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The Dark Mage

A haunting adult fantasy about trauma, love, and rebellion—perfect for fans of character-driven magic.
"Captivating, vivid, and compelling." —BookLife Reviews (A-)
 
Ren'wyn has long heard the whispers of the dead. Trapped in an arranged marriage to a cruel lord - and secretly bound to forbidden magic - she walks a dangerous line between obedience and defiance. The ancient magics of her world still flicker beneath imperial rule, and her gift is feared most of all. Her only fleeting escape from increasing isolation is in the realm of the dead, where the shades call her by name.
 
When a chance at freedom comes, she flees into a fractured land on the brink of rebellion. Magic is stirring, calling to those with power over strength, earth, foresight - and death. As Ren'wyn encounters other gifted outcasts and a battle-scarred soldier with secrets of his own, she must decide who she dares to trust. Her magic could destroy her - or become the key to restoring a world that has forgotten what it means to be free.

432 pages, Paperback

Published September 9, 2025

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148 reviews10 followers
September 13, 2025
I recieved a free copy in exchange for an honest review so here it is!! I really enjoyed this story. I'm sure someone more experienced than me could comment on the technicals, I see tons of scholarly reviews, but I rate on the vibes and how much I personally enjoyed each adventure so that's what you get from me! This book will forever have a place on my shelf.

The Dark Mage is about a girl named Ren'wyn who was born with magic. Not just any magic, either, but death magic. The rulers of this land have decided magic is terrible and should be eradicated, so those with powers keep it hidden or else risk being turned in by neighbors. The story starts at a secret school for those with powers, but it quickly progresses into an adventure that changes Ren'wyn's life forever. Tired of being used, abused, lied to, and considered property, she discovers self worth and starts accepting who and what she is. Along the way she finds acceptance and a once in a lifetime love.

I really liked that the FMC got to be the wielder of Shadows! And she loves her magic and takes comfort in what she does. She can heal broken spirits and wreck destruction! The author's take on Ren'wyn's insecurities, and how she struggled with them throughout, even when she was getting better (because you can't heal that overnight), was so relatable it hurt sometimes. Some tough topics are addressed within these pages, including talk of SA and attempted SA on the FMC (not by the MMC!). Prejudice, mental health, different types of abuse, and a woman's place in the world - all very real and relevant and approached in a way I admired.

You guys should definitely check out the Dark Mage and see what you think yourselves! I'm dying for book two!!
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111 reviews4 followers
September 16, 2025
The Dark Mage is a breathtakingly written high fantasy that completely captivated me. I truly can’t believe this is a debut! The prose is vivid and elegant, instantly pulling me into a world that feels both magical and alive.

Ren’wyn’s character arc is masterfully crafted, beautifully portraying the complexities of healing from trauma and the constant battle against intrusive thoughts and self-doubt. The plot is brimming with adventure and magic, carrying all the comfort of a romantasy while delivering fresh, original twists. The pacing allows the story to unfold naturally, making every moment feel earned.

And let’s talk about the romance! The slow burn absolutely sizzles, and Fael has easily become one of my favorite MMCs of all time. The cliffhanger ending shattered me in the best possible way, and I cannot wait to see where this story goes next!

✨ If you love:
• Found family
• Lyrical, immersive prose
• A scorching slow burn
• Touch-her-and-die energy

…do yourself a favor and pick up this book!
4 reviews
September 20, 2025
I read the Dark Mage in three days. I have read a lot of science fiction/fantasy novels over the years. This book captures the emotional side of the characters much better than most…. There is enough “magic” enter woven through out the book to keep the fantasy part going strong. But, for me, the added strength of this book was the author’s ability to build a strong connection to the reader for each of the characters. You feel like you know/understand them. Can even relate to them in someways.
I read all of Stephen Donaldson’s books in the Thomas Covenant series many years ago. I was reminded of that series when I read this book…. with the added benefit of The Dark Mage more relatable character development. I felt pained when characters suffered. I was drawn into the love story between characters that made me almost made me jealous of their commitment to each other under such terrible circumstances…. Highly recommend
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984 reviews7 followers
August 18, 2025
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Many thanks for this!

The Dark Mage brought me back to my early years of reading when Gothic novels captured my interest. Daphne Du Maurier and Victoria Holt were authors I turned to, drawing me into their worlds of windswept landscapes, dark mansions, and a touch of the supernatural, each with a strong female character who found herself in a complicated romantic relationship.
The Dark Mage weaves together several of these elements into a genre better known as romantasy.

There is much to love about this book, in particular main character Ren'wyn. She is both strong and vulnerable, damaged by her past, yet fiercely independent. Her magic is dark but her methods are pure. This gives depth and integrity to her character.

I found the story itself to be truly engaging. As an infrequent reader of fantasy, I was intrigued by how the magical elements became integral to the plot and how the clash between good and evil has its parallels in the real world. I could relate to a government who wished to abolish those who were "different" and to the misconceptions that put labels on those who don't fit the norm.

Finally, let's talk about the writing. Descriptions of nature are lovely and detailed. Characters are well-drawn and distinct. I appreciated the pace of the story and a plot that was not predictable. At times the romance scenes seemed a little gratuitous, but the connections between characters felt genuine.

Overall, this is an impressive first novel. The cliffhanger at the end promises a sequel which readers will undoubtedly welcome.
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70 reviews4 followers
August 8, 2025
Not gonna lie, I struggled to get into this one initially. It took a bit to get into and understand the world, but worth it! I was not expecting to get so invested. I was not expecting to be devastated and sobbing at one point.
I struggled with Ren'wyn's character being so self-depreciating all the time. BUT also recognized that those parts of her character are not something that anyone would get over in a year, possibly ever. Which I had to periodically remind myself of when I started to get annoyed.
There is character development and growth, but most of it seems to be focused on Ren'wyn. I get she's the main character, but the growth of the other characters seems to be limited to a change of opinion about her or in Fael's case, nothing. The guy is portrayed as near perfect, all of his growth seems to have happened before he entered the story. His anger points are completely justified and reasonable. His aggression points, again, completely justified and reasonable. Maybe we'll see more in the next book.

And the ending! I'm just not ok and did not see that revelation coming!
Solid slow burn that's not excruciating long, touch her and die.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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117 reviews13 followers
August 18, 2025
⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Thank you to BookSirens and Erin Vander Stelt for the opportunity to read this ARC! <3

The Dark Mage carries a strong emotional current, and you feel yourself pulled in from the beginning. Erin Vander Stelt’s prose is beautifully written; poetic without being difficult to follow, rich with feeling, and clearly driven by a deep emotional connection to the story she’s telling. It feels like her own story.

At the center of the novel is Ren’wyn, a young woman whose life has been shaped by grief, oppression, and the weight of expectations placed upon her. Her world is one where magic is feared, where family bonds are strained by pain and loss, and where the future she is expected to accept is not one she chose for herself. What struck me most about Ren’wyn’s character is how honestly her emotional struggles are portrayed. Her grief, her doubts, and her quiet resilience feel deeply human, and the narrative handles those themes with a great deal of empathy.

Despite the heaviness of her circumstances, this story is ultimately about growth and strength. Ren’wyn’s journey is not simply about surviving the world around her, but about rediscovering her own voice and the power she carries within herself. Watching her slowly reclaim that sense of identity and agency was one of the most rewarding aspects of the book. It took me on a similar journey for myself, and I walked away from this book with new-found aspects of my own character I didn’t know existed, strength I didn’t know I had.

The romance is another highlight. The relationship at the heart of the story develops gradually, growing first through friendship, trust, and mutual respect. That foundation makes the emotional progression feel natural and earned. Rather than focussing on dramatic declarations or instant attraction, the connection between the characters builds through small moments of understanding and support. When their relationship deepens, it feels meaningful because it is rooted in seeing and valuing one another fully, for who they already are.

I also appreciated how the story balances its emotional focus with moments of action and magical intrigue. The magical world itself is filled with interesting ideas; mysterious landscapes, lingering spirits, and powerful forces that shape the lives of those who interact with them. These elements add depth to the narrative without overshadowing the personal journeys of the characters. There are several scenes that stand out for their emotional resonance, particularly moments where magic and compassion intersect in unexpected ways. These quieter scenes carry just as much impact as the larger conflicts, grounding the story in themes of healing and connection. Erin writes quieter moments exceptionally well; you can’t help but feel yourself settle into them like a cosy blanket.

By the time the story reaches its conclusion, the narrative opens the door to larger revelations and possibilities for what comes next. Without giving anything away, the ending shifts the perspective of the story in intriguing ways and leaves just enough unanswered to build anticipation for the next instalment.

Overall, The Dark Mage is a heartfelt and emotionally rich romantasy that focuses as much on healing and personal growth as it does on magic and conflict. It’s a story about finding strength in vulnerability, trusting in one’s own power, and learning that love can sometimes begin with simply being truly seen. I cannot describe how much this book healed me; I cried more than I can admit, and I did this with Erin herself. She knows what this book means to me, and I’m so grateful I got the opportunity to take in her story and let Ren’wyn live through my own experiences as well.


Favorite Quotes
“Ren’wyn still felt it every time she immersed herself in magic: an ache of ice against her bones, a soft encouragement to sleep without fear of waking, an errant tug of a ghostly hand made solid.”
“You are not a prize to win. You’re a fortress—a queen—and you choose who you let in.”
“I am neither fully good nor fully bad… I am good and gentle and strong and vicious, and I will fight for this world until my last breath.”
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397 reviews
September 18, 2025
Spice Rating:🌶️🌶️🌶️

This is an excellent start to a fantasy series! It centers around a young woman with a rare death magic that lives in a world where magic is forbidden. After her father arranges her marriage to an abusive man, she finds the courage to run from the horribly oppressive life she has been living. She stumbles upon a powerful soldier who helps her get away and they make plans to help other magic people. The journey brings them closer together and they form friendships along the way, but it is not without tragedy.

I love all the characters and the different types of magic. I enjoyed the slow burn romance and loved that both characters helped each other grow. The FMC starts out timid but gains confidence and purpose during their journey. I felt this book provided the world building and character development needed for me to be invested in the series and cannot wait to continue it. The ending was so shocking and I absolutely did not see it coming!

TW: Off page assaults

💋 Kisses Only
🫑-🫑🫑🫑 Steamy/Closed Door
🌶️-🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️ Spicy/Open Door
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8 reviews1 follower
August 15, 2025
Relationships are the heart of this story. They’re true, honest, mostly healthy, growing and emotional! I’m newer to the fantasy genre having only read SJM. The Dark Mage is the right combo that brings you both the romance and relationships with new forms of magic. Erin dares explore the question what if death and darkness were not something to fear but befriend? Could it even be good? While there is a lot of traveling scenes you’ll want to hang on to the end… but no spoilers here! Can’t wait for book 2!

I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.



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3 reviews
August 25, 2025
The Dark Mage is a fast-paced adventure in an evil world, full of tender characters who are wrestling with the violent and frightening acts they have done to survive in it. 

There is a lot of mention of sexual assault. I feel that needs to be said at the outset. The female main character is traumatized by verbal and physical abuse in her past. There is an SA scene (although it is interrupted before becoming graphic). The author does not shy away from the painful realities of prejudice, sexism, rape, or abuse. Nor does Vander Stelt romanticize them. Nor does she sensationalize them. They are present in the story, along with their human consequences. Readers will not feel coddled from harsh truths, nor will they feel bludgeoned by them.

Ren’wyn is a sympathetic main character. She's not a Mary Sue, by any means, and she endures tragedy with agency and emotion equally. She is strong in a way that feels earned and real and feminine. The men around her can sometimes feel one-dimensional, but their voices and actions are true to character, while also appropriately growing and changing. 

The magic system is soft, tied to certain people inherently (think benders in ATLA or mutants in X-Men). There is a magic school, but so little time is spent there it's unclear what most of the magic education actually looks like. This isn't a bad thing. The story isn't about magical people mastering their power, necessarily. The story is about people doing what they can in an evil and broken world. Their magic is described vividly, emotively, and freely. If you're looking for specific spells or hard rules to magic, you won't find them here. You'll find people doing what they can. 

Fans of the Supernatural series will enjoy Ren’wyn’s powers, I think. Her encounters with the Void are varied, evocative, and often cathartic. There are some horror elements described, but it's never grotesque or overwrought.

The romance in this book feels authentic. It's not smut, and the descriptions of intimate acts are not overly graphic or suggestive. The characters and the plot are usually in the foreground. And the intimacy is just as often about comfort and care as it is about release or recreation. There's no pornographic vocabulary or language. 

Overall, I found myself caring about the characters as I was whisked through their adventure. Admittedly, the first several chapters were slower, full of vignettes to help us understand Ren’wyn’s painful life. The actual plot doesn't pick up until later. That being said, the author doesn't belabor her scenes or descriptions with extra details, and there was no purple prose to slow things down. The writing is clear and matter-of-fact, and her worldbuilding is novel enough to be exciting without being so complex as to need a separate wiki to keep up. And when I reached the end, I was surprised the book was over. There's still a lot of story left, several questions unanswered, and new complications and tension to keep readers hungry for the next one.

(I received an advanced copy of this book from the author for the purpose of this review, but my thoughts are my own.)
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27 reviews
August 31, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and i am leaving this review voluntairly .
Thanks to booksirens and the author for this arc.

I loved this book. In a world full of magical creatures there we meet Ren’wyn. A young woman who is abused by her father and forced in an arranged marriage to a horrible monster. An evening she finds the courage and strenght to run.

And that point she meets Fael. He helps her en protects her. They find out their magic has a connection, even though she a dark mage and he a beserker. Together they go on a journey. They develop thrust and learn from each other that develops in a friendship. After a while they start to develop feelings for each other. I love their relationship. Its goes from trust to friendship and ends up in true love for them both.

Ren’wyn had a really difficult past, and because she is abused and told on repeat by her father she is nothing and not good enough. It is extremely difficult to believe youre enough when someone tells you day in day out your not good enough, and its worse when its a parent who should love you no matter what. Through out the book you see Ren’wyn struggels with it. She grows through the book, there are moment she does not believe in her self and how closer we get trough the book you see how she grows and starts to believe in her self. Her relationship with Fael makes her stronger, he loves her and he is her rock. He never shows fear and always believes in her. His strenght and love gives her the strenght and power to believe in her self.

I love that they find themself and founded family with other magical creatures who want to safe the world. I love how the bonds grow, how they do anything to protect each other. And that they want a different world, a world that is safe again for anyone with magic.

The ending?? What a twist! Secrets about Fael gets out in the open. What will happen now that he sacrificed himself to safe the others? The heartbreak that Ren’wyn had to go trough when they had to leave him behind.

I cant wait for the second book, i am counting down the days. This book is one of my favorite reads this year and i cant wait for more books written by the author.

Can i have book 2 right now ? 🫣

So if you love books about magic, the supernatural, touch her and die vibes? This is the book for you!

I am not great in writing long reviews, so i hope this is okay! ☺️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
1 review
September 11, 2025
I don't typically read a lot of fantasy, so it took me a couple of chapters to settle into the world Vander Stelt created. However, the psychic, physical, and emotional challenges faced by the main character, Ren'wyn, soon drew me in. The "strangeness" of her arcane power was a surprise and sometimes a challenge to reconcile with her tender nature. It was interesting to see how the author balanced those tensions in Ren'wyn. Likewise, the frenzied force dwelling in Ren'wyn's love interest (no spoilers) contrasted in unexpected ways to his care for her and other characters.

Initially, I found Ren'wyn's lover a little too understanding and Ren'wyn too emotionally fragile for my taste, but their backstories provide rationales for those tendencies, adding nice layering to the story. I thought the way the author knitted together their supernatural forces and personal struggles was especially creative.

I thoroughly enjoyed the varied landscapes and cultures the characters moved through. I also found the challenges they faced satisfyingly unpredictable and appropriately menacing. There were frequent nods to perennial themes of injustice woven through the narrative, but they didn't feel forced. (If the love scenes were less heated and violence less graphic, this would be a great YA read.)

I looked forward to spending time in Vander Stelt's world as I read and wasn't ready for the book to end. I applaud the author for a well written and engaging first book and look forward to reading more of her work.

I received an advance copy of this book from the author. This review is voluntary and honest.
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161 reviews1 follower
August 11, 2025
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Thank you, Erin!

This was a well written (I was impressed for a debut ARC that I only saw a couple continuity errors but nothing major) romantasy with an interesting magic system and intriguing characters that was an easy read. However, it wasn’t exactly my cup of tea. I think there will be lots of people out there who will love this book though!

For me, it was a little bit too romance heavy without enough stakes for the plot outside of the romance to keep me super interested (although the ending was wild, and I think it’s set up to have a good sequel). But if you love spicy, you will definitely love this. I was also frustrated by Ren’wyn quite a bit. You definitely see some growth in her confidence and strength throughout the book, but she is SO reliant on the men in her life and I was shouting the whole time for her to be a strong independent woman. I think she’s getting there though, and I liked how Fael encouraged it out of her. I also got confused by the magic system at times, but like I said I enjoyed the uniqueness of it and hopefully as the series progresses more understanding will come. I liked how the world building was done! Overall, I’m glad I got the chance to read it and would encourage those who like romance, magic (especially shadow magic), a traveling group, fight scenes and a smidge of a school setting in books to read it.

Content warnings: sexual assault, abuse, violence/death, open door explicit intimacy scenes
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53 reviews1 follower
October 9, 2025
The Dark Mage is a fantasy romance with a strong focus on the fantasy element, following the story of Ren, a dark mage in a world where magic is forbidden and those who wield it are hunted and killed.

This book feels like a long journey of growth, self-discovery, and empowerment. Ren possesses a rare and dangerous power—one feared even by other magical beings—that she tries to keep hidden and under control. But when circumstances force her hand, she must step up, fight for herself, and finally trust in her own strength and magic. Along the way, Fael—the soldier who steals her heart—helps her believe in herself.

A lot happens in this story, the pacing is quick, and it’s satisfying to watch Ren’s personal development unfold. The romance between her and Fael is sweet and reassuring, bringing a tender balance to the darker and heavier themes running through the plot. If you enjoyed Auren’s story in The Plated Prisoner Series, I think you’ll also appreciate this one.

At times, some of the dynamics and relationships felt a little youthful, but overall, I still enjoyed the characters. And that ending… wow. I really didn’t see it coming—it completely surprised me, and now I can’t wait to pick up the sequel.

Side note: Ren’s power is epic. Finally, a true Shadow Girl! The scenes where she unleashes her magic gave me chills—intense, graphic, and absolutely badass.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
Tropes:
⚜️ Slow burn
⚜️ Morally grey
⚜️ Magic
⚜️ Found family
⚜️ Emotional trauma
⚜️ Protective MMC

Spice: 🌶️🌶️
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69 reviews6 followers
July 7, 2026
The Dark Mage by Erin Vander Stelt was the perfect balance of dark and soft romantasy that I didn’t know I needed.

Ren’wyn is a dark mage who controls death...in a manner of speaking. And then there’s our MMC: a honed weapon with a soft, gooey teddy-bear center reserved just for her. I won’t spoil the surprise of meeting him, but trust me, you’ll understand. 🖤

This story begins with some truly wonderful side characters before narrowing in on Ren’wyn and the MMC as they journey together. Then comes a new group, a new quest, a major twist, and a cliffhanger that had me researching book 2.

The good news? Book 2, The Dark Sword, is already written and its Kickstarter is live, so we hopefully will not have to wait too long for the rest of this story. Rejoice! 🙌

I still have so many questions about the MMC’s mother, Ren’wyn’s school bestie Peria, and one very unwelcome character who appears near the end. I would personally like to shove her directly into the void. 😌

Also, plant lovers: Ren’wyn is your girl. 🌿 There are so many creative ways plants and nature show up throughout this story.

But what stayed with me most was Ren’wyn herself. She was abused, survived, escaped, and slowly learned how to become more than what was done to her. Her progression is not instant or effortless; it comes with fear, doubt, and setbacks. It felt real, endearing, and deeply needed.

I love an FMC who kicks ass. I also love a softer FMC learning her way. Erin somehow gave us both in one character, and I adore her for it.

Thank you, Erin, for sending me this book and for writing this story from your heart. I cannot wait for The Dark Sword! 🖤
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1,305 reviews68 followers
July 19, 2026
The Dark Mage is an enchanting fantasy that blends magic, danger, and emotion into a story that's easy to become invested in. I will admit it took me a little while to fully understand the world and its magic system, but that wasn't due to the author's writing. It’s a vividly crafted world where every decision has a consequence and the line between good and evil is more complicated than it seems.

The story follows Ren'wyn as she discovers the extraordinary magic she possesses. Her life has been shaped by overwhelming grief, a traumatic upbringing under the thumb of a monstrous father, and the burden of powers she never asked for. Her struggles with self doubt, the way she processes her grief, and her resilience made her an incredibly relatable character. I found myself cheering for her every step of the way as she fought to find her own strength.

The characters were easily my favorite part of the book. Each one has flaws and face impossible choices that impact not only their own lives but the future of the world around them. I also appreciated that the romance was a slow burn that didn’t overshadow the fantasy plot. Fael was exactly the person Ren'wyn needed by her side. He supports and protects her throughout her journey, and watching their friendship grow into trust and eventually something deeper felt natural and rewarding.

The Dark Mage is filled with magic, emotional depth, compelling characters, and a beautifully developed world.
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91 reviews2 followers
August 28, 2025
Ughhh this book 😭😭

I’m not gonna lie, I struggled to get into it at first. It’s written in third person which I wasn’t prepared for. I find third person books a lot tougher to connect with the characters. BUT it’s my fault for not checking or researching the writing style! I did struggle with the first 20% of the book. So much happens and it’s a little difficult to follow at times, but I’m so glad I persevered 😭

Ren’wyn is such a beautiful character. I love that she’s flawed, we see the development that’s not picture perfect. It’s a little ugly, it’s not linear, there’s a lot of back and forth which is real. It’s how a lot of people grow and heal in the real world which is what drew me to her. I love her so much 😭

Ren’wyn’s romance with Fael was one of my absolute fave parts of this book. It’s slow, it’s relatable and it’s one that’s built on pure love and not lust. I love how Fael treats her and my heart was SWOONING 😭 I rooted for them so much. I love them.

The only part of the story that I found a little confusing after finishing was the magic academy. I feel like we don’t see enough of it and I’d love to know more about it!

Also, Erin - there had better be a book 2 because I NEEEEEED to know what happens next 😍

I received an advance reader copy of The Dark Mage from Booksirens and the author. All of these views are my own and this review is voluntary. Thank you Erin! 🖤
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Author 5 books24 followers
September 1, 2025
Romance, Magic, Female Empowerment--what more could you want from a new Romantasy? And, I do mean new.

Vander Stelt takes what is known of the popular romantasy genre and creates a new version of it, in a way that is fresh. In a formula-ridden genre, The Dark Mage is a breath of fresh air. Below are a few of my non-spoiler favorite quotes:

"Magic, in its rawest form, was woven into the fabric of the world, manifesting differently through those born with its power."

"...until fear, pain, and shame were drowned beneath purpose."

"A small, foreign voice whispered its contentment, but Ren'wyn smothered it, killing hope before it could endanger her safety."

"Nothing you believe about me will change who I am or what I'm worth. I am good and gentle and strong and vicious..."

And, my favorite: "Wounds, especially deep ones, change us. Sometimes they sharpen the edges of who we already are, making us truer versions of ourselves. Other times, we shatter completely. And when that happens, we're left piecing together what we can, filling the gaps with the new self we create."

I'm looking forward to book two!

I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
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971 reviews6 followers
September 2, 2025
Ren’wyn is a Dark Mage, a reviled and misunderstood type of magic user, in a world where magic is persecuted and hunted down. She’s trapped between the small freedom of her school and an arranged marriage to an abusive man and, when one avenue of escape fails, she runs, encountering a strange man in the Dark Forest.

This book wasn’t for me. I had a brief moment of joy with Ren’wyn learning to control her magic by battling shades with her teacher at the beginning of the story but the rest felt strange. It isn’t exactly passive voice, but passive events? Things were happening but nothing impacted and Ren’wyn remained dependent on whichever man was closest to her right up until the end of the book. The prophecy was introduced too late for it to make any impact on the first book and the reveal was obvious from the character’s introduction. Ren’wyn is inconsistent with her reactions, showing superb skill in her herbal knowledge and abilities, but flying off the handle and becoming wracked with self doubt with no provocation.

The side characters’ impact were minimal, in that I couldn’t remember their names for longer than a few sentences. The addition of a lesbian couple after one of them had been raped and the other is assumed to have been raped prior to the story start is questionable, given that they’re the only queer characters in the book.

It is trying to do too much and ends with a variable pacing with some events glossed over in a few staggered sentences and others drawn out over chapters. The romance is solid, I’ll give the story that, but Ren’wyn as a lead failed to deliver.


Thank you to BookSirens and the author for the ARC.
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34 reviews
August 15, 2025
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ vibes | 🌶️ spice

Tropes: Forbidden Magic · Touch Her and Die · Found Family

Trigger Warnings: abuse, SA, mental health

I received a free ARC of this book via NetGalley. Thank you for the opportunity!

This was a strong start to a series — forbidden magic, immersive world-building, and a found family dynamic. The FMC begins as meek and fearful, but watching her grow into her strength and claim her power is incredibly satisfying.

I’ll be honest — the first three chapters tested my patience, and I nearly put the book down because of how frustrating I found the FMC’s initial passivity. But I’m so glad I stuck with it. The payoff was worth every page, and the character arc was beautifully executed.

The ending delivered an unexpected twist that hooked me completely, and now I’m counting the days until book two.
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355 reviews5 followers
August 9, 2025
I received an advance copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.

The bones of this book is very interesting and was fun to read. This book is fast paced and engaging and an easy/bingeable read. I just felt like I needed more… the traumatic experiences for the characters were glossed over (we never have time to process or learn about the abuse they’ve been through), I wanted more depth from the characters and plot, and I wished for a little more information and understanding about the magic system. I think this will turn into a great series if it’s just a bit more fleshed out! Thank you to Erin for giving me a chance to read your hard work!
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37 reviews3 followers
August 22, 2025
I received an advanced copy for an honest review of this book. Thank you Erin! I enjoyed this whole book! However, there had better be a second one coming because I have to find out what happens next. I absolutely fell in love with Fael and Ren’wyn’s relationship and the whole crew. Each character was very well thought out and made me love each individual differently. My love for Esrin was a bit up and down though to be honest. Thank you for writing a book I thoroughly enjoyed reading! 5 stars! I will be buying a hard physical copy as well!
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298 reviews5 followers
August 28, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.


WOW what a ride. This book was a beautiful story of our FMC Ren'wyn fighting for a life that was her own. Ren'wyn was raised by a horrible father who betrothed her to a horrible man. This story is about magic, love, female rage, a system that wants to rid the world of people who have magic. This is a beautiful love story that ends on an epic cliffhanger. I loved the journey of Ren'wyn, Erin and Fael and CANNOT wait for book 2!
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69 reviews
August 25, 2026
I got so wound up in this story! I’m not one much for romantisy (romanticy?) but this story grabbed me. The intimate scenes were tastefully written (a rarity) and I found myself reading faster and faster. The ending, obviously, left me wanting more. I can’t wait for the sequel. Oh, and I rarely give 5 stars so that tells you how much I enjoyed it!

It’s so fun to find an author who lives so near my small town! I’m hopeful to get to meet her and gush over the book in person!
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31 reviews1 follower
August 13, 2025
I received an advanced copy of this book. It took me a while to become engaged but once I did it was hard to put down. I especially enjoyed the characters and it was Ren’wyn that drove my interest. Watching her grow through the story was the best part of this magical tale!
163 reviews1 follower
August 25, 2025
A girl who has been told she is worthless all her life, a prince who loves her but is terrified of her power, and a soldier who regrets the throne he works for.

Nicely set up for a very intriguing story line.

Arc reader
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6 reviews5 followers
October 18, 2025
I hope there’s a sequel coming soon, because I really came to care about these characters, their individual growth, and their joint mission, but the journey’s clearly not yet complete. Looking forward to their next adventures!
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201 reviews
November 23, 2025
THAT. ENDING.

I had my suspicions, but nothing, absolutely nothing, prepared me for the way this story detonated in the final pages. The yearning, the angst, the delicious tension simmering through every chapter? Unmatched. And the found family dynamics? Easily one of the brightest highlights of the entire journey.

This book is the fierce transformation of a woman who has spent her life shrinking herself. Quiet, obedient, hidden away, only to discover she was never meant to be small. Watching her break out of the cage she didn’t even know she was in and step into her strength, her fire, her capability? it’s empowering, emotional, and inspiring.

It’s a story of becoming. Of finding herself, embracing every piece of who she is, and learning to love the woman she’s finally allowed to be. Allowing herself to own her powers, and what is she is regardless of the stigma and prejudice people have towards her.

And the love in this book? The sacrifice? The betrayal that slices through you when you least expect it? I’m still reeling. Just when you think things are finally starting to heal, when hope begins to bloom again, it’s ripped away.

So excited for book two!!
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2 reviews
August 17, 2025
I received an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Overall, I really enjoyed the magic system and overall plot of the story. This is definitely a book for people who like romance set in a fantasy world.
The beginning of the book felt rushed and wish we had a bit more back story of some side characters and the general setting that the book starts in. The middle could have been shortened/structured a bit differently so all of the travel and time jumps flowed a bit better and so there was room for more world building/plot throughout the book.
I would have liked a bit more depth in the main characters to make them a bit more relatable and likable. I found myself getting annoyed at them throughout most of the book. I did like the twist at the end and maybe just didn’t see the foreshadowing, but wished there were more hints throughout so it wasn’t so out of left field. Or wish we had more time or buildup to experience that part of the story rather than it being right at the end.
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9 reviews
May 15, 2026
Seriously one of the best fantasy worlds I have had the pleasure of exploring. Erin's grasp of botany is astonishing. Her characters are well rounded and leave you wanting to get to know them better. The romance is delightful spicy. Waiting for the next book is torturous.
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2 reviews
August 27, 2025
I received an advanced copy for my honest review, Erin-- I am so glad to have been an ARC reader for you!

I absolutely devoured The Dark Mage. The world-building is imaginative and immersive, drawing you in so completely it feels like stepping into another reality. Instead of relying on heavy exposition, the story unfolds naturally through action, dialogue, and subtle detail, making it both vivid and compulsively readable.

The pacing strikes a perfect balance—moments of mystery, danger, and adventure are interwoven with quiet, reflective scenes that give the characters (and the reader) space to breathe. That rhythm makes the story feel grounded while keeping the pages turning.

Ren’wyn is a standout heroine. So often in fantasy, female protagonists are written as either naïve and untested or defined only by the men around them. Ren’wyn is neither. She enters the story already grounded in her power, confident in her identity, and capable of holding her own. Yet that doesn’t mean she is without struggle. She wrestles with the weight and the responsibility of her power, more importantly, with the search for greater purpose. That duality—strength paired with vulnerability—makes her not only believable but also deeply relatable. She’s not a character who needs rescuing—you root for her because you see pieces of yourself in her.

Her relationship with Fael only deepens this authenticity. Their love is breathtaking—timeless and intriguing, yet so grounded in truth that it feels utterly real. It adds an emotional richness to the story that makes the stakes even higher and the journey all the more unforgettable.

The supporting cast is equally well-drawn, each character distinct and memorable, their own individual powers woven seamlessly into the fabric of the world. The magic system feels natural and purposeful, adding intrigue without ever overwhelming the story. And the plot—full of twists and revelations—kept me guessing right up to the end, something few fantasy novels manage to do.

What stays with me most are the passages that linger long after reading, moments that feel both fresh and unforgettable. The Dark Mage is more than just a fantasy adventure—it’s a story that sweeps you up, stirs your heart, and makes you reflect on your own journey of identity and purpose. It’s the rare kind of book that entertains in the moment and resonates long after you’ve turned the last page.
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