EDIT: After 2 months, I have decided to increase this book from 2 stars to 3 stars because of the one spicy scene with Caspian that I have shamelessly revisited like 10+ times now 😂 honestly makes me think reading this book is worth it just for that one chapter…
This book started off well and actually felt like high fantasy for a bit because the world building and plot setup was so good, but it went downhill quick and for so many reasons absolutely infuriated me by the end of it!! This is gonna be a long review of me ranting because I need to get all my frustration out 😂
The spice in this one is not good. This is my main gripe because THIS IS AN RH BOOK!! Where are the group scenes?? You’re seriously going to only give us one or two sexy group scenes per book when it’s 600+ pages?! And they’re not even written well anymore, it’s gave me the ick. I’m not connecting with it at all and the hard spanking kink is not for me (I won’t deduct stars for this bc I’m all for kinks, but personally this is one that I really don’t like), and the Baby Girl phrase continues to my chagrin… 🤢 I literally have had to go back to chapter 47 in book 3 to feel satisfied, because the spice in this book did absolutely nothing for me. Even the group activities felt weird, like the men just want to get together and Rosalina is just… there? It felt like this was written unrealistically by a woman who wants gay men to love her more than each other and it felt kind of embarrassing to read. 😭 This is especially true when it’s her, Farron and Dayton, where she gets to be mated with them both but they can’t be mated to each other? They can only have a connection through Rose? How SELFISH. And the author is trying to convince us that they love her and want her there too but it just felt so awkward, maybe it’s because this book and the storyline and everything is making me hate Rosalina’s character so much I just want her to leave!!
I guess because this book is so much better than the others story wise, when something is cringey, it is SO noticeable and makes me roll my eyes. Whereas before, I was just used to it being a little trashy I didn’t even notice it. Ugh the chapter where she’s looking in the ocean and feels a connection to everything like “oh the coral and the fish; we’re all connected it’s so beautiful” and Dayton is holding her hand, it honestly made me feel ill. Same with queen aurelia talking about how she “lived” in the human realm. “Oh how I lived. I watched Shakespeare perform in London, had lunch with Anne Boleyn…..” etc etc I honestly wanted to throw up. This took me out of the story completely and sounded so fucking lame. Also made no sense, how does her just wandering into the human realm mean she suddenly has connections to human royalty? Fat fucking chance lol
NONSENSICAL PLOT ELEMENTS
Kairyn could have easily killed Rosalina, AGAIN, having imprisoned her for 3 months, but he doesn’t touch her, barely even questions her except to ask where Day’s necklace is and where Ezryn is, which she obviously wouldn’t know being a prisoner lol and considering she had Day’s necklace in her mattress, and they used truth serum on her, how did they not find it?! The questioning team must honestly be terrible at their jobs if she was able to avoid answering where it was with “it’s not on me right now”. This was just so badly written, and only explained later because of “Kairyn’s respect and love for Ezryn and therefore Ezryn’s mate”, which makes no sense since Kairyn was literally about to kill Ezryn 2 chapters ago before Caspian saved him. The authors are stretching if they’re trying to convince us Kairyn cares that much. In the last book, kairyn said he couldn’t bring himself to kill his brother, which is fair, so he wanted to kill Rosalina in order to break Ezryn. Also fair. But then he does a switcharoo out of nowhere and is suddenly okay with killing Ezryn, but then is not okay killing Rosalina because he’s Ezryn’s mate? Make up your fucking mind! No consistency at all.
The worst thing about this whole book is how annoying Rosalina is throughout- oh my fucking god. Shes had absolutely no growth since book one, except she’s not used all of her power for some reason, she’s only using it bit by bit I guess so there can be a big reveal at the end, but it gets old that she can’t use her queen magic unless one of her mates is in danger. Then halfway through this book she can suddenly access it easily if she just feels for warmth in her heart? Like okay? She’s also so entitled and jealous (4 men being in love with her is not enough, she needs 5 lol) and it really gets fucking old. Her character seems to only be used for the men to get over their own issues, and they constantly say how perfect and beautiful she is, at this point it’s making me feel sick and I can’t relate to her anymore. She gives MAJOR pick me energy throughout this book it’s gross. And the way Wren is written and treated is just awful, which brings me to my next point, the MAIN CRUX of my frustration.
The authors are clearly trying to make us hate Wrenley / The Nightingale, but honestly I feel for her and she’s my favourite character. She is constantly being discarded in favour of her sister Rosalina who is “perfect” and has been blessed for no reason with 5 wonderful and hot Prince mates, while also being gifted with a cute little childhood in the human realm with her only “struggles” being her abusive bf which she got herself into anyway (I don’t agree with this statement IRL, but in a book, yeah fucking grow up and leave the asshole if he treats you like shit! So annoying for her to use that as her “history of struggles”). Rosalina also didn’t have to suffer the horrible upbringing and abuse Wrenley had in the below with Caspian WHERE SHE WAS LITERALLY TORTURED AND WHIPPED. Rosalina also seems more powerful than Wren for no reason, why can Rose wield gold vines and Wren can only wield black ones and that’s worse for some reason? And Wren may have tricked Day about being mated to her, but all she wants is someone to love her, deep down, even if it’s not Dayton. And Dayton and Rosalina are idiots so honestly I think Wren’s plan was pretty good lol Rosalina gets the love of a father growing up and a relatively safe, if somewhat absent, childhood. But Wren didn’t have a father at all, and BONUS, had a dark overlord mother who whipped her and had her abused by monsters constantly. I honestly can’t imagine not having anyone interested in you your whole life as well, even though you’re “objectively pretty” as Dayton puts it, yet your sister gets 5 mate PRINCES for literally no reason who are all obsessed with her and won’t even look at you? Like what the actual fuck?! and Rosalina is so annoying about it as well, like she can have 5 mates and her sister isn’t allowed a single one and when Wren seems to like Dayton, Rose is like noooo Dayton likes ME and not HER! And none of the men like Wren or include her in anything because Wren hasn’t been excluded and unloved enough in her life……. Rosalina is also so stupid for not realising Wren and the Nightingale are the same person for literally 90% of this book, or that she’s her sister, despite the obvious hints Caspian constantly drops for her. Oh and that’s not enough, Caspian also chooses Rosalina, who he’s known for a year, over his adopted sister who he’s known for 25 years. So Wren is left completely alone with no one to support her or love her, with no one choosing her. Honestly how is she the villaint? This also felt out of character for Caspian bc I am obsessed with him and he would not do this 😭❤️ For me, this book has ruined the RH element, not with how shit the spice was in this book, but with how they all seem like villains to me compared to Wren! I hated Wren in book 3, but in this book I’ve completely switched sides after finding out she’s the queen’s other daughter. This honestly just gets worse and worse and I was rooting for Wren to kill Rose at the end of this book when Rose does her bullshit cringe heart to heart with Wren that made me sick. And the only love interest Wren gets is Ezryn’s creepy brother who is such a bleh boring character? And then in his dying breath, he gives ROSE the spring blessing??? Not wren??? Are you fucking kidding me????? He literally HATES Rose and is in love with Wren this is seriously so out of character AND MAKES NO SENSE. Not only could Rosalina easily save the only person Wrenley has ever loved, but Kairyn would have definitely passed the blessing to Wren let’s be real. All Wrenley ever wanted was to feel like she had some power and autonomy over herself, when her birth mother stupidly and selfishly gave Wren up to Sira to be completely controlled body and soul at Sira’s whim. It would have been more merciful for Aurelia to kill Wren as soon as she birthed her. Aurelia is such a selfish stupid bitch, and doesn’t even apologise when Wren goes down to see her at the end of this book. Aurelia just says “this was never a fate I wanted for you” like OKAY GREAT except this is literally all your fault. You thought things through for Rose but had zero plans for Wren when you had 9 months of pregnancy to think of something but came up with NOTHING? Her and Caspian should have been able to do something. And then when the oh so perfect Rose decides to save Kairyn, it’s not even for poor Wrenley, but Rose does it for Ezryn who is such a piece of shit! Wren just wanted to feel loved by SOMEONE and feel encouraging words by SOMEONE. Kairyn and Caspian constantly told her she wasn’t strong enough to do anything, Caspian believed so little in her that he didn’t even tell her who her mother was for 25 years, or that she could wield the bow because he thought she’d do evil things to the realm with it, and he also made her think the queen didn’t want her as a child (when he reveals the secret to her in the last book) which was so shitty tbh, but then Wren STILL goes to rescue Caspian from his fire prison in the last chapter of this book. Honestly Wren is the real hero here and she is surrounded by selfish assholes!! All this, and Kairyn doesn’t even give Wren a small bit of power that she has always been saying she wanted this entire time in her plan to get Summer’s blessing from Dayton. No, the authors won’t have any sort of justice for Wren, she gets NOTHING. Rosalina will always get everything for no reason! I am honestly so angry 😭😭 these authors are savage, Wren deserves 5 prince mates and a fairytale ending of her own imo. Rose deserves nothing the stupid bitch. I guess the authors did something right though because honestly my feelings are so strong I am FUMING. 😭 I feel sorry for Wren. Rosalina is just an annoying fucking pick me girl. I want Rosalina to hurt and be tortured so she can know just an ounce of what Wren has been through growing up in the below surrounded by monsters and constant traumatic abuse. All Wren ever had was the love of her adopted brother Caspian, who OH YEAH leaves her in the end as well in favour of Rose, yet Wren STILL comes to his rescue. Caspian doesn’t deserve Wren. Ugh. I really tried to get over all this to enjoy the book, but after 20% in I literally was just so annoyed at everything happening in this book.
And then I honestly cracked up at Rosalina’s line of “but if it comes down to a fight between me, Sira and the nightingale, whoever has the the nightingale - and that bow - on their side wins”. LOL sorry what?! Is that all you need to take Sira down? Wow that sounds fucking easy, why have you, Dayton and everyone else said Sira was too strong all this time? All it takes is a fucking bow now? And the Nightingale who has barely any power? THIS WRITING IS SO INFURIATING I want to rip my hair out! And Rosalina “saving” Wrenley like “I know how scared you are, we can get through this together”….. I am actually going to angry vomit right now.
So many holes in the world building plot, as well. Why can’t the queen leave her prison? Her bargain with Sira is the same regardless of whether or not she’s imprisoned. Unless when the queen turned herself in, she made a second bargain saying as long as she’s imprisoned then the queen can never take Rosalina? But they were not clear about this and that would be a stupid fucking bargain honestly, and turns out not to be true because at the end of this book Sira has both the queen and Rose imprisoned with no bargain consequences. So this is not consistent.
Why, in the third book, could everyone in the springs see Rosalina when she appeared there naked for Kel when she was actually in a bathtub in a different realm, but then when the same thing happens in the below in this book, Kel says “only I can see you - your dad can’t” like why not? Keep the magic consistent ffs
There is NO reasoning given to why the queen would curse the men of castletree the way she did when she knew Sira would be after her. Her saying, oh I thought I would come sort it out again shortly after is like huh?? You literally JUST tied your husband’s life to the life of castletree bc you love him more than anything else in the world, but would jespordise his life for what? A realm you abandoned so you could have a jolly in the human realms? You curse Castletree to whither away and die within 25 years (therefore cursing your husband to die in 25 years) and the human-looking enchantment you put on your daughter will only last 25 years even tho she’s mated to all those men and you knew that when you cursed them? Honestly this makes no sense, you give you daughter less than a year to find castletree, fall in love with the men and then what? Why would you want her to do any of this when you’re imprisoned and it’s so dangerous? Did the queen just fancy giving her daughter a challenge of having like no time at all to sort all that shit out, let alone figure any of it out when the princes don’t even know any of this?! Literally makes no sense honestly, this was poorly written and planned.
I thought this book would be mostly Caspian, but I wanted even more lol still not enough. He’s literally the only reason I got through this tbh bc all the other characters annoy me, ESPECIALLY Ezryn. Omg get over yourself and your stupid anger issues no one cares!
Sira whipping Caspian all the time and punishing him for stupid shit really doesn’t make sense. Even a villain would know what would push someone to rebel against you, and that surely would lol also him screaming in pain at her vision of his future when the blue lady comes to put the hood on his head, is surely a dead giveaway to Sira that Caspian does not have the same vision as her ?? So he’s not on her side and she needs to do something about it. But no she just floats away doing who knows what with her time. She’s literally never around it makes no sense.
Also Ezryn tangling Kairyn up in his own vines was the dumbest shit I’ve ever read 😂 that was so bad I was honestly cracking up. the way it was written just had me imagining Pedro pascal dancing around Kairyn like a fairy princess while Kairyn “unknowingly” wraps himself in his own weapons and trips on them like a bad cartoon? What’s next will he slip on a banana peel? And then Kairyn can’t tell the vines to unwrap? That makes no sense he’s literally the most powerful being in the realm but can’t untangle himself lol bffr
Farron turning into the villain at the end with Caspian not saying outright what happened in the Below to him and the green pool, and instead speaking to Rose in riddles of “be careful you could get burned 👀 “ is so stupid. I honestly don’t even care about Farron at this point can we just get on with the story lol I just like Day and Farron together and Ros and Caspian together. And because Ros is soooo annoying, I guess that means i just like day and Caspian? Maybe they should have a romance? 😂 I would prefer that honestly.
And Rosalina’s idea to flood the summer city with a literal tsunami on both the evil skeletons, the people who follow Kairyn, as well as the innocent civilians, is such a terrible idea like WTF I’m honestly shocked they kept that bit in this book. Also since when would drowning kill a skeleton that can’t be killed? They would still wreak havoc underwater or whatever. Oh great you floated them away for a little bit. Rose destroying the city buildings, the ancient coliseum, all that history and old murals, all of it absolutely destroyed and in ruins… making the entire city’s citizens uproot and make new homes in an underwater city far away is fucking awful tbh and traumatic. How was this written as a wise and kind decision?! It’s fucking brutal and thoughtless, but the scared citizens when they realise they can grow fins are like “oh wow! Thanks queen! Feel free to destroy my home where I’ve lived my entire life! We love you Rosalina you’re amazing and perfect!”. It honestly made me laugh but I was also frowning at how shit of a storyline this was. Like yeah it’s easy to absolutely demolish someone’s city with a flood when it’s not yours I guess. All their possessions, their livelihoods, their homes, history and memories, fucking gone. But Rose is proud and thinks she’s doing everyone a favour? I honestly hate her character so much lol
Rose then wanting to take the bow from Wren because it’s “my bow”. No it’s not you entitled bitch, Wren is also daughter of the queen, it’s hers just as much as yours! Ugh. And Rosalina jumping into the whirlpool to save her sister is such bullshit. She’s got such a hero complex. Honestly Wren would have been powerful enough to use her briars to save both herself and Kairyn, but no the authors wouldn’t let that happen, Rosalina has to save everyone with her pure fucking selfless heart full of love and compassion. 🙄🙄🙄🤮🤮🤮 this book honestly makes me sick.
I REALLY wanted the twist of this series to be Queen Aurelia was the actual evil selfish one (which imo she definitely is), who bullied Sira and made her feel like an outcast and then turned everyone against Sira just because Sira also wanted to build something for herself. Because honestly the Queen is giving me pick me vibes as well throughout this book! But yeah this did not happen, and all the “heroines” give pick me energy how are the authors not rectifying this behaviour?! Ugh. At the end, when Dayton is killed, I was so angry about Wren’s storyline and everything else that I didn’t even care honestly. Just get this book over with already.
I think overall this book felt more like a high fantasy because the storytelling has become so much more detailed and complex, that I forgot to turn off my cringe monitor and I kept cringing and rolling my eyes at stuff every now and then. I honestly think I would have preferred better spice even if the story was less good / exciting because of the amount of plot holes anyway. THIS IS AN RH we are all here for the spice so stop trying to do high fantasy when you can’t write a consistent story and barely include any spice! I think because the series continues to take itself more and more seriously, I found myself critiquing it more and more seriously the way I would an actual high fantasy series.
This will probably be the last book I read in this series. I adored the first 3 books and it had so much potential, but the lack of plot and character consistencies in this book as well as the shit spice that I thought was so badly written, I can’t go on. Idk how they’re going to drag it out into 3 more books, they should just kill everyone off except Wren, Caspian and Dayton. Those are the only people who deserve to live, BARELY.