I had the privilege of reading this story with an advanced reader copy. This is a compelling debut to what I'm sure will be an adventurous series! The setting of the dome is futuristic and makes me think of other fantasy books I've read. It has mystical powers, like when they described the warm metal telescope remembering more than it saw.
At first I got Hunger Games vibes with the introduction of the main characters—Drax, Lennox, Sai, and Varro. They seemed like sacrificial delegates representing their unique groups. It made me want to learn more about: why them, what special powers did each have, how were they going to get along, and why were there people watching them from what seemed like a control room?
The fact that the dome seems to be able to read minds, and, through some implementation of mist, jerk the person out of their reverie, made me feel for them that they aren't able to daydream or breathe. They are under constant observation. The idea of bleeding time was interesting. Their minds have been wiped like Jason Bourne, but slowly, the memories creep back in, reminding them of who they used to be. I loved how we dropped right into the action and got to know the characters through flashbacks, exposing their wounds and motivations along the way.
Varro was a good example: "No one had ever spoken to him like this, like it mattered" clearly indicates a lack of support in his youth. There was also a recollection of quotes, like Lennox being told to "be the sharpest mind in the room or don't bother coming in," which is clearly a piercing expectation placed upon her as a youth. We get to relive her pain through her own eyes.
All of the characters seem to experience some anxiety about measuring before being measured, which is a principle of quantum entanglement.
Around page 50, everything starts to click when Chancellor Vinclap drops the real mission. Apparently these characters need to work together because their chips create "2 souls, one signal," (love this concept) and they screwed up so badly last time they eradicated part of the planet. The voice says that they are going to be with him for 6 months, establishing a time constraint and goal.
The idea that consciousness and soul and thoughts could be small enough to adhere to the properties of quantum entanglement is delightfully similar to some other books I've read and drafted. I love authors who aren't afraid to question the laws of physics like that and imagine what could be.
The author has an incredible gift for small details that stick with you or punctuate a scene, like coffee steam wafting through a woman's fingers... "a secret not yet told," or strip lights pulsing in time with footsteps.
While there's humor and narrative buzz like inside jokes about 'leg day,' there are also deeper messages woven throughout the book. Some of my favorite quotes or lines were:
“Opportunity… rises where the limit lies.”
"The wealth you carry... Is kinetic power in motion."
"...smile flickered... Like static skipping through silk."
I loved the unexpected twists at the end, and that the characters seem connected through parallel worlds, with hints of knowing each other from some former life. I love what we learned in the end about each of the worlds representing the different dimensions of financial, social, time, and spiritual wealth.
In the final scene, I imagined myself having these moments of déjà vu in midday when it feels like an uncontrollable dream state has taken over, giving flashbacks to something I experienced in my subconscious. It made me wonder if we are, indeed, living in a multiverse and experiencing parallel realities without knowing it.
In the next book, please build out the story around the Toti Tree!! I want to know more!