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Children of Alpheios

2023 Firebird Award Winner in Dystopian, Science Fiction, & Speculative Fiction

A genetically engineered colony on a new world. A baby born different than everyone else. A mother who will do anything to save him.

On planet Eamine, twenty-one-year-old Alina must protect her baby when Mandin is born with a remarkable DNA anomaly. Mandin's uniqueness makes him as a target for exploitation. Trained by the Expeditionary Academy, Alina knows how to survive Eamine’s harsh environment and seeks to keep Mandin safe.

While Alina tries to uncover the truth, she finds herself relying on Kiean, a gruff pilot who protects her from threats in the midst of her new surroundings. As an upcoming rebellion brews, Alina must discover who she can trust. Dangerous forces are searching for her and her son, leading Alina to unravel what Mandin's capabilities really mean to those who want him.

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First published January 1, 2023

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Diana Fedorak

3 books103 followers
Diana Fedorak is a novelist from Las Vegas, Nevada. Born in Saigon, South Vietnam, she grew up in a Pan Am Airways family who frequently traveled overseas. Her prior career was as an officer in the United States Air Force. She enjoys writing complex characters in high-stakes science fiction and fantasy worlds.

Diana's debut novel, Children of Alpheios, which was released by the The Wild Rose Press in 2023 and was deemed a Book of the Year Finalist for Science Fiction by the Independent Author Network. When she’s not writing, she spends time in her own universe with her husband, two children, and their German Shepard.

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7,712 reviews119 followers
August 14, 2026
Children of Alpheios takes one look at Alina’s attempt at a normal life and says, “Cute. Let’s add corporate conspiracy, a genetically anomalous baby, and a pilot with the emotional range of a brick — all before breakfast.”

Alina is twenty‑one, exhausted, and just trying to keep her newborn alive without the colony’s central corporation turning him into a lab experiment. But the moment they realise Mandin’s DNA is special?
Babe, the villains start circling like seagulls around hot chips.

Alina goes full feral‑mum mode — survival instincts blazing, trust issues skyrocketing, absolutely DONE with anyone who thinks they can “study” her child like he’s a science fair project. She knows Eamine’s brutal terrain better than anyone, and she uses every scrap of that training to keep Mandin safe.

Enter Kiean — the grumpy pilot who communicates exclusively in sighs and reluctant heroism. He’s all clipped sentences, broody energy, and “fine, I’ll help you, but don’t make this emotional.”
Spoiler: it’s already emotional.

Their dynamic is messy, tense, and full of that slow‑burn “I don’t trust you but also please don’t let me die” energy that sci‑fi thrives on.

Meanwhile, the colony is brewing rebellion like it’s a weekend craft project.
Everyone’s lying.
Everyone’s scheming.
Everyone wants Mandin for reasons that make your eyebrows sweat.

The pacing starts steady — not slow, just simmering — and then suddenly you’re knee‑deep in danger, conspiracy, survival, and maternal panic. The world‑building is rich and atmospheric, the stakes are high, and the tension keeps tightening like someone’s twisting a cord around your chest.

A 3.5–4 star read — gripping, tense, chaotic, and full of sci‑fi mum‑on‑the‑run energy with a side of grumpy‑pilot sass. It’s the kind of story that makes you want to wrap Mandin in a blanket, slap the corporation, and tell Alina she deserves a nap, a therapist, and maybe a flamethrower.
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236 reviews
August 25, 2026
Children of Alpheio by Diana Fedorak was such an interesting read! This isn't necessarily my typical kind of book, but I really enjoyed getting pulled into the story and discovering the world along with the characters. There was a great mix of mystery, adventure, and emotion that kept me wanting to see what would happen next. I loved how the story made me think while still giving me that escape I look for in a good book. Definitely glad I gave this one a chance!
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561 reviews80 followers
November 28, 2025
Children of Alpheios was a nice surprise of a sci-fi novel. Mixing elements of mystery, suspense, space travel, and genetic engineering wrapped up in a gripping novel that had me intrigued from start to finish.

Alina is a brand new mother of Mandin, born in a medical pod, and when Mandin shows a DNA anomaly, this kicks off a journey for Alina to keep her son safe and figure out what’s going with him as well as the planet humanity has resided him. Alina is a great protagonist; she’s very resourceful and when she’s pushed to a wall (which is often), she typically finds a solution. She finds herself in a situation where she cannot trust some of the people around her. Alina also has to learn a lot about her world and how humanity works, being genetically enhanced herself and being unaware of things like natural childbirth. Just a heads up, there is some squick in one scene depicting childbirth and some swearing throughout.

The rest of the cast was developed well and I enjoyed each one of them, and they felt more than just simple roles in the story. The world was vivid and built well, as well as relatively easy to understand. The pacing was excellent with a mix of action and reflective scenes. The suspense was cranked up as the story continued, with many mysteries about Mandin’s condition, the planet they inhabit, and Alina’s father’s death being central to the narrative. They all tie in neatly by the end, but it’s clear that there’s more to come in a second book.

Jennifer McCool does a great job on narration as she’s easy on the ears and brings out the already great prose to the next level.

Highly recommend for sci-fi fans!

*I received a review copy from Netgalley and Bamboo Tree Press. All opinions are my own.*
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279 reviews10 followers
January 28, 2025
Diana Fedorak’s Children of Alpheios is a gripping, heart-pounding journey that masterfully combines science fiction, emotional depth, and unrelenting suspense. With a fearless heroine, a compelling plot, and a richly imagined world, this book is a standout addition to the genre.

Alina is a remarkable protagonist—strong, resourceful, and driven by a fierce love for her child. Her determination to protect Mandin, a baby whose DNA anomaly makes him a target, is both inspiring and heart-wrenching. Fedorak captures the intensity of a mother’s love and the lengths Alina will go to safeguard her son, making her struggles feel deeply personal and profoundly moving.

The world of Eamine is vividly detailed, with its harsh environment, complex societal structures, and the looming threat of corporate exploitation. The colony’s central corporation serves as a chilling antagonist, and Fedorak’s portrayal of its sinister motivations adds a layer of realism and tension to the narrative.

The relationship between Alina and Kiean is a highlight of the book. Kiean’s gruff exterior and unwavering loyalty make him an intriguing and endearing character, and their evolving bond adds warmth and depth to the story. As they face danger together, their dynamic becomes a pillar of hope and trust amidst the chaos.

The plot is expertly paced, blending action-packed sequences with moments of introspection and emotional resonance. The rebellion brewing in the background adds an additional layer of stakes, while Alina’s quest to uncover the truth keeps readers hooked until the very end.

Fedorak’s writing is captivating, seamlessly balancing vivid descriptions with engaging dialogue and heartfelt moments. The themes of family, survival, and resilience are beautifully explored, making this more than just a sci-fi adventure—it’s a story that resonates on a deeply human level.

Children of Alpheios is a stunning, thought-provoking novel that will leave readers breathless. Diana Fedorak has crafted a tale of courage, love, and defiance that is impossible to put down. Perfect for fans of science fiction with heart!
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170 reviews13 followers
September 25, 2025
3.25/5. Thanks to the publisher, Diana Fedorak, and Netgalley for the ALC!

In the first book of a series (currently at two books), Alina discovers things are not all they seem in the city of Alpheios. She is having her first child (through surrogate) with her boyfriend - son of a political movemaker and current Guardian - and she, herself, has left her schooling at the academy to become mother. But when her son starts displaying unusual talents, it is a choice of give him up (never) or give up the comforts that she knows.

As she decides to travel to the harsher, less-technologically-gifted areas of the planet, she finds herself learning more about the Origins, the humans living there. They are descendants of the original humans to land on the planet and they, too, might know a thing about her son's talents... But now they aren't the only ones and Alpheios is coming.

My main problem with this book was the speed in which things happened. It's obvious from the start that Alina has been culturally influenced to think the Origins are different in a negative way. She has been led to believe that Alpheios and the corporations there are the best that can happen. And her transition from that to suddenly being ||a rebel against Alpheios|| was a transition that made sense, but I wished was a little more fleshed out.

Also, ||her leaving of Chase and sudden relationship with Kiean was too soon for me. You had a child with this man and yes, leaving him made sense with his choices, but it seemed too quick and clean even after Chase's visit.||

Jennifer McCool did a wonderful job narrating the novel. The accents and voices were distinct and didn't seem overdone to me. The production was seamless and there were no erroneous noises or strange pauses. Well-done!

The sequel, Origins Progeny, is already released on Amazon and may be something I add to my TBR next year to see what happens to this group.
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Author 19 books213 followers
July 25, 2023
The Wishing Shelf Book Awards
24th July 2023
TITLE: Children of Alpheios
AUTHOR: Diana Fedorak
Star Rating: 4

‘A cleverly plotted sci-fi thriller with a strong, likeable protagonist to root for. Highly recommended!’ The Wishing Shelf

REVIEW
Set on a different planet, this is a compelling sci-fi novel from the pen of Diana Fedorak. It's the story of Alina, who must find a way of protecting her baby who has a remarkable DNA anomaly from the powers that be. Skilfully plotted and with a likeable protagonist who's easy to root for, I suspect this will go down well with sci-fi lovers and readers who enjoy medical thrillers.
Admittedly, it is a little slow in the beginning, but things really kick off halfway through, and from there on in it's a thrilling ride. For readers who enjoy the technical stuff, there's plenty of that, although admittedly I did have to work hard to understand everything. Still, the author has excellent storytelling skills, keeping the focus on the mother and child and the dilemmas facing them which, to be honest, is the biggest strength of the novel. There is a little romance, but it felt like a bit of an afterthought; and rightly so. Nothing kills a sci-fi more than endless mush!
All in all, I'm very happy to recommend this exciting adventure novel to readers enjoy strongly plotted thrillers with plenty of suspense, and a thought-provoking plot. Although I would recommend the author work on ‘grabbing the reader early on in the story’, it's still a gripping read packed full of twists, turns - and drama!

A ‘Wishing Shelf’ Book Review
www.thewsa.co.uk
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358 reviews1 follower
August 21, 2026
This right here? I see you Miss Fedorak. I see the symmetry, I see the nuances, I see the subtle nods. Me kicking and giggling my feet along with finger snaps because those who get it, GET IT.

Alina believes she has the life that is the dream. A boyfriend, because marriage is archaic and traditional, a baby that was genetically made to their specifications and most importantly, not one she had to gestationally carry.

A few weeks after their child is well, "made", the clinic calls the parents back in with news that there are anomolies in his DNA. Of course this corporation, I mean fertility clinic, has complete remorse for this error in their child that they promised would be made to their perfect genetic specifications, and if the parents would only sign this random NDA, then all of his treatment, no matter "who would be taking care of him", would be handled. Immediately upon hearing this Alina's maternal instincts kick in. She finds herself alone, without a father to the child because of course he works for this government entity trying to shut down and quiet the "mistakes", and leaves them high and dry. Alina and Mandin find themselves in what we would modern day probably call a homeless encampment or "skid row". She is forced to rely on complete strangers to protect her family, help her son with his medical condition and somehow fight the system trying to take away her child.

There's humor, there's sadness, there's intrigue and excitement. A true book about a mother's love having NO BOUNDS. Such a fun read for me especially since Sci-Fi is my least favorite genre.
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52 reviews1 follower
November 13, 2023
This book—wow. I wandered around Las Vegas Book Festival a couple weekends ago and this was the last book I bought. I am so happy that I did!

In Children of Alpheios, Alina, a young mother, discovers that her son has a genetic abnormality which gives him extraordinary gifts, but comes at a cost. Wanting to know more about his condition, and distrusting of the city’s leading doctors, she seeks out the Origins people who live on the outskirts of Alpheios. There, she finally learns what it means to have a family and what it means when you cross people with power.

Y’all, this book had me going through it. I laughed. I cried. I waited forever for two certain characters to kiss. The slow burn 😩

There is something in here for everyone. Especially, I feel, for mothers who would do anything to protect their little ones. Or for fans of female main characters who kick ass the entire time and don’t yield their power to their love interest.

My favorite part about this book, though, is the strong exploration of found family and community that does not always come from blood. From the beginning, the main character struggles to find her place after losing her father. All she has wanted is to start her own family with her boyfriend but quickly finds out that she is left alone to raise her son. That is until she is accepted, with a bit of apprehension, by the Origins people.
By the end, Alina has found a village to help her raise her son and the love that she had been searching for ❤️
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
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87 reviews40 followers
October 17, 2025
Alina lives on the distant planet of Eamine. She gives up a promising career to become a mother, only to discover her newborn son, Mandin, carries a rare DNA anomaly, something that powerful institutions want to exploit. Faced with an impossible choice, Alina goes on the run, risking everything to protect her child.

As she leaves behind the technologically advanced colony of Alpheios, Alina seeks refuge among the "Origins," descendants of the planet’s first settlers, long marginalized by corporate & political elites. There, she not only finds answers about her son’s mysterious condition but also begins to question everything she was raised to believe.
With the help of Kiean, a gruff but loyal pilot, she confronts threats both personal and systematical, all while navigating new relationships and keeping an eye over her shoulder.

The story mainly centers around Alina's fierce devotion to her son and her evolution from rule abiding citizen to determined rebel and found family along the way.
The author did an amazing job showcasing her love for Mandin.
I felt some of the other relationships could have benefited from a little more detail, but maybe the next book will get into it. The story does get a little slow at points when it's just Alina & Mandin, but eventually picks back up.
Fedorak’s world building is intriguing, centering on genetic engineering, social hierarchy, and life in a resource & power driven colony.
I liked that the Sci-Fi elements were not overly technical, it was easy to follow.

I listened to the audiobook version and thought the narrator, Jennifer McCool did a fantastic job and her voice fit the story well. She spoke with an even rhythm that kept me engaged and really did well at voicing Alina's thoughts and concerns.

Children of Alpheios is a light sci-fi novel that combines dystopian society, politics, & the depth of maternal love.
It’s a perfect read for fans of dystopian science fiction or someone who wants an entry level Sci-Fi book. I’ll definitely be picking up the sequel.

Thanks so much to NetGalley and The Wild Rose Press for this ALC Audiobook.
220 reviews9 followers
August 25, 2026
Children of Alpheios by Diana Fedorak is the first book in the Children of Alpheios series. This book features a futuristic, dystopian world coupled with science fiction to make a book so interesting you can’t put it down. In a world where children are made to order so that they parent get the “perfect” baby, Alina finds herself with a baby that wasn’t exactly what she and Chase ordered. Baby Mandin had a DNA anomaly that the doctors did not quite understand. As Alina and Chase are in the hospital with Mandin throughout the first weeks of his life, they are basically told that they could put the baby up for adoption and have another child that would be exactly what they ordered. Chase was all for that but Alina would have any part of it. Chase left some money and didn’t even say goodbye – he just disappeared. After more testing, the doctors discovered the telepathic connection between Alina and Mandin. Alina realized that the hospital wanted her son to study him scientifically to find out what went wrong. Alina got Mandin and left. Alina finds herself on the run, hiding her son from the government, which wants to take him away. Alina shows her strength and the absolute fierceness of a mother protecting her son. I really enjoyed the world that Fedorak built, and the characters are so well developed that you feel like you know them. I won’t give anything away but the twist at the end will blow your mind. This is a must-read for anyone who loves sci-fi and strong female characters.
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1,868 reviews109 followers
February 5, 2025
This is such an accessible, heartfelt sci-fi story. It is about a mother who will do anything to protect her newborn son. Alina’s journey is equal parts emotional and fascinating as she fights against powerful political forces to safeguard her baby, who is born with unique abilities and seizures. While the science and world-building aspects are fascinating, what truly stood out to me were the relationships and the community—every character felt so real and genuine.

The romance was incredibly sweet, though it is a subplot. But my favorite part of the book was its deep exploration of found family. From the beginning, Alina struggles to find her place, left alone to raise her son after her boyfriend abandons them. But when she finds the Origins community, she also finds love, acceptance, and the support she’s always longed for. And realizes that it is also a connection to her late father.

This story is a bit slower-paced, but I was completely immersed in it. With its gripping emotional stakes, stunning world-building, and action-packed moments, Children of Alpheios would make an incredible movie. It beautifully celebrates community, resilience, and the bonds that go beyond blood. I adored it, and I can’t wait to pick up the next book! A hidden gem in the genre!

Thanks so much to Hidden Hollow BookTours and the author for the complimentary copy and opportunity to read and review. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.
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303 reviews1 follower
September 16, 2025
Children of Alpheios is a gripping, heart-pounding journey that pulls you into a distant future where humanity has spread to the stars, yet the story remains intimate and human, even in the heat of a high-stakes chase. The book blends sci‑fi with emotional depth and unrelenting suspense, anchored by a fearless heroine who fights political power and fate with equal parts grit and grace. Alina’s fierce devotion to her newborn son, who arrives with unique gifts and seizures, drives a journey that is as much about found family and trust as it is about danger and discovery. The Origins community breathes warmth into a world that could have stayed cold, and their support, love, and acceptance are the beating heart the plot needed. The romance glows softly in the background, but the real spark lies in the relationships that redefine what family means, including a path to a late father’s memory. The pace may lean slower at times, yet I was wholly immersed by the emotional stakes, lush world-building, and bursts of action that beg to be seen on screen. This is a celebration of resilience and belonging that honors the bonds beyond blood, and Alina’s journey from fear to trust feels both earned and hopeful. The last act is tense and surprising in just the right ways, and the ending lands with a promise I’m itching to follow in book two. Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for an arc of this book. 4.5⭐️story | 5 ⭐️ narration #NetGalley #arcreview #ChildrenofAlpheios
1,089 reviews17 followers
August 25, 2026
Alina is a first time mum to baby Mandin, a healthy and happy newborn baby born to a society living in the city of Alpheios, a settlement with a dependence on technology and medical marvels to keep them the way they want to be, that is until Mandin experienced a seizure which was caused by an anomaly not picked up on in the DNA scans and tests through his development.

As further tests are completed and the results show that Mandin is special, Alina is confronted with a choice, to try and stop the seizures in a traditional manner, or try something more experimental, but Alina wants to be sure of all of the facts before she makes her decision, however, not everyone is forthcoming with the information she wants.

Meanwhile, Alina decided to return to a past job with the Expeditionary Academy and resume her candidacy for instructor status, but it is not as easy as she doesn't tonight and she has to put in a lot of work to achieve her goals. As the weeks pass, Alina is drawn into an unexpected world, one which is far removed from her normal, but somewhere that she may find the answers she needs to be able to find another way to protect her child from a possible future of exploitation and experimentation.

This is a hard hitting dystopian sci-fi where trust is hard to find, and harder to keep as worlds collide and loyalties are challenged in this race for life and unknown futures.
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204 reviews8 followers
February 15, 2025
I read CHILDREN OF ALPHEIOS by Diana Fedorak for the review tour hosted by the author and Hidden Hollow Book Tours. Thank you to both for inviting me along and for the gifted e-arc. I thoroughly enjoyed this book!

Sci-fi is one of those genres that I don't read very often. I'm just not a fan of Star Wars type stories. Luckily, this was not that book. It was heavier of the Dystopian side of things while still taking place on another planet.

Alina and her boyfriend, Chance, have a newborn baby. He has been found to have a medical issue, and the medical facility wants to test alternative treatments on the baby. Alina has doubts. That's where the trouble begins.

I love Alina's willingness to do whatever it takes to keep her son well and to protect him. This is a story of the fierceness of a mother's love. She also has a personal journey to take. One that takes her away from all that she's believed. She has to learn to trust the very people she's been taught to fear. And, maybe to even open her heart again.

There are some intense edge-of-your-seat scenes, especially in the last part of the book. There were a couple of surprises, one I guessed at. I really like the way the book ended, and I can't wait to read book 2.

I recommend CHILDREN OF ALPHEIOS to fans of sci-fi, dystopia, genetic engineering, medical thrillers, strong FMC, and planetary exploration.
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2,015 reviews49 followers
September 20, 2025
In this novel, future humans have taken genetic selection to the next level. "Origins" are those who arrived on the planet as humans. The generation born on the planet has adapted to its conditions, but a core science organization has taken things to the next level: gene editing to ensure babies are born free of the "wrong" types of issues. But the newborn of one well-connected couple has a seizure, and how best to treat him going forward becomes a critical issue. There are clashes among different strata (i.e. castes) of people, opposites attracting, and a precocious young girl, all of which propelled the story and kept me engaged. The original couple, however, seems too stereotypically strident: the woman who gives up her career ambitions to be a mother to their lab-grown infant, and the ambitious man who is so deeply entrenched in the system that he follows corporate advice over his own heart. The world-building here primarily revolves around genetics, social mores, and the vital mineral that sustains life. This first installment ends with an exciting chase. Jennifer McCool does an excellent job, as usual, narrating this material. I look forward to listening to the next book in the series.
My thanks to the author, @BambooTreePress, and #NetGalley for access to the audiobook of #ChildrenofAlpheios for review purposes. It is currently available.
196 reviews11 followers
August 12, 2026
5 Stars


This was amazing. Easily on my list of favourite reads of the year. From the moment I picked this up, I literally couldn't put it down. I loved the world that Fedorak created, and the way she writes is just stunning. This is a great sci-fi read that is much about motherhood and the sacrifices a mother will make to keep her children safe. It's a story about survival, courage and standing up for what you know is right.
I love Alina; she is a fantastic character. She has all the tenderness of a mother, all the uncertainty of a young woman still trying to find her place in the world, and the fierce resilience of an adventurer. I also love the family that she finds, and the women who support one another without question, building a community of support rather than competition.
I loved all the other characters too, but I won't go into them too much as I don’t want to give away any spoilers. What I will say is that all the characters are wonderful and took up their own space in my heart.
This book is well worth the read. It's an amazing sci-fi with so much heart, and I will be recommending this to everyone I come across. This is the first in a series, and I can't wait to sink my teeth into the rest of it. Trust me and give this a shot; you will not be disappointed.
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342 reviews6 followers
August 14, 2026
From the very first chapter of *Children of Alpheios* by Diana Fedorak, I was drawn into its imaginative world and intrigued by the mysteries surrounding the characters and the society they inhabit. The combination of science fiction, adventure, and thought-provoking themes made this a book that was difficult to put down.

One of my favourite aspects of the novel was the world-building. Diana Fedorak has created a vivid and immersive setting that feels both fascinating and believable. As the story unfolds, layers of mystery are revealed, and I found myself eager to discover the truth alongside the characters.

The characters themselves are well developed, each bringing their own strengths, flaws, and motivations to the story. I enjoyed watching them grow as they faced difficult choices and unexpected challenges. Their relationships added emotional depth to the fast-paced plot and made me even more invested in the outcome.

Overall, *Children of Alpheios* is an engaging and thought-provoking read that blends science fiction with mystery, adventure, and memorable characters. If you enjoy stories with immersive world-building, compelling twists, and themes that make you think long after you've finished the final page, I highly recommend giving this book a try. I'm looking forward to reading more from Diana Fedorak.
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Author 6 books2,227 followers
November 19, 2024
Alina is a new mother whose baby is born with unique powers. Those in charge want to do experiments on young Mandin. To protect her child, Alina flees with pilot Kiean. Will they get to safety or be captured?

Children of Alpheios is a gripping science fiction/dystopian I couldn’t put down. The descriptive narration combines with the world-building to lure readers into the story. The plot moves at a good pace with twists I didn’t see coming. The characters, though, are what make Children of Alpheios an engrossing read.

Let’s start with Alina. She is a relatable heroine who, when the time comes, will do anything to protect her baby. She’s resilient and easy to connect with. I found Alina to be my favorite character.

Kiean is a hero yet plays the antihero against the establishment. He protects Alina and her child from harm. He isn’t in it for the glory but to help a woman in need. Feelings bloom and Kiean must prove to Alina she can trust him.

If you love dystopian novels with morally gray characters, you’re going to find Children of Alpheios your next binge-read.

My Rating: 5 stars

Reviewed by: Nancy

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152 reviews7 followers
February 14, 2025
This was a really nice read on a rainy day.

I was not expecting who the true villain was so that surprise at the end was interesting! I wonder how that makes a certain character feel. Because that person also did not seem like they'd be very into Phase 3 but I guess they were.

So many times I thought Chance was gonna work with Alina and be her rock but mam he disappointed me. He finally came to his senses a little but took him forever. Alina is just better off with Kiean, even if he started with not liking her, but all the best book relationships start that way lol.

Alina was good and strong. Trusting her gut really helped her and made it so Mandin was set up for the best life he could have. Especially since she was able to find such a good community to raise him in compared to the city. Which man I don't think I could like I'm that city, feels away to clinical.

I didn't think Alina's dad being gone would mean any major plot points with him but that was a nice surprise that he knew shady stuff was going on and that Alina would need somewhere to take Mandin.

I'm ready to dive into the next book so I can see what defense might be put up since they are being hunted, and to see how the kids abilities progress, especially Mandins.
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500 reviews35 followers
February 25, 2025
I wasn't sure what to expect when I started this book but instantly I was drawn in by the plot. Sci-Fi isn't my normal go to read but when I find one with interesting notions I give it a go. We find a society of humans on a distant planet that they had to adapt to in order to survive. Through science they accomplished this but they lost apart of themselves and culture for more sophisticated living. Now two groups of people reside in this society: those inundated with scientific adjustments in every bit if their life including using artificial gestation and gene alterations for births & others known as Origins who don't rely on scientific but holistic and old ways for living and birth. Alina is faced with a challenge to either trust the company that birth her baby or trust her instincts that something just isn't right and the Origins thar she met on the street might know more of what is really happening with her baby and possibly a solution for him. However, she is caught between a rock and hard place trying to keep her baby safe at costs,meets a pilot that may be better suited to keep her and her baby safe with a possibly relationship in the making if she can get over her baby's dad who abandoned them to come back into their lives.
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471 reviews11 followers
August 13, 2026
Ummmm. Okay so August 25th can’t get here soon enough. I am very much a visual person especially with books and that cover pulled me in instantly combined with the synopsis and dystopian I knew I would get hooked but lord the hooks are bone deep on this one. Alpheios is a biotech-controlled city, where your genetics mean everything and when Alina gives birth to her son everything changes. Mandin is not just like every other newborn he has unique anomalies that make him the biggest target in the city. Everyone wants to study him, discover what all makes him different and how to replicate it. Alina, she just wants to protect her baby and keep him safe. With no other choice she flees the city looking for somewhere safe. When everything that makes us, human is turned into data, and perfection can the humanity of a new mother keep her most precious gift safe from those who see him as something to study? Book 2 Origins Progeny, available August 25th, 2026. The conclusion Book 3 Celestial Children, available September 1st, 2026. My calendar is marked and the countdown is running twelve days until the story continues and I am on the edge of my seat trying to keep busy while I wait. I’ll see you there.
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1,783 reviews39 followers
August 14, 2026
Children of Alpheios by Diana Fedorak.
4 of 5 Stars.

The gripping mix of dystopian Sci-Fi and fantasy make this a real page turner. Living in the biotech controlled city of Alpheios, and trained by the Expeditionary Academy, Alina knows how to survive the harsh environment and terrain. Having given birth to her son Mandin, she knows he is special, born with a remarkable DNA anomaly. This makes him a target for corporate exploitation, so Alina escapes with her young son determined to keep him safe. However, when she finds herself out of options, she has to rely on a pilot to help her navigate the new surroundings. However, as a rebel uprising is beginning, Alina must discover who she can trust if she’s to find safety for her and her son. The worry that Mandin will be claimed by the colony’s most powerful institution is always on Alina’s mind. The wonderful world building along with the descriptive narrative really brings the dystopian setting vividly to life, making me feel fully immersed in the story. As a young, single mother wanting to protect her son, Alina is a very relatable character. This made it easy to feel invested with her and her son’s adventure filled journey to safety. An exciting start to this new series.


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Author 7 books9 followers
February 4, 2023
Children of Alpheios is at its core the origin story of superhero Mandin, who has the "glimmer," and his mother. It starts with a mystery, but then slips into 10 long chapters of worldbuilding and backstory before baby Mandin's abilities are understood. Bits of the rebellion surface around the middle, embedded within long chapters of side stories that barely advance the main plot.

In chapter 24, romance buds sprout. I hoped for a conflict-laden love triangle, but that plot didn't surface, a missed opportunity IMO. The rebellion ramps up in chapter 25. Now the stakes shoot up to life & death. The outposts strive for independence to protect the glimmer children from experimentation to exploit their powers by the city, which dashes any hope for peace with a cruel escalation.

The chapters are too long for my taste, making it unnecessarily hard to refer back to one. While I can live with the jargon, I wanted more details about the technology when introduced. For example, it took a few pages for me to figure out the babylev, but I only have a vague understanding of what it looks like.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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70 reviews7 followers
February 12, 2023
I have to admit that I accidentally clicked on this in a Voracious Reader's Only email, not really wanting to read it. But the author gave me the book, so I felt I had to read and review it, even though it isn't the subject matter I normally would like.

And the beginning of the book was very tense. A mother constantly worries about her son, experiencing myriad symptoms of anxiety. But I plowed through. Then over the halfway mark, the story became very compelling, even if the characters weren't quite as likable as I usually 'like', and there were some forays in the story that didn't seem necessary, like a long and TMI description of birthing a baby.

The last third became quite a thriller. A villain near the end was a little much for me, but it makes the story what it is I suppose.

I thought the whole storyline was extremely well thought out and organized. I didn't notice any mistakes. The end wasn't what I thought it would be and it was wrapped up very well. Alina and friends went on quite an adventure.

If the description sounds at all interesting to you, I would definitely recommend reading this book.

There is minimal swearing and the romance is low-key.
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1,220 reviews32 followers
August 14, 2026
I went into this one expecting a cool sci-fi adventure, but I ended up really invested in Alina and her son’s story. Of course the sci-fi part itself is incredible as the author did an amazing job creating such a unique yet relatable world. Alina is such a capable character! I loved that she’s not just running from danger, she actually knows how to survive and uses those skills to keep Mandin (her baby) safe. The whole genetically engineered colony and biotech-controlled city was such an interesting setup, and I kept wanting to know what was really going on behind the scenes. Mandin being born with this rare DNA anomaly makes everything so much more stressful because you know there are people who see him as an opportunity instead of a baby. I also really liked the escape through the unfamiliar environment because it gave the story a constant feeling of “okay, what could possibly go wrong next?” I will say that I did NOT see the ending coming. I was really shocked! I think this would be a great pick if you like sci-fi that has plenty of action but still gives you characters you actually care about.
176 reviews10 followers
August 25, 2026
Children of Alpheios was a nice surprise of a sci-fi novel. Mixing elements of mystery, suspense, space travel, and genetic engineering wrapped up in a gripping novel that had me intrigued from start to finish.

Alina is a brand new mother of Mandin, born in a medical pod, and when Mandin shows a DNA anomaly, this kicks off a journey for Alina to keep her son safe and figure out what’s going with him as well as the planet humanity has resided him. Alina is a great protagonist; she’s very resourceful and when she’s pushed to a wall (which is often), she typically finds a solution. She finds herself in a situation where she cannot trust some of the people around her. Alina also has to learn a lot about her world and how humanity works, being genetically enhanced herself and being unaware of things like natural childbirth. Just a heads up, there is some squick in one scene depicting childbirth and some swearing throughout.

If you love dystopian novels with morally gray characters, you’re going to find Children of Alpheios your next binge-read. This is the first book from this author that I have read and it didn't disappoint. Will have to read more novels from this author.
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506 reviews15 followers
January 13, 2025
Thank you to Diana Fedorak and Hidden Hollow Book Tours for the free copy of this book!

I love a good sci-fi cautionary tale, and Children of Alpheios delivers an engaging exploration of humanity’s relationship with genetic engineering. The moral dilemma of losing what makes us human through DNA editing is both thought-provoking and chilling.

Alina’s fierce love for her son Mandin was beautifully written. Her strength, intelligence, and determination made her such a compelling protagonist, and her journey to protect her son kept me hooked. Kiean, with his gruff exterior and hidden soft side, was a delightful addition. Watching his character evolve was such a treat!

The world-building was another standout. Fedorak created an incredible sense of place on planet Eamine, from the harsh environment to the expeditionary life. The climax—storming Alpheios—was tense and thrilling, a definite highlight of the book.

While the pacing felt a bit slow at times, the story remained engaging, and I’m already excited to dive into the next installment, Origins Progeny. If you’re a fan of thoughtful science fiction with strong characters and emotional depth, this is definitely one to add to your TBR!
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3,570 reviews82 followers
February 12, 2025
This was a unique, entertaining and heart racing story that took me on one hell of a journey into the world of Eamine.

The imagery and world building was creatively detailed and swept me up into this harsh new world.

Alina is such a strong character. Her journey to protect her baby was an incredibly emotional one. But she’s a survivor and she will do anything and everything to protect her baby from the corruption and evil that wants to take the child away from her to experiment on.

The hurdles that Alina had to overcome were incredibly intense and had me on the edge of my seat. I didn’t know whether to laugh or cry over everything they both endure to find their safety and happiness.

This was a fascinating dystopian sci/fi story that kept me captivated and turning the pages to see what was going to happen in the end. I was invested and needed to know if Alina and her baby would be able to escape the evil that was right on their tails.

Highly enjoyed and look forward to reading more by this author.
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10.1k reviews134 followers
August 14, 2026
3.5 Stars

Children of Alpheios is the first book in the Children of Alpheios series by Diana Fedorak. This is a fusion of sci-fi, dystopian worlds, emotion, and ethical charged questions - all unfolding in the futuristic world of planet Eamine, we follow Alina, a courageous young mother as she navigates corporate greed, genetic innovation, and parental instinct.
We learn that Alina’s newborn son, Mandin, possesses an unusual DNA anomaly. While Genodyne, a biotech corporation offers promises, their true underlying motivation will soon come to light. Ms. Fedorak uses this conflict to explore profound questions about the commodification of human life, the ethical boundaries of science, and the lengths to which a parent will go to protect their child.
This proved to be a thought-provoking and emotional science fiction experience which is perfect for fans of character-driven sci-fi adventures and stories that grapple with profound ethical questions.
On to Book #2, so stay tuned.
Happy Reading…
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1,266 reviews38 followers
August 21, 2026
This book took me by surprise! I truly loved it...may have to be a book club read! I loved Alina and her strength to protect her baby who has anomalies in the eyes of the world that wants perfection and conformity. It was a rollercoaster seeing what Alina had to do to protect her son, Mandin. What lengths would i go to for my child? There are so many parallels with the climate of the world today. With the age of AI, pharmaceutical companies expanding, medical advances...the list is endless. There is progression and then there is ethical accountability.
I loved how this sci-fi/dystopian really pulled you in and made you connect with the characters and kept you engaged throughout. I am looking forward to reading the other books and continuing on this journey with Alina and Mandin. Good pacing and storyline development! I would highly recommend to any of my fantasy, dystopian, or sci fi friends. If you want a book that pulls you in and keeps you going the whole way through, this book is for you! Do it!
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