In a world full of rooms, the most valuable lesson you can learn is how to read them.
Lo’ak Jordan has been reading the rooms of the streets for as long as he could read. The one room that he has not been successful at reading is the room of love. How can you read a room that you haven’t had a chance to walk in? What happens when he trips across the threshold? Will he stay in the room or determine that it’s not for him?
The only room that Tsireya Robinson has time to be in is one where the money resides. She’s a woman with responsibility, misfortunes, and dreams. When one of those misfortunes pushes her into a room that she had no business being in, will she be able to get out? Will it be a room that she wants to leave when that time comes, or will the writing on the wall make it the room she wants to live in forever?
Mel Dau (Melvin’s Daughter) was born in Vicenza, Italy but raised in Mount Pleasant, South Carolina. She is the baby girl and only girl of three. She has always had a love for books beginning with the Baby Sitter’s Club, R.L. Stine, and Christopher Pike. She dabbled in writing as she grew up but never took it as seriously as she should have.
Mel Dau graduated from from Wando High School, then later matriculated to Benedict College (BSW) and Webster University (MHRM). She is a mother of a teenage daughter, a HR Professional, and a proud member of Zeta Phi Beta Sorority, Inc.
Her love for Urban Literature did not arrive until Mid-2016. Reading over 900 books from 2016 to 2017, she was obsessed with reading--an obsession that helped her cope with her father’s illness and death. In March of 2018, she decided to finally come from behind the wall and submit a short story which resulted in her first Book, Khiaere and Phy: A Charleston Love Story being published under Queens of Lit Presents. Under Queens of Lit Presents, she successfully published 15 titles that were all debuted in the top fifty on Amazon Top 100.
In May of 2020, she was signed to her new publisher B. Love Publications where she continues her growth as an author. Her purpose as an author is to provide her readers’ with her E³ formula, Entertain, Encourage & Educate. She achieved her first #1 Bestseller with her Erotica title, Pet The Kitty. In August of 2020 she founded Mel Dau Publications, LLC to pursue self-published projects. Penning in a lane all her own, her Informational Dramas fulfills her purpose with every release. Her overall desire is to use her fiction catalog to help change at least one person’s non-fiction reality.
This author is really hit or miss for me. One book’ll be 4 stars and up, then the next is barely pushing a 2. I think I’m gonna have to let this author go, because the last few reads have just been decent nothing worth the hype.
My main issue here? The story wasn’t fully fleshed out. We’re introduced to a FMC who’s book smart, focused, and determined to escape her rough upbringing. But then we get the “I’m keeping my baby” storyline… and it makes zero sense. We never get her thought process, and honestly? It comes off STUPID AF. She’s a ward of the state, getting free college, trying to break the cycle of poverty and she willingly decides to have a baby with no job, no stability, nothing? Be serious.
And THEN she says the dad signed over his rights and gave her a lump sum after the baby was born, she used this money to buy a car and mentions it was 5 years ago… so why is the kid only two years old? The math is not mathing. Lmao like please help me understand cus how’s the car older than the baby but they arrived at or close to the same time???
Also, if I had to hear “read the room” one more time… girl. We GET it. The room is a library. It’s been read. Dewey Decimal’s tired. Let it go.
The MMC was a rich dummy. Their romance had no depth. Authors really need to be freed from the good sex = true love narrative. They talked a little, she played housewife, he was out doing vague thug business… and suddenly they’re in love? Getting married? Nah.
Lastly, can we normalize STD testing in these books? Especially when one character was with a cheating ex who was eating booty. Like… be serious. Head on down to the clinic and get swabbed. It’s giving unrealistic and unsafe.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
For a short read, I thought it was good! Many short stories I’ve read were rushed with no plot or just spice, spice, and more spice. The author provided back stories so that we felt “caught up” in a sense and not rushed throughout the story. She provided just enough spice so that it did not overwhelm the plot. The “read the room” concept was also good as the author broke it down in toddler & adult concept for everyone to understand. I loved the love, the family, overcoming trials and trauma, and the growth. This was my first read from this author and I must say, I’ll be visiting her catalog real soon! 🫶🏽
Definitely was a very intriguing story with very real life lessons. I like how the author showed some of the MMCs like Lo’ak and Joey their sides that had more “humaneness” to them even though they ultimately were in the streets because it shows at the end of the day these are people with real lives and families in society like anyone else. But also shows the dichotomy of the two different lifestyles and how at sometimes it was hard to keep the separation between the business and personal life/family which often was put on the line a lot of times.
I really liked the versatility with T’sireya’s character and the budding romance with Lo’ak even though she was put in a terrible situation at first it ended up working for the better.
I did enjoy the banter between basically everybody versus Alexi cause she had it coming and don’t get me started with Mama Dee cause her comebacks and insults were fierce! All in all it was entertaining but one small tidbit I did notice was how baby Jedi (or Lucas) Reya’s child talked more like a primary school aged child then a toddler who’s two years old but I see others share the same sentiment. Also the amount of times Reya used the word “malarkey” had me weak.
Although the “read the room” concept still was smart and applies to many areas of life.
(2.75) I wanted to love it but this fell super flat for me. The found family/friendships were great. And despite Reya making a really dumb decision in the prologue, I was on board with her being a strong FMC, working 2 jobs to take care of her son. Lo also wasn’t a bad MMC. He was about his business and his grandma. And that’s where it stopped for me. Their romance felt underdeveloped, which makes me sad because forced proximity is one of my fave tropes. And I don’t know if it’s because the author spent a lot of time narrating to us about their story but not showing it. I would have loved to see some of these conversations they had. Give us some playful and flirty banter. Hype up how desirable they seemed to one another. So by the time they got together I didn’t feel any chemistry between them. Also as a pet peeve her son was 2ish but the voice in which he spoke read a lot older and it bothered me every time we saw dialogue from him.
Can I get anymore obsessed with this author’s work?! Lo and Reya were solid from their first meet and Jedi/Lucas sealed the deal! I love a man that can wholeheartedly express how he feels and putting those feelings into action. Lo is that man. Reya was a mind her business stay in her lane type of woman who happened to be in the wrong room at the right time. She quiet, resolute and strong. I love how Ms. Dau weaves in past characters! Definitely impacts the readers. Well done Ms. Dau! Well done!
No matter the genre, I can ALWAYS expect Mel Dau to come out swinging!!!…I loved everything about this book!!?…Everyone to the children’s learning to read the room!!!…I loved everything the meaning behind it and it was definitely something we truly don’t always think about!!!… Reya’s character could not have been anymore lovable!!!…There was so much to love about her and I she has such infectious personality!!!… Baby, once AK got ahold of Reya, playtime was all over and he did not hide it!!!…
Everybody likes a little Nice-napping!! This was such a cute little read. It had so many different elements in it that made this a great read. I loved Joey in this story but Lo and Reya were so freaking cute. A step daddy story can never go wrong with me!
Reya had a trash AF mother but she did what she had to do to ensure she ended with a better hand than the one she was initially dealt- I loved everything about her character and how she handled all her situations. I also really liked Lo's character- he was just the right amount of unhinged and I really love that he was on his grown man ish when it came to relationships- even with Alexi's triflin behind. Their supporting cast of friends and family were equally as likeable and I really like how Mel wrote the "nice-nap" chapters and Mama Bee's interactions with everyone, including Alexi- that was pure comedy.
There were some unanswered questions like what happened to the second man in the room at the club, why did LaKeisha really come back around and who was the 3rd man that was unalived at the end?
Overall though, this was another good one from Mel that kept me locked into the storyline front start to finish.
I felt like this was a little different for Mel Dau without crossing barriers. But thats what we love about her writing ✍️ . Then, the book hyperlinked "Shameless Love" was in the similar vein of street lit with the characters making a cameo 👌🏾.
I had been snickerin and laughing the entire time I'd been reading this book!! This lady has a way with words!
Now, Lo’ak Jordan 😍! When he wasn't nice-napping women, saving & rearing toddlers, he was dropping gems like:
“In life, you have to read the room to one, understand if it’s a room you need to be in, and two, how to conduct yourself within the room.
There are some rooms that you don’t belong in and shouldn’t be in. It could be because you’ve outgrown it or you’re not quite ready for it.
There are rooms that you are not ready to be in, but that is not to say that you will never be ready for them. Sometimes, you just have to chill in the waiting room until it’s your turn.
For the rooms that you’ve outgrown, you need to exit the room, waiting room, and find the room or waiting room where you need to be."
- Read the Room
Tsireya Robinson 👸🏾 If it weren't for bad luck she wouldn't have any. Her mother failed her. Grandmama left too soon. She kept her head down nose in her books and made lemonade of the rainstorms in her life.
Until she was nice-napped for her boss after "the thing that she didn't know about" happened "at the place that she wasn’t at "...
Lo'ak and Reya connected when she witnessed something that she wasn't supposed to. Lo'ak had her nice-napped for that reason. The more time that they spent together, the more they became attracted to one another. Feelings developed, and I enjoyed their banter and the chemistry that came as a result of those feelings. I loved the family bond that was formed between Lo, Reya and Reya's son, Lucas, as well as Joey and Ethan. Mama Bee was another character that was a integral part of the book whom I loved, and I enjoyed the part she played in Lo'ak's life. I couldn't stand Alexi and the rest of the band of characters who formed an alliance against Lo'ak and Reya. Lo'ak didn't play about Reya or anyone in his family, and they found that out quick, fast and in a hurry. This was a really good book that had my attention from the very beginning to the end. Another great Mel Dau book!!
This storyline was epic! Lakesha was a horrible mother, and never deserved Reya's loyalty. Tsireya was one of the sweetest and innocent people you would meet. Meeting Mama Bee and working kept her afloat. Having Lucas in her life made her work harder. Lo'ak was a hard working man that knew his worth. He knew that Alexi wasn't his one. Moving on from her priority. Meeting T'sireya was love instantly. Regardless of the circumstances, she loved him from day one. Their family dynamic made everything so much easier for them both. The love and chemistry was beautiful. He and Sully protecting their families made perfect sense. This was a remarkable read! Job well done!
I told myself to stop reading this author so that’s on me but from the prologue on down it was just one half thought after another. Reya is product of a broken home and is described as intelligent. That intelligence is then subverted so she willingly has a baby by a man that doesn’t want the baby, while she is in school and for WHATEVER DUMBASS REASON she has the baby, drops out, gets on sect. 8 and im supposed to believe there nothing but orbeez rolling around in her head?! This also wasn’t a romance like not one romantic thing happened in the damn book. That proposal was sickening, the profession of love was idiotic because again nothing happened and I’d be remiss if I didn’t mention that two year olds don’t talk like that.
Melvin's Daughter, if you don't sit down and write these books. Girlie, you are by far, one of my favorite authors. Your stories are funny, human, and relatable. I love, love, love your characters.
Lo'ak can get it! That man is so damn sexy. Not only that, he doesn't play about his loved ones. Reya was a good girl who was dealt a bad hand by her trifling mama. However, she remained steadfast and immovable to make something shake for her and her son.
Witnessing something at her job, put her on Lo's radar. Unbeknownst to both of them, they had two people in common...Jedi and Ma.
Lo went full press and maintained the pressure. Man this story was so good!! I promise you that I'm reading every room that I walk in.
I got a book that mentioned all of my favorite people and fell in love with a new person, Mama Bee!!
Reya and Lo’s love story was definitely not love at first sight due to a nice-napping. Mel Dau definitely loves writing about a friendly kidnapping and I’ve loved reading every one of them!
It was so cute when he shot is shot and left her stuck and from there it was a waiting game. Reya is definitely is peace and Lo is definitely her protector.
Oh and all the drama in this book will keep you entertained and may have you throw or drop your kindle or iPad, cause I did lol!!!
Definitely add this book to your TBR cause you will not be disappointed!
I've finished reading and I've actually taken the time to read the synopsis. Yeah I wouldn't have gathered that nice-napping happened in this story simply based on the synopsis, so I'm glad that I went in blind.
Lo'ak is a man. A good man. Even when he harms people, I still see him as a good, multi-faceted man. Plus the people that he harms, well that's justice ya know. Because I don't like Tsireya's mom. Tsireya is another character that I do not fault. I would've responded with cluelessness as well because IDC that your men say you're a good guy, I don't know you but thanks for letting me stay in your house for a bit 🙂↔️ but yes love a good nice-napping where the FMC is treated well and a relationship ensues between the MCs.
Lo'ak's tumultuous romance with Alexi defied conventional expectations, a unpassionate connection teetering on the razor's edge of chaos and finally end. Lo'ak and Tsireya's relationship, fraught with intensity and unpredictability, paradoxically blossomed into an unexpected harmony. Ma Bee stood as the familial cornerstone, her presence a blend of humor and steadfast compassion that anchored their complex emotional landscape. Through intricate interpersonal dynamics, the story woven by Mel Dau revealed the delicate, resilient nature of human connections, transcending traditional boundaries of love and kinship with remarkable depth and authenticity.
This was an interesting read, but parts of the story kind of fell flat for me at times. I liked Lo and Reya together and I liked their friends that became family. I adored Jedi, but in the beginning his name was confusing because at one point he was referred to as Jedi but another as Lucas, but thankfully that was cleared up on why he was referred to as both. I admired Reya’s strength because some of the things she went through could have tore her down, but she thrived and survived and found her forever love in the end. I also loved how Lo played no games and was all in with Reya and didn’t need a lot of time to know she was his one.
The title of this book was pretty catchy. I think when Lucas first said it I was like “Ahhhhhh” but the more it was said and explained it made sense. Honestly it was sense of actually using the phrase in real life. As for the book (got a lil off topic…Maybe) I mean Mel Dau ALWAYS does it. Lo’ak was loyal to a woman that was definitely a gold digger BUT once he let her go, a real woman entered into his life. Loved the chemistry between Lo’ak and Reya, they both mellowed one another out and I especially loved how Lo’ak had no problems being a Father to Lucas. 5 stars!!!
This book was so good and I love how Lo and Tsireya’s relationship developed into something they both needed. He stepped up and became a great role model for Jedi. He was teaching him life lessons and Jedi was soaking it all up. Reya’s mother was a piece of 💩. She had the never the nerve to fix her mouth to say forgive Logan. This book gave an excellent explanation on what “ Read the Room” meant. All in all,this book is an excellent read and I highly recommend this book.
Mel Dau, great read as always. I realize this was a fictional read but its always lessons to be had. When I say I love the underdog coming to the top. Seeing a strong girl become a woman that found peace in her world because she could have turned out in a different way. It's a sad thing when all a person can do is belittle others. Seeing strong men become soft for those they love and protect at any cost waa so great. Love is such a great thing. Having true love just can't compare🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This was kind of a letdown for me however I did finish. I wasn't feeling the chemistry between the MMC and FMC, like there was not a lot of banter and I didn't feel it was instant love for either, so it was odd how they just were in love all of a sudden. Also, the 2-year-old in the book having full on conversations using big words and level of comprehension bothered me. At least say he's a prodigy if you're going to do that, make it make sense! I'm a huge fan of this author but this one wasn't it for me.
Mel Dau can write the heck out of a storyline. Her pens have to smoke from how much fire I feel in her stores. Well this time isn’t any different. You are guaranteed humor and genuine dynamics of friendship, family, love and oh yes somebody is going to be reminded that her main characters funny play. I absolutely positively love this author and all of her work.
Mel Dau........ Did her BIG ONE with this here book!!!!! I loved everything about this book from how unserious the friend group was at the must serious times.. I love when both the ladies and the guys are both just as unhinged. I loved down both the FMC &MMC 😂🤣🥰🥰 10/10 (Side note Mama Bee was a Hold Azzz Vibe all by herself 🤣😂🦵🏿👀)
I love this author! She's so talented. Her books are always insightful, and the characters are so alive. I love the title, too. Lo'ak and Tsireya, it's amazing how they met and got together. This story is wonderful. From the first page to the last it grabs your attention, and you can't put it down. As always, it's my pleasure to read your books 🥰.
I don’t care what Mel Dau writes a time will be had…Lo’Ak was a man with a plan dealing with Alexi a bobble head ho an Tsireya who wanted better for herself and son who enters a room and saw a thing that she unsaw real quick…here’s the thing how do you nicely kidnap someone, well read the book & find out you will not be disappointed
For me, this book felt like a Masterclass of leadership! It’s about the lesson Lo’ak taught to Lucas that has prepared him for life at such a young impressionable age. I love the way Mel Dau wraps every story into a lesson that can be used in the real world! I love how they came together as a couple so seamlessly even when it started as a nice-napping!
I definitely enjoyed reading the room with this group characters!! I am so glad ak got rid of that vulture quick fast in a hurry. Tsi mom was 🗑and got what she deserved. Tsi grew up to be very strong, smart and took no mess from a man. I loved the way she and AK loved each other. Great story!!!