Her First Draft: Lessons in Control - Forbidden Girls, Book 1

by Sydney Sweet

Lilah is nineteen, freshly graduated, and desperate to become a real erotica writer. When she sends her first story to her favorite author, a man twice her age and infamous for his raw, dominant style, he invites her to read it aloud in his private study. What begins as a writing lesson quickly becomes something else entirely. Under his careful guidance, Lilah discovers how desire feels on the page... and on her skin. She learns to write from the body, from the mirror, and from her moans.

This is very explicit taboo age gap erotica featuring an older alpha male and a submissive younger woman.

22 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 2, 2025

Reviews

[John · Rating 5 out of 5]

OMG! So erotic and the way the older male talks to the nineteen year old who wants to be an erotic writer. He makes her read it again and again, each time with more feeling until she can't think straight, but writes from her groin and it comes out super hot. She loses it and has a climax. She takes him in hand and has him have an orgasm all over the two of them. Great descriptions and hot erotic writing