only doesn't find Greta, he finds that no one has even heard of her.
But Abrianna Cunningham offers to help Kolbein in the search for his sister. Much to the dismay of her guardian Mrs. Madison, owner of the school, and her friends Abrianna is well acquainted with many of the poor and homeless who call the streets of Seattle home. But her knowledge is just what Kolbein needs.
Meanwhile a business man has come to the attention of those at the bridal school - Priam Welby. Mr. Welby has determined that the building housing the bridal school is just what he needs for his import business. And he is determined that no won't be the final answer.
I think the heart of this story is Abrianna Cunningham. Abrianna is the ward of Mrs. Madison the owner of The Madison Bridal School. Abrianna is a brillant and caring young woman who has a habit of talking unceasingly. Abrianna also has a heart for the homeless and poor of Seattle much to the concern of those who know and love her. And her friendship with Wade is one of her dearest, he is like a brother to her and he exasperates her to no end when he thwarts some of her endeavors.
I for one hope that when the second book in this series comes out that there will be more from Abrianna. Abrianna is the friend most people wish they could have. She is both serious and hilarious with a single conversation. And her heart's capacity for caring is an inspiration. Truly a lovely young woman I'd like to visit with again.
I was provided a copy of this book by the publisher Bethany House through their blogger program in exchange for my honest review.
September 28, 2015
So I liked this. It was heavily Christian based however. I just want to point that out that for people like me who read Christian fiction books but don't expect them to be heavy on the "JESUS IS OUR SAVIOR". This book, and it's sequel, are pretty heavy on faith and religion and the characters have numerous discussions on how to be a good person and does God even exists, etc. I didn't mind it because I am going through some personal stuff at the moment that made me find comfort in their discussions but I think if I was in a "normal" frame of mind I'd be all "TOO MUCH RELIGION". Also their discussion of God fits into the time frame (late 1800's). But a heads up, for the general masses that when you pick up this book, don't be surprised.
That aside, I did liked this book because it had a lot of interesting characters and it set in Seattle right before the Great Fire and the three aunts who run the Bridal School are hilarious. I wasn't too fond of the couple in this book, Lenore and Booth, I feel like they fell in love too fast but that could have been just me. Lenore's best friend Abriannna was my favorite however. I love how she is constantly getting into scrapes to help others and she is always quick to see her faults and ask for forgiveness but then she is right back to doing what she did before because she can't help it and yep, Abrianna is my favorite out of all the characters.
That aside, I did liked this book because it had a lot of interesting characters and it set in Seattle right before the Great Fire and the three aunts who run the Bridal School are hilarious. I wasn't too fond of the couple in this book, Lenore and Booth, I feel like they fell in love too fast but that could have been just me. Lenore's best friend Abriannna was my favorite however. I love how she is constantly getting into scrapes to help others and she is always quick to see her faults and ask for forgiveness but then she is right back to doing what she did before because she can't help it and yep, Abrianna is my favorite out of all the characters.
July 22, 2015
Meh. I didn't care for the main character Lenore, and her story line. I found her boring. I ended up caring for and wanting to follow Abrianna's storyline more, which isn't resolved until the third book!
July 27, 2022
This was a good read, but it does seem to be one of Tracie Peterson's earlier books, so her style seemed slightly different to me. Still enjoyable though.
December 31, 2015
I am writing this review a little bit differently than I usually do; you'll see why in a moment. Let me start of by saying that I have read many of Tracie Peterson’s novels and, up to this point, have thoroughly enjoyed every one of them. She usually has a wonderful writing style that draws you into the setting, the story, and makes you love the characters. Clearly you can see why I would be disappointed when this book fell flat for me. Now, I hate writing bad reviews, but some things just have to be said, so I’m going to try to explain this in the nicest way possible. And, hopefully, you won’t find any of the information I relate contains spoilers.
Based on the synopsis, you would think this novel—the first book in Tracie’s Brides of Seattle series—focuses on Lenore and Kolbein, correct? Wrong. I expected it to as well, and was extremely disappointed when I found that at least one-third of the book—if not more—was actually about Lenore’s best friend Abrianna, whose own book is supposed to be the third in the series (releasing in October). With so much of the book being devoted to another character—and the six point of views this novel bounced between—I had a hard time really getting to know Lenore and Kolbein. What little I did learn about the two of them was not necessarily very good, with Lenore being a bit shallow and whiny, and Kolbein being somewhat judgmental and very wishy-washy.
On another note, the romantic aspect of this novel was very difficult to find believable. Lenore and Kolbein ‘fell in love’, and got engaged, rather quickly, had a fight, practically broke off the engagement, and then all of a sudden, with hardly any mention to their struggle with the subject, made up and started planning their wedding once more. As well as that, Kolbein’s search for his sister is picked up and dropped and then picked up again so many times it almost seemed like he didn’t really care enough about it, but then he would be in so much pain over it a few minutes later. And his sudden realization that she had ‘grown up’ once things were resolved didn’t help matters either. Also, for a man who was madly in love with Lenore, he spent a good amount of time trying to convince Abrianna that she was a beautiful woman.
On that subject, let me speak a little about Lenore’s friend. Abrianna is portrayed as a heart-of-gold, fearless do-gooder who has no worries for her own safety, and has serious self-worth issues. Without regard for the dangers of the world, she constantly escapes the confines of the bridal school she lives in to help the poor and needy in the worst areas of town, completely and utterly alone. And we are assured—more than twenty times to be exact—that her friend Wade Ackerman is like a brother to her and is VERY concerned for her welfare. So, it appears someone is attempting to look after her, although apparently not enough because she sneaks out anyway, despite the fact that three men are murdered right outside their home. That is another issue I have with this book, as the murders are never resolved. I am curious to see if that is part of a lead-in for the next book, which releases July 7th, so I will most likely be reading that one as well. I am hoping that—as has been the case before with other authors—the second book will turn out better than the first.
All-in-all, I did find a few things I liked about this novel. I do love the idea of a Bridal School, as it makes for some very interesting stories, and the three ladies who ran it did give me a few laughs. I also fell in love with Abrianna’s friend Wade, and am hoping to hear more about him in the following books, although Abrianna is a little to chatty and flighty for my tastes. Unfortunately, I have to limit this novel to only three bookshelves but, if fluffy, somewhat disconnected stories are something you like to read, you might very well enjoy this novel more than I did.
(This review is from my blog, spreadinghisgrace.blogspot.com)
Based on the synopsis, you would think this novel—the first book in Tracie’s Brides of Seattle series—focuses on Lenore and Kolbein, correct? Wrong. I expected it to as well, and was extremely disappointed when I found that at least one-third of the book—if not more—was actually about Lenore’s best friend Abrianna, whose own book is supposed to be the third in the series (releasing in October). With so much of the book being devoted to another character—and the six point of views this novel bounced between—I had a hard time really getting to know Lenore and Kolbein. What little I did learn about the two of them was not necessarily very good, with Lenore being a bit shallow and whiny, and Kolbein being somewhat judgmental and very wishy-washy.
On another note, the romantic aspect of this novel was very difficult to find believable. Lenore and Kolbein ‘fell in love’, and got engaged, rather quickly, had a fight, practically broke off the engagement, and then all of a sudden, with hardly any mention to their struggle with the subject, made up and started planning their wedding once more. As well as that, Kolbein’s search for his sister is picked up and dropped and then picked up again so many times it almost seemed like he didn’t really care enough about it, but then he would be in so much pain over it a few minutes later. And his sudden realization that she had ‘grown up’ once things were resolved didn’t help matters either. Also, for a man who was madly in love with Lenore, he spent a good amount of time trying to convince Abrianna that she was a beautiful woman.
On that subject, let me speak a little about Lenore’s friend. Abrianna is portrayed as a heart-of-gold, fearless do-gooder who has no worries for her own safety, and has serious self-worth issues. Without regard for the dangers of the world, she constantly escapes the confines of the bridal school she lives in to help the poor and needy in the worst areas of town, completely and utterly alone. And we are assured—more than twenty times to be exact—that her friend Wade Ackerman is like a brother to her and is VERY concerned for her welfare. So, it appears someone is attempting to look after her, although apparently not enough because she sneaks out anyway, despite the fact that three men are murdered right outside their home. That is another issue I have with this book, as the murders are never resolved. I am curious to see if that is part of a lead-in for the next book, which releases July 7th, so I will most likely be reading that one as well. I am hoping that—as has been the case before with other authors—the second book will turn out better than the first.
All-in-all, I did find a few things I liked about this novel. I do love the idea of a Bridal School, as it makes for some very interesting stories, and the three ladies who ran it did give me a few laughs. I also fell in love with Abrianna’s friend Wade, and am hoping to hear more about him in the following books, although Abrianna is a little to chatty and flighty for my tastes. Unfortunately, I have to limit this novel to only three bookshelves but, if fluffy, somewhat disconnected stories are something you like to read, you might very well enjoy this novel more than I did.
(This review is from my blog, spreadinghisgrace.blogspot.com)
April 8, 2015
I really enjoyed Abrianna n Wade's characters in this story. I liked the humour n glad we found the missing sister. the story was of Kolbein n Lenore's romance.
September 14, 2019
I borrowed this book from a friend who had obtained it at a used library sale thinking it would be great historical fiction read. Sorry to say I was disappointed in this one by Tracie Peterson. The story didn’t capture my attention like some of her other books have. It dragged in lots of areas with various happenings left unanswered when it concluded.
September 22, 2019
Wonderful read; I am looking forward to reading the next books in the series .
January 31, 2015
“Steadfast Heart” may have been Lenore and Kolbein’s story but I’m afraid Abrianna and Wade hijacked it. I did like both Lenore and Kolbein but Abrianna’s vivacity just seemed to take over. I’ll admit to reading several other reviewer’s opinions and it seemed many felt the same. Unlike some of them, I didn’t find it to be a negative thing because I know that I can look forward to probably at least two more books that will expand the characters and story before the series ends. And I do mean that I look forward to it. I am in hopes that Abrianna and Wade will discover that their friendship has grown into an even more special relationship. I also am eager to learn more about the nefarious Mr. Welby and hoping he get his comeuppance.
“Steadfast Heart” has it all – love at first sight, drama, some mystery, plenty of humor, and faith. Tracie Peterson developed her characters with her usual skill and left me wanting to read more about them. Abrianna’s aunties were so quaint and humorous to read about and I look forward to spending more time with time as the series progresses. I feel that “Steadfast Heart” may just be the intro for the rest of the series where the reader will really get into the “meat” of the story. If Brides of Seattle is at all similar to her previous series, the overall reading experience will be excellent. I so look forward to “Refining Fire” and hope I can snag a review copy so I won’t have to wait until its publication in June to read it.
This book was provided for review by
Bethany House, a division of Baker Publishing Group.
“Steadfast Heart” has it all – love at first sight, drama, some mystery, plenty of humor, and faith. Tracie Peterson developed her characters with her usual skill and left me wanting to read more about them. Abrianna’s aunties were so quaint and humorous to read about and I look forward to spending more time with time as the series progresses. I feel that “Steadfast Heart” may just be the intro for the rest of the series where the reader will really get into the “meat” of the story. If Brides of Seattle is at all similar to her previous series, the overall reading experience will be excellent. I so look forward to “Refining Fire” and hope I can snag a review copy so I won’t have to wait until its publication in June to read it.
This book was provided for review by
Bethany House, a division of Baker Publishing Group.
January 31, 2015
I really struggled with this story. The cover art is beautiful and the setting of the story is interesting. However, the first half of the book moved very slowly for me and I just could not get invested in the characters.
When I reached the second half of the story, I felt that the pace picked up a bit. I still had trouble really relating to anyone and there are quite a few characters. Viewpoints switched back and forth between all of these characters a lot, which was a bit confusing. As the story moved on, I did not have trouble keeping everything straight, and the storyline caught my interest more. I will say that I liked Wade, Lenore, and Kolbein. I was not fond of Abrianna for most of the book. I felt that Kolbein grew into a more caring character as the story progressed and Lenore was a very sweet character.
Although I did not particularly enjoy this book, I have enjoyed reading Tracie Peterson’s books in the past and look forward to reading other works by her in the future.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers in exchange for an honest review.
You can read this review on my blog at:
https://brittreadsfiction.wordpress.c...
When I reached the second half of the story, I felt that the pace picked up a bit. I still had trouble really relating to anyone and there are quite a few characters. Viewpoints switched back and forth between all of these characters a lot, which was a bit confusing. As the story moved on, I did not have trouble keeping everything straight, and the storyline caught my interest more. I will say that I liked Wade, Lenore, and Kolbein. I was not fond of Abrianna for most of the book. I felt that Kolbein grew into a more caring character as the story progressed and Lenore was a very sweet character.
Although I did not particularly enjoy this book, I have enjoyed reading Tracie Peterson’s books in the past and look forward to reading other works by her in the future.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers in exchange for an honest review.
You can read this review on my blog at:
https://brittreadsfiction.wordpress.c...
March 3, 2015
There are some fun things that I liked about this book. My favorite character, Abrianna, with her sweet sincerity and love of people carried the book for me. She was a ray of sunshine in rainy Seattle. She tried to fill her days by going about and helping the poor and downtrodden. She lived her faith by her actions and encouraged her friends to be better people.
The rest of the story fell a little flat for me. I struggled to get into the story and the characters. The books romance centered around Lenore and Kolbein. They had a quick courtship and fell in love almost immediately. Once they met, they were each others focus. There seemed to be many back stories that cluttered their romance for me.
I think I would have been happier if this had been a romance story between Abrianna and Wade. They have know each other as friends for a long time and it seemed like a story that I would have liked a little better. Maybe sometime in the future?
There were unresolved issues that I hope will come together in future books.
The rest of the story fell a little flat for me. I struggled to get into the story and the characters. The books romance centered around Lenore and Kolbein. They had a quick courtship and fell in love almost immediately. Once they met, they were each others focus. There seemed to be many back stories that cluttered their romance for me.
I think I would have been happier if this had been a romance story between Abrianna and Wade. They have know each other as friends for a long time and it seemed like a story that I would have liked a little better. Maybe sometime in the future?
There were unresolved issues that I hope will come together in future books.
December 28, 2015
This novel is a mess, had I not read the blurb on the back cover of the book, I probably would have enjoyed this more. It was stated the main characters are Lenore & Kolbein, however much of the story was centered on Abrianna while Lenore was holidaying away in San Francisco. I got to know Abrianna more than Lenore, and the way Lenore & Kolbein falling in love with each other was quite unbelievable....
I felt the author did not have a solid plot plan before writing the novel, the story just went all over the place with no real focus. Made worse by the amateurish writing quality, everything the characters felt had to be written down point blank.
This is my first book by Tracie Peterson and it's a huge disappointment, but from reading the reviews here, it seems this is not the usual Tracie Peterson quality, so I'm not giving up on her yet. I'll try her other series one day, steering clear of this 'Brides of Seattle' series.
2 Stars, simply because I finished the book, otherwise it would be 1 star.
I felt the author did not have a solid plot plan before writing the novel, the story just went all over the place with no real focus. Made worse by the amateurish writing quality, everything the characters felt had to be written down point blank.
This is my first book by Tracie Peterson and it's a huge disappointment, but from reading the reviews here, it seems this is not the usual Tracie Peterson quality, so I'm not giving up on her yet. I'll try her other series one day, steering clear of this 'Brides of Seattle' series.
2 Stars, simply because I finished the book, otherwise it would be 1 star.
April 30, 2018
My last Tracie Peterson series was Heirs of Montana, and afterward, I wanted a contrast to the intense, dramatic storyline of that series. I certainly found the contrast in the Brides of Seattle series. For a book that says it's about Lenore, you spend most of your time with Abrianna. Lenore almost seems like a secondary character compared to Abrianna. The book lacked a sense of urgency and didn't bring the drama. There were moments that looked like they could lead to some deeper emotion or more intense moment, but these moments soon resolved themselves with everything being all right. The bad things in the story were very distant, so there wasn't really any pull for the novel to break your heart, make you think, or send you soaring with joy. Even the romance, being very love at first sight, was rather bland because of the efficiency of it. The characters, dialogue, and setting were entertaining. I was definitely able to read the book and didn't dislike doing so. Overall, I just wanted more.
February 15, 2015
This was pretty good read and I'm always willing to read a book by Tracie Peterson. I was drawn in from the very first page.
I really loved,loved the idea of this story having the focus of a Bride Prep School! I wish those kinda things were still going on because that idea sounds so awesome! I could so use one right now!
The dialogue was perfect and I was really drawn into the story. Though there were some parts in this story that I thought it took a while to get to the point. Also, I do have a problem with a book that has an array of characters that are very hard for me to keep up with. I think I would have enjoyed it more if there were less characters to deal with.That's just my opinion.
The book cover looks pretty splendid! I just love how it just stands out.
Overall, this was a pretty good read and I can't wait to read the next book in this series!
I really loved,loved the idea of this story having the focus of a Bride Prep School! I wish those kinda things were still going on because that idea sounds so awesome! I could so use one right now!
The dialogue was perfect and I was really drawn into the story. Though there were some parts in this story that I thought it took a while to get to the point. Also, I do have a problem with a book that has an array of characters that are very hard for me to keep up with. I think I would have enjoyed it more if there were less characters to deal with.That's just my opinion.
The book cover looks pretty splendid! I just love how it just stands out.
Overall, this was a pretty good read and I can't wait to read the next book in this series!
March 8, 2019
I was leaning toward 3 stars until I got to the abrupt ending. Then I was going to give it 2 stars until I started telling a friend about it and got angry over the time wasted reading it.
I've liked other books by this author but this was just bizarre. The main characters were barely in the book. They had love at first sight, barely spoke to each before declaring their love and becoming engaged. The whole rest of the book was about the side characters and introducing opium smuggling, murders, and sex trafficking. None of which is dealt with in any way. It was a really stupid waste of time.
I've liked other books by this author but this was just bizarre. The main characters were barely in the book. They had love at first sight, barely spoke to each before declaring their love and becoming engaged. The whole rest of the book was about the side characters and introducing opium smuggling, murders, and sex trafficking. None of which is dealt with in any way. It was a really stupid waste of time.
July 19, 2017
Delightful romance, happily without the current trend toward pornography.
Each character was well developed and the story held interest as well as causing hope for a sequel. I enjoyed it immensely!
Each character was well developed and the story held interest as well as causing hope for a sequel. I enjoyed it immensely!
October 25, 2017
Fun to read
Reminiscent of Ann and Green Gables, but set in the Pacific NW, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and learning more about the characters involved. Looking forward to the series!
Reminiscent of Ann and Green Gables, but set in the Pacific NW, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book and learning more about the characters involved. Looking forward to the series!
April 19, 2015
loved this book, but then again I am a huge fan of Tracie Peterson's. can't wait for the second book in this series.
October 1, 2017
I almost put this book down. Definitely not Tracie's best. Not sure I will continue with the series as this one felt a bit like torture to get through. :(
March 16, 2017
It is very uncommon of me to properly review a book, but because I felt as if there were some things the I have to mention, I decided to do it!
2 stars
So at the start I had a lot of high expectations, and lets just say that Peterson stamped on them.
At the beginning of this book, we get introduced to our main character (Lenore Fulcher) However, the point of focus is immediately turned towards her friend, Abrianna Cunningham. At first I was like-It's alright, you know? I thought that maybe this will make us understand the characters more. But as the book progressed, we see very little of our supposed 'main character', and more of her friend, who is presumably a second character.
Anyways... I guess the deep involvement of Abrianna kinda helps the whole story move forward (which i thought was very BORING) No biggie
However
the big deal is the ROMANCE (or should I say lack of romance?)
WHERE IS THE LOVE?
Okey, let's backtrack a little, to Kolbein and Lenore's first meeting. I honestly think of the whole book as straightforward (like Abrianna ^^)
I do NOT-I repeat- I do NOT agree with straightforward LOVE.
Oh, I get the whole "Love at first sight" deal, but it just didn't stick.
I have honestly read LAFS books, and they were perfected. But this one? NOPE
This is pretty much how it all happened
1. Kolbein meets Lenore for the first time, loves her looks. Never leaves his thoughts. COOL
2. Lenore thinks: I don't understand, but I'm in love with a guy who I just met. WHAT??
3. Stuff happens
4. Lenore asks Abrianna to praise her to Kolbein, "I want you to tell him how amazing and beautiful and, oh, fascinating I am". REALLY?
5. More stuff happens
Jezusss, what is this, a ROMANCE book, or a comedy ??
So really, I think the whole romance ordeal was just bland and lacking in many departments.
Lets just say that my expectations aren't gonna be as well for the second book as they were for the first- I don't even think I wanna read it. Seriously!!
P.S I seriously think that the whole religious stuff was a little overdone. But puh-lease , be realistic, who mentions God that much in one day. Amen was overdone too.
Take it or leave it, I do NOT recommend this book for everyone.
Peace ^3^
2 stars
So at the start I had a lot of high expectations, and lets just say that Peterson stamped on them.
At the beginning of this book, we get introduced to our main character (Lenore Fulcher) However, the point of focus is immediately turned towards her friend, Abrianna Cunningham. At first I was like-It's alright, you know? I thought that maybe this will make us understand the characters more. But as the book progressed, we see very little of our supposed 'main character', and more of her friend, who is presumably a second character.
Anyways... I guess the deep involvement of Abrianna kinda helps the whole story move forward (which i thought was very BORING) No biggie
However
the big deal is the ROMANCE (or should I say lack of romance?)
WHERE IS THE LOVE?
Okey, let's backtrack a little, to Kolbein and Lenore's first meeting. I honestly think of the whole book as straightforward (like Abrianna ^^)
I do NOT-I repeat- I do NOT agree with straightforward LOVE.
Oh, I get the whole "Love at first sight" deal, but it just didn't stick.
I have honestly read LAFS books, and they were perfected. But this one? NOPE
This is pretty much how it all happened
1. Kolbein meets Lenore for the first time, loves her looks. Never leaves his thoughts. COOL
2. Lenore thinks: I don't understand, but I'm in love with a guy who I just met. WHAT??
3. Stuff happens
4. Lenore asks Abrianna to praise her to Kolbein, "I want you to tell him how amazing and beautiful and, oh, fascinating I am". REALLY?
5. More stuff happens
Jezusss, what is this, a ROMANCE book, or a comedy ??
So really, I think the whole romance ordeal was just bland and lacking in many departments.
Lets just say that my expectations aren't gonna be as well for the second book as they were for the first- I don't even think I wanna read it. Seriously!!
P.S I seriously think that the whole religious stuff was a little overdone. But puh-lease , be realistic, who mentions God that much in one day. Amen was overdone too.
Take it or leave it, I do NOT recommend this book for everyone.
Peace ^3^
October 11, 2018
I don’t know who wrote the summary on the back of the book, but I’m torn between wanting to shake your hand for your cleverness or slap you for making me want to read this book. This was PAINFUL to get through. I’ve read bad books before, but this was a disaster. The main characters weren’t the main characters. The main character is the one that is supposed to be the main character of the third book. The seemingly simultaneously too good to be true and too stupid to be believed Abrianna. She’s super into helping the poor and social causes, which is fine and yet ridiculous at the same time. The old sailors nearby are one thing, but a woman raised in a household that trains women on how to behave as well as domestic pursuits crossing town to take food to a prostitute that had a baby? Doubtful. She’s an idiot too. Murders happening around her home and she decides to confront a stranger outside alone with a crowbar even though she’s been told several times to stay in? Idiot. She has a “brother-like” figure in her life named Wade, and I wouldn’t have to read the description for book 3 to peg him as her future romantic interest. He’s not a bad character though. The aunts didn’t bother me too much, even though they’re a bit extra. Lenore falls for Kolbein instantly. Fine. Barely around him and wants to marry him. Is rich but doesn’t care for how rich people act yet is really happy when she finds out Kolbein is richer than her father (she was still going to marry him since...love?). Speaking of Kolbein. Dude’s there to get his sister and spends his time hanging out with Wade and Abrianna (since our faux leading lady was immediately shipped off to California with her family so the author could make sure to keep Abrianna as the real lead), finding a new job, securing a place to live, going to parties and social events, anything but looking for his sister that he so OBVIOUSLY cares about. I forgot her name by the time she showed up. Took nearly a month to suffer through this while I set it aside for other pursuits. My first Tracie Peterson book. Not a good first one, I hope. If this is her usual way of writing, I don’t get how she’s published this many books. Skip this one unless you like frustration.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 15, 2019
Yawn. This book was not good. It was all over the place and I was confused by whose story I was actually reading.
Lenore and Kolbein apparently have fallen in love at first sight. Kolbein, a lawyer from Chicago, has come to Seattle to find his sister. She left a trail leading him there. But instead he sees Lenore and she is beautiful. They are together a week then Lenore leaves? This makes no sense. And they decide during that week they are soulmates. Even though they have seen each other briefly. I felt like I was reading about a camp relationship forming. It was so naive even for that time. But I feel that this was a side story. The main story I feel was Abrianna and Wade. Abrianna is a conundrum. Sometimes I felt she was slow or just super naive. The book was basically about her. So I feel the rest of the series will be the same. So pass.
It was too preachy and completely bad written. I couldn’t wait to get to the end. It’s is prolly a good book for a sheltered Christian 13yr old that thinks holding hands is risqué. And likes to speak in parables and bible versions.
Lenore and Kolbein apparently have fallen in love at first sight. Kolbein, a lawyer from Chicago, has come to Seattle to find his sister. She left a trail leading him there. But instead he sees Lenore and she is beautiful. They are together a week then Lenore leaves? This makes no sense. And they decide during that week they are soulmates. Even though they have seen each other briefly. I felt like I was reading about a camp relationship forming. It was so naive even for that time. But I feel that this was a side story. The main story I feel was Abrianna and Wade. Abrianna is a conundrum. Sometimes I felt she was slow or just super naive. The book was basically about her. So I feel the rest of the series will be the same. So pass.
It was too preachy and completely bad written. I couldn’t wait to get to the end. It’s is prolly a good book for a sheltered Christian 13yr old that thinks holding hands is risqué. And likes to speak in parables and bible versions.
July 8, 2022
I listened to an audio version read by Alyssa Bresnahan, whose narration was unremarkable.
The story is clean (no sex, gore, drug use, and violence--aside from mentions of murder).
At the beginning, I thought the female characters were delightfully endearing and even quirky. I loved that they have unique personalities, and I was almost hooked.
However, I soon discovered that the story is too slow. Several of the characters seem to have one-track minds, like Leanor -- all she can think about is Colebine, which is boring. The only interesting character is Aubriana, who is not focused on matchmaking or snagging a husband, but rather on philanthropic works. The story was unimaginative and the moments that the author likely thought were suspenseful were severely tame. And the clean way everything fell together with no sense of tension or worry or fear from the reader's perspective was disappointing.
The story is clean (no sex, gore, drug use, and violence--aside from mentions of murder).
At the beginning, I thought the female characters were delightfully endearing and even quirky. I loved that they have unique personalities, and I was almost hooked.
However, I soon discovered that the story is too slow. Several of the characters seem to have one-track minds, like Leanor -- all she can think about is Colebine, which is boring. The only interesting character is Aubriana, who is not focused on matchmaking or snagging a husband, but rather on philanthropic works. The story was unimaginative and the moments that the author likely thought were suspenseful were severely tame. And the clean way everything fell together with no sense of tension or worry or fear from the reader's perspective was disappointing.
June 18, 2025
I was not too impressed with this book. I did love the beginning of the narrative with Abrianna’s antics and that of her aunts. Turns out this story is not really about Lenor but more about Abrianna and her companions. Lenor is a side character. She met Booth once and desires he court her despite their lengthy separation. She and her parents are visiting wealthy friends. Meanwhile, Booth is pining for her despite their one and only brief interaction. The story proceeds to make other characters take precedence over the supposed main character, Lenor. Also too many side issues going on.
While on the trip with her parents, Lenor alludes to being tired of the rich life but simultaneously, purchases a lavish and expensive dress with shoes to match. Then she inwardly criticizes their host’s guests and meal.
Was quite disappointed bc this story did not deliver and seemed quite disjointed.
While on the trip with her parents, Lenor alludes to being tired of the rich life but simultaneously, purchases a lavish and expensive dress with shoes to match. Then she inwardly criticizes their host’s guests and meal.
Was quite disappointed bc this story did not deliver and seemed quite disjointed.
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