It all started one day in March of 2018. I was bored. There was nothing to watch on television. And the moment of silence prompted a memory. A flashback to a time I wrote movies in a notebook. Small scenes jotted down for no particular reason. Something compelled me to make a move. I jumped up and ran to my computer, anxious to tell a story of which I could see clearly. The scenes of my cleverly crafted idea so wildly vivid. A face. A name. And twisted plots that would rival any movie.
I began typing. The keystrokes were fervent. Soon one sentence gave way to twenty. One hundred words grew to seventeen thousand. And before I knew it, I had a short story. Proof that anything is possible. So, you might ask if I always wanted to be a writer? Was it somewhere in the back of my mind? No! It wasn’t. But I knew I was creative. And I knew I could tell a story. The rest is history. Now I can say I wrote a book that became a best seller. Downloaded for many book lovers to read and enjoy. And the journey is still fresh. There is so much more to write. I am just getting started!
I’m so sorry but i did not like this book. I just couldn’t imagine why Andreya would literally see a man laying between two dumpsters, surrounded by drug paraphernalia including needles and decide it was a good idea to take him home and turn him into her man. The whole quick fall in love, trust him in her house within days scenario was a total turn off for me. FMC is described as a beautiful classy educated nurse so why would she do that. There was a lot of things that I didn’t like about this story line but I’d spoil it if I mentioned them all. The author writing style wasn’t bad but often it would go from first person to third person on the same page. I noticed a lot of grammatical errors too. I decided to dnf the first time at page 153. Then returned a day later because I really hate to dnf books, but at page 189 I dnf again. I’m not sure if I’ll return to this book again just to finish it because I hate not finishing books in general but for now, I was rolling my eyes too much, the story really annoyed me.
The writer kept switching from telling the story from the character's point of view to third person store telling. Example: the story selling us from Andreya's point of view about meeting Kya at the bar. She says I see Kya already working on her first drink, then goes on to say "she" (Andreya) sits down beside her. If your tongue the story from the character's (Andreya) point of view you wouldn't write "she" sits down beside her, you would write "I" sat down beside her. This happens multiple times in the storyline. I feel like better editing would have improved this books starring from a four to a five. It's a very interesting story.
Whew...🤯 The secrets, lies, and manipulations in this thang was crazy! Got me feeling for Andreya and all that she has been through, when she is holding on to her own secrets! 😤 Lawd, Romelo sir you done been to hell and back, but when you saw your angel, things began to look up. Sorta... I was not prepared for that twist at the end, cause what???? 👀
A very good book from beginning to end, relationships always start at honeymoon phase, then comes the trials and tribulations some chose to work it out and others end the trials and want to start elsewhere overall good book
From the start, I was like Huh? What? From the jump.....just no. I tried to finish, just no. I'm open to trying this author again to support but this book, no thanks. Do NOT recommend.
This book was great. I truly enjoyed it. Smokey Moment you have done it once again. Your writing always captures my heart. And this one is one to remember. Lata