too many abilities
Too many abilities gain too quickly mastered even quicker. Like almost 15 supernatural abilities. None of them believable. Master battle, technician, healer, able to neutralize poison, with only a thought, savior, ability to see corruption in whatever form it comes in?, Ability to heal by just her very presence, ability to heal a rabid Wolf, I think there’s even a mention of being able to fly. Ugh.
Great premise. Super poor execution. Gained her ability one of her abilities in the first chapter and by the time we get the chapter 10, she’s got like 10 abilities and then the other five or so show up in the last. This story is not even believable in the very unbelievable world that it takes place in. It’s fantasy, but not even be believable fantasy.. Doesn’t even seem that the main character has done any growth. Double ugh.