《 "I wake up panting and sweating, craving her on my tongue. I’ve never seen her naked." 》
But, Livvie... you did. 20 pages ago? Remember? When you tongue fucked Katya in the shower??
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Warnings: spoilers, rape mention, nc, cnc, penetration, blood play, knife play, cutting, dyke slur (1 time), abuse, torture, sexual absue.
Plot summary:
In the heart of the fictional town of Greylock we have our sex intrests; Livvie, the bisexually repressed good girl who got given to the Italian Mafia by her overly religious father, and Katya, the self proclaimed psychopathic ex Russian hitman now working for the Irish mob.
One fateful night as Livvie is pondering the bordem and shackles of the life of a mobwife, Katya shoots her body gaurd and kidnaps her off the street. She takes her captive, her princess, back to her tower where she puts her princess in chains.
And fucks her lots. And lots. And lots.
Then they catch feels.
Then Livvie gets kidnapped back by her husband who has found out shes been fucking Katya.
Katya comes to save the day and then cums again.
Happily ever fuckher.
Good bits, good tits:
(Fyi, The chapter structure flips between Livvie's POV and then Katya's.)
>♡> We start with Livvie and tbf it wasnt bad. I liked her voice and it set the tone well, I felt like I knew who this woman was without needing to know every little thing. It was easy to read, digestible and set up who she was and potential for who she could be very well. (Sadly, that didnt last long).
>♡> There was 1 solid paragraph that gave me hope when Katya fucks Livvie with the handle of a knife. Very kinky, very fun.
That's what the 2 stars are for, lets move on to the bad bits, the sad saggy tits;
>×> Im sorry but almost everything about Katya cringed me out. The first Katya chapter really set the tone for her, like some hardass wanna be punk/emo 2012 tumblr girl. "Im a fucking psychopath, im a homocidal psychopath, i dont feel love, im a psychopath, i love pain and torture, im a psychopath". Oh my god okay, shut up? She's like this the entire story until she goes back to save Livvie from her husband, so the final chapter?
>×> the constant reminder of her self diagnosed psycopathy isnt the only thing we are reminded of over and over. She was sex trafficed and raped. She was raped and thats why shes a psycho. Shes a psycho because she was raped. She likes sex but she was raped. Did i mention she was raped?
>×> no one beta read this, im not even sure the author proof read it before publishing. Some chapters are worse than others but there are loads of grammar and spelling errors. I could over look them if it werent for the story/inner monologues going back on themselves?
-----> paragraph from page 31.
《 livvie: "... this dark well inside of myself that I’ve been keeping (((repressed))) for years, and now that I’m tied to a chair with my legs spread open in front of a crazy lesbian my body is going haywire. It’s not that big of a deal. Those fantasies. It’s not like I was (((repressing))) myself or anything." 》
Sorry?? Is this sarcasm or?? Livvie keeps reminding us how she's repressed her sexual saphic urges so im not sure why this is here?
-----> page 78
《 I wake up panting and sweating, craving her on my tongue. I’ve never seen [Katya] naked.》
But you did??? You had shower cunnilinguis on page 57?? Remember, Livvie???《 "For her part, she does strip her clothes off, revealing her beautiful body to me." 》
Girl, I get you're being sex tortured and having your first pussy trip but for the love of fucking god get a grip.
For only 150 pages and 77p, it's fine? Personally, I wouldn't recomend it. There's loads of smut but it's pretty short and all the repative stuff makes it drag. I got half way through and commited out of curiosity for all these 4 and 5☆ reviews and to laugh at the one liners like this gem: "I let myself get led around by the pussy." Honestly, real.
1* for an okayish 365 days with lesbian sex.
Another 1* for the knife handle orgasm.