It's been too long since Jenn enjoyed the pleasures of a real man. Her slave serves her well, but as a submissive, he's just not suitable for what she desires.
Encouraged by her curious friend Nicole, Jenn arranges for another man to come over and satisfy her. If the experience roasts her slave's pride and ego, so much the better.
The thing missing, in my view, is depth. Cupcake has been broken, but breaking an alpha, as he was, is not simply a matter of Queening and cruelty. Implying his breaking without any depth leaves the reader hollow.
Different premise, hot scenes, and just when it gets going, it’s over. I wanted more, which is a good thing, but when there isn’t more to be had, disappointment.
Another run-of-the-mill femdom story. Nothing outstanding but I have to give the author credit for tackling the cuckold sub-genre from a different angle. An angle I haven't yet seen taken before. It's well written and neatly edited. The characters are unidimensional, though it's difficult to paint profounder individuals in a story this short.