*Possible Spoilers*
Moonlight Obsession by Sheri Lewis Wohl has a lot of potential. Unfortunately the book is populated with one-dimensional characters, and unfinished worldbuilding. Given that this story barely spans 280 pages, I understood going in that the fantasy aspect wouldn't be very fleshed out, but there are so many unfinished seams the whole thing kind of falls apart.
Mari and Wyatt were a bit annoying. Mari was a bit of a pick-me butch. She doesn’t think of herself as pretty, and she doesn’t understand how she keeps scoring partners. Have a little self-confidence, girl. Wyatt was kind of whiny. Sometimes she threw a bit of a cringey fit when she didn’t get her way. Neither particularly had character development. They stayed the same from start to finish. In terms of romantic relationship, it’s stated that they have chemistry, but not shown. I had to take it at face value that they had a connection, and that they weren’t just friendly neighbors.
Royal was just a pain in the behind, which I think was the point. That man is Jacob from Twilight, minus the imprinting on an infant thing. Wyatt politely rejects him over and over again, but he still is bent on making her his mate. I love how he calls out his pack brother for being a misogynistic jerk, when he can’t take no for an answer. I was lowkey disappointed that he died before Wyatt could formally put him in his place. His death was a bit anticlimactic, and indirect. Given that Wyatt specializes in helping women rewrite their stories (via wilderness survival classes), I expected her to directly take down the man who borderline stalks her. Royal just kind of dies at the end in a “blink and you’ll miss it” three sentence death. Literally three sentences. I just found it hard to swallow anything about his character, which might’ve been Lewis Wohl’s intention, but it’s hard to enjoy a book when one of the main characters is a straight up jerk, with zero redeeming qualities or depth.
While none of the main characters spoke to me, I did like the side characters. Inez, Royal’s rebellious, mischievous cousin was fascinating. Maybe because she was defying men in power (Royal), going against werewolf societal norms, and she’s Queer. I honestly would’ve loved to see werewolf life depicted from her perspective, because she clearly had a story, before Royal’s pack buddy murdered her. Wyatt’s friends Tuesday, her wife Addie, and their dog, Tripper were a refreshing dash of efficiency and actual couple energy. They did more to move the murder investigations along than either main character. The author is definitely a dog person, the amount of dog praise is lowkey a little much.
The werewolf world has a lot of potential. We get numerous mentions of the Fenrir, a Norse mythological wolf-beast. We don’t get any exploration of how modern day werewolves relate to said folklore. We don’t know anything about wolf history, just Royal’s history. I would have loved to see more of the inner workings of a wolf pack, not just how an Alpha bosses around his inferiors. I really do think that the most effective way to deep dive werewolf identity would’ve been to explore it from a female wolf’s perspective. Given how patriarchal and manly werewolf culture usually is, it would be a fun move to flip the script and write about how a woman has to swallow her pack’s sexism, and when the final straw breaks the camel’s back, she becomes “crazy.”
I couldn’t tell if this book is trying to fight sexism or if the author has internalized so much of it she doesn’t realize she’s replicating it.
I would also like to mention: saying that Royal’s inability to take no for an answer is “Like someone with obsessive-compulsive disorder…” is offensive. Comparing OCD, an actual disorder, to men being stalkers and creeps is unacceptable.
While this book wasn’t for me, if you’re interested in nature, crime, and the supernatural, I do think that it has potential, and is a fun “turn off your brain” soap opera.
Thank you to NetGalley and Bold Strokes Books for the ARC in exchange for my honest review. I will be posting this review on Goodreads and/or Instagram and Tiktok.