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Alvin Alonso's Secret Files #1

The Reluctant Incubus

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A hilarious, high-action M/M Buffy the Vampire Slayer—but all grown up, made spicier, and with a scrappy and lovable monster as the hero. Perfect for fans of TJ Klune, David R. Slayton, and K.D. Edwards.

I was born an incubus, a literal soul-sucking sex demon. But I’ve deliberately never fed, so I don't have any powers.

Still, that doesn't stop an arrogant fae prince from blackmailing me into stealing a magical watch from a creepy San Francisco mansion.

Turns out, the artifact contains Collin, an all-knowing spirit with serious golden retriever vibes who looks like a cute twentysomething guy my age. If I can keep him from the fae, he swears we can be together—even physically—without anyone getting hurt.

The wrinkle? He’s also being hunted by bloodthirsty vampires who need the watch to end the world.

And my only ally? A smoking-hot monster slayer who's all "touch him and die" whenever I'm in danger but who would most certainly kill me if he ever discovered what I was.

I’ve spent my whole life trying to be good—and okay, maybe dreaming of someone who could make me feel less alone. But to save Collin and stop the apocalypse, I'll have to feed.

And once I taste a soul, there might be no coming back.


The Reluctant Incubus kicks off the New Adult MM urban fantasy duet Alvin Alonso's Secret Files. There is a cliffhanger in Book 1—but don't worry: Book 2, Incubus Vampire Slayer, will be released on the same day. You will be able to binge the whole story, all the way to Alvin's deeply satisfying HFN.

308 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 10, 2025

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Alex Woolfson

9 books116 followers
Alex Woolfson writes action-packed adventures with lovable gay heroes.

An East-Coaster who now calls the Bay Area home, Alex spent twenty years editing films and video before turning to comics, where he created the Lambda Literary Award finalist graphic novel Artifice and the long‑running LGBTQ‑superhero webcomic The Young Protectors.

His debut MM urban‑fantasy novel, The Reluctant Incubus, kicks off the Alvin Alonso's Secret Files duet, delivering high‑stakes action, slow‑burn romance, and queer heroes who save the world and each other.

When Alex isn't at his treadmill desk writing, you'll find him traveling the globe with his husband, on the hunt for the perfect taco.

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November 5, 2025
11/5/25 EDIT: There are now a couple sample chapters up online, if you're curious. You can read all of Chapter One here. And you can read a more intimate, later chapter here. Enjoy!

ORIGINAL NOTE:

Hello! Alex Woolfson here, the author of this duet.

It feels a little strange to be writing the first review on my own book page, but I'm so excited about this story and I wanted to connect with any early readers who might be stopping by.

For those of you who don't know me, I've spent the better part of the last fifteen years creating action‑packed comics with gay superheroes. But a couple of years ago, I decided to try something completely different: writing a New Adult MM urban fantasy duet. Now it's finally ready to share with the world. And honestly? I think it might be the best thing I've ever created.

Writing The Reluctant Incubus and its sequel has been one of the most creatively fulfilling journeys of my life. The story follows Alvin, a timid incubus who has deliberately never fed on a soul. When he's blackmailed into stealing a magical artifact, he discovers there's a sweet, imprisoned, and handsome spirit inside who might just be worth risking everything for.

It’s a fast-paced, monster-positive Simon Snow meets Buffy the Vampire Slayer, narrated by a lovable hero who will have you laughing out loud.

If you enjoy MM urban fantasy with a mix of high‑stakes action, slow‑burn romance, and a healthy dose of humor, I think you'll really love this duet. These characters have been living in my head for so long that the thought of you getting to meet Alvin, Collin, and the rest of the crew is genuinely thrilling.

Thanks so much for your interest, and I hope you'll join me for my debut novels and for Alvin's first adventure!

Alex
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November 11, 2025
A Joyfully Jay review.

4.75 stars


The Reluctant Incubus is the first book in Alex Woolfson’s Alvin Alonso’s Secret Files duet. While it is a two-part story, both of the books release today, which means you don’t have to wait to read Alvin’s whole journey. I am a big urban fantasy fan and I was intrigued by this blurb and interested in trying a book from a new-to-me author. I am happy to say I absolutely loved this story and was totally caught up in the book from beginning to end.

I was really delighted by this story and absolutely loved it. I already have the second book ready to go and I am eager to pick it up and find out how Alvin finishes his adventure.

Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.



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66 reviews
October 18, 2025
Disclaimer: my review is from an Advanced Reader's Copy.

The Reluctant Incubus does not start reluctantly. Indeed, more than anything, I was impressed by the author's pacing. The whole book takes place over a couple of days but despite the urgency the story never feels rushed. Rather, our poor hero doesn't really get chances for anything more than a shower or two. While I often tackle larger stories that take place over weeks or months or years, there is something refreshing by having a main character who needs to resolve his task *tonight*. Woolfson does a great job of interweaving world building with the plot, sometimes letting a little lore give space for our hero - and the reader - to breathe.

While it might be easy to claim I'm not the target audience, being a hetero male. Fine, maybe that means the romance scenes didn't get me hot and bothered (though I was not made uncomfortable by them either, since they served the story). What I AM a target audience for, however, is well crafted stories brought to life by great characters, and The Reluctant Incubus has both in spades.

Despite being a first novel, Woolfson is clearly an accomplished storyteller, able to craft plots, realize engaging characters, construct magic systems and fantasy realms, along with some comfortably witty banter to a degree even more experienced writers sometimes struggle with. While there are enough timely references to maybe not feel so timeless in twenty years, there is simply no reason to pick up this accessible novel.
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November 9, 2025
This is only the second book review I have ever done. And I am so happy that it is for The Reluctant Incubus by Alex Woolfson. It’s a wonderful story the whole way round. I personally related to the MC, Alvin, as I went through a long period of time in my twenties where I viewed myself the way he does.
Admittedly. Some of the current slang used threw me off a bit at first. Having said that it is a book of current times and I got used to it very quickly. In fact, I use some of it myself now (thank you Alex).

In my younger years, I have always been fascinated by incubi and succubi. And I am so glad there are some with LGBTQ+ histories.

So, let’s get to the story. There is much going on at the beginning, but not overwhelmingly so. And it is important for setting the storyline. I believe the benefit of an artist/comic book writer trying his hand at writing a book is that he can’t draw the surroundings. They must be narrated, and Mr. Woolfson does an incredible job at this. I could clearly see in my mind the environment and scenes he created.

About five years ago I dove into the MM novel scene. I’ve read many! Both adult and young adult oriented. Some with an abundance of steamy sections and some with hardly any. This book has the best balance of everything.

I’m trying to write this without giving too much away, because it is a MUST read for anyone. As the characters developed and I got to know them better they endeared themselves to me. In fact, I had/have a bit of a readers crush on Collin. He is mysterious, funny and sensitive. He has many physical and personality qualities I like as well (yes, I know it’s a character in a book).

Everything that comes up in the beginning and throughout the book starts tying together towards the end. The pacing also picks up (not that it is slow earlier). I was very surprised at the end. And I am honored to have been chosen as part of the ARC team, and I picked up the second book within ten minutes of finishing the first.

Please do yourself a favor…Get this book! You will not be disappointed.
3 reviews
September 1, 2025
Where to start?!?!! I LOVE this book. ADORE it. Right from the start you’re swept into Alvin’s world, as well as his character, both of which (you guessed it) I loved and adored.
The plot, characters, world building, humour, emotion wrap you up in this brilliant story about Alvin, a self conscious young man who strives to be brave, useful, skilled and loved.
The pacing is on point to give you an almost constant but not overwhelming desire to know what the next page will bring, to find out what will happen next all whilst rooting for the MC along the way.
I laughed, chuckled, gasped and much more reading this book, all with an almost constant smile on my face…I can safely say I’ve NEVER read a book that brought me so many positive feelings.

The authors writing style and the way he brings Alvin and the characters to life, as if you’re there with them is extraordinary. You feel like you know him so well and you’re urging him on to success throughout. I connected so well to the MC, understood him so well, unlike any book I’ve read before. Pure genius on the authors part.

The book is allegorical as well, and when thinking deeper about it, it touches your heart even further. Themes of self acceptance (or the struggle of not being able to) and otherness and the use of certain language and self image turned into plot devices and character aspects is both subtle and genius and only adds to a really great story. Even where you don’t think deeper into the book, it’s a great, emotional, epically paced story that deserves fame and to be read by millions lets you know what a gem it is.

The only note to the author I have is this: The end of chapter 10 - How could you do that to our Alvin?! ;)
If you want to know, check out the book. But BE WARNED, before you even get to chapter 10 you’ll be hooked!
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653 reviews10 followers
October 7, 2025
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

Holy crap-this is one of the best books I’ve read so far this year. Rarely does a book make me laugh out loud, but Alvin did. This does follow the schlub who becomes a hero trope, but the author runs with it and makes it his own.

Alvin works for probably the leading magic practitioner in the San Francisco area. She’s probably the leading one in the western part of the US. He’s hiding his true self from his boss because he’s considered a monster. The title gives it away-he’s an incubus, but he’s never accessed his powers because he doesn’t want to become a monster like his mother. She’s pretty evil, but we never see her in action. Incubi draw their energy from spicy times. Alvin says that she’s killed a lot of people. Alvin is a virgin because he’s afraid that he’ll lose control and kill his partner. Also, he has a fairly negative self-image. He’s not the sexy beast his mother is or can be since she can use her powers to change her body. We meet her as a young, white, blonde Only Fans model who makes money from influencing her viewers. She’s actually Filipino, like Alvin. I guess she’s powerful enough to influence her victims through the internet. Alvin does say she’s been around for a long time.

We get a completely different kind of hero from most urban fantasy books. He’s short, chubby, his words, and not white. The Filipino population in the San Francisco area is one of the largest outside the Philippines. It makes sense that the hero might not be white or muscular or buff or whatever other tired tropes authors use. Alvin is an everyman, albeit an everyman in a racially diverse area.

The story begins with Alvin being forced by a knight of the fae Winter Court to retrieve a watch from a house. This happens in the Tenderloin district of San Francisco. Throughout the book, the author uses the city as a character. We are there with Alvin. There’s a scene set in the Hunter’s Point area. Hunter’s Point is a poor area of the city, and the author does a great job at depicting the poverty and the people living there. He mentions stuff about the Tenderloins, which is another poor area of the city. You feel like you’re there.

I’m not going to go too deeply into the plot because I don’t want to give away too much. A woman who works in Alvin’s building approaches him and asks him to find her daughter. She ran away from home and thinks she’s caught up in a cult. Her daughter is a fledgling witch. That’s why she approached Alvin. His boss was away from the office in the fae world. He did what he could do to find her and gets put in the middle of a plan that could end humanity.

We get a couple secondary characters in Collin, the spirit that inhabits the watch he steals, Rafa, who is a Monster Hunter with capital letters, his boss, Ms. Stryker, and the elven prince who has Alvin steal the watch. Collin and Rafa become love interests, although they don’t know about Alvin. Being an incubus. He doesn’t think Rafa would take it well since incubi are considered monsters and well, Rafa kills monsters for a living. We don’t get a lot of development, but we get enough background that we feel that we know who these characters are.

Overall, this is a great start for the series. It’s a two-parter so the story moves fairly quickly, but we get a lot of introspection on Alvin’s part. Some people might not like it, but I do. Alvin is quickly becoming one of my favorite characters. Highly recommend the book.
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2 reviews
October 16, 2025
If you’re looking for a fantasy novel featuring a queer protagonist, The Reluctant Incubus, by Alex Woolfson, is worth checking out. This modern day take on the fantasy realm is engaging and easy to pick up without the need for world building, yet is still engaging and entertaining.

The story began in modern day San Francisco with our protagonist, Alvin Alonso, who is interning for a powerful Wizard while struggling with his own identity as an Incubus. The theme of a reluctant hero is well developed through the character’s struggles to accept who he is and the demands placed on him, sprinkled with the elements of romance, which added more fun to the story.

The Reluctant Incubus is quite easy to pick up and difficult to put down. This first person narrative really gives readers great insights into the protagonist and his internal conflicts, whether with his identity, relationships, or self confidence(lack there of). This book can easily be enjoyed by everyone. However, there are a couple of racy events that might not be appropriate for a younger audience. The story itself is fast paced and keeps readers on their toes, up to the cliffhanger ending.

As an avid reader of fantasy novels, I’ve read countless novels and can be somewhat particular about picking up new fantasy series. However, I thoroughly enjoy this book. The world building and magic system is familiar enough to many fantasy genres, so I have more time to focus on the story. The pacing of the story keeps you moving without pages and pages of descriptive sceneries. Although there are plenty of “reluctant hero” tropes, I really like the main character and his struggles. I appreciate the fact that the story doesn’t make his sexuality the center of attention, but just a normal part of who he is. So many queer stories tend to focus so much on the protagonist’s internal struggles with their sexuality that it becomes repetitive. This book is NOT one of those. Of course there were instances where you have to roll your eyes and say, “Enough with feeling sorry for yourself!” But this only keeps me guessing on what he will do next. I finished this book and immediately picked up the second book in the duet and started reading because I couldn’t wait to find out what happens next.

Overall, if you enjoy fantasy novels and would like to take a break from the overly descriptive novels, this is a perfect book to pick up. It is filled with actions, humor, and surprising plot twists that will keep you engaged.
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31 reviews4 followers
November 10, 2025
I really enjoyed this story. Alex Woolfson is so good at immersing you in the world. Every scene feels vivid and alive, like you’re right beside Alvin in the middle of San Francisco. The pacing is smooth and balanced; there were moments where I felt an urgency to the story, but it never felt rushed. The plot unfolds exactly as it should, with humor, danger, and emotional punch.

This was actually my first M/M story, but the focus isn’t really on that, it’s more about Alvin as a character, his journey, his fears, his heart, and the wild supernatural trouble he gets dragged into. The romance and attraction fit the story naturally without ever overshadowing the plot.

I especially loved the first-person narrative. Being inside Alvin’s head made the story even stronger. You really feel his internal conflicts, his fear of becoming a monster, his loyalty to the people in his life, and the lack of confidence that makes him so relatable and endearing. He’s a literal soul-sucking monster who refuses to be a villain, and getting that honest, vulnerable perspective just works.

The vibes? High-action, M/M Buffy the Vampire Slayer but grown up, spicier, and with a reluctant incubus instead of a Slayer.

If you love urban fantasy with humor, supernatural danger, and a hero you can’t help but root for, grab this book. It’s such a fun ride. I immediately downloaded and read book two after finishing this one.

I received an ARC ofThe Reluctant Incubus by Alex Woolfson and I’m leaving this review voluntarily.
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September 23, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus
Alvin Alonso’s Secret Files, Book 1
by Alex Woolfson

⭐️ 4.25/5

Thanks so much to Alex and NetGalley for this ARC!

I really liked this one. The concept hooked me right away—an incubus who’s never actually fed, trying to be “good,” suddenly thrown into a mess with fae, vampires, magical artifacts, and of course, more secrets than he ever asked for. It’s such a fun, fresh idea, and Alex Woolfson definitely made it work.

The writing flowed nicely, and what I appreciated most was how the characters grew with each page. Just when I thought I had them figured out, something new was revealed—either a piece of their past, a hidden motivation, or just a little detail that made them feel more real. Alvin himself is such a relatable MC, torn between fear of his own nature and the longing to not feel so alone. And Collin? Absolute golden retriever vibes, and I loved him for it.

What really got me, though, was the ending. That cliffhanger was perfect. Not the frustrating kind, but the kind that makes you immediately want to know what happens next. There are still so many secrets left unopened—or only hinted at—that I can’t wait to see how Woolfson develops them in the next book.

Overall, this was a wonderful read. A mix of humor, danger, heart, and the beginnings of something bigger. Definitely a series I’ll keep following.
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1,308 reviews17 followers
November 8, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus is the first book in the Alvin Alonso's Secret Files series. This is my first book by Alex Woolfson and it was a great introduction. This is the story of Alvin who is hiding the fact that he is an incubus because they are considered monsters. We meet some other interesting people including Collin and Rafa who become romantic interests. I loved the characters and world building that went into this book. I loved how humor was used throughout the story. I also loved that Alvin was not your typical hero. I loved the whole story. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series. I would definitely recommend this book.
received a free review copy
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3,302 reviews30 followers
November 3, 2025
Alvin is such a sweet adorable little guy. He has completely rotten luck though. He doesn’t have a mean bone in his body and has never fed before, even though he is an incubus. Collin is rather unique. This story was different from many than I have read and I quickly couldn’t put it down. Alvin, Collin, and Rafa the monster hunter make an interesting trio. I am glad both of these books are coming out back to back because I have to see how this ends. The case Alvin is working on is so much bigger than he dreamed.
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54 reviews7 followers
October 30, 2025
I was given ARC’s of The Reluctant Incubus and Incubus Vampire Hunter in exchange for honest reviews. And I’d like to thank Alex for this – he’s definitely a new fiction author to watch. (and I’ll be reading those graphic novels, too!)

This is very much for people who like queer fantasy (I hesitate to call this a romantasy), especially those of us who desperately wanted to read something like this when we were growing up. Representation is very important, and I don’t think Woolfson shies away from it at all. There are a few stumbles in some of the mechanics, but I mainly attribute this to the differences between writing for comics and writing a novel - basically, Woolfson is learning a new writing style. This garners a solid four stars.

One of the first things that I noticed about this book was the amount of references to other supernatural detective series, as well as movies – Jim Butcher’s Dresden, Seanan McGuire’s Toby Daye, you name it. While I love them, the references, mixed with the setup of the novel, means that we don’t really get to hear Alvin’s narrative voice until about chapter five. The build-up of tension while establishing the world mitigates this somewhat. As does (honestly), the whole premise of a queer wizard-for-hire. I loved the idea of Butcher’s Dresden but tuned out fairly quickly because it all was just so… straight.

The folx that taught me writing were very much of the show-don’t-tell tribe, and this is one area where this is clearly a first novel. When Woolfson gets showing right, he knocks it out of the park, but much of the description is telling. You have to do some of this as an author, particularly in worldbuilding, but it’s also something that can take a reader out of the narrative if it’s too obvious. Fortunately, it’s also short, so I don’t feel like I’m reading an impromptu Wikipedia entry.

Ironically, for being the son of an (alleged) Queen of Hell, a lot of Alvin’s emotional responses felt very familiar. I grew up in a city-to-remain-unnamed that was very redneck and very Southern Baptist. My parents were Roman Catholic and this provided me an opportunity to find friends with whom I had stuff in common (and the military family thing helped, too.) As a result, Alex’s voice (internal and external) and character really resonate with me, and that makes the suspension of disbelief easier.

Warning – Spoilers Hereafter

One thing that also works well is the romantic tension: all of it. Yes, I wanted Alvin to sleep with Rafa, so Collin was a bit of a surprise, but it does add a new layer that I wasn’t expecting. (more about this in the review of Incubus Vampire Hunter.)

I was a little surprised that there wasn’t more Pilipino mythology in this – this is something that I haven’t seen in fantasy fiction of any type, tho’ it’s become popular in comics, and, while Alvin wasn’t necessarily raised in the culture, it’s something to lean into.

The sex scene and the “almosts” were well done, but I’ll be honest, the foreskin thing has been overdone in gay lit since at least the early ‘90’s – not everyone has it, not everyone likes it. Alvin’s reactions were good – not fetishized like so many others, but I still could have lived without the detail. What I would’ve liked to see were small details that hinted at Collin’s incorporeality, whether that was Alvin’s Incubus reacting differently, or other sensory details that will be different when Alvin finally does hook up with Rafa (I’m only halfway through Incubus Vampire Slayer, and we’re not there yet, damnit!)

The video-game edits into a supernatural version of augmented reality were truly original and made the read much more fun.

Two quotes stood out:
“…just like the Spanish Inquisition, no one expects an armed Monster Hunter in their basement.” (loc. 4048)

And:
“Yeah, I do want to be seduced, but there’s also something really cool about taking the power back.”(loc. 1398 – and this nailed it.)

More once I finish Incubus Vampire Slayer, and I’ll say again, thank you for the chance to review these novels!
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Author 12 books11 followers
November 28, 2025
Reviewed for Love Bytes – 4 hearts.
To look at Alvin, one would think he’s nothing special. However, he keeps a monster force at bay by not feeding it. It’s a battle, but he bears it. That is, until he strikes a bargain with an elf, which leads him down a path of obligation, discovery, danger and something else.
The Reluctant Incubus is a good story, but my issues lie with its technicalities, which made it, for want of better phrasing, heavy on the eyes. Among other things, the typeface, linespacing, and length of some paragraphs made it challenging to read, requiring frequent breaks. My copy was a pre-publication manuscript; therefore, some of these things may change by the time the final version is published.
The story is told in the first person from Alvin’s perspective. The writing paints vivid pictures with words that leave clear, detailed images. I’ve already mentioned some technical issues, but others include the excessive use of brackets. With a bit of sentence restructuring, these are entirely unnecessary. A side effect of stories told in the first person is that they often contain a lot of internal rambling. Portions of these ramblings are relatable and entertaining. But occasionally, these include extra information that distracts from the scene, reducing its impact. Finding an excellent, ball-breaker of a pre-reader is like gold dust. They might tell authors things they don’t want to hear, but all novels benefit from their sometimes-brutal feedback – and this novel would profit from such a person.
Alvin is a likeable, good, and extremely self-deprecating person, frightened about what he’s capable of. He doesn’t want to hurt people. Even in his unpowered mode, he can sense magic; he also has an active imagination fueled by fact and fiction. For much of his life, he has been in willful denial about many things. His mother, being a powerful piece of work, is largely to blame for his state of mind. During the narrative, Alvin is dragged out of the Egyptian river and into the world of ‘I can do this’ with the preface of ‘I don’t have much of a choice’.
Alvin’s new state of living has him going with gut feelings, then second guessing them. He’s in a world with a steep learning curve and lots of questions that need answering. Trust of himself and those around him is a bumpy road. Yet beneath it all Alvin has a strong will and willingness to do the right thing.
The more I read, the more the tossed salad of events became more organized. However, there is a way to go, so I am looking forward to book two.
This book was provided free in exchange for a fair and honest review for
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1,329 reviews88 followers
November 9, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus is the first book in the new adult MM urban fantasy duet Alvin Alonso’s Secret Files. Alvin is the 23-year-old son of a succubus who has never used his incubus sex powers trying to live as normal a life as possible working as an assistant to a human wizard in San Fransisco. When a fae prince figures out his secret and blackmails him, he is compelled into steal something from an abandoned mansion. That something turns out to be an ancient artifact containing Collin, the cute Avatar of Knowledge. And now a coven of vampires are after him, the fae prince is calling him in, and a hot monster slayer is hot on his trail. Alvin is determined to set Collin free so his totality of human knowledge won’t fall into the wrong hands.

I think it needs to be said that this is literally just half the story, part one of two, and does not read like a first installment in a series. The book doesn’t have its own arc and there is no resolution at all. So be forewarned that it isn’t simply a cliffhanger ending but a divided story. The good news though is that the sequel is also available on the same day this comes out.

The author is a graphic novel writer and it does show through in his writing. The plot is very fast paced, there isn’t as much character development as I’d expect, and the relationships are super quickly established. This is more permissible in a graphic novel format, but not quite as much in a full length novel where I expect more depth. There is an erratic quality to the storytelling and what I would describe as a video game fight scene right in the middle of the book. The writing itself leans on “millennial cringe” which I liked as I am in the right age group, but milage may vary. I personally found the book to be funny, unserious, and charming in its ridiculousness.

I thought the book was very true to its San Fransisco setting and felt very intentional with its choice of Filipino and queer representation in Alvin being Filipino[-presenting] and gay. I did like Alvin and understood him as a character and even all that thirsting. I would not have minded his relationships being so sex forward, but the connections went beyond that way too fast (on his first meeting with both Collin who acts like his best friend that wants to sleep with him and the monster hunter Rafa who seems to have already fallen in love with him). We just don’t get to know either men well yet so it’s hard to form an opinion as of this first book.

The Reluctant Incubus is the first half of a fun and fast-paced MM urban fantasy.

*Thank you to the author for sending me an eARC via NetGalley
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31 reviews
November 15, 2025
⏱️ The Reluctant Incubus by Alex Woolfson⏱️

⭐️⭐️⭐️💫 (3.5/5)

The Reluctant Incubus is a fun, fast-paced supernatural romp with an urban-fantasy heartbeat and a distinctly comedic voice—but it’s also a book that reads very much like Part One of a single story, rather than a full novel on its own.

Alvin, our soul-sucking s** demon (who’s never fed) protagonist, is charming in premise, but I did struggle with his narrative voice at times. The over-explanation, direct commentary to the reader, and constant fourth-wall nudges often pulled me out of the story, especially during some of the darker, more intense, or emotional themes. I think this is partially due to the writing style (more about that below).

Structurally, the book is split into Book 1 and Book 2, but this first installment doesn’t have an arc or any real resolution. It’s literally half of a full narrative—more “Episode 1 of 2” than a true series opener. The main plot gets overshadowed by subplots and one of them have a conclusion in this book. I’m hoping this is purposeful and everything gets wrapped nicely in a bow in Part 2.

Woolfson’s background in graphic novels is both a strength and a weakness here. The pacing is snappy, the worldbuilding is bold and engaging, and the video-game-inspired augmented-reality moments are genuinely original and fun. But character development happens very quickly, relationships form instantly, and the prose leans heavily on telling rather than showing. It sometimes feels rushed.

That said, the lore is great, the supporting cast is intriguing (I’m just as curious about Alvin’s mother and her circle as I am about the main plot), and the setup for the true big bad leaves the world feeling full of potential. It’s also a refreshing read compared to heavier, more intricate fantasy.

While the execution isn’t always smooth, I had a good time—and I’m looking forward to picking up Book 2, especially now that the full story is available to binge.
87 reviews2 followers
September 3, 2025
NetGalley ARC. This book is so much lighter in tone than the dark cover indicates, in the best possible way! It has a more contemporary romcom voice than the darkness I was expecting, though dark things certainly happen.

Alvin is an out-of-shape incubus in San Francisco who has a moral objection to feeding on people, so he never has, which means he can’t tap into most of his powers. He’s working as an assistant to a magical human and dreams of one day being a paranormal investigator like her, but first he has to deal with the elven knight trying to take advantage of the little magic he does have to help him steal a magical old pocket watch. The watch ends up containing Collin, the most adorable ghost, and Alvin can’t bring himself to give up the watch. He and Collin quickly get closer while keeping one step ahead of the creatures who want the watch, trying to rescue a missing girl from vampires, and keeping the truth of Alvin’s non-humanness from the hot monster hunter who keeps helping them out.

Such a fun world (I especially liked the video-game-like overlays that Collin can show Alvin so he knows what to do next) and strong characters. I liked Collin’s sunshine vibes and appreciated Alvin’s realistic insecurities being punctuated with moments of real strength. Strong plot and pacing and dialogue and everything :)

Cliffhanger alert, but I’m all in for book 2, which per the author will be released the same day as book 1!
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Author 12 books6 followers
October 27, 2025
Nothing ever comes easy, and most things, especially heroic things, rarely go to plan.

Alvin is an incubus, with a problem. A number of problems. He refuses to use his seductive powers to feed off the life force of humans. He hides his true nature from his boss, a powerful wizard, as well as from Rafa, a Monster Hunter. He's being hunted by a Fairy Prince for trying to break a contract. And he's trying to save a teenage girl from vampires.

This is an incredibly positive, medium-spice urban fantasy. By positive, I mean it's refreshing to read stories where the main characters are queer, and the cast is diverse in looks and body types.

Alvin's an endearing main character, a young man who wants to do good, and be more than the sum of his demonic parts.

His voice is like listening to the always-put-down school kid with low self-esteem. I just wanted to wrap him up in a big hug and let him know that there are friends and friendly people waiting out there for him.

Reading the story is like stumbling across his diary, or listening to his inner monologue. It's sassy, self-deprecating and sincere.

The tension and the action ramp up through the book, and the sense of place, and stakes is palpable.

Just be warned, this story is addictive, and it ends on a cliffhanger – you will need to get Book 2: Incubus Vampire Slayer.


I received an Advance Copy and this is my honest review.
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4,198 reviews119 followers
November 13, 2025
THE RELUCTANT INCUBUS is the first story in Alvin Alonso's Secret Files, and begins with Alvin himself. He is the reluctant incubus, unwilling to feed in case it hurts people, and generally living as a human. The life as he knows it changes when an Elf makes a deal with him to steal a pocket watch. Only this pocket watch is needed by a group of vampires for nefarious reasons; oh! And it also has a spirit attached to it that only Alvin can interact with. Throw in a buff Monster Hunter, and you've got all the components of a good story!

This was a great beginning to the story! It is fast-paced for Alvin, but reasonable for the reader. At no point did it feel rushed or unnecessary to me, even if it takes place over only a couple of days. I'm not 100% sure what's going on with Collin, Rafa, and Alvin, but I'm hoping it will all work out in the end, as I'm really not a fan of love triangles!

Other supporting characters help move the story along. And let me just say, with a mum like Alvin has, plus her friends, you'd be better off in a pit of vipers! It makes for an interesting read!

It does end on a cliffhanger, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Definitely recommended by me.

** Same worded review will appear elsewhere. **

* A copy of this book was provided to me with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read this book; the comments here are my honest opinion. *

Merissa
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Nov 11, 2025
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391 reviews11 followers
November 3, 2025
These books were just so sweet and well paced that they healed the malaise of my previous, heavier reads.
If you’re unfamiliar, The Reluctant Incubus follows Alvin, an intern to a wizard for hire who also happens to be concealing the fact he is a super secret sex demon who refuses to use his powers on the off chance he will hurt someone. Unfortunately, that doesn’t stop an evil but crazy attractive elf lord from blackmailing him into stealing an unassuming watch from a vampire coven. The problem? The watch comes with an equally attractive and powerful spirit, and Alvin’s not super keen on just handing over his new friend to someone he knows he can’t trust to do the right thing.
Throw in a witty monster hunter, the occult, and a missing teenage girl, and you have the makings of one weird but delectably addictive detective story.
You may have noticed I haven’t revealed much about Incubus Vampire Slayer. That’s because book 1 does end on a cliff hanger which leads directly into book 2, making the fact they share a release day so utterly necessary.
Overall, if you find yourself in need of something quick and entertaining, with some adorable character banter and a super sweet protagonist then I would highly recommend this. Just don’t be shocked if you feel the need to immediately pick up book 2 after finishing book 1.
10 reviews1 follower
November 11, 2025
I had the very fortune of reading this book. I was a little unsure when I started because I have never read a story with an Incubus as the main character. If you like fantasy and if you like a really good story, I highly recommend this book. It is extremely fast paced, which is awesome and I found myself that the edge of my seat while reading the story unfold Alvin is definitely someone that I think everybody can see themselves in the struggles that he’s going through his identity and his place in the world. The people that he meets really do develop him as a character and it is so hopeful and it’s so genuine and it’s so loving. Just as a sidenote, I know that in a lot of MM fantasy type of novels people expect a lot of explicit scenes. This book is not that. The scenes are necessary for the story and they’re necessary for the journey. Very well written very captivating and heartwarming all at the same time. This is a great story that just happens to have gay central characters, and I think that that is amazing but the book for the story is a must. I can’t wait for Alvin‘s Journey to continue literally. I cannot wait for Alvin‘s journey to continue. I will say that I am team RAFA all the way and I totally hope that he gets his own story And his own series would be so cool. You will not be disappointed!
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2,451 reviews8 followers
November 13, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus completely swept me up from the first page. It’s sharp, funny, and full of chaos in the best possible way!

Alvin is such a brilliant protagonist. A self-deprecating, kind-hearted incubus who refuses to feed — and therefore has no powers — he’s the perfect reluctant hero. The story throws him headfirst into magical mayhem: fae blackmail, talking artefacts, vampires out for blood, and a dangerously attractive monster slayer who’s both his protector and his biggest threat. It’s fast-moving and gloriously entertaining, but what really makes it stand out is the warmth and vulnerability beneath all the action.

The humour lands perfectly, cheeky, smart, and never overdone and the chemistry between Alvin and the other characters absolutely sizzles. I also loved the emotional core of the story: Alvin’s struggle to balance morality, desire, and identity gives real depth to all the fun and fantasy.

There is a cliffhanger (be warned!), but since both books released together, it’s the best kind — one that makes you dive straight into Incubus Vampire Slayer without missing a beat.

If you love queer urban fantasy with big heart, sharp banter, and a touch of spice, The Reluctant Incubus is an absolute treat.

I received a free arc copy and this is my honest review
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2,029 reviews5 followers
November 12, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus is an urban fantasy set in contemporary San Francisco. The author's knowledge of the city brings an extra element in the worldbuild. And his writing style just brings the city to life.
Incubi and succubi are considered monsters in the paranormal world. Alvin Alonso suppresses his powers, never knowingly feeding on anyone, just wanting to be normal. His mother is a truly evil, shapeshifting succubi who uses her Only Fan's page to choose her victims. His boss, Ms. Stryker, is one of the strongest witch practitioners on the West coast. And as the story progresses, he finds two lovers/ would be lovers in spirit Collin and Monster Hunter Rafa. A bit of steam there. The book is written from Alvin's POV, which is sometimes laugh out loud hilarious. And sometimes a bit sad, as he struggles to accept that, yes, he's an incubus. And no, he's not evil.
The story is fast paced, taking place in only a week. The characters are all strongly written. Thus far, this is a duet, with book two written already. But I could see more, many more books with this cast. The mystery is absorbing and the author sets up book two at this story's end.
I received an advanced copy of this e book and this is my review.
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1,127 reviews3 followers
November 18, 2025
Alvin Alonso's Secret Files - Part 1. And it really is part one. It definitely ends right on a cliffhanger, but it's all good as part two of the duet was released at the same time, so there's no waiting to see what happens next. It could have been released as a single book, but 600 ish pages is probably a little overwhelming for some (me), so this is, I think, a good idea.

Alvin is a sweetie, but also a scared little rabbit to be honest. His overwhelming fear is sometimes a little exhausting, but it helps to build his character, and really, he just needs someone to believe in him and persuade him he's not the evil monster he thinks he is.

Rafa is a big hearted cinnamon roll of a Monster Hunter and I really liked him too. I still can't really figure Collin out, but I'm guessing we will get more in part two.

The world building is good. I really get a sense of paranormal San Francisco. There are a lot of characters who may not be who they seem, along with those who are obviously evil. I'm enjoying the tension of not knowing who to trust - currently, it's pretty much no-one. This was a well plotted story, with magic, vampires, missing children, slow burn romance and a lot of questions, so I'm off to read part 2 and get the answers. 4.75*
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October 24, 2025
I like Alex's writing - it's kind of like being the fish when you're fishing. You just kind of get hooked and you keep trying to get more and more and more of it. I read a pre-release of this and went through both novels in a week. While reading other stuff. I don't do that.
Alex alludes to the fact, in information about the book, that he likes the Dresden files books and took the concept for one of the characters in this series from Bob of the Dresden files. I can see where he gets that, and since he wrote it he can say it how he chooses, but I think his character In this book is much better developed and a much stronger character.
At the time that I'm rating this, it's not available yet on Amazon, but I am going to get hard copies for a couple of my friends and another copy for my daughter. All three of them have different reading preferences, but I think they will all like Alex's new books. I sure did. Which is why I'm gifting them, I guess.
A piece of free advice - when you buy book one, get book two also. Because you're going to want book two as quick as you finish book one.
Thanks Alex - I look forward to see if their story continues ...
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57 reviews2 followers
October 28, 2025
Thank you to Netgalley and Cinnamon Roll press for the opportunity to read this ARC.

The Reluctant Incubus was a fast-paced and entertaining read. It was refreshing to have a MMC that felt average and I connected with his feelings of inadequacy and enjoyed his inner monologue. Although the MMC, Alvin, has the ability to wield extraordinary power it comes at the cost of feeding his Incubus side and that isn't something he can live with. Therefore he is conflicted with wanting to help and save others but not having the power necessary to do so on his own without crossing personal boundaries. The relationship between Alvin and his unlikely allies (a monster hunter and a spirit) was sweet and tender. Although urban fantasy and MM romance are not my normal subgenres, I was invested in the story and rooting for Alvin to prove to himself that he has the ability to make a difference without having to become a monster. While I appreciated the shorter length of the book, I felt it left too many plot points unfinished going into the next book. I would have gladly read another 100 pages to see some of the main objectives resolved.
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1,517 reviews14 followers
November 6, 2025
I really enjoyed this book. Alvin, is an incubus, who refuses to feed to become stronger. He fears that he will kill the people he feeds from. He works for Ms. Stryker who in his words, is a kickass PI. He is heading home when he notices a fae that is after him. He is under an obligation to steal a watch as the fae couldn’t enter the house. He is able to detect magic and finds the watch easily. He meets Collin who is magically connected to this watch. As they go to leave, they meet Rafa who is a monster hunter and killed the vampires that were after him. He also meets someone who said her daughter was experimenting with magic and disappeared. With the help of Collin and Rafa, they find not only the daughter but other kids who are being held hostage. This book is told in Alvin’s point of view. There is lots of action and great world building. Cannot wait to read the next one in this series.
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2,730 reviews24 followers
November 14, 2025
Unique take on paranormals

I saw this book and it sounded interesting and I was right. Alex Woolfson has written an interesting take on paranormals. Alvin Alonso is a very unique incubus who refuses to “feed” on people and is a nerdy, retiring type of guy. Not your typical incubus for sure, but as he narrates this book I couldn’t help but become interested in him and why he is like this. Mr Woolfson has taken this idea and run with it and in doing so has written a terrific book that I really enjoyed. He has many different problems one big one being that the guy he likes is a spirit trapped inside a watch that various people want to obtain. The other big one is the very big “monster hunters”. I wasn’t sure if Woolfson was going to give us a threesome or a romantic triangle, but that is a big part of what gives this book an interesting twist.
It does end on a cliffhanger, but the next book is already out so I don’t mind.
2,003 reviews25 followers
November 8, 2025
The Reluctant Incubus introduces Alvin, a self-conscious, Filipino incubus who’s hiding his true nature while working for San Francisco’s top magic practitioner. He’s not your typical urban fantasy lead—and that’s exactly what makes him so compelling. Alvin’s fear of becoming a monster like his mother, his struggle with self-image, and his quiet bravery make him deeply relatable.
Set vividly in San Francisco, the city becomes a living backdrop as Alvin is pulled into a mission involving fae politics, a missing witch, and a plot that could end humanity. The supporting cast—Collin, Rafa, Ms. Stryker—adds charm and tension, especially as Alvin navigates love and identity while fearing rejection. It’s fast-paced, introspective, and emotionally rich. A standout debut that blends magic, culture, and character with rare authenticity.
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293 reviews1 follower
November 8, 2025
This book was fun and funny and had plenty of action and a slow burn romance. To be honest, to start with my brain didn't want to get into this story. Alvin is a bit hapless - the first scene is literally him being mugged by a fae and forced into an obligation. The more I read, the more I wanted to read. Alvin is a well drawn character - Filipino, a bit overweight, and fighting his own nature while trying to build connections. He wants to be good, and not the monster his species implies. So even though he seems weak to begin with, as the story goes on you see how strong he really is. Alvin's voice is sassy and relatable; it shows his insecurities and strengths in equal measure. Beyond Alvin, the pacing of the story was great, and all the characters were well written. I enjoyed the intertextuality of the story, and there were some really unexpected points. I'm looking forward to book 2.
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Author 36 books107 followers
November 9, 2025
This was a really fun, gay urban fantasy with hints at deeper mythology and a wider world. I was surprised at the early introduction of Collin, who's a great character, even if he's also a spirit. Turns out there's quite a lot he can do to affect the material world!

Alvin has his pick of some good potential dates in this story, which is of course a problem because he's an incubus. There are some spicy scenes included!

My one complaint is that I don't really like the format of releasing two halves of one book. This is a great story, but the ARC doesn't finish up, even for the first book in a series. Books 1 and 2 are releasing at the same time, so it's easy to read both, but the ending is a little sudden. I'll be reading the second one right after this!

I received this book as an ARC and am leaving this review voluntarily.
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