Thomas C. Foster wrote, "Any creative-writing teacher can tell you that student fiction (bad) comes in two basic styles, the all-action-all-the-time shoot-em-up-blow-em-up and the deadly earnest message piece that is deadly dull." Rita Wong's undercurrent is trying to0 hard to send an environmental message.
It was dull, and I couldn't reach pg 30 before I felt like I was being beat over the head with the message that she was trying to instill throughout this work. Her cause is good, it is justified. Her writing suffered. There was not a single creative cell in my body that reacted to the way her poems were strung together. I wanted the experience of Anne Carson, of Roo Borson, of Don McKay (excellent nature poet); I wanted something that spoke to me on a creative level. I didn't want to be lectured.